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2019-2020年高考英语考点突破专题十八短文改错(含解析)xx浙江下面短文中有10处语言错误请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写上该加的词删除:把多余的词用斜线划掉修改:在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写上修改后的词注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分 例如:Itwasverynicetogetyourinvitationtospendweekendwithyou.LuckilyIpletelyfreethensoI’lltosay“yes”.I’llarriveinBristolataround8:00p.m.Fridayevening.DearDiaryHereIaminthemiddleofacity350milesfarawayfromourfarmhouse.DoyouwanttoknowwhywemovelastweekDadlosthisjobandasMomexplained“Hewasluckytofindotherone.”HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomyclassmatemyschoolorjusteverythingelseIloveintheworld.TomakemattersbadnowIhavetosharearoomwithmyyoungersisterMaggie.Tomorrowisfirstdayofschool.IamawfullytiringbutIknowI’llneverfallsleep. Goodnightandrememberyoudeardiaryismyonlysouvenirfrommypastlifeandmyonlyfriend.YoursRosemaryPassage2xx浙江下面短文中有10处语言错误请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写上该加的词删除:把多余的词用斜线划掉修改:在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写上修改后的词注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分例如: Itwasverynicetogetyourinvitationtospendweekendwithyou.LuckilyIpletelyfreethensoI’lltosay“yes”.I’llarriveinBristolataround8:00p.m.Fridayevening.TwoyearsbeforeItraveledtoBrazilandIrentedforacar.UnfortunateIhadanaccidentandhitanothercarandIneededtostayinahospitalforatleasttwoweek.IcalledmyparentssoIdidnottellthemwhathadhappened.IknewthattheywillbeworriedaboutmyselfbecauseIwassofartherawayandthatmymotherwouldnotsleepifsheknew.ThereforeItoldtheminterestedstoriesandhowIwasenjoyingBrazil.Asaresultnobodyknewtruth.Istillthinkthatitwastherightthingtodo.Passage32011浙江下面短文中有10处语言错误请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写上该加的词删除:把多余的词用斜线划掉修改:在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写上修改后的词注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分例如: Itwasverynicetogetyourinvitationtospendweekendwithyou.LuckilyIpletelyfreethensoI’lltosay“yes”.I’llarriveinBristolataround8:00p.m.Fridayevening.Iwasplayingatmycousinhouse.SincehisfamilywasrichthanminehehadmoretoysthanIdid.TherewasoneonparticularI’dalwayswanted.Iputintomypocketwhenhewasn’tlooking.IguessedevenatthatageIwouldneverbeabletoenjoytoplayingwiththetoyorfacedmycousinagain;IwouldalwaysknowI’ddonesomethingwrong.Lateonmyauntdrovemehome.WhenshedroppedmeoffIpulledoutthetoyslowandgaveitback.Sheknowswhathadhappenedbutshethankedmeandevermentioneditagain.Passage4xx浙江下面短文中有10处语言错误请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写上该加的词删除:把多余的词用斜线划掉修改:在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写上修改后的词注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分例如: Itwasverynicetogetyourinvitationtospendweekendwithyou.LuckilyIpletelyfreethensoI’lltosay“yes”.I’llarriveinBristolataround8:00p.m.Fridayevening.AftershoppingMotherandIwenttoarestaurantforlunch.InoticeMotherlookingatanearbytableoccupybyanelderlywomanandyoungcouple.Theyatesilentlyanditwasclearlythatthingswerenotgoingwell.AsweleftMotherstoppedontheirtable.“Excuseme”shesaidputherarmaroundtheunhappyoldwoman.“Youremindmesomanyofmymother.MayIhug拥抱you”Thewomansmiledhappilyassheacceptedtoit.AfterweleftIsaid“ThatwasveryniceofyouMother.SoIdidn’tthinkshelookedlikeGrandma.”“Neitherdidme”saidMothercheerfully.Passage5xx浙江下面短文中有10处语言错误请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写上该加的词删除:把多余的词用斜线划掉修改:在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写上修改后的词注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分例如: Itwasverynicetogetyourinvitationtospendweekendwithyou.LuckilyIpletelyfreethensoI’lltosay“yes”.I’llarriveinBristolataround8:00p.m.Fridayevening.OnerainydaywhileIwaswalkinghomewithoneofmyfriendatruckcametoastopbesidesus.Thedriverputthewindowdownandofferedusaumbrellabecausehefoundwewerewetthrough.Istoodthereandcouldn’tbelieveinthatapletestrangerissothoughtful.ThemaninsistedsoIgratefulacceptedtheofferthankedhimandwatchedthetruckdisappeardowntheroad.Thismanmightneedtheumbrellahimselfandhepreferredtogiveittoeveryoneelse.Itwasalessontousthatitwaspossiblegivewithoutexpectanythinginreturn.A组参考时间:40分钟Passage1xx浙江五校联盟高三下学期第二次联考AyoungmancalledLow-CarbonBrotherbeeahitontheInternetin
2011.Hesuggestslivingalow-carbonlifewhichmeansusinglessenergyinourdailylifesothatwecanhelpreducingcarbondioxideintheair.Forexampleshealwayspicksupsomewastepaperonthestreetorusestheblanksidetowritesomething.WhileheiswatchingTVhealwaysturnsupthescreenbrightnesstotheminimumandturnsoffthelight.Thereforehegoestoworkbybikeinsteadofdriving.Somepeoplethinkwhatheisdoingisjustashow.Noonecanlivesuchasimplylifewithsomanymoderninventionaroundus.AsfarasIamconcernedIamstronglyinsupporthisideaandhisbehavior.Althoughwhatheisdoinghasnohugeeffectonglobalwarmingbutheatleastcanenjoyahealthylife.Passage2xx浙江金华十校高三二模DearMomAsMother’sDayisapproachingI’dliketosharewithyouagreatmanyword.FirstofallIwanttotellyouIamverygratefultoyouforwhichyouhavedoneforme.Thankyouverymuchforbringmeuptobehappyandbraveinaoftendifficultsociety.Younotonlygivemepreciouslifeandteachmehowtotellrightfromwrong.ItisyouandDadwhoencouragemetofollowmydreamasIwillgrow.Andallthetimeyouhavebeenhelpedmetostepforwardtowardsmygoal.AsyouknowtheCollegeEntranceExaminationisjustaroundthecorner.IthinkIamgoodpreparedforitsoIwillfaceitbravely.Pleasedon’tworryaboutme.I’msureIcanmakeitandwillbeadmittedbymydreamuniversity.DearMommayyouhappyeveryday!YourssincerelyLiYuePassage3xx杭州第二次高考科目教学质量检测Patienceisofgreatimportanceinourdailylife.OnceIwaitedabustoeatastop.30minutespastbutnobuscame.BothupsetandannoyedIdecidedtowalkonfeet.ButnosoonerhadIleftwhenthebusarrived.IthoughtifIhadwaitedforonemoreminuteIwouldhavecaughtit.IfIchosetotakeanextbusIwouldhavetowaitforother30minutes.OnlythendoIrealizemyproblem.Beingimpatientwillpossiblewastealltheeffortthatwehaveputitin.NowwheneverIamclosetolosemypatienceI’llthinkofthisexperience.Passage4xx杭州高三第二次教学质量检测I’mgladtotellyouthatIhavemadegreatprogressinmyEnglishstudysinceIbecametheseniorhighschoolstudent.WhenIstartedseniorEnglishIfoundmuchmoredifficultthanthatwelearnedinjuniorschoolandIalmostlostmyheart.LaterIrealizedtheimportantofEnglishsoIgotupearlyeverymorningreciteEnglishwordslistenedtoEnglishtapesanddidalotofexercise.IalsoaskedmyteachersandclassmatesforbetterwaystolearningEnglish.NowI’mimprovingmyEnglishgreatly.ButI’mgettingmoreandmoreinterestedwithlearningit.Thankyousomuchforyourgreathelpinyourclass.B组参考时间:40分钟Passage1xx杭州第二次教学质量检测Thewayofmunicationinpeople’slifehaschangedalotofinrecentyears.Inthepastpeoplekeepintouchwitheachothermainlybywritinglettersorusethepublictelephone.Butnowalmosteveryonehaveamobilephone.Peoplecanmunicatewitheachotheralmostatanyplaceandatanytime.What’smorepeoplehaveeasyaccesstheInternetitenablesthemtosendandaccepte-mailswhenevertheylike.Withthesechangespeople’spaceoflifehasbeenquickenedandpeople’sworkhasbeenmademoreefficiently.Itusedtotakethemseveraldaystohearfromeachotherandnowittakesonlyseveralminutesevenifweareintwodifferentcontinents.Passage2xx宁波八校测试Nowadayspeopleinmanybigcitiesareplainingtheheavytraffic.Ithasseriousinfluencedpeopledailylifeandeconomicdevelopment.Tosolvetheproblemsomepiecesofadviceisputforward.Somepeoplesuggestthatmorestreetsandroadsarebuilt.Bythiswaythetrafficdensitycanbereducedthusspeedinguptheflowofbusesandcars.Somepeopleadviselimitingthenumberofbikesandcars.Thiscandecreasethetrafficflow.Butontheotherhandthiswilleffecttheconsumptionandmakesbusesmorecrowded.Inmyopinionthenumberofprivatecarsshouldbeputunderthecontrol.Andatthesametimebusesshouldhavetheirownspecialroutescannotbeusedbyothervehicles.Passage3xx浙江桐乡二月模拟ThefirsttimeIdecidetoleavehomewaswhenIwasupongraduationinhighschool.Iwashavingtroublegetalongwithmyparents.IhadaboutfiftydollarinmypocketsandsoIthoughtaboutleavinghome.IttookmeonlytwoweeksawayfromhomewhileIstartedtofeelhomesick.Livingonmyownisatotaldifferentexperienceforthreemainreasons:beingmoreresponsiblemoredecisiveandmorecreative.BecauseofI’monmyownIgettodealwithmydutieswithoutbetold.Ihavetobemorecarefulbecausemyparentsarenotheretogivemetheiradvices.IntheotherhandIcouldmakemyownfutureplan.Ihavemaderulesformytofollow.Passage4xx辽宁重点中学协作体期末OnSaturdayafternoonLiHuaandWangPingmembersfrom“GreenEyes”washavinganenvironmentalprotectionactivityneartheriversidewhentheycatchsightofabirdontheground.Theypickeditoutandfounditwounded.Thinkingitshoulddiewithouttimelyhelptheytookithome.Undertheirtreatmentandcaretheluckybirdgotrecoveredsoon.Whentimecameforthemtoflyingthebirdtheyfeltabitofpitybutverydelightful.Ithinkit’sworthwhileforhimtodosuchathing.HereIcallonthepublictoshowrespectsforthenature.Onlybychangingthewaywhichwetreattheenvironmentcanwegetalongwellwithit.C组参考时间:40分钟Passage1xx西安高三第一次质检Iwenthikingtoamountainwithmyfriendslastsummer.Itwasagoodtripatthebeginningandsomethingunexpectedhappenedhalfway.Oneofmyfriendsuddenlyfeltaterriblepaininhisstomachandhecouldn’tmoveanyfar.Nobodyknewwhattodoit.Onegirltriedtocallhermuminhermobilephonebuttherewasnosignalinthemountainarea.Luckywehadbroughtatentwithus.Weputitupandlethimrestedinit.Hetooksomemedicine.Thenhedrinksomewaterandatesomefood.Afterwhilehefeltmuchbetterandwewalkedon.Weallenjoyedusonthetopofthemountain.Passage2xx银川一中高三模拟IjustebackfromBritainlastweek.IwasluckilyenoughtobeoneofthestudentfromdifferentcountriestovisittheUKfromFeb.16to
28.WepaidavisittomanyplaceslikeLondonOxfordortheLakeDistrict.IlearnedmuchaboutBritishcultureandhistoryinLondonwherewasmyfavorite.IalsolikedOxfordinwhichIsawmuchmoreoldbuildings.TheLakeDistrictwasbeautifulbutitwaspitythatitrainedheavilywhentheywerethere.ThemostexcitedthingformeintheBritainwasthatImadealotoffriendsthere.Passage3xx陕西澄城高三期末NowadaysmoreandmorepeopleareconcerningabouttheirhealthbuthowtokeephealthFirstitisnecessarytotakeanyexerciseeveryday.Researchshowsthatgetplentyofexercisemakestheheartbeatfastandthelungsworkharder.Secondeatmorefruitsvegetableandlessmeat.Thirdgettingridofbadhabitsassmokinganddrinkingisalsoimportantwaytokeephealthy.Smokingandalcoholdrinkinginjuresone’shealthagreatdealandthereforeshouldbegivenup.Ifpeoplefollowthesethreewaysofkeepingfitthey’llgreatimprovetheirhealth.Passage4xx辽宁锦州中学高三月考Timeandtidewaitnoman.Mymotherisbeingamiddle-agewomanquietly.Shehadbeenbusyrunningafterusalltheyears.Myfatherisverybusyeverydayoutside.Buttheheavyburdenfallsonmymother’sshoulder.BecausemyschoolisfarfrommyhomeIhavetogotoschoolbythetrainandmymotherseesmeoffatthestationeverytime.IoftenchooseaseatwhereisclosetothewindowsoIcanseeher.HoweverIalwayscan’thelpruntearsfrommyeyes.Allthebuildingsandpeopleoutsidethewindowdisappear.IwavegentletomymotherandIlookathertilltheviewofherbackdisappears.Uptonowevenifheisbusyshestilldoesitasusual.Theviewofmymother’sbackwillneverchangeinmyheart.D组参考时间:40分钟Passage12011辽宁实验中学期末WhenJackbowedtosomeonehealwaysdiditmuchtooquickly.Theyneedn’ttowaitanylongerafterhefinishednoddinghishead.Sohewasblamedfornomanner.Thenawarm-heartedmanteacheshim“WhenyoubowtosomebodynexttimeyoucancounttheJanuaryFebruaryMarchuntilDecember.Thenyoucanliftyourbody.Thustheceremonywillalmostperfect.”Thenextdayhemethisunclebuthedidasthemantoldhimto.Thebowwastoolongthatitmadehisuncleescapesoonwithasurprisinglook.WhenJacklookeddownhefoundhisunclegone.Soheaskedapasser-by“Inwhichmonthdidshegoaway”Passage22011河南郑州47中高三第三次月考Itwasdinnertime.Mr.andMrs.SmithwereabouttobegintheirdinnerthentheyfindthattheirsonMikewasn’tthereyet.SoMrs.Smithaskedherhusbandtogoandfindhim.Mr.SmithwenttoMike’sroomandfoundMikelayingonhisfaceonthefloorreadabook.Hewaslaughing!Mr.Smithtoldhimtogofordinnerandheleftquiteunwilling.WonderingthatwhatabsorbedhissonsomuchMr.Smithtookalookatthebook.NowMrs.SmithandMikewereatthetablewaitingMr.Smith.Shegotquitepatientandsenthersonforhisfather.Mikewentbacktohisroom.Tohisgreatsurprisedhesawhisfatherlyingonthefloorreadingthesamestorybookofhersonthefloor!Passage32011宁夏银川一中模拟I’meighteenyearsoldandIliveinsmallvillageinthePeakDistrictnotfarfromNottingham.IgrowupinthisvillagesoIknoweveryonehere.That’stheproblem—theproblemisthere’snothingtodoandnobodyofmyagetodoitwith!AtthemomentsItravelintoNottinghameverydaytotheshopasIwork.There’sabusat7:30inthemorningorthelastbusbackintheeveningisat5:
30.FromSeptemberthereforeI’mgoingtostayinNottinghambymyauntandunclewhenmycousinjoinsintheNavy.Icanusehisroom.I’mreallylookingforwardtolivinginNottingham.Passage42011黑龙江哈九中高三月考Growingupisnoteasy.Sometimesallthatisneedissomeonetorelyon.FormanyyearsshewasMum.MymotherwasacareerwomanandhasherownproblemstotakecarebutwhenIneededhershewasalwaysthere.HerstrengthcamefromanywhereIdon’tquiteknowsomewhereverydeep.ShewassostrongthatshewouldneverbreakdownevenwhileIwenttoherwithallmylittle-boyproblemsandshoutather.Herstrengthmademestrongandgavetomecouragetotrythingsotherthoughtwereimpossible.Ahelpinghandisalwaysstrongerenoughtoliftyouup.第四部分 写 作专题十八 短文改错五年真题·精华Passage1DearDiaryHereIaminthemiddleofacity350milesfarawayfromourfarmhouse.DoyouwanttoknowwhywelastweekDadlosthisjobandasMomexplained“Hewasluckytofindone.”HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomymyschooljusteverythingelseIloveintheworld.TomakemattersnowIhavetosharearoomwithmyyoungersisterMaggie.Tomorrowisfirstdayofschool.IamawfullybutIknowI’llneverfall. Goodnightandrememberyoudeardiarymyonlysouvenirfrommypastlifeandmyonlyfriend.YoursRosemary 剖析:
1.faraway是不具体的与前面的350miles相矛盾故应去掉
2.宾语从句的时间状语是lastweek故应改为过去时
3.又找到一份工作又一个应该是anotherone
4.根据上下文可知是“同学们”应用复数形式
5.此处是并列关系应改为and
6.上文讲到的不是什么好事这里应该是“更糟糕的是”应用比较级
7.firstday是特指的需要限定故应加the或my
8.tiring是使人感到疲劳的主语应该是物或事故应改为tired
9.fallasleep是固定搭配
10.主语是you被插入语deardiary隔开了应改为arePassage2TwoyearsItraveledtoBrazilandIrentedforacar.IhadanaccidentandhitanothercarandIneededtostayinahospitalforatleasttwo.IcalledmyparentsIdidnottellthemwhathadhappened.IknewthattheybeworriedaboutbecauseIwassoawayandthatmymotherwouldnotsleepifsheknew.ThereforeItoldthemstoriesandhowIwasenjoyingBrazil.Asaresultnobodyknewtruth.Istillthinkthatitwastherightthingtodo.剖析:
1.由下文时态得知
2.因为rent是及物动词
3.此处是副词作状语
4.前有two故用可数名词复数形式
5.此处上下文之间表示语意上的转折所以用but
6.由上下文时态得知
7.此处是介宾短语需宾格代词
8.此处无表示比较之意
9.interesting“有趣的”修饰物interested“感兴趣的”修饰人因为此处修饰stories所以用interesting
10.因为指代上面的真实情况Passage3Iwasplayingatmyhouse.SincehisfamilywasthanminehehadmoretoysthanIdid.TherewasoneparticularI’dalwayswanted.Iputintomypocketwhenhewasn’tlooking.IguessedevenatthatageIwouldneverbeabletoenjoytoplayingwiththetoyormycousinagain;IwouldalwaysknowI’ddonesomethingwrong.onmyauntdrovemehome.WhenshedroppedmeoffIpulledoutthetoyandgaveitback.Shewhathadhappenedbutshethankedmeandmentioneditagain.剖析:
1.考查名词所有格的用法“我正在堂兄的家玩”cousin后加’s表示“堂兄的”
2.有比较级的标志词than却没有形容词比较级一定是错了rich的比较级为规则变化richer
3.考查习语搭配inparticular意思为“尤其特别”
4.考查动词短语用法和代词这里漏填了指代那个玩具的单词it/that
5.enjoy后面跟v.-ing所以去掉多余的to
6.句中有连词or表示后面省略的部分跟前面一致为Iwouldneverbeableto...orIwouldneverbeableto...接在beableto后要用动词原形face
7.lateron是固定习语意为“后来”而late当副词用时的词义是“迟于;晚”
8.这里的“慢”应该是修饰作者掏出那个玩具的动作即修饰pulledout要用副词slowly
9.通篇是叙述过去发生的一件事所以时态基本都为过去时这里不可能出现knows这样明显表示习惯的一般现在时
10.这是典型的语法没错但句意严重有误ever表示肯定含义而这句作者想表达的是自己的姑母知道这件事偷玩具但再也没有提过应该是否定含义故将ever换成否定副词never才对Passage4AftershoppingMotherandIwenttoarestaurantforlunch.IMotherlookingatanearbytablebyanelderlywomanandyoungcouple.Theyatesilentlyanditwasthatthingswerenotgoingwell.AsweleftMotherstoppedtheirtable.“Excuseme”shesaidherarmaroundtheunhappyoldwoman.“Youremindmesoofmymother.MayIhug拥抱you”Thewomansmiledhappilyassheacceptedtoit.AfterweleftIsaid“ThatwasveryniceofyouMother.Ididn’tthinkshelookedlikeGrandma.”“Neitherdid”saidMothercheerfully.剖析:
1.根据上下文时态应用一般过去时
2.根据其后的byoccupy与table是逻辑上的动宾关系应用过去分词形式
3.ayoungcouple一对年轻的夫妇
4.此处是作表语用形容词形式
5.在桌子旁边停下来了应用by或at
6.若是两个谓语动词不能仅用逗号并列故put应是非谓语与逻辑主语she是主动关系故用putting
7.此处是修饰动词remind要用副词much表示程度
8.accept是及物动词
9.根据上下文此处为转折关系
10.此处为倒装句的主语应用主格Passage5OnerainydaywhileIwaswalkinghomewithoneofmyatruckcametoastopus.Thedriverputthewindowdownandofferedusumbrellabecausehefoundwewerewetthrough.Istoodthereandcouldn’tbelieveinthatapletestrangersothoughtful.ThemaninsistedsoIacceptedtheofferthankedhimandwatchedthetruckdisappeardowntheroad.Thismanmightneedtheumbrellahimselfhepreferredtogiveittoelse.Itwasalessontousthatitwaspossiblegivewithoutanythinginreturn.剖析:
1.考查名词的数oneof后用可数名词复数形式
2.besides除……之外还beside在……旁边句意:……在我们身旁停下
3.考查冠词用法根据umbrella的第一个发音音素为元音故用an
4.考查动词believe的用法believe+that引导的宾语从句
5.考查时态呼应主句为过去时上下文均为过去时
6.考查副词用法副词修饰动词accepted
7.考查连词用法按照句意前后构成转折关系用but
8.考查不定代词用法一把伞不可能给everyonesomeone/somebodyelse别人
9.考查固定句型此处用Itis/waspossibletodosth.句型
10.考查动名词用法作介词宾语该用动名词形式三年模拟·实战A组Passage1AyoungmancalledLow-CarbonBrotherahitontheInternetin
2011.Hesuggestslivingalow-carbonlifewhichmeansusinglessenergyinourdailylifesothatwecanhelpcarbondioxideintheair.Forexamplealwayspicksupsomewastepaperonthestreetusestheblanksidetowritesomething.WhileheiswatchingTVhealwaysturnsthescreenbrightnesstotheminimumandturnsoffthelight.hegoestoworkbybikeinsteadofdriving.Somepeoplethinkwhatheisdoingisjustashow.Noonecanlivesuchalifewithsomanymodernaroundus.AsfarasIamconcernedIamstronglyinsupporthisideaandhisbehavior.Althoughwhatheisdoinghasnohugeeffectonglobalwarmingbutheatleastcanenjoyahealthylife.剖析:
1.2011年为过去时间动词用过去时态
2.help后面接todosth.
3.人称指代错误这里指Low-CarbonBrother应用he
4.前后为并列关系并列了picksupsomewastepaper和usestheblankside两个动作
5.按照句意“把屏幕亮度调暗”用turndown表示
6.此处前后为递进关系表示“另外;还有”
7.这里用形容词修饰后面的名词“life”
8.many后的名词应该用复数形式
9.固定词组insupportof表示“支持”
10.although和but不能连用Passage2DearMomAsMother’sDayisapproachingI’dliketosharewithyouagreatmany.FirstofallIwanttotellyouIamverygratefultoyouforyouhavedoneforme.Thankyouverymuchformeuptobehappyandbraveinoftendifficultsociety.Younotonlygivemepreciouslifeteachmehowtotellrightfromwrong.ItisyouandDadwhoencouragemetofollowmydreamasIwillgrow.Andallthetimeyouhavebeenmetostepforwardtowardsmygoal.AsyouknowtheCollegeEntranceExaminationisjustaroundthecorner.IthinkIampreparedforitsoIwillfaceitbravely.Pleasedon’tworryaboutme.I’msureIcanmakeitandwillbeadmittedmydreamuniversity.DearMommayyouhappyeveryday!YourssincerelyLiYue剖析:
1.agreatmany后面跟名词复数形式
2.whatyouhavedoneforme意思为“你为我所做的事”这里是名词性从句
3.介词后面跟动名词形式
4.后面often是以元音音素开头的故应该用an
5.固定词组notonly...butalso
6.as引导时间状语从句在时间、条件状语从句中用一般现在时态代替将来时态
7.这里是现在完成进行时强调“你一直在帮助我”为主动语态
8.用副词well修饰形容词prepared
9.被……大学录取为“beadmittedto/into”
10.Maysb.用来祝贺时后面跟动词原形如:Mayyousucceed.Passage3Patienceisofgreatimportanceinourdailylife.OnceIwaitedabustoeatastop.30minutesbutnobuscame.BothupsetandannoyedIdecidedtowalkon.ButnosoonerhadIleftthebusarrived.IthoughtifIhadwaitedforonemoreminuteIwouldhavecaughtit.IfIchosetotakenextbusIwouldhavetowaitfor30minutes.OnlythenIrealizemyproblem.Beingimpatientwillwastealltheeffortthatwehaveputitin.NowwheneverIamclosetomypatienceI’llthinkofthisexperience.剖析:
1.动词词组waitforsb./sth.等某人/某物
2.应用动词pass的过去式passedpast是介词
3.onfoot是固定词组表示“步行”
4.固定词组nosooner...than...搭配
5.特指“下一班车”用the
6.在数词前面用another表示“再;又”
7.此处为一般过去时用助动词did表示
8.修饰动词waste应用副词possibly
9.it与前面的that重复
10.“becloseto”中to是介词后面跟动名词形式Passage4I’mgladtotellyouthatIhavemadegreatprogressinmyEnglishstudysinceIbecameseniorhighschoolstudent.WhenIstartedseniorEnglishIfoundmuchmoredifficultthanwelearnedinjuniorschoolandIalmostlostmyheart.LaterIrealizedtheofEnglishsoIgotupearlyeverymorningEnglishwordslistenedtoEnglishtapesanddidalotof.Ialsoaskedmyteachersandclassmatesforbetterways 或English.NowI’mimprovingmyEnglishgreatly.I’mgettingmoreandmoreinterestedlearningit.Thankyousomuchforyourgreathelpinyourclass.剖析:
1.这里泛指一名高中生
2.缺少seniorEnglish的指代词
3.从句引导词错误“我们所学到的东西”用what引导
4.固定词组loseheart表示“丧失信心”而“loseone’shearttosb.”指“爱上某人”
5.“重要性”用名词importance表示
6.时态错误此处应该是一般过去时
7.exercise解释为“练习”时为可数名词这里用名词复数表示解释为“锻炼”时为不可数名词
8.搭配错误tolearn或者oflearning作后置定语
9.前后表示并列关系用and
10.固定词组beinterestedin...对……感兴趣B组Passage1Thewayofmunicationinpeople’slifehaschangedalotofinrecentyears.Inthepastpeopleintouchwitheachothermainlybywritinglettersorthepublictelephone.Butnowalmosteveryoneamobilephone.Peoplecanmunicatewitheachotheralmostatanyplaceandatanytime.What’smorepeoplehaveeasyaccesstheInternetenablesthemtosendande-mailswhenevertheylike.Withthesechangespeople’spaceoflifehasbeenquickenedandpeople’sworkhasbeenmademore.Itusedtotakethemseveraldaystohearfromeachothernowittakesonlyseveralminutesevenifareintwodifferentcontinents.剖析:
1.alot在这里相当于副词much作状语修饰changed而alotof后需接名词或代词
2.过去的时间状语inthepast便是提示此处动词用过去式
3.using与前面的writing是并列关系
4.everyone作主语谓语动词用单数句中的now说明用一般现在时故将have改为has
5.haveaccessto为固定短语表示“可以获得/接近……”
6.which引导非限制性定语从句代指前面的theInternet
7.receive表示“收到”而accept表示“接受”此处表示收到邮件
8.形容词efficient作补语修饰people’swork
9.从前句语境“人们需要几天的时间才能收到彼此的信件”后句表达的是只用几分钟这前后为转折关系故将and改为but
10.文中反复提到peopletheythem所以此处的代词应为they代指peoplePassage2Nowadayspeopleinmanybigcitiesareplainingtheheavytraffic.Ithasinfluenceddailylifeandeconomicdevelopment.Tosolvetheproblemsomepiecesofadviceputforward.Somepeoplesuggestthatmorestreetsandroadsbuilt.thiswaythetrafficdensitycanbereducedthusspeedinguptheflowofbusesandcars.Somepeopleadviselimitingthenumberofbikesandcars.Thiscandecreasethetrafficflow.Butontheotherhandthiswilltheconsumptionandbusesmorecrowded.Inmyopinionthenumberofprivatecarsshouldbeputunderthecontrol.Andatthesametimebusesshouldhavetheirownspecialroutescannotbeusedbyothervehicles.剖析:1plainaboutsth.表示“抱怨某事”是固定搭配plain为不及物动词
2.副词seriously作状语修饰动词influenced
3.考查名词所有格的用法people后加’s表示“人们的”
4.不可数名词作主语时谓语动词应由其前面量词的数来决定因为pieces是piece的复数故谓语动词为复数
5.suggestv.建议后接的宾语从句应用虚拟语气
6.inthisway表示“用这种方式这样因此”符合语境而bythisway表示“借着这种手段、方式”多用于转换话题不合题意
7.effect为名词时指“效果”作动词时指“使发生引起”在此不合乎语意而affect“影响”符合语境
8.make与前面的affect是由and连接的并列谓语动词
9.undercontrol表示“被控制住处于控制之中”这里表示私家车的数量应被控制住underthecontrol后接of表示“受……的控制”
10.定语从句缺少引导词同时也缺少主语先行词为routes故用which/that引导Passage3ThefirsttimeItoleavehomewaswhenIwasupongraduationinhighschool.Iwashavingtroublealongwithmyparents.IhadaboutfiftyinmypocketsandsoIthoughtaboutleavinghome.IttookmeonlytwoweeksawayfromhomeIstartedtofeelhomesick.Livingonmyownisadifferentexperienceforthreemainreasons:beingmoreresponsiblemoredecisiveandmorecreative.BecauseofI’monmyownIgettodealwithmydutieswithouttold.Ihavetobemorecarefulbecausemyparentsarenotheretogivemetheir.theotherhandIcouldmakemyownfutureplan.Ihavemaderulesfortofollow.剖析:
1.前后句时态应保持一致用一般过去时
2.havetroubleindoingsth.为固定表达意为“做某事有困难”
3.前面有fifty修饰因此dollar用复数形式
4.start为短暂性动词不与while连用故用when来引导
5.修饰形容词different应用total的副词形式
6.becauseof为介词短语后不能跟从句
7.without是介词其后跟动词-ing形式
8.advice为不可数名词无复数形式
9.ontheotherhand为固定短语
10.介词for后跟代词的宾格形式Passage4OnSaturdayafternoonLiHuaandWangPingmembersfrom“GreenEyes”havinganenvironmentalprotectionactivityneartheriversidewhentheysightofabirdontheground.Theypickeditandfounditwounded.Thinkingitdiewithouttimelyhelptheytookithome.Undertheirtreatmentandcaretheluckybirdgotrecoveredsoon.Whentimecameforthemtothebirdtheyfeltabitofpitybutvery.Ithinkit’sworthwhilefortodosuchathing.HereIcallonthepublictoshowforthenature.Onlybychangingthewaywetreattheenvironmentcanwegetalongwellwithit.剖析:
1.主语LiHuaandWangPing为复数概念谓语动词应用复数
2.主从句时态应保持一致用一般过去时
3.picksth.up为固定词组意为“把……捡起来”pickout意为“挑选辨认出”不符合语境
4.此处表示推测故应用might或could
5.此处为动词不定式to后应跟动词原形
6.delightful令人高兴的令人愉快的;delighted高兴的愉快的此处表示“高兴的愉快的”因此用delighted
7.指代LiHua和WangPing应用them
8.respect表示“尊敬敬重”时为不可数名词无复数形式
9.nature表示“自然界”时其前面无需加冠词
10.当先行词为theway而从句中缺少状语时关系词可以用inwhich、that或省略C组Passage1Iwenthikingtoamountainwithmyfriendslastsummer.Itwasagoodtripatthebeginningsomethingunexpectedhappenedhalfway.Oneofmysuddenlyfeltaterriblepaininhisstomachandhecouldn’tmoveany.Nobodyknewwhattodoit.Onegirltriedtocallhermumhermobilephonebuttherewasnosignalinthemountainarea.wehadbroughtatentwithus.Weputitupandlethiminit.Hetooksomemedicine.Thenhesomewaterandatesomefood.Afterwhilehefeltmuchbetterandwewalkedon.Weallenjoyedonthetopofthemountain.剖析:
1.前后句之间为转折关系而非顺承关系
2.oneof后跟可数名词的复数形式
3.not...anyfarther/further为固定表达意为“无法再远”
4.do的宾语是what故it多余
5.callsb.onone’smobilephone意为“给某人打手机”
6.作状语修饰整个句子应用副词形式
7.letsb.dosth.为固定表达意为“让某人做某事”
8.and连接的前后动作的时态应保持一致用一般过去时
9.afterawhile为固定短语意为“一会以后”
10.enjoyoneself为固定搭配意为“玩得高兴”Passage2IjustbackfromBritainlastweek.IwasenoughtobeoneofthefromdifferentcountriestovisittheUKfromFeb.16to
28.WepaidavisittomanyplaceslikeLondonOxfordtheLakeDistrict.IlearnedmuchaboutBritishcultureandhistoryinLondonwasmyfavorite.IalsolikedOxfordinwhichIsawmoreoldbuildings.TheLakeDistrictwasbeautifulbutitwaspitythatitrainedheavilywhenwerethere.ThemostthingformeintheBritainwasthatImadealotoffriendsthere.剖析:
1.此句中有表示过去时态的时间状语
2.作表语应用形容词形式
3.oneof后应跟可数名词的复数形式
4.前后成分之间为并列关系而不是选择关系
5.引导非限制性定语从句并且在从句中作主语指物故用which
6.much不能修饰可数名词的比较级应用many
7.Itwasapitythat...为固定句式
8.前后人称应该保持一致应用第一人称
9.修饰thing应用exciting表示“令人兴奋的”
10.Britain为专有名词其前无需加定冠词Passage3NowadaysmoreandmorepeopleareabouttheirhealthbuthowtokeepFirstitisnecessarytotakeexerciseeveryday.Researchshowsthatplentyofexercisemakestheheartbeatandthelungsworkharder.Secondeatmorefruitsandlessmeat.Thirdgettingridofbadhabitssmokinganddrinkingisalsoimportantwaytokeephealthy.Smokingandalcoholdrinkingone’shealthagreatdealandthereforeshouldbegivenup.Ifpeoplefollowthesethreewaysofkeepingfitthey’llimprovetheirhealth.剖析:
1.考查固定词组beconcernedabout...“关心、挂念……”
2.此处keep为连系动词后面要跟形容词作表语第五句中的waytokeephealthy也给出了提示
3.any一般用于疑问句或否定句中在肯定句中意为“任何的”不符合语境在肯定句中表示“一些”应该用some
4.在宾语从句中作主语应用动词-ing形式
5.此处应用比较级faster与harder保持一致
6.vegetable为可数名词应用其复数形式
7.作介词用于举例时用like
8.way在此句中是可数名词表示泛指而且important的第一个音素为元音音素因此用不定冠词an
9.smoking和alcoholdrinking为并列主语谓语动词要用复数形式
10.修饰动词improve要用副词形式Passage4Timeandtidewaitnoman.Mymotherisbeingawomanquietly.Shebeenbusyrunningafterusalltheyears.Myfatherisverybusyeverydayoutside.theheavyburdenfallsonmymother’s.BecausemyschoolisfarfrommyhomeIhavetogotoschoolbythetrainandmymotherseesmeoffatthestationeverytime.IoftenchooseaseatisclosetothewindowsoIcanseeher.HoweverIalwayscan’thelptearsfrommyeyes.Allthebuildingsandpeopleoutsidethewindowdisappear.IwavetomymotherandIlookathertilltheviewofherbackdisappears.Uptonowevenifisbusyshestilldoesitasusual.Theviewofmymother’sbackwillneverchangeinmyheart.剖析:
1.wait为不及物动词其后需加介词for再接宾语
2.middle-aged是一复合形容词意为“中年的”
3.此句应和全文时态保持一致用现在时态
4.前后句之间为因果关系而非转折关系
5.双肩应用复数形式shoulders
6.表示乘某种交通工具时介词by之后的名词前不用冠词bytrain意为“乘火车”
7.引导词which/that在定语从句中作主语
8.can’thelpdoingsth.意为“禁不住做某事”
9.修饰动词wave应用副词形式gently
10.前后句人称应保持一致D组Passage1WhenJackbowedtosomeonehealwaysdiditmuchtooquickly.Theyneedn’ttowaitanylongerafterhefinishednoddinghishead.Sohewasblamedforno.Thenawarm-heartedmanhim“WhenyoubowtosomebodynexttimeyoucancounttheJanuaryFebruaryMarchuntilDecember.Thenyoucanliftyourbody.Thustheceremonywillalmostperfect.”Thenextdayhemethisunclehedidasthemantoldhimto.Thebowwaslongthatitmadehisuncleescapesoonwithalook.WhenJacklookedhefoundhisunclegone.Soheaskedapasser-by“Inwhichmonthdidgoaway”剖析:
1.needn’t在此为情态动词后面直接加动词wait去掉to
2.manners是“礼貌”的意思manner“举止”
3.全文都是过去时态因此应用taught
4.月份前不用冠词去掉the
5.perfect为形容词因此will后要加be
6.前后两句为顺承并列关系因此用and
7.构成so...that...“如此……以至于……”这一句型
8.此处指惊讶的表情因此要用surprised
9.按照句意知当Jack抬起头时发现他叔叔走了因此用lookup
10.此处指代叔叔要用hePassage2Itwasdinnertime.Mr.andMrs.SmithwereabouttobegintheirdinnertheythattheirsonMikewasn’tthereyet.SoMrs.Smithaskedherhusbandtogoandfindhim.Mr.SmithwenttoMike’sroomandfoundMikeonhisfaceonthefloorabook.Hewaslaughing!Mr.Smithtoldhimtogofordinnerandheleftquite.WonderingthatwhatabsorbedhissonsomuchMr.Smithtookalookatthebook.NowMrs.SmithandMikewereatthetablewaitingMr.Smith.Shegotquiteandsenthersonforhisfather.Mikewentbacktohisroom.Tohisgreathesawhisfatherlyingonthefloorreadingthesamestorybookofonthefloor!剖析:
1.beabouttodo...when...为固定结构意为“正要做……这时……”
2.整篇文章都是过去时态因此应用found
3.lie意为“撒谎;躺”现在分词形式为lying;lay意为“放置;下蛋”现在分词形式为laying
4.readingabook为现在分词短语作伴随状语
5.副词修饰动词left因此应用unwillingly
6.wonder后跟宾语从句且从句中又缺少主语因此用whatthat多余
7.wait为不及物动词要加介词for之后才能跟宾语
8.由上下文可知史密斯夫人很不耐烦因此应用impatient
9.toone’ssurprise“使某人吃惊的是”为固定短语to为介词介词后跟名词而surprised为形容词
10.故事书是儿子的为男性因此用his而不用hersof后跟名词性物主代词或名词所有格形式因此应用hisPassage3I’meighteenyearsoldandIliveinsmallvillageinthePeakDistrictnotfarfromNottingham.IupinthisvillagesoIknoweveryonehere.That’stheproblem—theproblemisthere’snothingtodoandnobodyofmyagetodoitwith!AttheItravelintoNottinghameverydaytotheshopIwork.There’sabusat7:30inthemorningthelastbusbackintheeveningisat5:
30.FromSeptemberI’mgoingtostayinNottinghammyauntandunclewhenmycousinjoinsintheNavy.Icanusehisroom.I’mreallylookingforwardtolivinginNottingham.剖析:
1.liveinasmallvillage“生活在一个小村庄里”应加不定冠词a
2.我在村子里长大这个动作已完成因此应用过去时
3.根据上下文可知此处表达的是:那不是问题问题是无事可做结合句意在is后加not
4.引导表语从句的that不能省略
5.atthemoment“现在此时此刻”为固定短语
6.shop后为定语从句shop在定语从句中作地点状语因此应用where
7.由句意知此处是并列关系而不是选择关系因此用and
8.此处表句意的转折要用however;而therefore是“因此所以”的意思
9.staywithsb.“与某人住在一起”
10.jointheNavy“加入海军成为海军中的一员”joinin参加群众性的活动Passage4Growingupisnoteasy.Sometimesallthatisissomeonetorelyon.FormanyyearswasMum.MymotherwasacareerwomanandherownproblemstotakecarebutwhenIneededhershewasalwaysthere.HerstrengthcamefromIdon’tquiteknowsomewhereverydeep.ShewassostrongthatshewouldneverbreakdownevenIwenttoherwithallmylittle-boyproblemsandather.Herstrengthmademestrongandgavetomecouragetotrythingsthoughtwereimpossible.Ahelpinghandisalwaysenoughtoliftyouup.剖析:
1.此处应用被动语态因此用needed
2.itwasMum此为强调句的省略补充完整为itwasMumthatIcouldrelyon
3.此处记叙过去发生的事因此应用过去时
4.takecareof为固定短语意思是“处理”其宾语为前面的problems
5.此处表达的是她的勇气来自我不知道的某个地方应用somewhere而不是anywhere“任何地方”;另外somewhereverydeep与前面的somewhere是同位关系
6.when引导时间状语从句因为从句中的谓语动词为非延续动词不能用while
7.时态要一致此处shouted与前面的went要一致
8.givesb.sth.“给某人某物”因此去掉to
9.others在此处作主语而other只作定语
10.此处无比较意义因此用原级即可。