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写作组合练训练1Ⅰ.应用文写作2016·台州市六校联考假设你是红星中学高三1班学生李华,你们学校将举行一次英语沙龙活动,请你给外教Jeff写一封邀请信,邀请他给你们作主题为“西方节日”的讲座邀请信的内容包括1.英语沙龙活动的具体时间、地点和主题;2.选择该主题的原因;3.期待对方的回复注意
1.词数80左右;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数提示词英语沙龙EnglishSalonDearJeff,Yours,LiHua【写作指导】本篇应用文写作要求学生写一封邀请信根据题目要求可知,时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主通知中一定要包含所给的三个要点一是介绍这次活动的具体时间、地点和主题;二是解释选择该主题的原因;三是表达出对对方的回复的期待内容可适当扩充,但不要逐句翻译要点在写作过程中,学生要注意使用一些过渡词,逻辑思路要清晰,表达要准确,最好能使用一些定语从句、状语从句或名词性从句等高级句式,这样有助于提高文章的得分档次【参考范文】DearJeff,OurschoolisgoingtohaveanEnglishSalon.Wewarmlyinviteyoutoprepareapresentationforit.PleasegiveusalectureaboutWesternHolidays.Thesalonwillbeatthelectureroomfrom9to11inthemorning,onSaturday,January16th.WesternholidaysarebecomingincreasinglypopularinChina.ManyofusareinterestedinthemandwewanttoknowmoreabouttheholidaysintheWest.Wewouldreallyappreciateyourparticipation.Wearelookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHuaⅡ.读后续写阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事Manyyearsagomygrandfatherhadasmallfarmandchickens.Onemorninghesentmeouttocollectfresheggs.HebecameconcernedwhenIdidntreturnafterashortinterval.WhenhecamelookingformeIjumpedwithjoy,buthesawtearsinmyeyesandnoticedthatIwasinanemptychickenhouse.NoticingIwasnotinagoodmoodheasked,“Whatwaswrong?”Itoldhimtearfully,“Thatdirtyrooster,whowasnowgentle,inmygrandfatherspresence,camepecking啄食aftermeandallthehensstartedcackling咯咯叫,whichscaredme,andIranintothenexthenhouseforsafety.”Hetookmebymyhandandwewalkedrightbythenowquietdirtyroosterandcomfortablehens.Wesatundertheappletree,andherelatedthefollowingstory.“DidyounoticehowthatroosterandhensbehavedwhenIcameinTotallydifferentthanwhenyoufirstcamein.”Ishouted,“Theroosterandhensseemedtocomeatme.”Mygrandfatherthensaid,“Thatsanewroostertheneighborgaveme.Allyourlifeyouaregoingtocomeacrosspeoplewhowillactlikethatroosterandhens.Onlyindifferentways!Itsnaturalforthatroostertoprotecthishouseandhishens.Theroosteristheleaderandthehensarefollowers.Samewithpeople!Itdoesntmatterwhethertheyaremenorwomen.Therewillalwaysbepeoplewhowilltrytoleadyourlifeandifyouletthem,youwillbecomelikethehens.”“Buttobetheleader,youhavetofirstbeabletoleadyourownlifeandbetheroosterofyouractions.Youcanbeliketheroosterleadingthehens.Mostofusinlifearefollowers,likethehensandsomestayhiddenintheirownchickenhouses,likeyoudid.”注意1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语Paragraph1“Thatdoesntmeanthattheroosterinusisbadordirty,liketheoneyoujustexperienced.”Paragraph2Thenhedidthesmartestmove.【写作指导】本文是一篇记叙文主要讲述了几年前祖父让“我”去鸡窝拾鸡蛋的经历起初“我”害怕公鸡和一群母鸡的攻击,但祖父来时所有的鸡就变得安静了后来祖父和“我”讲,这些鸡和生活中的人一样,假如“我”不做领头的公鸡,那么就做像母鸡一样的跟随者所以,续写文章的第一段要沿着这个脉络说明“我”见到的公鸡并不坏,这与人的本性一致,学生要分析祖父来到鸡窝后鸡为何变得安静,以此启发“我”思考进鸡窝拾鸡蛋所采用的方法;续写文章的第二段要描写祖父教给“我”方法之后,鼓励“我”采用这个方法,“我”最终克服了害怕的心理,成功地拾到鸡蛋续写文章前学生一定要理清文章脉络,沿着作者的思路进行续写,并使用文章中画线词汇中的5个以上词汇,与前文呼应同时,要使用连词或副词,使文章衔接顺畅续写文章要采用一般过去时,以第一人称进行书写【参考范文】“Thatdoesntmeanthattheroosterinusisbadordirty,liketheoneyoujustexperienced.Thatsjustthewaysomepeoplenaturallyare,atleastintheirownminds.ButdidyounoticetherespectandthewayhequieteddownwhenIcameinHesawmeinhissenseasabiggerstrongerandprobablysmarterroosterthanheis,whichIamandsoareyou.Butyoudidntthinkorbelieveitstrongenoughforhimtofeel.Nexttimebeforeyouwalkin,believethattheroosterisjustatiny,sweetchick,andthosehensarelayingbeautifulgoldeneggsthatwecanhaveforbreakfast.”Thenhedidthesmartestmove.Hetookmebacktothechickenhouse,walkedawayandsaid,“Nowgoinandpickthosegoldeneggsforbreakfast.”Strangely,evenwhileIwasstillscared,Ibravelywalkedintothechickenhouse,ignoredtheroosterandpickedupourgoldeneggsforbreakfast.Ⅲ.概要写作阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要Whenherfivedaughterswereyoung,HeleneAnalwaystoldthemthattherewasstrengthinunity团结.Toshowthis,shehelduponechopstick,representingoneperson.Thensheeasilybrokeitintotwopieces.Nextshetiedseveralchopstickstogether,representingafamily.Sheshowedthegirlsitwashardtobreakthetiedchopsticks.Thislessonaboutfamilyunitystayedwiththedaughtersastheygrewup.HeleneAnandherfamilyownalargerestaurantbusinessinCalifornia.However,whenHeleneandherhusbandDannylefttheirhomeinVietnamin1975,theydidnthavemuchmoney.TheymovedtheirfamilytoSanFrancisco.TheretheyjoinedDannysmother,Diana,whoownedasmallItaliansandwichshop.Soonafterwards,HeleneandDianachangedthesandwichshopintoasmallVietnameserestaurant.Thefivedaughtershelpedintherestaurantwhentheywereyoung.However,Helenedidnotwantherdaughterstoalwaysworkinthefamilybusinessbecauseshethoughtitwastoohard.Eventuallythegirlsallgraduatedfromcollegeandwentawaytoworkforthemselves,butonebyone,thedaughtersreturnedtoworkinthefamilybusiness.TheyopenednewrestaurantsinSanFranciscoandLosAngeles.Eventhoughfamilymemberssometimesdisagreedwitheachother,theyworkedtogethertomakethebusinesssuccessful.DaughterElizabethexplains,“Ourmothertaughtusthattosucceedwemusthaveunity,andtohaveunitywemusthavepeace.Withoutthestrengthofthefamily,thereisnobusiness.”Theirexpandingbusinessbecamealargecorporationin1996,withthreegenerationsofAnsworkingtogether.Althoughtheybeganwithasmallrestaurant,theyhadbigdreams,andtheyworkedtogether.Nowtheyareabigsuccess.【写作指导】本篇写作属于概要写作,是记叙文从HeleneAn的女儿们小时候讲起HeleneAn把筷子比喻成家庭成员,让她的女儿们明白团结的力量,此为要点一;Helene夫妇将三明治店变成了一家饭馆为要点二;女儿们受到母亲的影响,大学毕业后纷纷回到餐馆工作为要点三;故事的结局为一家人齐心协力,拥有远大理想,并将小餐馆做大做强,此为要点四写作时要注意条理清晰,正确理解全文,同时注意文章的连贯性【参考范文】HeleneAnoncetiedseveralchopstickstogethertoshowheryoungdaughtersthestrengthoffamilyunity.要点1HeleneAnandherfamilyhadalargerestaurant,whichwaschangedfromasmallItaliansandwichshop.要点2InfluencedbywhatHelenehadsaid,thedaughtersallreturnedtoworkintheirfamilybusinessaftergrowingup.要点3Theyworkedtogetherandhadbigdreams,andmadethebusinesssuccessfulfinally.要点4【导学号85602035】PAGE1。