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Module2TrafficJam一课前自主学习Ⅰ.阅读单词——————知其意1.trolleybusn. 电车2.cabn.出租汽车;计程车3.airconditionedadj.带空调的4.doubledeckern.双层公共汽车5.pedalvt.vi.骑车;踩……的踏板6.tricyclen.三轮脚踏车7.roadworkn.常作复数道路施工8.hornn.喇叭;号角Ⅱ.重点单词——————写其形1.wiren.电线2.displayvt.n.[纵联1]展示;陈列3.receiptn.收据4.faren.[纵联2]车费5.destinationn.目的地;终点6.routen.路线7.providevt.[纵联3]提供8.singlen.单程票adj.单一的;单身的;单程的9.returnn.往返票v.返回;报答10.blowvt.吹响乐器,号角等11.congestionn.拥塞;堆积Ⅲ.拓展单词——————通其变1.suburbanadj.郊区的;市郊的→suburbn.郊区2.permitn.执照;许可证→permissionn.许可;允许[纵联4]3.limitvt.限制;限定n.界限;限度→limitedadj.有限的→unlimitedadj.无限的4.impressiveadj.给人印象深刻的→impressvt.使印象深刻;使铭记→impressionn.印象→impressedadj.印象深刻的5.convenientadj.方便的→conveniencen.方便;便利6.explorevt.探索→explorern.探索者→explorationn.探索7.reactvi.反应→reactionn.反应;回应8.solutionn.解答;答案→solvevt.解决;解答9.moodn.心情;心境→moodyadj.喜怒无常的10.registrationn.执照;登记→registervi.登记;记录纵联
1.“展示,展览”大家看
①displayn.vt.展示;陈列
②shown.v.展示
③exhibitv.展览
④exhibitionn.展示;展览会
⑤onshow/exhibition/display在展出;展览中纵联
2.“费用”都要考虑到
①fare车费
②expense花费
③charge费用;价钱
④fine罚款
⑤fee费用;酬金
⑥tip小费纵联
3.“提供,供应”多多益善
①provide提供
②offer主动提供
③supply供应
④equip配备;供应
⑤furnish供应
⑥afford提供;给予纵联
4.“允许;禁止”要说明
①permitv.允许
②allowv.允许
③admitv.允许
④banv.n.禁止
⑤prohibitv.禁止
⑥forbidv.禁止单元话题——交通子话题1 公路
①pavementn.人行道
②vehiclen.车辆;交通工具
③motorcyclen.摩托车
④expresswayn.美高速公路
⑤freewayn.高速公路
⑥lorryn.卡车;货车
⑦tractorn.拖拉机
⑧tramn.有轨电车
⑨garagen.车库;汽车修理厂⑩aprivatecar私人汽车子话题2 铁路
①subwayn.地铁
②tuben.隧道
③undergroundn.地铁;地道
④track/railn.轨道
⑤carriagen.客车厢
⑥platformn.平台;月台,站台
⑦highspeedrailway高速铁路
⑧expresstrain特快列车[学考对接·活学活用]高考采撷一 阅读中的词汇应用1.2018·北京高考阅读DWhilemuchofthedebatesofarhasbeenfocusedonthesafetyofdriverlesscarsandrightfullysopolicymakersalsoshouldbetalkingabouthowselfdrivingvehiclescanhelpreducetrafficjams❶,cutemissions排放andoffer❷more ❸ convenienceaffordablemobilityoptions.Thearrivalofdriverlessvehiclesisachancetomakesurethatthosevehiclesareenvironmentallyfriendlyandmoreshared.
①写出jams在本单元中的近义词congestion
②用本单元的词汇替换offer provideoffer可接双宾语结构,即offersb.sth.
③用convenience的正确形式填空convenientence为名词后缀,表示行动、状况等,类似的词还有absenceconfidencedifferenceexistencepresence等2.2012·湖北高考阅读BOnceyoulearnthe ❶ 路线mapandstepwithcertaintyoverthegapbetweenthetrainandtheplatformnothingisfrighteninganymore.Newcitiesarejustlightraillinestobeexplored.Andyourpersonalcarifyouhaveonebeesjustonemoretoolinthetoolbox—andoftenaninadequateone ❷ limitbothyourmobilityandyourwallet.
①根据汉语提示写出单词route
②用limit的正确形式填空limiting高考采撷二 写作中的词汇应用根据汉语及提示词翻译句子1.2018·浙江高考写作看到爸爸和保罗叔叔骑马给我留下了深刻印象他们看起来真的很酷impressI_was_impressed_to_see_my_dad_and_Uncle_Paul_riding_horses.They_looked_really_cool.2.2014·上海高考书面表达此外,提供一些关于职业规划的信息可以帮助我们发展我们的兴趣和潜力provideBesides_being_provided_with_some_information_about_career_planning_can_help_us_develop_our_interest_and_potential.二课堂重点释疑1.permitn.执照;许可证;通行证v.允许;许可;容许[记牢]1permitdoingsth. 允许做某事permitsb.todosth.允许某人做某事2weather/timepermitting=ifweather/timepermits天气/时间允许的话3permissionn.[U]允许;许可askforpermission申请许可withoutpermission未经许可[练通]单句语法填空
①Studentslivinginbuildingsthathavekitchensareonlypermittedto_cookcookinthekitchen.
②Thereadingroomneverpermitstakingtakebooksout.
③2017·浙江高考Shehadaskedthegovernmentforpermissionpermittomovethebookstoasafeplacebuttheyrefused.[写美] 翻译句子
④时间允许的话,我希望有更多的业余时间与朋友一起度过,以便我们能有更好的关系Time_permitting_I_expect_to_have_more_spare_time_to_spend_with_my_friends_so_that_we_can_have_a_better_relationship.[联想] 动词permit的常见用法permitsb.todosth./permitdoingsth.,与permit用法类似的动词还有
①allowsb.todo/doingsth. 允许某人做某事
②forbidsb.todo/doingsth.禁止某人做某事
③encouragesb.todo/doingsth.鼓励某人做某事
④advisesb.todo/doingsth.建议某人做某事2.limitvt.限制;限定n.限制;常作复数范围;界限[记牢]1limit...to... 把……限定在……范围内2setalimittosth.对……限定范围withinthelimitsof在……范围内gobeyondthelimit超过限度3limitedadj.有限的limitlessadj.无限的[练通]单句语法填空
①Havingrealizedthatyourtimeislimitedlimityoullhavetostudyforyourgoalswithoutangerandhesitation.
②Besidesmanyparentshavelimitedlimitknowledgeaboutwhatabalanceddietis.
③Thecouplesetalimittotheexpenseofthetripfortheirdaughter.
④Scientistshaveknownhowtousethelimitlesslimitpowerofthesun.补全句子
⑤Theybelievethatyouwillgo_beyond_the_limit_andgobeyondyourselves.他们相信,你们将超越极限、超越自己[用准] limit...to...和setalimittosth.短语中的to为介词,后接名词、代词或动名词[写美] 翻译句子
⑥2015·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达文章的长度应该限制在400词左右The_length_of_the_article_should_be_limited_to_400_words_or_so.3.providevt.提供;规定;准备;供应[记牢] 向某人提供某物2providedthat...=providingthat...倘若;在……情况/条件下[练通] 单句语法填空
①Thepolicewillrewardwhoeverprovides/has_providedprovideusefulinformationtocatchtherobber.
②Youshouldprovideaqualifiedwitnessforyourapplication.
③Thewebsiteprovidesstudentswithfreeinformationabouthowtochooseagoodcollege.[写美] 补全句子
④2018·浙江高考写作下午,我问保罗叔叔我是否可以骑马,他说可以,只要我爸爸和我一起去IntheafternoonIaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorserideandhesaidyesprovided_that/providing_that_my_dad_went_with_me.4.convenientadj.方便的;便利的[记牢]1Itis/wasconvenientforsb.todosth.对于某人来说做某事是方便的sth.beconvenientfor/tosb.某物对某人来说是方便的2conveniencen.方便;便利atonesconvenience在某人方便的时候forconvenience为了方便起见foronesconvenience为了某人方便3inconvenientadj.不方便的;麻烦的[练通] 单句语法填空
①Studentsthinkitisextremelyconvenientforthemto_municatemunicatewiththeoutsideworldusingmobilephones.
②BacheletsayssheselecteditforconvenienceandIobservethatitisalsocheap.
③Ifyouareinterestedpleasesendanapplicationemailatyourearliestconvenience.[用准] 1convenience意为“便利;方便”时,为不可数名词;意为“便利的事物或设施”时,为可数名词2convenient作表语时,不可用人作主语,而要用物作主语或用it作形式主语“当你方便的时候”应翻译成whenitisconvenientfor/toyou,而不是whenyouareconvenient[写美] 翻译句子
④2016·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达如果您方便的话,我们8点半在校门外集合If_it_is_convenient_for_you_lets_meet_at_830_outside_the_school_gate.[词汇过关综合训练] Ⅰ.单词拼写1.Happinessisawayoftravelnotadestination目的地.2.Ihave$50butthatisntnearlyenoughformyjourneyfare车费.3.Theroadisunderrepair.Driversarerequiredtotakesomeotherroutes路线.4.Itsthefirsttimethatthepaintinghasbeendisplayed展示tothepublic.5.Youdbetterkeepallyourreceipts收据forworkrelatedexpenses.6.Donttrytosolveaproblemwithasingle单一的pointofview;theremaybemanyotherwaysofsolvingthesameproblem.7.Aftertheytakeeverythingintoconsiderationtheytrustedthemselvesmoreandreturned返回totheirpositions.8.Thetrafficcongestion拥塞inthecitygetsevenworseduringthesummer.9.Therearesomeveryimpressive给人印象深刻的buildingsinthetown.10.Nowadaysmanycountriesbegintoexplore探索space.Ⅱ.单句语法填空1.Oneofthesolutionssolvetotheheavytrafficproblemistoreducethenumberofvehicles.2.Thesenewdiscoverieshavebrokennewgroundintheexplorationexploreoftheuniverse.3.Provided/Providingprovidethathedoesntagreetohelpuswhoshouldweturntoforhelp4.Someofhisworksare_being_displayeddisplayinthemuseumatpresent.Wouldyouliketogotherewithmetoenjoythem5.JudgingbyhisimpressiveimpressperformancePeterwillprobablybeacceptedbyakeyuniversity.6.Highspeedrailwayhasbeeapopularmeansoftransportbringinggreatconvenienceconvenienttoourlife.7.Hewassurprisedthathisquestionshouldhavecausedsuchastrongreactionreact.8.Bytheendoflastweek600peoplefrom50countrieshad_registeredregistertoattendthemeetingwithnearlyhalfingfromtheUnitedStatesGermanyandBritain.9.Itisdifficulttopredicthisreactionbecauseheissomoodymood.10.InrecentyearssomecitieshavebeguntoallowpeopletolightfireworksduringlimitedlimithoursattheSpringFestival.Ⅲ.根据提示补全句子1.如果天气允许的话,我们将在树林里野餐permitWellhaveapicnicinthewoodsweather_permitting.2.警方对城镇范围内的驾驶速度设定了限制limitThepoliceset_a_limit_tothedrivingspeedwithinthelimitofthetown.3.只要我身体足够好,我就会陪伴着你provideIwillacpanyyouprovided/providing_thatIamwellenough.4.你能在方便的时候过来帮我一把吗?convenientCanyoueandgivemeahandwhen_it_is_convenient_to/for_you5.工作了一整天后,他特别累,所以他没有心情和我们一起参加聚会moodAfterworkingalldayhewassotiredthathewas_in_no_mood_to_gotothepartywithus.一课前自主学习1.be/get_stuck_in 被困在……2.in_no_time [串记1]马上;一会儿;立刻3.get_around到处旅行;四处走动4.have_a_good_view_of清楚地看到5.switch_off关上电灯、电视等;断掉电源6.keep_cool保持冷静7.in_a_good_mood情绪/心情好8.be_connected_to与……相连9.whats_more[串记2]而且;此外10.no_way俚语肯定不;没门儿[同根短语串记]串记
1.“立即,即刻”必备短语
①innotime立刻,马上
②inaflash即刻
③inaninstant立即;马上
④atonce立即
⑤rightnow/away立刻
⑥straightaway立刻,马上串记
2.由“whatsmore”想到的
①whatsworse更糟的是
②tomakemattersworse更糟的是
③worsestill更糟的是
④ontheotherhand另一方面
⑤inaddition而且;此外1.raiseyourhand 举手2.businesspermit营业执照3.publictransport公共交通4.getcrowded变得拥挤5.therushhour交通高峰期6.inthesuburb在郊区7.trafficjam交通阻塞8.inqueues排队9.limitonesfreedom限制某人的自由10.carry_out/performasurvey进行一项调查11.underconstruction正在建设之中1.Simplyraiseyourhandand_a_taxi_appearsinnotime.只要你招招手,马上就会有出租车开过来2.Itsagoodideatohave_your_destination_writteninChinese.把你的目的地用汉语写出来是一个不错的主意3.Youshouldnot_onlylistentotheteachersandyourclassmatespronunciationbut_alsototapesandbroadcasting.你不但应该听老师和同学们的发音,而且还要听录音带和广播[学考对接·活学活用]高考采撷一 完形中的短语补全句子1.2012·四川高考完形填空ThewindpartedthesmokejustenoughforhimtocatchsightofSibson.Buttherewasno_way没有办法togettohim.2.2010·湖北高考完形填空Sheusedtotakethebusbutshewasnowtoofrightenedtoget_around四处走动thecitybyherself.高考采撷二 写作中的短语和句式补全句子/词汇升级1.2017·浙江高考写作我们要去四明山,在那里我们可以攀爬此外,我们还可以和当地人民举行野餐会WewillgotoSimingMountainwherewecanhaveaclimb.Whats_more_wecanalsoholdapicnicpartywiththelocalpeople.2.2009·江西高考书面表达Ifyouarealwayshappyyouwillhaveanoptimisticeffectonthepeoplearoundyou.用本单元短语升级加黑词in_a_good_mood3.2018·北京高考书面表达在你来之前先学习一些基本的汉语,你很快就会适应北京的生活祈使句+and+陈述句Learn_some_basic_Chinese_before_you_e_andyouwilladjustyourselftothelifehereinBeijingsoon.二课堂重点释疑[短语集释]1.be/getstuckin被困在……[记牢]bestuckwith 遇到困难无法进行下去;被缠住无法摆脱stickout伸出;突出stickto坚持;信守[练通] 选用上述短语填空
①Convincedoftheaccuracyofthedatatheystuck_totheiropinion.
②WillyouhelpmewiththismathematicalproblemIam_stuck_withit.
③Icouldseeoneendofthelettersticking_outofJohnspocket.
④Ithinktherewillbeaninventionthatwillhelppreventdriversfromgetting_stuck_intrafficjams.[写美] 翻译句子
⑤2015·浙江高考书面表达好的意见是值得坚持的,因为它们可以使我们所有人受益Good_opinions_are_worth_sticking_to_because_they_can_benefit_us_all.[联想] 表示“被困在……”的短语还有be/getcaughtin;be/gettrappedin;be/getlockedin;be/getblockedin等2.innotime马上;一会儿;立刻[记牢]intime 及时;终于;迟早ontime按时;准时atatime每次;一次atonetime曾经;一度attimes有时;间或atthesametime同时atanytime随时,任何时候atnotime在任何时候都不;决不[练通] 选用上述短语填空
①Thisrestaurantcanacmodatetwohundredpeopleat_a_time.
②At_no_timedidItellyouthatyoucouldusemyputer.
③Generallyspeakingmygrandmotherisniceandkindbutshecanbeverystubbornat_times.
④2016·浙江高考Itisimportanttopayyourelectricitybillon_time_aslatepaymentsmayaffectyourcredit.
⑤At_one_timeJoanandIweregoodfriends.Iwenttoherforhelpat_any_timebecauseshewouldalwayssolvetheproblemin_no_time.Joanwascleverandat_the_same_timeshewashardworking.Soshealwaysdidwellinexams.[用准] atnotime位于句首时,句子要用部分倒装[写美] 翻译句子
⑥俗话说,“有志者,事竟成”我们的努力将迟早会得到回报As_a_proverb_goes_“Where_there_is_a_will_there_is_a_way.”_Our_efforts_will_pay_off_in_time.3.getaround到处旅行;四处走动;消息等传播开来;说服;回避;克服问题或困难[辨清] 写出下列句中getaround的含义
①Itshardtogetaroundinsomeforeigncitiesifyoudontknowthelanguage.到处旅行
②Wecangetaroundtheproblemofspacebybuildinganextension.克服
③Shestryingtogetaroundherfathertobuyheranewcar.说服
④Thenewssoongotaroundthatseveralpeoplehadbeenarrestedforsellingdrugs.传播开来
⑤Youcantgetaroundthefactthatthepricewasperfectlyfairandreasonable.回避[记牢]getsth.acrosstosb. 将想法、信息等传达给某人;使被理解getalong/onwith进展;与……相处getdowntodoingsth.开始认真/着手做某事getover克服困难;解决问题getthrough通过考试;完成工作或任务;打通电话[练通] 选用上述短语填空
⑥Ihadcreatedawaytogetmymessageacrosswhileusingasfewwordsaspossible.
⑦BecauseAnnamadegoodpreparationsforthejobinterviewshefinallygot_throughwithit.[写美] 补全句子
⑧我喜欢在假期到处走走,但每年的国庆节这天全国到处人山人海,因此我不得不待在家里Iliketoget_around_on_holiday_buttherearehugecrowdsofpeoplealloverthecountryonNationalDayeveryyearsoIhavetostayathome.[句式集释]1.havesth.done[教材原句] Itsagoodideatohave_your_destination_writteninChinese.[悟拓展例句]1Hehopedtofindagoodwaytohave_his_written_English_improvedinashortperiod.他希望找到一种短时间内提高英语写作水平的好方法2Dontworry.Illhave_Tom_helpyoufinishthework.别担心我让汤姆帮你完成这项工作3Icanthave_you_speakingtoyourmotherinsucharudemanner.Youmustapologizetoherimmediately.我不能让你对你妈妈说话这么粗鲁你必须立即向她道歉4Ihave_a_lot_of_reading_to_pletebeforetheendofthisterm.在这学期结束之前,我有很多书要读5“Doyouhave_any_clothes_to_be_washed?”theservantasked.“你有衣服要洗吗?”仆人问[析用法规则]用法归纳1havesth.done使某事完成;遭遇某种不幸的事情;让/叫别人做某事2havesb.dosth.让某人做某事3havesb.doingsth.允许某人做某事常用于否定句中;使某人一直做某事多用于肯定句中4havesth.todo有某事要做主语自己做5havesth.tobedone有某事要做不是主语自己做注意事项上面前三个结构中的have用作使役动词,过去分词done、无to不定式、现在分词doing作宾语补足语过去分词与前面的宾语为被动关系,而无to不定式和现在分词与宾语之间为主动关系[背写作佳句]1WeplannedtogovisitingYunnaninJulybutImafraidIcantgonowbecauseIhavehadmyleftfootinjuredinafootballmatch.开头句2Secondlywehadbettertryourbesttorecyclesomethingsothatwecanhavemoreresourcestouse.要点句2.notonly...butalso...[教材原句] Youshouldnot_onlylistentotheteachersandyourclassmatespronunciationbut_alsototapesandbroadcasting.[悟拓展例句]12017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达Visitingthispapercuttingexhibitionwewillnot_only_enjoy_the_folk_art_works_but_alsolearnalot.参观这次剪纸展览,我们不但能欣赏到民间艺术作品,而且学到很多2Asweallknowreadingclassicscannotonlyimproveourstudyingcareerbutalsoenrichoureverydaylife.改为倒装句→Asweallknownot_only_can_reading_classics_improve_our_studying_careerbutalsoenrichoureverydaylife.3NotonlyTombutalsohisclassmatesarebeingtovisitthemuseum.[析用法规则]用法归纳1notonly...butalso...用于连接两个表示并列关系的成分,着重强调后者,意为“不仅……而且……”;其中的also有时可以省略2若连接两个句子,且notonly位于句首时,notonly后面的句子要用部分倒装3若连接的两个成分作主语,其谓语的单复数通常与靠近的主语保持一致注意事项连接并列主语,谓语动词应用就近一致原则的还有not...but;neither...nor;either...or...;or等如Inmyopinionnotyoubutheisresponsiblefortheaccident.[背写作佳句]1Notonlyisheexperiencedandknowledgeablebutalsopatientandunderstanding.要点句22017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达TheexhibitionnotonlyshowspapercutsindifferentregionsbutalsopresentstousthehistoryanddevelopmentofpapercuttinginChina.要点句[词块、句式过关综合训练] Ⅰ.选词填空keepcool,be/getstuckin,switchoff,haveagoodviewof,getaround,inagoodmood,innotime,whatsmore1.Hehadhislegbrokenbutheoftengot_aroundwiththehelpofastick.2.Keeping_coolinanurgentsituationisagoodqualityforaman.3.Theychattedalotonthephoneandhelpedthegirlgetthroughtheawfuldaysandalwaysputherin_a_good_mood.4.Youshouldgetupearlysothatyouwontbe/get_stuck_inthetrafficjam.5.Receivingthereportthattheplanecrashedthegovernmenttookmeasuresin_no_time.6.Besuretoswitch_offthelightwhenyouleavetheoffice.7.Physicalexercisecanhelpmakemusclesstrong.Whats_more_itcanhelpusgetrelaxedandstudymoreefficiently.8.TheDragonTowerfromwhosetopvisitorscanhave_a_good_view_ofHarbinattractshundredsoftouristseveryday.Ⅱ.根据提示补全句子/一句多译1.我很讨厌这个与我一直在一起工作的伙伴,因为他很难相处getalongwithIamtiredofthepartnerIhavebeenworkingwithbecauseheis_hard_to_get_along_with.2.我讨厌练习弹钢琴,但我坚持了下来,现在我可以弹得很好了sticktoIhatedpracticingplayingthepianobutIstuck_to_itandnowIcanplayprettywell.3.和快乐的人在一起,你就会每天都快乐祈使句+and+陈述句Stay_with_happy_people_and_you_will_behappyeveryday.4.在开车进城之前,你要把你的车洗了havesth.doneBeforedrivingintothecityyouarerequiredtohave_your_car_washed.5.智能手机不仅占用我们宝贵的时间,而且对我们的身体健康非常有害notonly...butalso...
①Smartphonesnot_onlytakeupourvaluabletimebut_also_do_great_harm_toourhealth.
②Not_only_do_smartphones_take_upourvaluabletimebut_also_do_great_harm_toourhealth.倒装句Ⅲ.读后续写阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事Wehaveapit_bull比特犬.Wefoundhimafewweeksagowalkingalongtheroadinaruralarea.Hewasjumpingoncarsandwethoughtmaybehisfamilywascampingsomewherenearbysowepassedhimby.Afewhourslateronourreturntriphewasstillinthesameplaceagaintryingtogetfolkstostopforhim.Whenhesawushelay_downinthemiddleoftheroadsowewereunabletogetaroundhim.Westoppedthecarandlookedaroundforafewminutestryingtofigure_outifanyonewasaroundfromwhomhewasseparated.Itdidntappearso.Thenwetookagoodlookatthe_dog.Hehadnocollarandhewasreallythin.Wedecidedhewasabandoned.My_husbandsaid“IfhedoesntbitemewhenItrytopickhimuptoputhiminthecarthenwehaveanewdog.”Thedoghappilyjoineduswithnofightatall.Theonlythingwewerein_danger_ofwasgettinglicked舔todeath.Hekeptstickinghisheadbetweenthetwofrontseatsandthankingusforpickinghimup.Thedogwasclearlyontheroadforsometime.Hewasextremelyunderweight.Hewascoveredinscars_and_new_wounds.Wehaveguessedthatsomeofthescarswerefromwhenhewasontheroad.Wewerethinkingpossiblefightswithcoyotes土狼buthealsolooksasthoughhewasusedforfightingotherdogs.Wefiguredhisincrediblysweetpersonalitywasthereasonhewasabandoned.Hecannothavebeenagoodfightingdog.Sowefedhimalotoverthecourseofthenexttwoweeksandhegainedovertwentypounds.注意
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语Paragraph1Wetookhimtothevet, Paragraph2Nowwealllovethedogverymuch.Heoncehelpedsavemefromtrouble. [写作步骤]第一步速读全文文本大意文章讲述了一只被人遗弃的比特犬如何成为作者家里的一员的故事他们在乡村旅行时,发现一只狗躺在路中间不肯挪开这只狗没有颈圈,瘦骨嶙峋,显然被人遗弃有一段时间了最后作者一家收留了这只性情温顺的狗叙述意图文章告诉我们要善待动物、尊重生命第二步细读全文1.所给短文情景模式分析whopitbullmyhusbandwewhatAdoglaydowninthemiddleoftheroadandwepickedhimup.whenafewweeksagowherealongtheroadinaruralareawhyThedogwasabandoned.2.对原文所提供的下划线词语进行分类★人物/动物pitbullthedogmyhusband★事件indangerofscarsandnewwoundssweet★动作与心理描写laydownfigureoutabandonfight第三步精心谋篇1.Paragraph1Wetookhimtothevet,我们把他带到了兽医那里,[情节分析] 由续写首句提供的信息以及全文的意思可知下文应说明兽医诊断的结果如何,采取了哪些措施,然后描写之后小狗发生的变化2.Paragraph2Nowwealllovethedogverymuch.Heoncehelpedsavemefromtrouble. 如今我们都十分喜欢这只狗有一次,他帮助我脱离险境[情节分析] 由所给首句内容可知下文要说明这只狗是如何帮助作者脱离险境的,进而使作者一家更加喜欢它,最后它成了作者家庭的一员第四步初写成文Paragraph11.我们带他去看兽医,兽医说这只狗尽管遭人遗弃但似乎健康良好Wetookhimtothevetandhesaidthedogappearedtobein_good_health_despitehishavingbeenabandoned.2.他从小狗的牙齿状况判断他大约两三岁了Heguessedthedogwasabouttwoorthreeyearsofagefromthe_condition_of_his_teeth.3.兽医给他注射了所有需要的疫苗,并给他的伤疤和新伤口处敷了点药Thevetgavehimalltherequiredvaccineshotsandapplied_some_medicine_tothescarsandnewwounds.4.大约一个月后,这只狗变得既强健又可爱Aboutamonthlaterthedogchanged_intoastrongandlovelyone.5.他既可爱又温柔Heisbothsweetandgentle.Paragraph26.一天,我丈夫匆匆忙忙去上班,结果忘了关煤气Onedaymyhusbandwenttoworkinahurry;asaresultheforgottoturn_off_the_gas.7.正当我熟睡时,我听到狗狂叫Iwas_sleeping_soundly_whenIheardthedogbarkinglikecrazy.8.我被吵醒了,意识到家里一定发生了什么不寻常的事Iwaswokenuprealizingsomethingunusualmust_have_happenedinourhouse.9.原来房子里充满了煤气,这使我处于危险之中It_turned_out_thatthehousewasfilledwithgaswhichmademeindanger.10.多亏了那条狗,我才避免了一场灾难ThankstothedogIavoided_a_disaster.11.从那时起,比特犬就成了我们家庭的一员Sincethenthepitbullhasbeea_member_of_our_family.第五步润色升级1.用定语从句改写要点1We_took_him_to_the_vet_who_said_the_dog_appeared_to_be_in_good_health_despite_his_having_been_abandoned.2.用高级词汇替换要点2中的guessedguessed→figured_out3.用分词作状语改写要点6One_day_my_husband_went_to_work_in_a_hurry_forgetting_to_turn_off_the_gas.4.用owe...to...结构改写要点10I_owed_it_to_the_dog_that_I_avoided_a_disaster.第六步复查定稿Paragraph1Wetookhimtothevetwhosaidthe_dogappearedtobeingoodhealthdespitehishavingbeenabandoned.Hefigured_outthedogwasabouttwoorthreeyearsofagefromtheconditionofhisteeth.Thenthevetgavehimalltherequiredvaccineshotsandappliedsomemedicinetothescars_and_new_wounds.Aboutamonthlaterthedogchangedintoastrongandlovelyone.Heisbothsweetandgentle.Paragraph2Nowwealllovethedogverymuch.Heoncehelpedsavemefromtrouble.Onedaymy_husbandwenttoworkinahurryforgettingtoturnoffthegas.IwassleepingsoundlywhenIheardthedogbarkinglikecrazy.Iwaswokenuprealizingsomethingunusualmusthavehappenedinourhouse.Itturnedoutthatthehousewasfilledwithgaswhichmademeindanger.IowedittothedogthatIavoidedadisaster.Sincethenthepit_bullhasbeeamemberofourfamily.理清段落结构之二 顺承三类顺承段落结构
1.按事情的发展顺序,也就是事情发生的起因——经过——结果
2.按时间的推移顺序,也就是按时间的先后顺序这个顺序的描写方式,通常都有时间词语
3.按空间的观察顺序,也就是空间位置的不同这个顺序的描写方式,通常有地理位置的词语这种顺承关系是下文总结段落的基础和例证[高考典例1] 2018·天津卷·阅读表达
[1]Somepeoplelivetoclimbthehighestmountains.Somepeopleliveonlydreamingaboutitwhileotherslivetoavoideverclimbingatall.Butonethingiscertain,allpeopleencountermountainsintheirlife.
[2]WhenIwasalittlegirl,myfamilymovedtoatinytownatthebottomofabigmountain.Onedayafterschool,whileexploringthegreenwoodsofthismagnificentmountain,Ialmostfellonasetofstairs.Whatcouldthesestepsleadto?CuriositygotthebestofmeasIknewitwouldbestartingtogetdarksoon.Istartedclimbingupthosestrangelymysterioussteps.
[3]Iclimbedandclimbed.Therewasnothingbutjustgreenbushesandthesesteps.Ihadtoreachthetop!Butitwasnowgettingrealdark.IfIkeptgoingImightnotbeabletoseemywayback.MymumwouldbeworriedsickifIdidn’tehomesoon.SoIranbackhomealmostinthedarkwhiletryingnottogettooscared.
[4]AnxiouslyIwenttobeddreamingaboutwhatIwouldfindatthetopofthismagicalmountain.Couldtherebeacastleupthere?MaybeIwouldfindamonster怪物.MaybeIwastakingtheriskofneveringbackhome.Or,maybeallIwouldfindwasabsolutelynothing!Butsomethinginsidemewasgoingtoclimbthatmountainatallcost.Icouldhardlywaittotrythisadventureagain.
[5]Nowweliveinaworldsurroundedbythe“can’tdo”attitudes.Weallfalldown.Weallhavedoubtsandregrets.Stillwemustclimbanddreamaboutwhat’satthetopofourmountain.Monstersmayappearorthenightwillfall.Butneverevergiveuponyourdream!Neverletanyonetellyou,“Youcan’t.”Dreambigandclimbhigh!2~4三段文字以时间和空间为序,依次顺序承接,叙述了“我”的一次爬山过程,是下文总结段落的基础和例证“承接下文”的句子“承接下文”的句子“承接下文”的句子 ⇩总结出[高考典例2] 2017·全国卷Ⅰ·B篇
[1]IworkwithVolunteersforWildlifearescueandeducationorganizationatBaileyArboretuminLocustValley.Tryingtohelpinjureddisplacedorsickcreaturescanbeheartbreaking;survivalisnevercertain.Howeverwhenitworksitissimplybeautiful.
[2]IgotarescuecallfromawomaninMuttontown.Shehadfoundayoungowl猫头鹰ontheground.WhenIarrivedIsawa2to3weekoldowl.Ithadalreadybeenplacedinacarrierforsafety.
[3]Iexaminedthechick雏鸟anditseemedfine.IfIcouldlocatethenestImighthavebeenabletoputitbackbutnoluck.Mynextworkwastoconstructanestandanchoritinatree.
[4]Thehomeownerwasveryhelpful.Awirebasketwasfound.Iputsomepinebranchesintothebaskettomakethisnestsafeandfortable.Iplacedthechickinthenestanditquicklycalmeddown.
[5]Nowallthatwasneededweretheparentsbuttheywereabsent.Igavethehomeownerarecordingofthehungerscreamsofowlchicks.Theseadvertisethepresenceofchickstoadults;theymightalsoencourageourchicktostartcallingaswell.Igavetheownerasmuchinformationaspossibleandheadedhometoseewhatnewsthenightmightbring.
[6]Anervousnighttobesurebutsometimesthespiritsofnaturesmileonusall!Thehomeownercalledtosaythattheparentshadrespondedtotherecordings.Idroveoverandsawthechickinthenestlookinghealthyandactive.Anditwasacpaniedinthenestbythegreatestsightofall—LUNCH!Theparentshaddonetheirdutyandwouldprobablycontinuetodoso.前五段文字以时间为序,依次顺承连接,其过程为“gotarescuecall→examined→placed→parents→responded”,展示了作者成功救助一只猫头鹰雏鸟的经历。