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我的老师myteacher演讲稿范文我的老师my teacher演讲稿范文 本文曾获得北京电视台、国家___举办的my teacher英语演讲比赛优胜奖在以“我的老师”为主题的演讲会上,这篇演讲出人意料地将计算机称作自己的老师,以吸引听众的注意然后又用事实与推理证明计算机确实是一个“老师”,从而赢得了听众的共鸣某些语言上的不足之处点评修改如下 1在every后,territory用复数,显然是错误的另外,表示“各个领域”,用field为好 2原文时态用错了 3concept是可数名词make后的宾语补语如果是不定式的话,要省略to另外,一般不用被动不定式,而只用过去分词deeply也有中国式英语之嫌 4help sb.todo,不用doing ladies andgentlemen, i havehad alot ofteachers in my schoolwho havegiven memuch help inmystudy.for theirhelpiwill neverforget them.but todayi amgoing totalk abouta specialteacher ofmine.this teacheris nota humanbeing andits nameis“puter”.it hasbeen teachingme alot ofknowledge andi appreciateit verymuch. how cani interactwith aputer thereare manyways,including keyboard,mouse pointer,and touchscreen.i oftenuse akeyboard.when ipress rightkeys,i cansee andhear whateveri want.information worldis atmy fingertip.i wishthat truespeech input-output systemwould...。