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Module5GreatPeopleandGreatInventionsofAncientChina一课前自主学习Ⅰ.阅读单词——————知其意1．philosophern． 哲学家2．philosophyn.哲学3．advisern.顾问4．barkn.树皮5．leathern.皮革6．monkn.和尚_7．categoryn.范畴；种类8．sutran.佛教的经_Ⅱ.重点单词——————写其形1．teachingn.常作复数教导；学说2．thinkern.思想家3．principlen．[纵联1]原则；准则4．positionn.职位5．stressvt.强调6．resignvi.辞职7．kindnessn．[纵联2]善良8．loven.仁爱9．softadj.柔软的10．fueln．[纵联3]燃料11．conditionn.状况；条件；环境Ⅲ.拓展单词——————通其变1．equaladj.平等的；相等的v．比得上→equalityn．相等；平等→equallyadv.平等地；相等地2．importancen．重要；重要性→importantadj.重要的3．ordern．秩序→orderlyadj.整洁的；有秩序的4．influentialadj.有影响的→influencen．v．影响5．honestyn．诚实→honestadj.诚实的[纵联4]6．justicen．公正→justadj.公正的7．contributionn．贡献→contributevi.贡献；促成；造成8．inventvt.发明→inventorn．发明家→inventionn．发明9．argumentn．争论；辩论；议论→arguevi.争论；争辩；提出理由10．freedomn．自由→freeadj.自由的；空闲的；免费的[纵联5]纵联
1.易混单词先辨清
①principle原则 principal校长
②tissue组织issue问题；发行
③affect影响effect结果
④dessert甜点desert舍弃
⑤borrow借sorrow悲痛
⑥wander漫步wonder想知道纵联
2.名词后缀ness大观园
①kindness善良
②blindness盲目
③darkness黑暗
④weakness虚弱
⑤loneliness寂寞
⑥awareness意识纵联
3.各种“燃料”选一选
①fuel燃料
②coal煤炭
③oil石油
④gas汽油
⑤petrol汽油纵联
4.以y结尾的名词一览
①honesty诚实
②difficulty困难
③modesty谦虚
④discovery发现
⑤delivery投递；交付
⑥safety安全纵联
5.名词后缀dom荟萃
①freedom自由
②boredom无聊
③kingdom王国
④wisdom智慧单元话题——历史人物及事件子话题1 历史人物
①emperorn．皇帝
②queenn．女王；王后
③ministern．大臣；部长
④kingn．国王
⑤empressn．女皇；皇后
⑥princen．王子
⑦princessn．公主
⑧guardn．卫兵子话题2 历史事件
①dynastyn．朝代
②slaveryn．奴隶制度
③battlen．战斗；战役
④originn．起源；由来
⑤aggressionn．侵略
⑥revolutionn．革命
⑦uprisingn．起义
⑧incidentn．事变
⑨invadev．侵略⑩occupyvt.攻占⑪sacrificev．牺牲⑫betrayvt.出卖；泄露机密⑬feudaladj.封建制度的⑭primitiveadj.原始的；远古的⑮historicadj.历史上著名或重要的⑯historicaladj.与历史有关的[学考对接·活学活用]高考采撷一 阅读中的词汇应用1．2012·辽宁高考阅读CInthepasttwodecadestheChinesestudiesprogramshavegainedhugepopularityinWesternuniversities.MorerecentlytheChinesegovernmenthassetupConfuciusInstitutesinmorethan80countries.Theseschoolsteach❶bothChineselanguageandculture.ThemaincoursesofChinesecultureusuallyincludedChinesearthistoryandphilosophy❷.SomesocialscientistssuggestthatWesternersshouldtakeadvantageoftheancientChinesewisdomtomakeupforthedrawbacksofWesternphilosophy.StudentsintheUnitedStatesatthesametimeareracingtolearnChinese.SotheywillbereadyforlifeinaworldwhereChinaisanequal❸powerwiththeUnitedStates.BusinessmenwhohopetomakemoneyinChinaarereadingbooksaboutConfuciustounderstandtheirChinesecustomers.
①写出teach在本单元中的同根名词teaching
②写出philosophy在句中的含义哲学
③写出equal的名词形式equality其近义词fairjust，意为公平的；公正的2．2010·江西高考阅读CNeitherphilosopher❶livedintimesofpeacethoughthereweremorewarsinGreecethaninChina.TheChinesestateswereverylargeandfeudalwhiletheGreekcitystatesweresmallandurban.Theurbanenvironment❷inwhichSocrateslivedallowedhimtobemoreradical激进的thanConfucius.UnlikeConfuciusSocrateswasnotaskedbyrulershowtogoverneffectively.ThusSocrateswasabletobemoreidealisticfocusingonissueslike ❸ freeandknowledgeforitsownsake.Confuciusontheotherhandadvised❹thoseingovernmentserviceandmanyofhisstudentswentontogovernmentservice.
①写出philosopher在句中的含义哲学家
②写出environment在本单元中的近义词condition
③用free的正确形式填空freedom
④写出advised在本单元中的同根名词adviser高考采撷二 写作中的词汇应用根据汉语及提示翻译句子1．2018·天津高考书面表达我想强调的是我们小组现在正在寻找新成员stressWhat_I_want_to_stress_is_that_our_group_is_looking_for_new_members_right_now.2．2015·重庆高考写作只有这样，我们才能为我们的家庭和社会做出巨大的贡献contributionOnly_in_this_way_can_we_make_a_great_contribution_to_our_family_and_our_society.3．2012·山东高考写作最后，参考一些好的英语学习网站对学习英语很重要importanceFinally_referring_to_some_good_English_study_websites_is_of_great_importance_in_learning_English.二课堂重点释疑1．equaladj.平等的；相等的；胜任的vt.等于；比得上n．同等的人；相等的物[记牢]1equal...with... 把……与……等同2beequaltodoingsth.等于；能胜任做某事beequalwith与……平等equalsb./sth.indoingsth.在做某事方面比得过、敌得过某人/物withoutequal无与伦比3equalityn.相等；平等equallyadv.相等地；平等地；同样地[练通]单句语法填空
①Weneedtobeactiveinallkindsofsportsandpayattentiontomentalhealthwhichisequaltophysicalhealth.
②HongKongWetlandParkisequallyequalattractiveinspringandautumnfortheweatherispleasantinbothseasons.
③WeChinesepeoplehavepersistentlyurgedtheequalityequalofnationsbigorsmall.补全句子
④Iam_not_equal_tothepositionsoIdontapplyforit.我不能胜任这个职位，因此我不会申请它
⑤Hispaintingsarewithout_equalinthewesternworld.他的画作在西方世界无与伦比[写美] 翻译句子
⑥他们没有意识到浪费时间实际上等于自杀They_dont_realize_that_wasting_time_is_actually_equal_to_killing_themselves.[联想] 表示“胜任……”的其他常见表达
①beupto
②befitfor
③bequalifiedfor2．ordern．秩序；次序；命令；订购；点菜vt.命令；订购；点饭菜[记牢]1inorderof 以……的顺序inorder井然有序；整齐；按顺序inorderto为了outoforder次序颠倒；发生故障placeanorderforsth.withsb.向某人订购某物2ordersb.todosth.命令某人做某事orderthat...shoulddo命令……应当做[练通]单句语法填空
①Idliketoplaceanorderforsometeawithyourpany.
②2016·北京高考Orderedorderoveraweekagothebooksareexpectedtoarriveanytimenow.
③Whyisitthatleaderssooftenrefusetoapologizeevenwhenapublicapologyseemstobeinorder[用准] order后接宾语从句时，从句的谓语要用虚拟语气“should＋动词原形”，should可以省略[写美] 补全句子
④2017·北京高考书面表达为了在毕业前给大家留下一些难忘的回忆，我们班制作了一个特别的视频来表达我们对学校的感激之情In_order_to_leave_some_impressive_memories_for_all_of_us_before_graduation_ourclassmadeaspecialvideotoexpressourappreciationofourschool.3．stressvt.强调；施压于；使紧张n.压力；重音；强调[记牢]1stresstheimportanceof 强调……的重要性understress在压力之下underthestressof在……压力下；为……所迫lay/put/placestresson强调；把重点放在……上2stressfuladj.压力大的；紧张的stressedadj.焦虑不安的；心力交瘁的[练通] 单句语法填空
①Whenunderstressevenamostgentlepersoncanbebadtemperedandgetangryeasily.
②Nowadaysmoreandmoremiddleschoolstudentsaregettingstressedstressintheirstudies.
③Mostdoctorsandnursesliveunderstressfulstressconditions.
④Helaidparticularstressontheneedfordiscipline.[用准] stressful“压力大的”，通常修饰事物；stressed“焦虑不安的”通常修饰人[写美] 补全句子
⑤为了给每个人强调这些历史遗址的重要性和价值，政府已经加强规定去保护它们To_stress_the_importance_and_value_of_these_historic_sites_to_everyone_thegovernmenthasstrengthenedregulationstoprotectthem.4．conditionn．状况；条件；环境[记牢]1living/housing/workingconditions生活/住房/工作条件undertheconditionsof...在……条件下2beingood/bad/poorcondition处于良好的/糟糕的状态bein/outofcondition健康/健康欠佳3onconditionthat...在……条件下；倘若onnocondition决不[练通]单句语法填空
①Heundertooktoimprovetheworkingconditionsconditionandtheworkerswereexpectingit.
②Idontcareaboutthepricesolongasthecarisingoodcondition.
③Illletyouusemybikeonconditionthatyoucanreturnittomorrow.补全句子
④Onnoconditioncan_we_give_up_our_dreams;_onlyifwesticktoourdreamswillwebeabletogetoverallkindsofchallenges.我们决不能放弃梦想，只有我们坚持自己的梦想，才能够克服各种挑战[用准] 1onnocondition放于句首时，句子需部分倒装2condition表示“工作、生活或住房等条件”时，通常要用复数形式；而表示“状况”时，则为不可数名词[写美] 翻译句子
⑤我写信是想告诉你，我们学校周围的生活条件发生了巨大的变化Im_writing_to_tell_you_that_great_changes_in_living_conditions_have_taken_place_around_our_school.[词汇过关综合训练] Ⅰ.单词拼写1．Despitethevarietyofinjuriesseveralprinciples原则offirstaidcanapplytoallemergencies.2．Answeringthisquestionsuccessfullyshowsyoureallythinkaboutit.Italsoshowsyouareaseriouscandidatefortheposition职位．3．Hestressed强调thatstudentsshouldliveuptocertainstandardsofbehaviour.4．Itisveryimportanttoteachthechildrenhowtodealwithotherskindness善良andrudeness.5．Thewildflowerslookedlikeasoft柔软的orangeblanketcoveringthedesert.6．Edisonkepttryingoutsomenewideasuntilheinvented发明whathewanted.7．Mostairpollutioniscausedbytheburningoffuels燃料likecoalgasandoil.8．IfyouwanttosucceedIthinkthatsettingagoalforyourselfisofgreatimportance重要．9．Suchpeopleashavemadegreatcontributions贡献totheworldshouldbegreatlyrespected.10．Weretryingtomakeournewspaperbeemoreandmoreinfluential有影响的inourcountry.Ⅱ.单句语法填空1．Insomecountrieswhatiscalled“equalityequal”doesnotreallymeanequalrightsforallpeople.2．Heisunderalotofstressrightnowbecausehehasbeenaddictedtodrugs.3．Theywereinthemiddleofanargumentarguebutbrokeoffwhensomeonecameintotheroom.4．Whatpublicfiguresshouldoffertotheirfansishonestyhonestandhappiness.5．NobodyknowswhyJackresignedfromofficeforhedidagoodjobinthepany.6．Theword“tuhao”caughttheattentionofthedictionaryseditingteaminUKafteraBBCsrecentprogramoninfluentialinfluenceChinesewords.7．Learningtoreadandwriteopensthedoortoabetterjobandbetterlivingconditionscondition．8．Someinventionsinventarewellreceivedbutintermsoffunctiontheyarentverysuccessful.Ⅲ.根据提示补全句子1．我的闹钟坏了，今天早上3点把我叫醒了orderMyclockwasout_of_orderandwokemeupat3thismorning.2．其次，要积极向上和开心，因为你的心理健康和身体健康同等重要equalForanotherbepositiveandcheerfulforyourmentalhealthis_equal_to_your_physical_health.3．人们被建议把重点放在平衡饮食和适当的锻炼上stressPeopleareadvisedtolay/put/place_particular_stress_onthebalanceddietandproperexercise.4．尽管已是八十高龄，这位老人依然身体健康conditionThoughinhiseightiestheoldmanisstillin_good_condition.5．这些改革为经济的稳定作出了重大贡献contributionThesereformsmade_a_major_contribution_tothestabilityoftheeconomy.一课前自主学习1．agree_with 同意；与……相符；适合某人2．be_at_war_with[串记1]与……交战3．bring_up养育；抚养4．bee/be_interested_in对……感兴趣5．a_sense_of_responsibility[串记2]责任感6．be_proud_of为……自豪7．in_conclusion总之8．for_the_first_time第一次[同根短语串记]串记
1.“at＋n.”短语荟萃
①atwar处于交战状态
②atpeace处于和平状态
③athand在手边
④atwork在工作
⑤atrest在休息
⑥attable在吃饭
⑦atrisk处境危险；遭受危险
⑧atsea在航海；茫然
⑨atlength最后；终于⑩atschool在上学串记
2.sense相关短语精选
①asenseofresponsibility责任感
②inasense从某种意义上来说
③innosense/way决不
④makesense讲得通；有意义
⑤makesenseof理解；弄懂
⑥asenseofdirection/humor方向感/幽默感1．insociety 在社会中2．followonesadvice遵循某人意见3．besimilarto与……相似4．inthesecondhalfoftheeighteenthcentury在18世纪后半叶5．afarmingsociety农业社会6．IndustrialRevolution工业革命7．thousandsofpeople成千上万的人8．inapoorandcrowdedconditions在艰苦、拥挤的环境中1．Treatothersinthe_wayyouwanttobetreated.己所不欲，勿施于人2．Menciusbelievedthatthe_reason_whymanisdifferentfromanimalsis_thatmanisgood.孟子认为人区别于动物的原因就在于人性本善3．Howeverwedo_knowthatin1092ADheinventedthefirstrealclock.然而，我们的确知道在公元1092年，他发明了第一个真正的钟表[学考对接·活学活用]高考采撷一 完形中的短语补全句子1．2017·全国卷Ⅲ完形填空“MoreinterestingtherearehundredsofCanadianswhoare_interested_in对……感兴趣changingtheirnametoElizabethGallagher.”Axanisaid.2．2016·全国卷Ⅱ完形填空OnemorningIhadtobookanimmediateflighthomeforafamilyemergency.IranintoRanisofficefor_the_first_time第一次．高考采撷二 写作中的短语和句式补全句子1．2012·浙江高考书面表达在“英语读书周”中，我的一个同学向我们推荐了一句话“你的未来取决于很多事情，但主要取决于你”我完全同意这种观点IntheEnglishReadingWeekoneofmyclassmatesremendedaquotetouswhichgoeslikethis:“Yourfuturedependsonmanythingsbutmostlyonyou.”Icantagree_more_withthisview.2．2010·福建高考书面表达总之，世界各地的人们应该意识到缺水的真实情况，保护现有的水资源，科学地探索潜在的水资源In_conclusion_peoplearoundtheworldshouldbeawareoftherealsituationofwatershortageprotectthepresentwaterresourcesandexplorepotentialonesscientifically.3．2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达我的确相信你会玩得很开心的do强调谓语Ido_havetheconfidencethatyouwillhaveagreattime.4．2011·陕西高考书面表达学校里的一些全优学生在社会上没有像他们预期的那样成功，原因是来自他们父母的压力让他们几乎没有时间做其他的事情thereasonwhy...isthat...The_reason_whysomeallAstudentsinschoolhaveturnedoutnottobeassuccessfulinsocietyastheywereexpectedis_thatthepressurefromtheirparentsallowsthemalmostnotimeforotheractivities.二课堂重点释疑[短语集释]bringup养育；抚养；教育；提出；呕吐[辨清] 写出下列句中bringup的含义
①BornintoafamilywiththreebrothersDavidwasbroughtuptovaluethesenseofsharing.教育
②Hebroughtupapracticalplaninthemeetingwhichbroughtdownthecostofproduction.提出
③Hewasdrunkandbroughtupwhathehadeatenatmidnight.呕吐
④Broughtupinabigcityhefounditquitedifficulttofitinthecountryside.抚养；养育[记牢]bringabout 引起；导致事故、变化等bringback使某物恢复；使回忆起某事bringdown使……降低；使……倒下bringin引入；赚得；挣得bringout使显现出；取出；阐明；出版[练通] 单句语法填空
⑤Thereasonwhythegoodsaresoldatsuchlowpricesisthatthemanufacturersarewillingtobringdownpricesinreturnforbigvolumeofpurchases.
⑥Sharingwithfriendshelpedmebringbackmyconfidenceandfitinwithothers.
⑦2017·江苏高考WorkingwiththemedicalteaminAfricahasbroughtoutthebestinherasadoctor.[写美] 补全句子
⑧我们受教育的方式，以及我们的文化背景，将会极大地影响我们对表达愤怒的感受The_way_we_are_brought_up_and_our_cultural_background_willverymuchinfluencehowwefeelaboutexpressinganger.[句式集释]1．thewaythat/inwhich引导的定语从句[教材原句] Treatothersinthe_wayyouwanttobetreated.[悟拓展例句]1Ithinkyouhurthispridebylaughingatthe_way_that/in_whichhespeaksEnglish.我觉得你嘲笑他说英语的方式伤害了他的自尊心2The_way_that/whichcameupatthemeetingwasunpractical.在会议上提出的方法不切实际3Isthisthewayyoucanimagineto_reduce/of_reducing_air_pollution这是你能想到的减少空气污染的方法吗？[析用法规则]用法归纳1way表示“方式；方法”时，其后常接inwhich或that引导的定语从句，也可以将关系词inwhich或that省略掉，此时关系词在从句中作状语2way后接定语从句时，如果关系词在从句中作主语或宾语则用关系代词that/which，作宾语时还可以省略，作主语时不可省略3way表示“方式；方法”时，其后还可接不定式或ofdoingsth.形式[背写作佳句]1Yetinmodernsocietysomebodyhastodoordinaryjobssuchascleaningstreetsbecausethisisthewaysocietyisorganized.要点句2Schoolactivitiesareusuallyconsideredagoodwaytomakenewfriendsanddevelopnewinterests.要点句2．Thereasonwhy...isthat...[教材原句] Menciusbelievedthatthe_reason_whymanisdifferentfromanimalsis_thatmanisgood.[悟拓展例句]1Thereasonwhy_he_has_had_such_a_success_is_thathenevergivesup.他之所以能取得如此大的成功是因为他从不放弃2Thereasonthat/which_he_explained_at_the_meetingwasthathedidntcatchthefirstbus.他在会议上解释的理由是他没有赶上第一辆公共汽车3Whydontyoubelievethe_reason_that_my_car_was_held_upinthetrafficjam你为什么不相信我的车被堵在路上的原因呢？[析用法规则]用法归纳1thereasonwhy...isthat...，表示“……的原因是……”，其中why引导定语从句，that引导表语从句2thereasonthat/which...，表示“……的原因”，that/which引导定语从句，并在定语从句中作主语或宾语3thereasonthat...，表示“……的原因”，that后接同位语从句，解释其内容注意事项reason用作先行词时，首先判断定语从句中缺少什么成分，如果缺少状语，则要用关系副词why或forwhich引导定语从句，why有时可省略；如果缺少主语或宾语，则要用关系代词that/which引导定语从句，that/which在定语从句中作宾语时可省略[背写作佳句]12018·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达Thereasonwhywechoosethismovieisthatitrepresentsthedevelopmentofourbelovedschoolwhichisnotonlyinterestingbutalsomeaningful.开头句22017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达ThatswhymoreandmorepeopleareinterestedinTangDynasty.要点句[词块、句式过关综合训练] Ⅰ.选词填空agreewith，besimilarto，beatwarwith，bringup，beeinterestedin，beproudof，inconclusion，forthefirsttime1．Brought_upinahappyandwealthyfamilyRobertlearnedhowtoobservegoodmannersathome.2．AsyourfriendIknowhowhardyouhavebeenstudyingChineseandIam_proud_ofyourachievement.3．In_conclusion_asadultswehavemoreresponsibilitiesonourshouldersandshouldtakemoreintoconsiderationwhenmakingdecisions.4．Thetwosidesdidnotagreeonthesubjectfor_the_first_time_sotodaytheywillsitdownoncemoretohaveadiscussion.5．Someofourfriendscanbe_similar_tousandsomeofthemcanhavemanydistinctionsinsomeways.6．Withthehelpofourteacherwebegantobee_interested_inEnglish.7．Youlookwell.TheairandtheseafoodsinSanyamustagree_withyouIsuppose.8．Howlongdoyouthinkthetwocountrieswillbe_at_war_witheachotherⅡ.根据提示补全句子/句型转换1．他没得到这个工作的原因是他的英语不好thereasonwhy...isthat...The_reason_why_he_didnt_get_the_job_was_thathisEnglishwasnotverygood.2．你日常生活中发生的事情会改变你看待世界和世间的人的方式thewaySomethingthathappensinyourdailylifewillchangethe_way_you_look_at_the_worldandthepeopleinit.3．我现在很少锻炼，但我上初中时的确喜欢踢足球do强调谓语IdonttakemuchexercisenowbutIdid_like_playing_football_when_I_was_injunior_school.4．2016·北京高考书面表达我们为自己感到非常骄傲，相信我们可以为一个更美好的世界做更多的事情beproudofWeare_very_proud_of_ourselvesandbelievewecandomoreforabetterworld.5．ToconcludeIwouldliketothankeverybodywhohelpedme.→In_conclusion_Iwouldliketothankeverybodywhohelpedme.conclusionⅢ.读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事Bekindtoothers.Irealizethisissimpleandverybasic.Howeveritisnecessaryanditdoesmake_a_difference.IoftenhavepeoplewhocrossmydailypathtowhomIcanshowkindness.Itisoftenjustasmile.Asmileoftensays“Iseeyou.Youarentinvisibletome.Youareimportant.”Peopleneedsomeonetocareaboutthem.Ireadastorymanyyearsagoaboutamanwhohaddecidedtomit_suicide.Hedlostafortunehisjobhisfamilyandnearlyeverythingheowned.Hewenttoalocalpawnshoptobuyagun.HeplannedtotakethegunbacktohisapartmentinNewYorkCityandkillhimself.Ashewasgettingontheelevatoralittleold_ladywasslowlygettingontoo.Shehadasmallcartshewaspullingbehindherandwashavingalittletroublegettingitintotheelevator.Hesaidthathewasactuallyabitangrybecausehewantedtohurry_up_gettohisapartmentandendhisownlife.Hereached_out_totheoldladyscartandforceditasithadbeestuck.Hegotitfreeeasilyandshegotontheelevator.Afterthedoorclosedshelookedupathimwithabigsmileandsaid“Ifwehadmoreyoungmenlikeyouinthisworldtheworldwouldbeabetterplace.Youaresokindtohelp.Suchasweetyoungman.”Ofcourseitchangedhisthoughtofgoingbacktokillhimself.HewantedtogoaroundNewYorkandfindpeoplethathecouldhelpandpeoplewhowerestrugglingevenwithsomethingthatwasassmallasthelittleoldladyscart.注意
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语Paragraph1Thatdayhislifechanged. Paragraph2Laterheenjoyedgreatsuccessinhisworkandlife. [写作步骤]第一步速读全文文本大意一位年轻人几乎失去了一切，所以决定自杀他在乘电梯时遇到一位老太太，老太太行动迟缓，手推车卡在了电梯口年轻人为了能快点到家结束自己的生命，随手帮了老太太一把，受到了老太太的赞扬谁料想老太太的赞扬竟然改变了年轻人想要自杀的想法叙述意图文章通过一个小故事彰显与人为善的重要性第二步细读全文1．所给短文情景模式分析whoIamananoldladywhatAmandecidedtomitsuicide.Laterhegaveupthethoughtofkillinghimself.whenmanyyearsagowhereontheelevatorwhyHedlostafortunehisjobhisfamilyandnearlyeverythingheowned.Theoldladypraisedhimforhelpingher.2．对原文所提供的下划线词语进行分类★人物oldladyfamily★事件kindkindnesssmall★动作与心理描写mitsuicidehurryupreachouttochangemakeadifference第三步精心谋篇1．Paragraph1Thatdayhislifechanged. 那一天，他的人生发生了改变[情节分析] 注意续写段首句关键词“hislifechanged”，所以本段续写部分围绕变化写，续写还要考虑文章首段提到的“Bekindtoothers.”以及文中提到的“mitsuicide”这一社会现象，并综合他自杀的原因失去财富、工作、家庭等还要提及他的想法变化的原因kindness因此续写第一段应该写做好事给他带来的变化2．Paragraph2Laterheenjoyedgreatsuccessinhisworkandlife. 后来，他在工作和生活上非常成功[情节分析] 第二段继续写具体在哪方面发生的变化，写作时注意关键词Laterenjoyedsuccessworkandlife，即下文应该写将来的事情，要围绕工作和生活两个方面来写第四步初写成文Paragraph11．他开始和别人分享他的故事，很快，他发现自己成了一个很受欢迎的预防自杀的代言人Hestartedsharing_his_story_with_othersandsoonhefoundhimselfbeingapopularspokesmanforthepreventionofsuicide.2．他预防自杀的方法简单说来是这样的Hisremedyforpreventing_suicidewassimplythis.3．如果你想结束你的生命，你在最后的几个小时应该为他人做五个小的善举Ifyouwanttoendyourlifeyourlastfewhoursshouldincludedoingfivesmall_acts_of_kindnessforotherpeople.4．那会改变你，你会意识到世间的美好，并决定活下去Itwillchangeyouandyoullwakeuptothegoodnessinthisworldanddecide_that_you_want_to_live.Paragraph25．他最后在一家公司找到了一份工作，月薪4000美元左右Hefinallyfound_a_job_in_a_panyandhisinewasabout＄4000amonth.6．他还帮助过一位曾经想自杀的女孩，最后两人结婚了！Healsohelpedagirlwhowantedtomitsuicideandfinallygot_married_toher!7．现在他有一个幸福的三口之家，这都是因为他对那位老太太的小的善举引起的Nowhehasa_happy_family_of_threeallbecauseofthesmallactofkindnessheshowedtothelittleoldlady.8．他发现自己有更多的目标，过得比以前更幸福了Hefindshimselflivingwithmorepurposesandliving_a_happier_life_than_before.9．只要有可能，他就会帮助那些生活中有困难的人Wheneveritispossiblehewillreachouttothose_in_troubleinlife.第五步润色升级1．用高级词汇替换要点3中的includeinclude→consist_of2．用withanineof改写要点5He_finally_found_a_job_in_a_pany_with_an_ine_of_about_＄4000_a_month.3．把要点9改为省略句Whenever_possible_he_will_reach_out_to_those_in_trouble_in_life.第六步复查定稿Paragraph1Thatdayhislifechanged.Hestartedsharinghisstorywithothersandsoonhefoundhimselfbeingapopularspokesmanforthepreventionofsuicide.Hisremedyforpreventingsuicidewassimplythis.Hesaid“Ifyouwanttoendyourlifeyourlastfewhoursshouldconsistofdoingfivesmallactsofkindnessforotherpeople.Itwillchangeyouandyoullwakeuptothegoodnessinthisworldanddecidethatyouwanttolive.”Paragraph2Laterheenjoyedgreatsuccessinhisworkandlife.Hefinallyfoundajobinapanywithanineofabout＄4000amonth.Healsohelpedagirlwhowantedtomit_suicideandfinallygotmarriedtoher!Nowhehasahappyfamilyofthreeallbecauseofthesmallactofkindnessheshowedtothelittleold_lady.Hefindshimselflivingwithmorepurposesandlivingahappierlifethanbefore.Wheneverpossiblehewillreach_out_tothoseintroubleinlife.理清文体结构之十七 议论文之总分总结构——观点→论证→结论“总分总”类议论文一般包括提出问题、分析问题和解决问题三大部分，在内容的展开上常表现为“总分总”模式，即首尾部分为“总”，中间分析问题部分为“分”，中间部分为议论文的难点和重点，其呈现形式可以是分论点并列，也可以是递进式的延伸不过，不管怎样“分”，都应在“总”的统摄之下，并且为“总”服务这种结构层次清晰，了解了论点是什么，如何论证的，结论是什么，便掌握了文章大意，题目也会迎刃而解[高考典例] 2018·全国卷Ⅲ·D篇[读文解题技法]总总
[1]Adultsunderstandwhatitfeelsliketobefloodedwithobjects.Whydoweoftenassumethatmore_is_morewhenitestokidsandtheirbelongingsThegoodnewsisthatIcanhelpmyownkidslearnearlierthanIdidhowtolivemorewithless.
[2]Ifoundthepreholidaysagoodtimetoencourageyoungchildrentodonatelessusedthingsanditworked.BecauseofoureffortsourdaughterGeorgiadiddecidetodonatealargebagoftoystoalittlegirlwhosemotherwasunabletopayforherholidayduetoillness.Shechosetosellafewlargerobjectsthatwerelessoftenusedwhenwepromisedtoputthemoneyintoherschoolfund基金ourkindergartendaughterisseriousaboutbeingadoctor．
[3]ForweeksI’vebeenthinkingofbiggerdeeperquestions:HowdowemakeitahabitforthemAndhowdowetrainourselvestohelpthemlivewithneedanduselessYesterdayIsatwithmysonShepherddeterminedtotestmyowntheoryonthis.Idecidedtoplaywithhimwithonlyonetoyforaslongasitwouldkeephisinterest.Iexpectedthatonetoywouldkeephisattentionforaboutfiveminutestenminutesmax.Ichosearedrubberball—simpleuniversallyavailable.Wepassedithetriedtoputitinhismouthhetriedbouncingitrollingitsittingonitthrowingit.Itwastotallypletelyenoughforhim.BeforeIknewitanhourhadpassedanditwastimetomoveontolunch.
[4]Webothbecameabsorbedinthesimplicityofplayingtogether.HehadmyfullattentionandIhadhis.Mylittleexperimenttofindjoyinasingleobjectworkedforbothofus.
1.提出观点第1段本文以反例引领提出观点livemorewithless可解32题
2.事例论证1第2段假期前鼓励孩子捐赠用不着的物品或卖掉东西把钱放于“学校基金”可解33题
3.事例论证2第3段事例论证1为某一次行为，接着作者以问题的形式论证了如何让孩子能够“makeitahabit”可解34题
4.得出结论第4段在事例1和事例2论证的基础上，顺理成章地得出结论简单的物品也能激发快乐可解35题[依行文结构，比对定答案]
32.Whatdothewords“”inparagraph1probablymean？A.Themore，thebetter.B.Enoughisenough.C.Moremoney，moreworries.D.Earnmoreandspendmore.
33.WhatmadeGeorgia？A.Savingupforherholiday.B.Raisingmoneyforapoorgirl.C.Addingthemoneytoherfund.D.Givingthemoneytoasickmother.
34.Whydidtheauthor？A.Totryoutanidea.B.Toshowaparent’slove.C.Totrainhisattention.D.Tohelphimstartahobby.
35.Whatcanbeasuitableforthetext？A.TakeItorLeaveItB.ALessonfromKidsC.LiveMorewithLessD.ThePleasureofGiving[答案]
32.A
33.C
34.A
35.C。
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