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7个开头段写法的雅思作文7个开头段写法的雅思作文 Throughout thehistory,male leadersoften madethe societymore violentand conflicting.If womengoverned the world,it would be amore peacefulworld.To whatextent doyou agreeor disagreeGive anexample tosupport youridea. 讲解不同的开篇方式,从简单到复杂,从低分到高分 模式一3句式rephrase thetitle+quote othersopinions+make onesown pointclear 用一个好的句式Recently therehas beena hotdebate inthe publicover theissue whethertheworldwouldbemore peaceif womengoverned theworld. 用动词变化和连词连接观点Some peoplebelieve thatwomen wouldbe bettergovernors whileother peoplecouldnt agree. 提出自己的观点,如果现在还没有明确的观点,可以虚晃一枪I willanalyze thetwo opinionsand thengive myown pointof view. 模式二由于上面一篇文章并没有显示出创造性,所以容易被考官识破,只能得到5到
5.5分,实在是模板痕迹太过明显,所以可以考虑升级 可以从world governor或者man/woman作为切入点,避免直接谈到话题,而是“后退一步”从话题的部分内容中切入 Its generallyagreed thatwomen aremore considerateand patientthan men.However,would theworld bemore peacefulif womenwere thegove...。