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高考英语满分作文英文稿件【试题回放】假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“ourspringouting”的英文稿件请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程注意词数不少于
60.提示词游乐园amusementpark垃圾箱binlastthursdaywehadaclassmeetingtodiscusswheretogoforourspringouting.wecameupwithseveralchoicessuchasgoingboatingclimbingamountainandgoingtoanamusementpark.finallywedecidedtogomountainclimbing.thenextdaywesetoffearlyinthemorning.whileclimbingthemountainweenjoyedthewarmsunshineandabeautifulview.howeverwhenwereachedthetopwewereshockedtoseelitterhereandtheresuchasbottlesandbananapeels.thenwestartedtopickupthelitterandputtherubbishintothenearbyrecyclingbinandnon-recyclingbinrespectively.weweretiredbuthappy.【名师点评】本情景的内容要点如下
1.讨论;
2.爬山;
3.检拾别人的垃圾;
4.投放垃圾内容要点可用不同方式表达本文覆盖了所有内容要点,较好地完成了试题规定的任务其中,写作主题突出,详略得当,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,而且有效的使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文机构紧凑本文叙述清楚,描写细致,准确运用了很多富有表现力的词和句型,例如“setoffearly”,“enjoyedthewarmsunshineandab...。