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Module1SmallTalk一课前自主学习Ⅰ.阅读单词——————知其意1.yawnv. 打呵欠2.sighv.叹气,叹息_3.immigrationn.移民4.visan.签证5.receptionn.欢迎会;招待会6.embassyn.使馆7.firmn.公司8.outspokenadj.[纵联1]直言不讳的,坦率的,不客气的9.motton.座右铭,格言10.coincidencen.[纵联2]巧合11.matureadj.成熟的12.teasev.戏弄,嘲弄,揶揄13.contradictv.反驳14.pregnantadj.怀孕的15.acquaintancen.熟人16.divorcen.离婚,离异17.anniversaryn.周年纪念日18.violatev.骚扰,妨碍,侵犯19.definev.解释,给……下定义20.circumstancen.情形,情况Ⅱ.重点单词——————写其形1.lackv.缺乏,缺少2.opportunityn.机会3.prizen.奖品,奖金4.tidyv.使……整洁,整理5.favourn.恩惠,照顾6.certainpron.某些7.replyn.回答,答复,回信8.shortingn.缺点,短处9.awkwardadj.尴尬的10.typistn.打字员11.customern.顾客,客户12.cautiousadj.[纵联3]谨慎的,慎重的,小心的13.anyhowadv.不管怎么说,无论如何14.interruptv.打断15.functionn.功能16.purposen.目的17.formn.表格Ⅲ.拓展单词——————通其变1.informaladj.非正式的→反义词formaladj.正式的2.seriousadj.严肃的→seriouslyadv.严肃地3.confidentlyadv.自信地→confidentadj.自信的→confidencen.信心;自信4.advanceadj.预先的,在前的n.前进;进步v.前进;提前→advancedadj.先进的;高级的5.applicationn.申请→applyv.申请;应用6.impoliteadj.不礼貌的→impolitelyadv.不礼貌地→politeadj.礼貌的[纵联4]7.absencen.缺乏,不存在→absentadj.缺席的,不在场的;缺少的,缺乏的8.apologyn.道歉,致歉→apologisev.道歉9.messyadj.棘手的,难办的→messn.脏或乱的状态10.modestadj.谦虚的,谦逊的→modestyn.谦虚,谦逊11.successfuladj.成功的→successn.成功→succeedvi.成功vt.继任,接替12.imaginev.想象→imaginationn.想象,想象力→imaginaryadj.想象中的,假想的,虚构的→imaginativeadj.富有想象力的纵联
1.“out+分词”式合成形容词
①outspoken 直言不讳的,坦率的,不客气的
②outspread伸开的,展开的
③outworn过时的,陈腐的,无用的
④outcast被遗弃的;被逐出的
⑤outgoing外向的,友好的
⑥outstanding杰出的,突出的纵联
2.ence结尾名词集锦
①coincidence巧合
②absence缺乏,不存在
③confidence信心
④consequence结果
⑤adolescence青春;青春期
⑥petence能力;胜任
⑦convenience便利
⑧conscience良心,道德感
⑨reference参考;查阅⑩preference喜爱;偏爱纵联
3.ious结尾形容词荟萃
①cautious谨慎的
②serious严肃的
③ambitious有雄心的
④curious好奇的
⑤delicious美味的
⑥obvious明显的
⑦precious珍贵的
⑧religious宗教的
⑨unconscious无意识的⑩various多种多样的纵联
4.前缀im形容词表示“不……的”
①impolite不礼貌的
②impossible不可能的
③impatient不耐烦的
④immoral不道德的
⑤imperfect不完美的
⑥improper不合适的单元话题——闲聊子话题1 问候、介绍
①regardsn.问候,致意
②respectn.敬意
③greetvt.问候
④greetingn.问候,打招呼
⑤introductionn.介绍,引进
⑥remendvt.推荐;建议子话题2 打电话
①dialv.拨电话号码
②ringup打电话
③getthrough接通电话
④hangon打电话时不挂断
⑤hangup挂断电话
⑥phoneup打电话[学考对接·活学活用]高考采撷一 阅读中的词汇应用1.2014·湖南高考阅读AOnceall__❶__applyarein,youwillbeinvitedtoanopenselectioneventon17September4-5pmatthegalleryofTowner.Thiswillbeaninformal❷opportunity❸tomeettheSquadLeaderSquadAssociateandotheryoungpeople.
①用apply的正确形式填空applications
②写出informal的反义词formal
③写出opportunity在句中的含义机会2.2011·山东高考阅读表达Atextaholiccan__❶__defineassomeonewhoisaddictedtosendingandreceivingmessages.Themainsymptomsareastrongdesiretotextmessageswhichtakesprecedence优先overeverythingelseandbadmoodslowspiritsandalack❷ofselfconfidence❸ifmessagesfailtoein.
①用define的正确形式填空be_defined
②写出lack在句中的含义缺乏,缺少,常用短语alackof+n.意为缺乏
③confidence在此处意为信心;自信;在本单元的同根副词是confidently3.2009·江西高考阅读DWhenwesignapaperforexampleabusinesscontractorabankdocumentthesignatureisasealofconsentanagreementtotakethematter__❶__serious.Mostgovernmentsandmanyorganisationswillnotprocesswritingplaintsiftheydonotbearthewriterssignature.The__❷__absentofasignaturetheyexplaintellsusthatthewritercannotbetooseriousandthereforedoesnotdeserveareply❸.
①用serious的正确形式填空seriously
②用absent的正确形式填空absence
③写出reply在句中的含义回答,答复,回信高考采撷二 写作中的词汇应用根据汉语及提示词翻译句子1.2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达我希望你能够抓住这个机会进一步学习中国传统文化opportunityI_wish_that_you_could_grasp_this_opportunity_to_learn_traditional_Chinese_culturefurther.2.2017·浙江高考写作而且我确实希望尽可能快地收到你的答复replyAnd_I_do_look_forward_to_receiving_your_reply_as_soon_as_possible.3.2014·陕西高考书面表达这个项目的目的是培养我们在英语学习上的兴趣以及听说方面的实际能力purposeThe_purpose_of_this_programme_is_to_develop_our_interest_in_English_learning_and_practical_abilities_in_listening_and_speaking.二课堂重点释疑1.lackv.缺乏,缺少n.缺乏;短缺的东西[记牢]1lackforsth. 缺乏/缺少某物2alackof...缺乏/缺少……forlackof...因缺乏……3lackingadj.缺少的,不足的belackingin缺少品质、特点等;在……方面缺乏[练通] 单句语法填空
①Thoughlackinglackexperiencehesoongotahigherpaybyworkinghard.
②Forlackofconfidencesheislackinglackinskillsofmunicating.
③Whilecollegegraduatesplainofalackofavailablejobsfactoriesarefacingdifficultiesinhiringworkers.[用准] lack既可以作动词也可作名词作及物动词时后面直接接宾语,不能用于被动语态;作不及物动词时,后常与介词for连用;作名词时,后面常接介词of[写美] 补全句子
④由于缺少空间,在大城市已经修建了越来越多的高楼Moreandmorehighrisebuildingshavebeenbuiltinbigcitiesfor_lack_of_space.2.advanceadj.预先的,在前的v.前进;促进;提前n.前进,进展,进步;增长[辨清] 写出下列句中advance的词性和含义1Theinspectionsweresupposedtobeasurprisebutkeeperssometimeshadadvancenotice.adj.预先的,在前的
②Therehavebeengreatadvancesinmedicineinthelasttenyears.n.进展,进步
③Thiswillfurtheradvancethefriendlyrelationsbetweenthetwocountries.v.促进
④ThedateofthemeetinghasbeenadvancedfromFridaytoMonday.v.提前[记牢]1inadvance=aheadoftime 预先;在前面inadvanceof比……进步;在……之前makeadvancesin在……方面取得进展2advancedadj.高级的;进步的;先进的[练通] 单句语法填空
⑤Thismeetingroomisanonsmokingarea.Iwouldliketowarnyouinadvancethatifyousmokedhereyouwouldbefined.
⑥2015·北京高考Thankstotheadvancedadvancetechnologyweliveinanageofbetteredmunication.[用准] advance本身已有“向前”的意思,因此作动词时,后面不必再用forward类似的动词还有enter进入不与into连用,return回来不与back连用[写美] 补全句子
⑦2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达此外,我建议您到书店买一本历史书,提前了解一下唐朝的历史,这可能有助于您更好地理解将要学习的唐诗BesidesIadviseyoutogotothebookstoretobuyahistorybookandlearn_the_history_of_the_Tang_Dynasty_in_advance_whichcanhelpyoubetterunderstandtheTangpoemstobelearned.3.absencen.缺乏,不存在[记牢]1absencefrom 缺席;不在absenceofmind心不在焉intheabsenceof人不在,缺席,物不存在,缺少in/duringonesabsence在某人不在时,在某人缺席时2absentadj.缺席的,不在场的后置定语beabsentfrom缺席;不参加[练通] 单句语法填空
①Intheabsenceofproofthepolicecouldnottakeactionagainsttheman.
②Hewasabsentabsencefromtheconferenceyesterdaybecauseofhissuddenheartdisease.补全句子
③Iwillgoonabusinesstriptomorrow.Markwillbeinchargeofthepanyin/during_my_absence.我明天要出差,我不在时由马克负责这个公司[写美] 一句多译很长时间没有上学后,我的老师和同学们都帮助我补习功课
④Myteachersandclassmateshelpedmewiththelessonsaftermy_long_absence_from_school.absence
⑤MyteachersandclassmateshelpedmewiththelessonsafterI_had_been_absentfrom_school_for_a_long_time.absent4.apologyn.道歉,致歉[记牢]1makeanapologytosb.fordoingsth.因做某事而向某人道歉accept/refuseonesapology接受/拒绝某人的道歉owesb.anapology应向某人道歉2apologisev.道歉apologisetosb.fordoingsth.因做某事而向某人道歉[练通]单句语法填空
①IoweyouanapologyforwhatIsaidthismorning.AnyhowImeantnooffence.
②SheapologisedapologyforthemistakeandgaveusaspareVIProomonthetopfloor.句型转换
③Ifyouarereallywrongyoushouldapologisetoyourroommate.→Ifyouarereallywrongyoushouldmake_an_apology_toyourroommate.apology[写美] 翻译句子
④我衷心希望你能接受我的道歉并理解我I_sincerely_hope_that_you_can_accept_my_apology_and_understand_me.5.imaginev.想象[记牢]1imaginesb./sb.sdoingsth. 想象某人做某事imaginesb./sth.as/tobe...把某人/物想象成……imagine+从句想象……2imaginationn.想象;想象力beyondimagination超乎想象,出乎意料[练通] 单句语法填空
①Canyouimaginethemanlivingliveonalonelyislandforthreeyears
②IneverknewmygrandmotherbutIalwaysimagineherasakindandgentleperson.补全句子
③Thesceneryofnaturethereissobeautiful;inotherwordsitsbeyond_imagination.那儿的自然风光真的是太美了,换句话说,美得让人难以想象[用准] imagine的宾语可以是名词、代词、从句、动名词以及动名词的复合结构,但不能为动词不定式[写美] 翻译句子
④我经常想象未来我的生活会是什么样子I_often_imagine_what_my_life_will_be_like_in_the_future._[词汇过关综合训练] Ⅰ.单词拼写1.Themorelearnedamanisthemoremodest谦虚的heusuallyis.2.Hehasdeterminedtooverehisshorting缺点ofnotbeingpunctual.3.Idliketotakethisopportunity机会tothankeveryonefortheirhardworkontheproject.4.Theyounggirlexpressedconfidently自信地thatshewasfitforthattask.5.Itsacoincidence巧合thattheywereborninthesamemonthandonthesameday.6.Imverycautious谨慎的aboutexpressingmyopinionsinpublic.7.Theywereinterrupted打断byaknockatthedoor.8.ShewenttoGermanyforthepurpose目的ofresearch.9.Theyvotedinfavour支持oftheprohibitionofsmokinginpublicareas.10.Hepromisedmethathewouldprovidemewithasatisfactoryreply答复.Ⅱ.单句语法填空1.Itsgenerallyagreedthatsmalltalkisakindofinformalformaltalkaboutunimportantthings.2.Wehavebeenverysuccessfulsuccessinattractingyounggraduatestothepany.3.Hardworkandlackofsleephavewornoutherbeautyandyouthinrecentyears.4.Johnsmodestymodestmakeshimpopularwithhiscolleagues.5.Itsdifficulttoimaginehimacceptingacceptthedecisionwithoutanyhesitation.6.ImwritingtoexplainthereasonwhyIwasabsentabsencefromyourlecturelasttime.7.Hesteppedonmyfootonpurposenotbychancewhichmademeveryangry.8.Itsimpolitepolitetoaskothersinemarriageandageinmostwesterncountries.9.HearingthenewsIwasexcitedandfilledintheapplicationapplyformimmediately.10.Whensheopenedthedoorshewasgreetedwithanmessymessscenewhichmadeherveryangry.Ⅲ.根据提示补全句子1.为了赶上早班飞机,我们提前订了出租车,而且起床很早advanceTocatchtheearlyflightweordered_a_taxi_in_advanceandgotupveryearly.2.对我们来说很难想象在古代社会奴隶的生活是什么样的imagineItisdifficultforustoimagine_what_life_was_likeforslavesintheancientsociety.3.健康问题和不良的饮食习惯以及缺少锻炼密切相关lackHealthproblemsarecloselyconnectedwithbadeatinghabitsanda_lack_of_exercise.4.对此事给您带来的不便,请接受我们的歉意apologyPleaseaccept_our_apology_fortheinconveniencethismatterhasgivenyou.5.然而,在缺乏母语环境的情况下学习作为外语的英语相当困难absenceHoweverlearningEnglishasaforeignlanguageisverydifficultin_the_absence_ofanativelanguageenvironment.一课前自主学习1.be_nervous_about 对……神经紧张/害怕/胆怯/焦虑不安2.think_of想起,回忆起3.look_away_from把目光从……移开4.in_addition除此之外,另外5.find_out了解到;找出信息6.as_a_consequence[串记1]因此,结果7.cheer_sb._up使某人高兴/振作起来8.leave_out省去,删去9.be_aware_of知道10.show_off[串记2]炫耀[同根短语串记]串记
1.“原因、结果”短语串记
①asaconsequence因此,结果
②asaresultof作为……的结果
③resultin/from导致/起因于
④onaccountof由于
⑤becauseof因为
⑥bringabout带来,引起
⑦leadto导致
⑧contributeto导致串记
2.“v.+off”短语集释
①showoff炫耀
②backoff放弃,后退
③breakoff中止,中断
④calloff取消;停止进行
⑤cooloff冷却,使冷静下来
⑥clearoff消除;溜掉
⑦cutoff切断
⑧dieoff先后死去,相继死去
⑨payoff偿清⑩ringoff挂断电话1.makefriends 交朋友,建立友谊2.preparesb.for...使某人为……做好准备3.conversationopeners开场白4.acertaincolour某种颜色5.putonesfootinonesmouth犯使人难堪的错误,说错话6.becautiousabout对……小心/谨慎7.gothrough经受,经历苦难,困境等8.takethelead带头,领先9.at_thispoint在这一点上;到这时10.havesth.inmon有共同之处1.Talk_to_a_man_about_himself_andhewillspeaktoyouforhours!和一个人谈论他自己,他会和你说上几个小时2.Hermottowas“Every_timeIopenmymouthIputmyfootinit.”她的“座右铭”是“每当我张口,就会讲错话”3.It_is_estimated_that80%ofallconversationinEnglishissmalltalk.据估计80%的英语会话是闲聊[学考对接·活学活用]高考采撷一 完形中的短语和句式补全句子1.2016·浙江高考完形填空ImadeupmymindIwouldfind_out找到,找出whatwasgoodinmypresentsituation;Iwouldlookforthestars.2.2014·重庆高考完形填空Culturaldifferencesoccurwhereveryougo.Whenvisitinganothercountryyoushouldbe_aware_of意识到,知道thosedifferencesandrespectthem.3.2010·山东高考完形填空FinallyafterweeksofpreparationIwouldshow_off炫耀allmyhardworkinadanceperformance.4.2013·山东高考完形填空Every_time_I_came_into_her_room每次我进入她的房间shewassohappybecauseshethoughtIwasherdaughter.高考采撷二 写作中的短语和句式补全句子/词汇升级1.2014·重庆高考写作每当我看到它,就禁不住想起我的朋友WheneverIlookatitIcouldnt_help_thinking_of_my_friend.2.2014·江西高考书面表达Besidesweshouldlearnhowtogetalongwellwithothers.用本单元短语替换加黑部分In_addition3.2013·福建高考书面表达Asaresultchildrenbeesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.用本单元短语替换加黑部分As_a_consequence4.2017·北京高考书面表达众所周知,长江是亚洲最长的河流,有许多著名的游览景点It+be+过去分词+that从句Its_widely_known_thattheYangtzeRiveristhelongestriverinAsiaandhassomanywellknownsightseeingspots.二课堂重点释疑[短语集释]1.inaddition除此之外,另外[记牢]1inaddition=besides/furthermore/whatsmore 另外,而且inadditionto=besides/apartfrom/aswellas除……之外还……2additionaladj.额外的,附加的[练通]单句语法填空
①2016·四川高考InadditionIcanseedifferentkindsofbeautifulbirds.
②2018·全国卷ⅡWorkingoutinthemorningprovidesadditionaladditionbenefitsbeyondbeingphysicallyfit.句型转换
③Apartfromtheschoolthevillagehasaclinicwhichwasalsobuiltwithgovernmentsupport.→In_addition_to_the_school_thevillagehasaclinicwhichwasalsobuiltwithgovernmentsupport.[写美] 翻译句子
④2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达此外,许多作品将会在这个剪纸展上展出In_addition_many_works_will_be_displayed_in_the_papercutting_exhibition.2.leaveout省去,删去;遗漏;忽视,冷落;忽略[辨清] 写出下列句中leaveout的含义
①AlltheothersseemedtoknoweachotherandIbegantofeelleftout.忽视,冷落
②Youcanleaveoutthepartsofthestorythatarenotinteresting.省去,删去
③Hedidntsayanythingthatwasfalsebutheleftoutimportantinformationonpurpose.遗漏
④Weleftoutthepossibilityofhisingtotheparty.忽略[记牢]leavefor 动身去……leavebehind遗留,遗忘;使落后leavesb./sth.alone不打扰某人/别管某事leavesth.aside不予考虑,搁在一边[练通] 单句语法填空
⑤Whenyougocampingpleasedonotleavebehindanytrash.
⑥Shewantstothinkthingsoutquietlysowehadbetterleaveheralone.[写美] 补全句子
⑦2016·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达如果你能帮我看一下英语作文并检查一下我是否遗漏了一些信息,我将不胜感激IdappreciateitifyoucouldhelpmelookthroughtheEnglishpositiontocheckwhetherIhaveleft_out_some_information.3.showoff炫耀;卖弄[记牢]showup 暴露,显露;来到,露面showsb.in/out带某人进来/出去showsb.around带领某人参观onshow在展出[练通]单句语法填空
①AllthecollectionswillbeonshowfromJune16thto18thintheCityMuseum.
②Mikewastryingtoshowoffhistalentbydecoratingthekitchenwallwithhiscolourpencils.词汇升级
③WhentheyappearedfortheirSundaygametheywerepletelydifferent.→Whentheyshowed_upfortheirSundaygametheywerepletelydifferent.[写美] 翻译句子
④下午,我校的学生将带你参观海河In_the_afternoon_the_students_in_our_school_will_show_you_around_the_Haihe_River.[句式集释]1.everytime引导时间状语从句[教材原句] Hermottowas“Every_timeIopenmymouthIputmyfootinit.”[悟拓展例句]12016·浙江高考Every_timehearrivedhomeattheendofthedaywedgreethimatthedoor.每一天他到家时,我们都会在门口迎接他2The_first_timehecametothecityhedecidedtosettlethere.他第一次来到那个城市,他就决定在那里安家3Youareweletoebackany_timeyouwantto.你什么时候想回来,我们都欢迎4Onarrivingarrivehomehesetouttodohishousework.[析用法规则]用法归纳1everytime是名词词组作连词,引导时间状语从句,相当于whenever,意为“每当……”,从句谓语常用一般现在时或一般过去时2名词词组作连词用而且能引导时间状语从句的还有anytime“任何时候”,nexttime“下次……时”,thelasttime“最后一次”,the+序数词+time“第……次”3the+瞬间名词moment/minute/instant/second意为“一……就……”4on/upondoingsth.“一……就……”注意事项1此类名词词组可单独引导时间状语从句,因此后面不再用when2这些从属连词引导的从句都表示从句的动作一发生,主句的动作随即就发生,从句中用一般时态代替将来时态[背写作佳句]12017·天津高考书面表达IdohopethatyoucanpayavisittoTianjineverytimeyouetoChina.要点句22016·10月浙江高考写作TomdashedouttheinstantthehelicopterlandedandhuggedJanetightly.要点句2.Itis+过去分词+that从句[教材原句] It_is_estimated_that80%ofallconversationinEnglishissmalltalk.[悟拓展例句]12015·安徽高考It_is_reported_thataspacestationwillbebuiltonthemooninyearstoe.据报道,一座空间站将在未来的几年内在月球上被建成2Its_known_to_all_that“Wherethereisawillthereisaway.”众所周知,“有志者,事竟成”3It_is_suggested_thatallthepeoplewhowilljoininpickingapplesshouldwearahatandapairofgloves.人们建议参加这次采摘苹果的所有人都要戴着帽子和手套[析用法规则]用法归纳“Itis+过去分词+that...”结构常见的还有Itissaidthat...据说……Itisreportedthat...据报道……Itisknowntoallthat...众所周知……Itishopedthat...人们希望……Itisthoughtthat...人们认为……Itissuggestedthat...人们建议……Itisbelievedthat...人们相信/认为……注意事项此句式可转化为含有as引导定语从句的复合句,也可以转化为“sb./sth.is+过去分词+todo/tohavedone...”句型[背写作佳句]1Itisreportedthattheweatherthereisveryhotanddrywhichisverydifferentfromthatofyourcountry.开头句2Asisknowntoallwiththeimprovementofpeopleslivingstandardscarshavebeeapopularmeansoftransport.开头句3Tiringasitmightbethemilitarytrainingisbelievedtobethebestopportunitytomakelifelongfriends.要点句[词块、句式过关综合训练] Ⅰ.选词填空nervousabout,thinkof,lookawayfrom,inaddition,findout,asaconsequence,cheersb.up,leaveout,awareof,showoff1.Wemustfind_outwhenKarlisingsothatwecanbookaroomforhim.2.LookingatherlargeemptyapartmentIbecameaware_ofhowlonelymymothermusthavebeeninBrazilherself.3.Wheneverwehearabout“thehomeless”,mostofusthink_oftheDevelopingWorld.4.Themostimportantwordhasbeenleft_out_soitdoesntmakeanysense.5.Hewasalwaysdiligentinhisstudyandas_a_consequencereceivedhighmarks.6.Iamnervous_aboutmyfirstday.Youneverknowwhatsinstoreforyouwhenyoustartanewjob.7.Youdbetterstayinbedforafewdays.In_addition_youshoulddrinkmorewater.8.Hefailedinthedrivingtestandlookedsad.Letscheerhimup.9.Mikehasonlydriventothepubtoshow_offhisnewcar—heusuallywalks!10.Ifyoulook_away_fromapersonoryawnhemaythinkyouarenotinterestedinhim.Ⅱ.根据提示翻译/补全句子1.建议你花更多的时间学习英语Itis+过去分词+that从句It_is_suggested_that_you_should_spend_more_time_studying_English.2.多锻炼,你就会更强壮、更健康祈使句+and+陈述句Take_more_exercise_andyoullbeestrongerandhealthier.3.每次他想要放弃的时候,他都提醒自己他要养活一家人everytimeEvery_time_he_felt_like_giving_up_heremindedhimselfthathehadafamilytosupport.Ⅲ.应用文分步写作假定你是李华,近日你收到英国朋友Alice的邮件,以下是邮件内容DearLiHua,HowareyoudoingthesedaysImhavingsomeproblemsandwouldliketogetyouradvice.MyparentswantmetospendmysummerwiththemthisyearbutIwouldprefertogosomewherewithmyfriends.Ilovemyparentsbutsometimestheyareoverprotective.IfeelthatIamoldenoughandresponsibleenoughtogoawaywithouttheirsupervision监管.Anysuggestionsyoucouldgivemeaboutthisissuewouldbegreatlyappreciated.Yours,Alice请你给Alice回复一封电子邮件内容包括1.回应她的请求;2.说明你的观点;3.提出建议并说明理由注意
1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯第一步准确审题,理行文脉络,拟写作要点本文属于应用文中的电子邮件,时态以一般现在时为主,人称为第一和第二人称文章可分为三个层次开头应表达收到对方邮件的心情主体部分应根据题目所给的邮件和三个要点进行构思,在写作要点时不可脱离邮件,天马行空,如回应她的请求,首先了解邮件中的请求“goawaywithouttheirsupervision”,即不想受到父母的监管,写作时就可以给予回应她父母这样做的原因担心安全;说明个人观点时要依据Alice邮件中提到的“Iwouldprefertogosomewherewithmyfriends”,据此,你的观点明了,“对于青少年来说和朋友一起去某地是个好主意”,Alice这时就应先和父母谈一谈;同时,在说明你的理由时就可以依据父母同不同意她这样做来写结尾表达自己的希望和祝愿开头语很高兴收到你征求我建议的邮件Itsmypleasuretodo...Its_my_pleasure_to_receive_your_email_asking_for_my_advice.要点1我猜想他们不同意你的原因是担心你的安全thereasonwhy...isthat...I_guess_the_reason_why_they_dont_agree_with_you_is_that_they_are_concerned_about_your_safety.要点2对于青少年来说和朋友一起去某地是个好主意itsagoodideaforsb.todosth.Its_a_good_idea_for_teenagers_to_go_somewhere_with_friends.要点3-
①你应该和父母谈一谈You_should_have_a_talk_with_your_parents.要点3-
②如果他们同意,你最好事先为你的旅行做一个详细的计划If_they_agree_youd_better_make_a_detailed_plan_for_your_travel_in_advance.要点3-
③如果他们不同意,你最好尊重他们if省略句If_not_youd_better_show_respect_for_them.结尾语祝你暑假愉快I_wish_you_a_pleasant_summer_vacation.第二步添加细节,文意更丰满,表达更亮眼为了使内容更充实,并且符合题目的要求,我们需要对要点进行适度拓展例如要点2可以用状语从句来说明和朋友去某地的好处;要点3-
①可就她和她父母谈话的内容进行拓展,根据Alice的邮件可知,Alice认为她长大了IfeelthatIamoldenoughandresponsibleenough,故拓展内容“你应该试着说服你的父母你已经长大了,可以适当地处理事情了”;要点3-
②可以拓展为把旅行计划做得更具体,“包括你的目的地和交通工具”,从而会让父母放心拓展要点2对于青少年来说和朋友一起去某个地方是个好主意,因为旅行不仅有利于放松心情而且可以结交新朋友并体验新的文化用for引导的原因状语从句,notonly...butalso...Its_a_good_idea_for_teenagers_to_go_somewhere_with_friends_for_traveling_helps_us_not_only_ease_our_mind_but_also_make_new_friends_and_experience_new_culture.拓展要点3-
①你应该和父母谈一谈,试着说服他们你已经长大了,可以适当地处理事情了用现在分词短语作状语You_should_have_a_talk_with_your_parents_trying_to_persuade_them_you_are_old_enough_to_manage_things_properly.拓展要点3-
②如果他们同意,你最好事先为你的旅行做一个详细的计划,其中包括你的目的地和交通工具including介词短语If_they_agree_youd_better_make_a_detailed_plan_for_your_travel_in_advance_including_your_destination_and_your_means_of_transportation.第三步连句成文,排语句顺序,重衔接过渡本文写作有三个层次,可采用三段式行文,注意要点2和要点3是一个整体,而开头语和要点1可作为第一段在提出个人的建议时需要一个总起句来统领,可加上一句“Herearemytipsforyou.”引出自己的建议;在连句成文时可增加连接词inmyview,first,second和anyway等,以使文章过渡自然,衔接紧凑Dear_Alice,Its_my_pleasure_to_receive_your_email_asking_for_my_advice._I_guess_the_reason_why_they_dont_agree_with_you_is_that_they_are_concerned_about_your_safety.In_my_view_its_a_good_idea_for_teenagers_to_go_somewhere_with_friends_for_traveling_helps_us_not_only_ease_our_mind_but_also_make_new_friends_and_experience_new_culture._Here_are_my_tips_for_you._First_you_should_have_a_talk_with_your_parents_trying_to_persuade_them_you_are_old_enough_to_manage_things_properly._Second_if_they_agree_youd_better_make_a_detailed_plan_for_your_travel_in_advance_including_your_destination_and_your_means_of_transportation._If_not_youd_better_show_respect_for_them.Anyway_I_wish_you_a_pleasant_summer_vacation.Yours,Li_Hua。