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Unit5Canada—“TheTrueNorth”一课前自主学习Ⅰ.阅读单词——————知其意1.continentn. 洲;大陆2.baggagen.行李3.harbourn.海港4.urbanadj.城市的;市镇的5.downtownadj.市区的adv.在市区;往市区6.approximatelyadv.接近;大约7.frostn.霜;霜冻8.eaglen.鹰9.multiculturaladj.多种文化的10.polaradj.极地的;近极地的11.mistn.薄雾12.boothn.公用电话间;货摊;售货亭13.buffetn.自助餐;饮食柜台14.bushn.灌木丛;矮树丛15.locationn.位置;地方Ⅱ.重点单词——————写其形1.chatvi.n.[纵联1]聊天;闲聊2.sceneryn.[纵联2]景色;风景3.measurevi.vt.测量;衡量;判定n.计量制;计量单位;措施4.aboardprep.adv.[纵联3]在船、飞机、火车或公共汽车上;上船、飞机、火车等5.withinprep.在……之内6.broadadj.宽阔的;广泛的7.nearbyadv.在附近adj.附近的;邻近的8.pleasedadj.欣喜的;高兴的;愉快的9.topicn.话题10.confirmvt.证实;证明;批准
11._dawnn.黎明;拂晓;破晓12.quizn.测验;问答比赛13.bordern.边界;国界;边沿vt.vi.与……接壤;接近Ⅲ.拓展单词——————通其变1.surroundvt.包围;围绕→surroundingsn.复数周围的事物;环境→surroundingadj.周围的;附近的2.slightadj.轻微的;微小的→slightlyadv.稍微;轻微地3.traditionn.传统;风俗→traditionaladj.传统的→traditionallyadv.传统地4.impressvt.使印象深刻;使铭记→impressiveadj.给人深刻印象的;感人的→impressionn.印象5.terrifyvt.使恐怖;恐吓→terrifiedadj.恐惧的;受惊吓的→terrifyingadj.令人恐惧的→terrorn.恐惧→terribleadj.可怕的[纵联4]6.wealthyadj.富有的→wealthn.财富[纵联5]7.mixvt.vi.混合;调配→mixturen.混合物;混合状态8.distancen.距离;远方→distantadj.遥远的;远处的;远亲的纵联
1.众“说”纷纭
①chatvi.n.聊天;闲聊
②whispervi.小声说;耳语
③informvt.通知;告知
④announcevt.宣告;宣布
⑤declarevt.宣布;声明
⑥statevt.声明;陈述
⑦claimvt.声称;要求
⑧broadcastvt.播报纵联
2.美丽“景色;风景”入画来
①scenery风景;景色
②scene景色
③sight风景;名胜
④view景色
⑤outlook景色;景致
⑥landscape风景纵联
3.“火眼金睛”识别形近词
①aboardprep.adv.在船等上;上船等
②broadadj.宽阔的;广泛的
③abroadadv.在国外
④boardv.n.登飞机、车等;木板纵联
4.不一样的“恐惧;可怕”
①terrifying令人恐惧的
②frightening吓人的;可怕的
③alarming令人惊恐的
④awful可怕的;惊人的
⑤horrible恐怖的
⑥terrible可怕的纵联
5.后缀“y”常见形容词聚焦
①wealth→wealthy富有的
②thirst→thirsty渴的;渴望的
③taste→tasty美味的
④sleep→sleepy困倦的
⑤guilt→guilty内疚的
⑥health→healthy健康的
⑦salt→salty咸的
⑧hill→hilly多山的单元话题——人文地理子话题 水文和地貌
①geographyn.地理
②capitaln.首都;省会
③steepadj.险峻的;陡峭的
④streamn.小河;溪流
⑤oceann.海洋
⑥rangen.山脉
⑦desertn.沙漠
⑧basinn.盆地
⑨junglen.丛林;密林⑩mineraln.矿物质⑪coastaladj.近海的;沿海的⑫localadj.当地的⑬nativeadj.本地的;本国的⑭remoteadj.偏远的⑮mountainousadj.多山的⑯landmarkn.地标性建筑[学考对接·活学活用]高考采撷一 阅读中的词汇应用1.2018·全国卷Ⅲ阅读CThecurves曲线ofthebuildingsperfectlymatchtheriseandfallofhillsformingauniqueview❶.Wangcollectedmorethan7millionabandonedbricksofdifferentages.Heaskedtheworkerstouse__❷__traditiontechniquestomakethebricksintowallsroofsandcorridors.Thiscreationattractedalotofattentionthankstoits__❸__mixofmodernandtraditionalChineseelements元素.
①写出本单元与加黑词意义相近的词scenery
②用tradition的适当形式填空traditional
③用mix的适当形式填空mixture2.2015·安徽高考阅读EFoodservesasaformofmunicationintwofundamentalways.Sharingbreadorotherfoodsisamonhumantraditionthatcanpromoteunityandtrust.Foodcanalsohaveaspecificmeaningandplayasignificantroleinafamilyorculture’scelebrationsor__❶__tradition.Thefoodsweeat—andwhenandhowweeatthem—areoftenuniquetoaparticularcultureormayevendifferbetweenrural农村的andurban❷areas__❸__onecountry.
①用tradition的适当形式填空traditions
②写出加黑词在句中的含义城市的,其反义词为country“乡村的”
③选用适当的介词填空__B__A.about B.within C.around高考采撷二 写作中的词汇应用根据汉语及提示词翻译句子1.2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达给我印象最深的是他们的艺术技巧,显示出了不同凡响的才能impressWhat_impressed_me_most_are_their_art_skills_in_which_they_showed_outstanding_talent.2.2013·重庆高考写作中国长江江豚finlessporpoise的数量不足1000只,因此我希望你们能采取一些有效措施来保护它们measureThe_number_of_finless_porpoise_is_less_than_1000_so_I_hope_you_can_take_some_effective_measures_to_protect_them.二课堂重点释疑1.surroundvt.包围;围绕[记牢]1surround...with... 用……包围/围绕……besurroundedby/with...被……包围/环绕2surroundingadj.周围的;附近的3surroundingsn.环境;周围的事物[练通] 单句语法填空
①Surroundedsurroundbytheforestthevillagelooksverybeautiful.
②Thesurroundingsurroundvillageshavebeenabsorbedbythegrowingcity.
③Surroundingyourselfwithpeoplewho’llprovideyouwithsupportcanbeverybeneficial.[用准] surroundings常用复数形式,表示周围的具体的物质环境;而environment是集体名词,常用单数形式,表示对人的发展产生影响的自然环境或生活环境[写美] 翻译句子
④总之,欢迎你来我们学校并希望你能很快适应新环境In_a_word_you_are_wele_to_our_school_and_I_hope_you_can_adapt_to_the_new_surroundings_soon.2.measurevi.vt.测量;衡量;判定n.计量制;计量单位;措施[记牢]1measure...by... 用……来衡量……bemeasuredby/in用……来衡量/计算2takemeasures/steps/actiontodosth.采取措施做某事makesth.tosb.’smeasure照某人的尺寸做某物[练通] 单句语法填空
①It’sgenerallyacknowledgedthateducationshouldn’tbe_measuredmeasureonlybyexaminationresults.
②IntheolddaysmymotheralwaysmadenewclothestomyownmeasurewiththeSpringFestivalapproaching.
③Somevillagersreportedahugesnakemeasuringmeasureovertwometreslongwasfounddeadinanearbycave.[用准] 1measure表示“措施,步骤”时,常用其复数形式2measure表示“测量后有……长或宽、高、大等”时是系动词,用主动形式表示被动含义[写美] 一句多译该是我们采取措施阻止空气污染的时候了
④Itishightimethatwetook/should_take_measurestokeeptheairfrombeingpolluted.
⑤It’stimeforusto_take_stepstostoptheairfrombeingpolluted.3.distancen.距离;远方;遥远;疏远v.拉开距离;与……疏远[记牢]1inthedistance 在远处fromadistance从远处atadistanceof在……远的地方;距离稍远2keepone’sdistancefrom与……保持距离keepsb.atadistance对某人冷淡;与某人疏远;与某人保持一定距离withinwalkingdistance在步行距离之内3distantadj.遥远的;远处的;远亲的[练通]单句语法填空
①Wespottedthemwavingtousatadistanceof100meters.
②Therearelotsofrestaurantswithinwalkingdistance.
③Inthedistanceisatalltreewhichissaidtohaveahistoryofover500years.熟词生义 写出加彩单词在语境中的含义
④AlthoughTomlivesfarawayfromhisfamilytheydontfeeldistant.疏远的[用准] 对于“distance”的提问多用what,而不用howfar或者howlong[写美] 翻译句子
⑤很难与她融洽相处,因为她总是与每个人保持一定距离It_was_difficult_to_get_along_well_with_her_because_she_always_kept_everyone_at_a_distance.4.impressvt.使印象深刻;使铭记;给……留下极深的印象[记牢] 使某人牢记某事beimpressedby/at/with对……印象深刻2impressionn.印象;感想leave/makean...impressionon/uponsb.给某人留下……的印象3impressiveadj.给人深刻印象的;感人的[练通] 单句语法填空
①Evensosheimpressedtheworldwithhercourageandstrongdesiretosucceed.
②Whatimpressedimpressmemostwasthatwheneverheappearedinfrontofothersheoftenworeabigsmile.
③Yourartskillsareexcellentandadmirablewhichleavesmeadeepimpressionimpress.
④2018·浙江高考Iwas_impressedimpresstoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.
⑤ThisisthemostimpressiveimpressbuildingIhaveeverseenonmytriptoEgypt.[用准] impress不能用于impresssb.sth.结构,其间接宾语由介词on/upon引出impress也不用于进行时[写美] 句式升级
⑥Iwasimpressedbythebeautifulsceneryandforgottogobackhomeintime.→Impressed_by_the_beautiful_scenery_Iforgottogobackhomeintime.分词作状语[词汇过关综合训练] Ⅰ.单词拼写1.Chatting聊天forseveralhoursthetwoboysfoundthattheyhadalotinmon.2.Thevolunteerswerefrommanydifferentcountriesbuttheyquicklysettleddownintheirnewsurroundings环境.3.AsfarasI’mconcernedaman’scharactercanbemeasured_衡量bythetypesofhisfriendswithwhomhestays.4.Nancy’sfirstreactiontothenewswasastrangemixture混合ofjoyandanger.5.Whenaskedtheyoungmanconfirmed证实thathewasgoingtostudyabroadnextyear.6.Thegroundshooksoviolentlythatthelittlegirlwhowasathomealonewasterrified恐惧的.7.Awealthy富有的oldladygaveawaymanybookstothemiddleschoolwhichmadeallthestudentsandteachersveryhappy.8.Whendawn黎明brokewewerestill50milesfromCanada.9.Passengerscheckedtheirbaggage行李beforeboardingtheplane.10.Aftertakingsomephotostheystoppedatthetopofthehilltoadmirethescenery风景.Ⅱ.单句语法填空1.Itwasherturntomakeaspeechbutshefeltamixturemixfeelingofexcitementandfear.2.Whenthelostboysawthesmokerisinginthedistancehebecameexcitedimmediately.3.Icametorealizethatthekeytosuccesslayintryingtosurroundmyselfwithcreativepeople.4.Thiscityhasasmallpopulationonlyslightlyslightoverthreehundredthousand.5.Besidesthesetraditionaltraditionactivitieswehaveawiderrangeofchoicessuchastravellingandvisitingourrelativesorfriends.6.Thegovernmenthaspromisedtotakemeasuresmeasuretohelptheunemployed.Ⅲ.一句多译/同义句转换1.2017·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达那些漂亮的剪纸艺术作品一定会给你留下深刻的印象
①Youwill_surely_be_impressed_withthosebeautifulpapercuttingartworks.beimpressedwith
②Thosebeautifulpapercuttingartworkswill_surely_impress_you.impressvt.
③Thosebeautifulpapercuttingartworkswillsurelyleaveanimpressiononyou.impressionn.2.除夕夜吃水饺是我们的传统
①WeeatdumplingsontheNewYearsEveby_tradition.
②It_is_a_traditionforustoeatdumplingsontheNewYearsEve.3.Thelittlegirlistooshyandusuallykeepsherdistancefromothers.→Thelittlegirlistooshyandusuallykeeps_others_at_a_distance.Ⅳ.语境辨义根据语境选出动词confirm的词义1.Ithasbeenconfirmedthatthemeetingwilltakeplacenextweek.__B__2.Therecentairplanecrashconfirmsmybeliefthatstrongersafetyregulationsareneeded.__A__3.Hewasconfirmedascaptainfortherestoftheseason.__C__一课前自主学习1.rather_than 与其;不愿;而不是2.settle_down[串记1]定居;平静下来;专心于3.be_famous_for以……而闻名4.manage_to_do设法做5.catch_sight_of看见;瞥见6.have_a_gift_for有……天赋7.in_the_distance在远处8.go_through经历;穿过9.at_dawn在黎明;在拂晓10.be_impressed_with_...[串记2]对……印象深刻11.in_charge_of负责12.dream_of梦想……[同根短语串记]串记
1.“v.+down”短语集锦
①settledown 定居;平静下来;专心于
②passdown使世代相传;流传
③bringdown使降低
④breakdown分解;累垮
⑤cutdown削减;砍倒
⑥burndown烧毁串记
2.“be+过去分词+with”结构一览
①beimpressedwith对……印象深刻
②besatisfiedwith对……满意
③beequippedwith配备有……
④becrowdedwith挤满……
⑤becoveredwith被……覆盖1.goonatourof游览……2.beonatripto在去……的旅途中3.intheharbour在海港4.sailup沿……向上游航行5.aboardthetrain登上火车6.alltheway一路上1.Rather_thantaketheaeroplaneallthewaytheydecidedtoflytoVancouver...她们不想一路乘飞机,而是决定先飞到温哥华……2.Itissowettherethatthetreesareextremelytallsomemeasuringover90metres.那儿的湿度很大,所以树都长得特别高,一些树高达90多米3.It’stoobadyoucan’tgoas_far_asOttawaCanada’scapital.很可惜你们不能一直走到加拿大的首都渥太华[学考对接·活学活用]高考采撷一 阅读中的短语补全句子1.2018·全国卷Ⅲ阅读CTodaymanyChinesepeoplearelearningWesternstylesandtheoriesrather_than_focusing_on_Chinese_traditions而不是关注中国的传统.2.2017·6月浙江高考完形填空NowAliawaitedforthewartoendanddreamed_of梦想peaceandanewlibrary.高考采撷二 写作中的短语和句式补全句子/词汇替换1.2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达中国人喜欢用筷子吃饭,而不是像西方人那样用刀和叉子ratherthanRather_than_use_knives_and_forks_as_Westerners_do_Chineseliketoeatwithchopsticks.2.2017·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达首先,设法阅读一些在中国文学中起重要作用的有关唐诗的资料managetodoAtfirstpleasemanage_to_read_some_materials_about_poetryoftheTangDynastywhichplaysasignificantroleinChineseliterature.3.2016·四川高考书面表达InmyopinioneverysummerIstayatmyuncle’shouseinthecountryforthreeweeksandenjoyawonderfullifethere.用本单元短语替换加黑词汇_As_far_as_I’m_concerned二课堂重点释疑[短语集释]1.settledown定居;平静下来;专心于[记牢]settledowntodoingsth. 开始专注于某事物;着手认真做某事settlein/into安顿下来;适应新的工作环境等settleaproblem/anargument解决问题/争议[练通] 单句语法填空
①InthepastheoftendreamedofretiringinEnglandandsettlingdowninthecountry.
②BeforewesettledowntodiscussingdiscussotherthingsI’veaquestiontoaskyou.[用准] settledown意为“定居;平静下来;专心于”时,为不及物动词短语;意为“使……平静下来”,为及物动词短语[写美] 翻译句子
③父母希望我安定下来,尽快适应学校的新环境My_parents_hope_me_to_settle_down_and_adapt_to_the_new_environment_of_my_school_quickly.2.managetodo设法做[记牢]managesb. 设法对付某人managesth.经营/管理……manageit成功做到;设法完成[练通]单句语法填空
①Imanagedto_rentrentabigenoughhousetotakeinahandfulofpeople.
②That’snotahardjob.I’msureIcanmanageitmyself.
③Suchanaughtyboyisreallyhardto_managemanage.对比记忆manage/try
④NomatterwhathappenedItriedtofinishmytaskonschedule.Luckilywithmyteacher’stimelyhelpImanagedtofinishitaheadoftime.[用准] managetodosth.相当于succeedindoingsth.,表示“成功地做了某事”,重在结果;trytodosth.表示“尽力做某事”,重在动作,不一定成功[写美] 补全句子
⑤尽管缺乏经验,但他设法按时完成了他的工作Hemanaged_to_finish_his_workdespitehislackofexperience.[句式集释]1.ratherthan“与其;不愿;而不是”,连接两个并列成分[教材原句] Rather_thantaketheaeroplaneallthewaytheydecidedtoflytoVancouverandthentakethetrainfromwesttoeastacrossCanada.[悟拓展例句]1如果我不得不放弃其中一个,我会关掉电视而不是关掉我的手机一句多译
①IfIhavetogiveuponeofthemIwouldturnofftheTVrather_than_switchoffmycellphone.
②IfIhavetogiveuponeofthemIwouldratherturn_off_the_TV_than_switchoffmycellphone.
③IfIhavetogiveuponeofthemIprefer_to_turn_offtheTVratherthan_switchoffmycellphone.2Idon’tknowanyFrenchpeopleother_thanyou.除了你,我不认识其他的法国人3ImethimverylateonFridaynightor_ratherearlyonSaturdaymorning.我在星期五深夜见到他,更确切地说是在星期六凌晨4Heismore_than_our_teacher.Heisalsoourbestfriend.他不仅仅是我们的老师,也是我们最好的朋友[析用法规则]用法归纳12otherthan不同于;除了……外3orrather更确切地说4morethan多于;不仅仅;非常注意事项1ratherthan连接两个并列不定式时,ratherthan之后的不定式可省略to但ratherthan位于句首时,则只能接不带to的动词不定式2ratherthan连接两个名词或代词作主语时,谓语动词应与ratherthan前面的名词或代词在人称和数上保持一致[背写作佳句]12018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达I’mmorethandelightedtoreceiveyourletteraskingaboutwhatcustomsyoushouldpayattentiontowhenvisitingaChinesefriend.开头句2Itisthosewhoarewillingtogiveratherthanreceivethatdeservetoberespected.要点句2.asfaras“远至;就……而言;尽……所能”[教材原句] It’stoobadyoucan’tgoas_far_asOttawaCanada’scapital.[悟拓展例句]1Hisparentssupportedhimas_far_as_they_could.他父母竭尽全力支持他2Standinghereyoucanseeas_far_as_the_foot_of_the_hill.站在这里,你可以一直看到山脚下3As_far_as_I_know_itisconvenienttodoshoppinginthatsmalltown.就我所知,在那个小镇上购物很方便[析用法规则]asfaras的常见用法asfarassb./sth.beconcerned 就某人/物而言asfarastheeyecansee/reach就视力所能及asfarasIcansee依我看asfarasIknow就我所知[背写作佳句]1AsfarasIamconcernednotonlydoesoutdoorexercisegetusclosetonaturebutalsogiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork.要点句2AsfarasIcanseeitisourresponsibilitytosolvetheproblem.要点句[词块、句式过关综合训练] Ⅰ.选词填空catchsightof,dreamof,managetodo,settledown,asfaras,ratherthan,haveagiftfor,inthedistance1.Davedreamt_ofbeingagreatwriterwhenhewasyoungbutnowheisanengineer.2.Rather_thanstayathomeduringtheholidaytheydecidedtotakeashorttriptoanearbytown.3.Hemanaged_togetintouchwiththeladywhowasinchargeoftheHopeProject.4.Lilyisatenyearoldgirlwhohas_a_gift_formusic—youknowshehaswontwobigprizesintheinternationalmusicpetitions.5.Sinceyouhavesettled_downinanewcountryyouhavetomakeanadjustmenttothenewenvironment.6.Youcan’timaginehowexcitedIwaswhenIsawtheancienttowerin_the_distance.7.Thedriverdidn’tcatch_sight_ofanothercarintimesotheaccidenthappened.8.Inancienttimespeoplerarelytravelledlongdistancesandmostfarmersonlytravelledas_far_asthelocalmarket.Ⅱ.根据提示补全句子1.我总是愿意早开始,而不愿意把所有的事情都留到最后才做preferratherthanIalwaysprefer_to_start_early_rather_than_leave_everythingtothelastminute.2.女性结婚时穿红色衣服是中国很多地方的传统习俗Itisatraditionthat...It_is_a_tradition_that_women_get_marriedinredinmostplacesofChina.3.就我个人而言,骑自行车是个很好的解决方法asfarasAs_far_as_I’m_concerned_ridingbicyclesisagoodsolution.4.经过了多次尝试,最后他终于拿到了通行证manageHetriedtodoittimeandtimeagainandatlasthemanaged_to_get_a_pass.Ⅲ.读后续写阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事Bekindtoothers.Irealizethisissimpleandverybasic.Howeveritisnecessaryanditdoesmake_a_difference.IoftenhavepeoplewhocrossmydailypathtowhomIcanshowkindness.Itisoftenjustasmile.Asmileoftensays“Iseeyou.Youarentinvisibletome.Youareimportant.”Peopleneedsomeonetocareaboutthem.Ireadastorymanyyearsagoaboutamanwhohaddecidedtomit_suicide.Hedlostafortunehisjobhisfamilyandnearlyeverythingheowned.Hewenttoalocalpawnshoptobuyagun.HeplannedtotakethegunbacktohisapartmentinNewYorkCityandkillhimself.Ashewasgettingontheelevatoralittleold_ladywasslowlygettingontoo.Shehadasmallcartshewaspullingbehindherandwashavingalittletroublegettingitintotheelevator.Hesaidthathewasactuallyabitangrybecausehewantedtohurry_up_gettohisapartmentandendhisownlife.Hereached_out_totheoldladyscartandforceditasithadbeestuck.Hegotitfreeeasilyandshegotontheelevator.Afterthedoorclosedshelookedupathimwithabigsmileandsaid“Ifwehadmoreyoungmenlikeyouinthisworldtheworldwouldbeabetterplace.Youaresokindtohelp.Suchasweetyoungman.”Ofcourseitchangedhisthoughtofgoingbacktokillhimself.HewantedtogoaroundNewYorkandfindpeoplethathecouldhelpandpeoplewhowerestrugglingevenwithsomethingthatwasassmallasthelittleoldladyscart.注意
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语Paragraph1Thatdayhislifechanged. Paragraph2Laterheenjoyedgreatsuccessinhisworkandlife. [写作步骤]第一步速读全文文本大意一位年轻人几乎失去了一切,所以决定自杀他在乘电梯时遇到一位老太太,老太太行动迟缓,手推车卡在了电梯口年轻人为了能快点到家结束自己的生命,随手帮了老太太一把,受到了老太太的赞扬谁料想老太太的赞扬竟然改变了年轻人想要自杀的想法叙述意图文章通过一个小故事彰显与人为善的重要性第二步细读全文1.所给短文情景模式分析whoIamananoldladywhatAmandecidedtomitsuicide.Laterhegaveupthethoughtofkillinghimself.whenmanyyearsagowhereontheelevatorwhyHedlostafortunehisjobhisfamilyandnearlyeverythingheowned.Theoldladypraisedhimforhelpingher.2.对原文所提供的下划线词语进行分类★人物oldladyfamily★事件kindkindnesssmall★动作与心理描写mitsuicidehurryupreachouttochangemakeadifference第三步精心谋篇1.Paragraph1Thatdayhislifechanged. 那一天,他的人生发生了改变[情节分析] 注意续写段首句关键词“hislifechanged”,所以本段续写部分围绕变化写,续写还要考虑文章首段提到的“Bekindtoothers.”以及文中提到的“mitsuicide”这一社会现象,并综合他自杀的原因失去财富、工作、家庭等还要提及他的想法变化的原因kindness因此续写第一段应该写做好事给他带来的变化2.Paragraph2Laterheenjoyedgreatsuccessinhisworkandlife. 后来,他在工作和生活上非常成功[情节分析] 第二段继续写具体在哪方面发生的变化,写作时注意关键词Laterenjoyedsuccessworkandlife,即下文应该写将来的事情,要围绕工作和生活两个方面来写第四步初写成文Paragraph11.他开始和别人分享他的故事,很快,他发现自己成了一个很受欢迎的预防自杀的代言人Hestartedsharing_his_story_with_othersandsoonhefoundhimselfbeingapopularspokesmanforthepreventionofsuicide.2.他预防自杀的方法简单说来是这样的Hisremedyforpreventing_suicidewassimplythis.3.如果你想结束你的生命,你在最后的几个小时应该为他人做五个小的善举Ifyouwanttoendyourlifeyourlastfewhoursshouldincludedoingfivesmall_acts_of_kindnessforotherpeople.4.那会改变你,你会意识到世间的美好,并决定活下去Itwillchangeyouandyoullwakeuptothegoodnessinthisworldanddecide_that_you_want_to_live.Paragraph25.他最后在一家公司找到了一份工作,月薪4000美元左右Hefinallyfound_a_job_in_a_panyandhisinewasaboutD|S4000amonth.6.他还帮助过一位曾经想自杀的女孩,最后两人结婚了!Healsohelpedagirlwhowantedtomitsuicideandfinallygot_married_toher!7.现在他有一个幸福的三口之家,这都是因为他对那位老太太的小的善举引起的Nowhehasa_happy_family_of_threeallbecauseofthesmallactofkindnessheshowedtothelittleoldlady.8.他发现自己有更多的目标,过得比以前更幸福了Hefindshimselflivingwithmorepurposesandliving_a_happier_life_than_before.9.只要有可能,他就会帮助那些生活中有困难的人Wheneveritispossiblehewillreachouttothose_in_troubleinlife.第五步润色升级1.用高级词汇替换要点3中的includeinclude→consist_of2.用withanineof改写要点5Hefinallyfound_a_job_in_a_pany_with_an_ine_of_about_D|S4000_a_month.3.把要点9改为省略句Whenever_possible_he_will_reach_out_to_those_in_trouble_in_life.第六步复查定稿Paragraph1Thatdayhislifechanged.Hestartedsharinghisstorywithothersandsoonhefoundhimselfbeingapopularspokesmanforthepreventionofsuicide.Hisremedyforpreventingsuicidewassimplythis.Hesaid“Ifyouwanttoendyourlifeyourlastfewhoursshouldconsistofdoingfivesmallactsofkindnessforotherpeople.Itwillchangeyouandyoullwakeuptothegoodnessinthisworldanddecidethatyouwanttolive.”Paragraph2Laterheenjoyedgreatsuccessinhisworkandlife.Hefinallyfoundajobinapanywithanineofabout$4000amonth.Healsohelpedagirlwhowantedtomit_suicideandfinallygotmarriedtoher!Nowhehasahappyfamilyofthreeallbecauseofthesmallactofkindnessheshowedtothelittleold_lady.Hefindshimselflivingwithmorepurposesandlivingahappierlifethanbefore.Wheneverpossiblehewillreach_out_tothoseintroubleinlife.理清文体结构之十五 议论文之总分结构——找到论点、论证过程是关键“总分结构”议论文最显著的特点是论点伴随事例在文章开头部分提出,事例往往是铺垫,是提出论点的前奏随之而来的是论证过程该论证过程中常常采用分层逐条论述抓住了此类文章的结构特点,再结合题目要求,便能快速到原文中定位信息区间,从而正确解题[找论点、论证过程][高考典例] 2016·浙江卷·A篇[读文解题技法]◄ 论点分论证过程影响1影响2影响3 提出建议
[1]“DidyouhearwhathappenedtoAdamlastFriday?”LindseywhisperstoTori.
[2]WithhereyesshiningToribrags“YoubetIdid.Seantoldmetwodaysago.”
[3]WhoareLindseyandToritalkingaboutItjusthappenstobeyourstrulyAdamFreedman.Icantellyouthatwhattheyaresayingisanotniceandbnoteventrue.StillLindseyandToriaren’tverydifferentfrommoststudentshereatLintonHighSchoolincludingme.Manyofourconversationsaregossip闲话.Ihavenoticedthreeeffectsofgossip itcanhurtpeopleitcangivegossipersastrangekindofsatisfactionanditcancausesocialpressuresinagroup.
[4]Animportantnegativeeffectofgossipisthatitcanhurtthepersonbeingtalkedabout.Usuallygossipspreadsinformationaboutatopic—breakupstroubleathomeevendroppingout—thatapersonwouldratherkeepsecret.Themoreembarrassingorshamefulthesecretisthejuicierthegossipitmakes.Probablytheworsttypeofgossipistheabsolutelie.Peopleoftenthinkofgossipersasharmlessbutcruelliescancausepain.
[5]IfweknowthatgossipcanbeharmfulthenwhydosomanyofusdoitTheanswerliesinanothereffectofgossip:thesatisfactionitgivesus.Sharingthelatestrumor传言canmakeapersonfeelimportantbecauseheorsheknowssomethingthatothersdon’t.Similarlyhearingthelatestrumorcanmakeapersonfeellikepartofthe“ingroup.”Inotherwordsgossipissatisfyingbecauseitgivespeopleasenseofbelongingorevensuperiority优越感.
[6]Gossipalsocanhaveathirdeffect:itstrengthensunwrittenunspokenrulesabouthowpeopleshouldact.ProfessorDavidWilsonexplainsthatgossipisimportantinpolicingbehaviorsinagroup.TranslatedintohighschooltermsthismeansthatifeverybodyyouhangaroundwithislaughingatwhatJohnworeorwhatJanesaidthenyoucanbetthatwearingorsayingsomethingsimilarwillgetyouthesamekindofnegativeattention.Thedo’sanddon’tsconveyedthroughgossipwillnevershowupinanystudenthandbook.
[7]Theeffectsofgossipvarydependingonthesituation.Thenexttimeyoufeeltheurgetospreadthelatestnewsthinkaboutwhyyouwanttogossipandwhateffectsyour“juicystory”mighthave.
1.速读全文找论点本文以事例开头,引出全文的论点闲话的三个方面的影响,即第三段的最后一句
2.细读文章找论证过程本文按论点提出的顺序从三个方面论证了闲话对人们的影响
①闲话伤人影响1
②闲话给人一种满足感影响2
③闲话影响人的举止行为并举例加以说明影响
33.针对影响提出建议[抓关键词定位信息区间]41.Theauthoratthebeginningofthepassageto________.A.introduceatopic B.presentanargumentC.describethecharactersD.clarifyhiswritingpurpose43.Intheauthor’sopinionit________.A.givesthemafeelingofpleasureB.helpsthemtomakemorefriendsC.makesthembetterattellingstoriesD.enablesthemtomeetimportantpeople45.WhatdoestheauthorgiveinthepassageA.Neverbeeagossiper.B.Stayawayfromgossipers.C.Don’tletgossipturnintolies.D.Thinktwicebeforeyougossip.[答案]
41.A
43.A
45.D41.用对话第
1、2段第3段的论点,由此便知答案43.原因“影响2”,比对可得出答案45.建议第七段得出答案。