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2019-2020年高中英语Unit3Tomorrow’sWorldguidedwriting教案牛津译林版必修4【写作要求】本单元的写作要求是Writingaproposal【情景呈现】假定你是某国际学校的高一学生李华请你用英语给外籍校长写一封信,就你在使用学校图书馆时遇到的问题提出建议,并说明理由要点包括
1.开放时间较短,建议延长时间;
2.灯光较弱,建议配置台灯;
3.书籍较旧,建议购置新书并推出电子图书馆注意
1.词数150左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯参考词汇安装install;过时的outdatedDearsirIamLiHuaastudentfromGrade
1.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YourssincerelyLiHua【写作分析】根据写作内容可知,我们的写作任务是写一封建议信建议信是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告,并说明理由,以便让对方接受自己的想法或主张,从而解决有关问题建议信可以写给个人,就某个问题提出自己的看法或观点;也可以写给某个组织或者机构,就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告根据题目要求,信的主体可以分为三个部分第一,表明写作意图;第二,针对你在图书馆使用过程中遇到的问题提出具体的改进建议;第三,希望对方接受自己的建议此类写作的主要目的是提出建议,观点要合情合理,且语气一定要得当,既要委婉礼貌,又要有说服力【参考范文】DearsirIamLiHuaastudentfromGrade
1.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewconcerningthelibraryserviceinourschool.IcameacrosssomeproblemswhileusingthelibraryandI’dliketomakesomesuggestions.Firstofallthelibraryclosesearly.Itmightbeagoodideaforthelibrarytostayopenlongerespeciallyonweekends.Secondthelightinthereadingroomisnotbrightenough.Itwouldbebetteriftablelampscouldbeinstalled.Studentscanusethelampswhennecessary.ThirdIfindthatthebooksinourlibraryarealittleoutdated.Isuggestwebuymorenewbooksandmagazinessothatstudentscangetthelatestinformationabouttheworld.LastbutnotleastIsuggestanelectroniclibrarybedevelopedsowecanhavealotmorereadingmaterial.Ireallyhopeyouwillthinkmysuggestionsusefulandtakethemintoconsideration.YourssincerelyLiHua【必背佳句】
1.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewconcerningthelibraryserviceinourschool.
2.Itmightbeagoodideaforthelibrarytostayopenlongerespeciallyonweekends.
3.Itwouldbebetteriftablelampscouldbeinstalled.
4.Isuggestwebuymorenewbooksandmagazinessothatstudentscangetthelatestinformationabouttheworld.
5.Ireallyhopeyouwillthinkmysuggestionsusefulandtakethemintoconsideration.【举一反三】假定你是李华,是一名高一学生为了更好地为学生们服务,你校英文校报现向全体学生征求编写意见请你根据以下要点用英语写一封信,向校英文报编辑反映你发现的问题,并提出自己的改进办法
1.文章多以校内事务为主,建议增加关于时事或学习方法的文章;
2.版面形式不够活泼,建议增加新板块,用来展示学生自己的作品等注意
1.词数150左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯参考词汇时事currentaffair;展示displayDeareditorIamLiHuaastudentfromGrade
1.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YourssincerelyLiHuaOnepossibleversion:DeareditorIamLiHuaastudentfromGrade
1.IamwritingtotellyousomeproblemsIhavefoundwhilereadingourschoolnewspaperaswellasmysuggestions.Ihavereadmanyarticlesintheschoolnewspaper.Ifindthatalmostalltheessaysintheschoolnewspaperareaboutthedailyroutinesinourschool.ItisgoodforustoknowaboutthingsthathappeninourschoolbutIthinkitwouldbebetterifthereweresomearticlesaboutcurrentaffairsandlearningmethods.Readingcurrentaffairscanopenstudents’eyessotheycangettoknowmoreabouttheworld.Sharinglearningmethodscanhelpstudentsfindthebestwaytostudyeffectively.FurthermoreIthinktheformofthenewspapercanbelivelier.Ithinkitisagoodideatoopenanewsectiontodisplaystudents’ownworkssuchaspaintingsandphotos.Iwouldbemorethanhappyifmysuggestionscouldbeconsidered.YourssincerelyLiHua。