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写作__篇17个不能回避的雅思写作问题经过三个月的复__结和4次的实战,我总结了17个关于雅思写作不能回避的核心问题这17问题一直贯穿在我整个复习的过程相信只要弄明白这17个问题,我觉得我们离写作7分就无比接近了对于那些即将参加4月2日,4月16日,5月7日等鸭友团来说,我觉得要搞懂问题1,2,6,7,8,13这6个问题最为迫切如果能做好的话,分数一定能提高的
1.考官是怎么改卷子的?标准是怎样的?
2.雅思写作7分是什么样的概念?
3.雅思写作6分与7分或者
6.5分与7分的距离有多远?
4.怎么制定雅思写作复习计划?
5.考试前需要写多少篇的大作文和小作文?
6.写作模版管用吗?
7.雅思写作需要背多少个词汇?
8.雅思写作需要什么样的句型?
9.雅思写作需要多复杂的从句和语法?
10.我们对雅思写作的误区
11.鸭友们通常会犯哪些语法错误,能有效避免吗?什么样的语法错误是致命的?
12.雅思写作能速成吗?平时需要多看英文报纸吗?
13.小作文重要吗?容易写吗?应该怎么复习
14.怎么安排大作文和小作文的写作顺序和时间
15.要买参考书吗?什么样的参考书?
16.参加培训班管用吗?
17.网络上面所谓的“__”雅思写作预测有用吗? 复习计划Part
1.大作文有个完整的、按部就班的、循序渐进的复习计划是雅思考试成败的关键在过去的三个月时间里,由于有大部分时间在悉尼喜来登酒店实习(2010年11月22日到2011年2月18日),所以没全身心投入到雅思复习当中,真正fulltime复习雅思的话,一共用了2周而且由于一开始缺乏信心,以及对雅思写作有着一种难以言喻的恐惧,复习计划在刚开始的时候一直都左右摇摆,朝令夕改经历了前两次烤鸭大战(12月11日和1月22日)无功而返之后,我重新检讨了自己的复习计划我发现自己出现了以下几个问题(不知道你们会有这样的感觉,反正我觉得以下的想法都是不正确的)从一开始复习就习惯性地把雅思写作task2划分为八大类教育类,社会类,科技类,__类,环保类,发展类,犯罪类基于这种划分,然后开始盲目地查找相关的雅思单词,接着盲目地背诵默写后来觉得单单记住单词也不管用,就开始盲目地从范文和报纸中按照这八类topics的划分摘抄各10句的万能句子再后来又发现单单这80句万金油句子或词组还是不能完整覆盖所有的雅思题目,然后又开始盲目地开始了“大包围”题海战术,从网络中下载了2009年和2010年全年所有的雅思写作题目,然后开始准备每个题目的观点和内容再再后来,我发现自己已经力不从心了,因为工作量实在太大了,而且就算是自己已经准备好的题目,过两三天之后,又想不起来了此时此刻,陷入了整个雅思写作复习的最低潮感觉很迷茫,很无助,开始抱怨“一分耕耘却没有半分的收获” 到了第二次雅思考试出成绩的时候(2011年2月5日),我__失望了,没想到经过了6周的复习准备写作还是6分于是,我觉得将之前的雅思复习计划推倒重来这个一次转变,对于个人而言,不亚于当年的十一届____啊经过和朋友(特此鸣谢Peter)的讨论和研究,我总结了以下一条逻辑关系 题型---结构---观点---句型---词汇这是什么意思呢?我觉得如果把原来“按照范畴来划分的8大类topics”作为起点的话,我很容易被导向去背观点背单词,却正正忘了雅思写作的本质(这是我自己总结的,可能不对,将就一下吧)运用恰当的语言去表达个人的思维逻辑语言只是辅助工具,思维逻辑才是主线和抢分点何谓题型?其实雅思写作task2题型一般有三大类report,argumentation和“report+argumentation”的结合体report只有三个要素
1.cause
2.influen__
3.solution也就是说,要么就是问你这个现象产生的原因,要么就是这个现象产生了什么样的影响(积极或消极的),要么就是叫你提出解决方案通常report类的文体,不会同时出现以上三个要素,只会有一到两个的配搭,即cause+influen__,cause+solution,influen__+solution,或只问influen__如下面我写的一篇7分文章,问effectsonindividualsandsocieties所以呢,在这种题型底下,它的结构就非常的单一开头段+原因分析段(一般分析3个原因)+影响分析段(一个列举3个影响)+解决办法段(这些解决办法一定要对应于之前分析的原因或者影响)+结尾段这个结构是应该视情况而定asthecase__ybeargumentation一般有三种问法
1.discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion
2.towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree
3.doyouthinktheadvantageoutweighthedisadvantage 按照我自己的看法的话,其实argumentation就是两种,那就是1和2/3(因为2和3可以看成同一类)这两种有区别吗?当然有了,你看,问题都不一样(哈哈,是不是一句废话)其实这不是一句废话,因为discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion,是要你先分析双方有什么合理之处,然后再给你自己的个人观点很明显这是需要均衡结构什么意思?意思是,假如你支持观点1用了三个论点,然后到你支持观点2的时候也得同样用三个论点(想不到的话,憋你也得憋出来!!!),最后在结尾清晰表达你自己的最后看法对于这种题型,开头段也是表明观点,例如somepeopleargue···whileothersclaimthat···.Ipersonallybelievethat···所以呢,这个文体的结构应该是开头段(回应题目+表达自己的观点)+支持观点1(n个论点)+支持观点2(n个论点)+结尾段(表明自己的观点)请注意,这个题型是不能用一面倒的,是不能啊!至于agree/disagreeoradvantage/disvantage题型,根据考官的推介,最理想的结构是开头段+让步段+支持段(论点1)+支持段(论点2)+结尾段(表明你自己的观点)万一想不出让步段,或者时间太紧了来不及让步,可以吗?考官说了,允许便秘,憋不出来也是可以的!!!!也就是说,在这种情况下,可以使用一面倒,而且不影响你拿7分(假如你的目标分数是8分,就当我瞎说吧) 说了那么多,究竟跟复习计划有神马__呢?这个__就大咯!题型决定了文章的结构,而结构呢又决定了观点的铺排,观点又反映出个人的思维逻辑关系(中立的,积极的,否定的,因果的,让步的,建议的这就是我下面所归纳的那160+句型,它们完全覆盖了你能想到的所有逻辑表述),这种逻辑关系就决定了你用什么样的句型了,有了句型这个骨架,单词就变得水到渠成,锦上添花了在这里,我想说说的记单词方法其实不特别,很多人都在用雅思写作嘛,本身就没有明确的单词表,___我们却偏偏要给自己这么大的负担和压力去背单词呢在背单词时候,一定要结合topics,结合观点,有一条的脉络举个例子,在写whataretheinfluen__sifthegapbetweenthepoorandtherichiswidening.我会选择这么一种方式记单词贫富悬殊扩大Thewideningdisparitybetweentherichandthepoor--影响influen__两极化polarizecommunity–激化____intensifythesocialconflict–社会对立socialincompatibility–心理问题indu__psychologicalproblem–仇富心理resultinhatredforthewealthy–自卑心理sufferfrominferiormentality–行为过激aggressivebeh__iour–__protest–__strike–强烈__outcry–__riot–反_____anti-gover__ent/anti-society–发泄不满giveventtotheirangeranddissatisfaction–增加犯罪driveupthecrimerate社会不公平socialinequality–更可能获得公共资源h__emoreac__sstopublicresour__s–比其他人更容易获得社会特权acquirespecialprivilegeoverthepoor–进一步分化社会,加剧社会仇恨Furtherpolarizethesocietyandfuelsocialhatred–产生恶性循环therebycreatingaviciouscircle 这么记单词的话,思路就会更加清晰,而且避免了为了使用某个大词而妥协了某个观点的做法重要的是,单词不再是一个孤立的点,而是一条有机的线这就是我的记单词方式其实说准确一点,应该说,这就是我编写自己单词库的方法我觉得每个人都应该他们自己的单词库不加思考地背别人的单词库的结果是自己被辐射了,成为了别人单词库的一部分这就是___到现在我都没有upload我的雅思词汇汇总退一万步说,我觉得我们也应该有这种能力,一种能绕开某个词也能清晰表达自己观点的能力说到这,你应该开始变得有信心了,甚至豁然开朗因为这时候,你的复习计划变得异常的具体和量化了复习计划本人觉得雅思考试之前需要写大概15到20篇雅思写作task2只有足够的练习才能更好地形成你的写作习惯和写出自己的风格(也就是个性化的模版)本人考试前是每天写两天篇,如果不自信或者焦虑不安或者更年期症状发作的时候,一天写4篇而且时间尽可能压缩在30~35分钟完成允许自己每次写完都有时间重新阅读和查漏补缺其实啊,重点不在写,而是要看看自己理顺了思路没有,熟悉了文体没有,阐明了你所想的逻辑没有,用上了应该用上的句型没有····假如有一天(其实也就是两周之后的某一天),你突然发现,你已经十有__了,那你就成功了~~这是一种未出发先兴奋,未考试先激动的感觉,这是一种成功的预兆哈哈,你的更年期已经结束了~~~!!!Part
2.小作文至于小作文吧,它同样重要,因为它是你从
6.5到7分的一个很重要的决定因素假如你发现明明感觉大作文已经写得很好了,___还是6或者还是
6.5,就是因为你的小作文没跟上本人觉得写作应该我下面推介的方法来说复习和练习,大概每天写一篇就够了,而且时间一定不能多余18分钟否则你在写大作文的时候会变得很黄很__的~~以下推介一个很好的网址,对你练习小作文很有帮助的http://___.ielts-exam.net/index.phpoption=com_contenttask=viewid=62Itemid=32说了这么多,应该对你们有帮助了吧?为了给你们写这么多东西,我可是交了634块澳元的两次雅思考试费用这样学费真的很贵啊~~ 关于大作文和小作文的时间分配总之,无论是平时练习还是真正的实战,应该先审题,尤其是大作文认真阅读题目,划出关键字,一定要紧紧围绕题目的问题和它所隐含的内容去思考最好先用2到3分钟把自己的写作框架简单地下来,然后才动笔大作文应该控制在35分钟写完,小作文应该在18分之内结束剩下的5分钟应该通读小作文和大作文各一遍,重点看看自己有没有犯语法错误重点看我下面关于常犯的低级和致命语法错误要知道,在交卷之前,对于文章的观点和结构,你已经不能有什么作为了,唯一能给你加分,或者说,能让你减少被扣分的机会的就是减少不必要的语法错误了至于先写大作文还是先写小作文,应该根据个人的喜好和习惯记住,平时练习的时候就应该严格地执行这些步骤只有这样,才能在紧张的考场里做到有条不紊推荐书目在准备雅思的过程当中,或许很多人都会像我曾经那样不惜一切代价地去买所谓的__参考书,因为我们都会自觉不自觉地自我游说1450块的考试报名费都交得起了,还介意那几十块钱的参考书费吗其实,有时候想想,我们买的书越多,证明我们越不自信;而且参考书一多,复习计划就会更乱所以,到目前为止,我只觉得以下几本书稍微有点价值
1.慎小嶷《十天突破雅思写作》优点比较系统地总结了雅思写作的方方面面,而且我最欣赏它的地方是让烤鸭的必备词汇量降到最低缺点想想当全中国80%以上的烤鸭都人手一本的时候,它就不再是烤鸭战场上的大规模杀伤性武器了
2.慎小嶷《十天突破写作完整真题库》优点比较系统地收集和归类不同类型的雅思题目,我最欣赏它的地方是它能让考生觉得“原来9分作文都是不外如是”,而且我们能很好地找出差距缺点看了这本书,你会很容易地掉进那个“大包围”的题海战术,你会有意无意地想把所有topics都写了,你会有意无意地背诵别人的观点和9分范文这样的复习方法是致命的
3.吴建业《最新雅思考试胜策》之写作优点有很多很好的例句和观点,能让考生从例句中掌握单词,熟悉观点缺点观点太多,没有针对性,而且topics很少,因为这边书是2003年的产物它已经远远__雅思写作题库的更新速度
4.吴建业《最新雅思考试胜策》之词汇优点对于渴望背单词的朋友,这本书足够你背了,而且那些词都是按照topics来划分的,所以比其他垃圾词汇书又进了一步缺点我从来__盲目背单词,更加__那些为了使用某个单词而要自己的观点妥协的做法单词是一把双刃剑,它既是武器,又是负担 注意以上仅仅属于本人观点和切身__,也并非为某__卖__我觉得吧,除了上述这四本书,其他的话,可以放到微波炉里面烤一下,看看有没有烤鸭的味道~~~嘻嘻 关于写作预测每次考雅思前我都一直留意着慎小嶷和中国雅思网预测经过我接近半年的观察从2010年10月到2011年3月,那些预测基本无效所以迷恋__预测、提前准备、然后考试打算默写的模式,绝对不是一个好方法但是写作预测确实为我们提供了很好的练笔机会,而且基本上那些预测涵盖了8大类的题目即教育类,社会类,科技类,__类,环保类,发展类,犯罪类所以,我建议利用他们的写作预测来练笔,而且一定要按照topics循环来写我的意思是,比如说今天写关于社会类和教育类的,明天就应该写环保类和__类,后天就写发展类和犯罪类等千万不要轻信那些预测里所说的“什么月份通常考什么类别的题材”的无病__ 关于是否参加培训班对于没有参加过雅思考试或者基础不是太好的人来说,参加培训班能够帮助自己全面地了解雅思考试,快速形成自己的复习方案,这没什么好说的但是对于那些已经考过3到4的烤鸭来说,对于是否参加所谓的写作7分班、VIP班、冲刺班这个问题就变得很纠结不参加,心里不踏实,总觉得自己缺了点什么;但是参加过后,又可能觉得进步不明显,浪费了金钱和时间在这里,我可以肯定的说,“我们要给自己多一点自信,单单靠自己的实力足以应付雅思写作,足以拿7分了”其实很多中国写作老师有一个通病,在上课的时候,喜欢妖魔化剑桥雅思的批改老师,喜欢打击同学的信心;在评改作文的时候,喜欢侃侃而谈地说这词用得不好那句写得很烂,却忽略真正雅思写作评分标准而且他们还喜欢吹牛,喜欢把自己的经历传奇化,英雄化说实在,IELTSwritingisnoabigidealandIfirmlybelievethatallofuscansuc__ssfullyconquerit.所以呢,对于已经是身经百战的老鸭,只要你肯努力下苦功,一定能考过的 TASK1小作文曾经一直忽视小作文,甚至认为雅思写作约等于是写一篇250字的大作文轻视它的原因可以归结为,字数少只要150字,不需要个人观点纯粹描述客观figures,有固定的单词和句型,分数只占总分的1/3···直到后来与考官见面的时候,我才意识到小作文的杀伤力Thisisespeciallytruewhenitcomestothosewhoonlygotband
6.5butindeedde__ndband
7.0有时候,
6.5分到7分的距离,小作文起了决定性的作用按照剑桥雅思的分类,小作文可为柱状图barchart,饼图piechart,曲线图linegraph,表格table,地图__p和流程图pro__ssingchart当然,这只是按照这些图表的属性和特征来归类___我要费那么多笔墨在这个人所共知的问题上面呢?经过我1个月的练习和研究,我发现,如果按照这样的归类,我们得总结出6套相对应的模版句型和词汇其实这样是吃力不讨好,事倍功半的,因为这样的归类方法严重地影响了我们的复习方案和练习计划,而且并没有很好地反应出task1的本质要求我的个人认为,应该把柱状图,饼图,曲线图和表格看作一个总体,然后区分出是纵向比较还是横向比较(下面会继续解释它们的区别和应对方案);然后地图题是一类,流程图是另外一类也就是说按照本人的经验,task1小作文按照图表的本质应该分为横向比较,纵向比较,地图题和流程图Part1纵向比较和横向比较由于雅思写作task1中,柱状图,饼图,曲线图和表格占了绝大多数,所以这个板块应该作为复习的重点每当我们拿到题目的时候,我们第一件事应该做什么?对,看图表(果然是一句废话)!!其实我的意思是,我们得首先观察它们究竟是不同物体在同一时间点的比较(即横向比较),还是单一物体在不同时间点的比较(即纵向比较)这一点非常非常非常非常非常重要!!!因为不同的比较,有着不同的内在比较关系详细分析如下横向比较由于没有时间的变动,因此不存在物体或数据的波动,也就是说,那些描述变化趋势、描述变化特征的词汇和句型完全不适用此时此刻,我们要focus的是首先我们要找出极值(最大值和最小值)然后客观地、略有筛选地描述剩余数据(若数据太多,则有所侧重;若数据不多,则全部描述)接着就是__了--找出不同数据之间的共同特征和大小比较(比如说,谁和谁一样大/小,谁是谁的几分之几,谁是谁的多少倍)__过后,就需要有一个意犹未尽但有心无力的总结 纵向比较顾名思义,就是由于时间的推移,不同物体和数据之间发生了量的变化,也就是说,这时候关于描述变化趋势和变化特征的词汇和句型就用得上了此时此刻,我们要con__ntrate的是首先客观描述变化的大体趋势(是升高了还是降低了,是多了还是少了)然后描述变化的具体特征(是怎样增加的,是怎样减少的,幅度如何,速率如何)接着找出变化趋势相似的不同物体,然后客观描述一下,以减少单词和词汇的重复使用,避免啰嗦同样,这里也需要一个纵横全局的归纳和总结 说了那么多,估计你们也看烦看腻了毕竟很多人都想着一蹴而就,想着尽可能多背单词多抄句型好吧,闲话不多说,上货!请大家验明正身!!程度副词 多于Morethanjustoverover少于Lessthanjustunder 几乎Approxi__telyalmostnearly完全Exactlyprecisely 表示列举data/infor__tion句型
1.OverallAhasthelargestnumberof名词NO1andBthe__allestNO
2.CandDbothh__eNO3;EhasNO
4.OverallSwedenhasthelargestnumberofenrolledstudents17andSyriathe__allest
5.Fran__andSpainbothh__e12students;Ger__nyhas
11.Itisnoti__ablethatFran__andGer__nyh__esimilarprofiles.
2.Ahasthemost+名词+doingNO1;BisnextwithNO2whileChasNO
3.DandEh__e相同NO4eachSwedenhasthemoststudentsstudyingCAD9;Spainisnextwith7whileFran__has
6.Ger__nyandSyriah__e4CADstudentseach.
3.AccordingtothepiechartAwhichis%isthemost···amongthetotal···thennextisBwith%followedbyC__kingup%;andfinallycomeEFandGat%%%respectively.Accordingtothepiechartchickenwhichis40%isthemostpopularamongthetotalmeatsoldthennextisporkwith20%followedbybeef__kingup18%;andfinallycomelambfishandotherat15%5%and2%respectively. 纵向比较
1.Experien__/witness/see/enjoy+修饰词最高级+增加/减少/震荡 Experien__/enjoy+asignificant/themostdra__tic+decrease/increase增加:increasegrowthrise 减少:decreasedrop 快速:dra__ticdrastic 缓慢:gradualsteadyslow大幅:significantsubstantial 小幅:moderateslight震荡:considerable/__rked/sharp/minorfluctuation
2.Thenumberof···wasNo1inYrandrose/redu__dby%toNo2Thenumberofmilesthatcartr__eledwas3199in1985androseby50%to4806inthesubsequentyears.增加/上升:increaserisegrow 急促上升:jumpsoartosurgeto减少/下降:decreasedropdecline 急促下降:plummettoplungeto
3.主语+上升/减少to··· or 主语+上升/减少by
4.Theper__ntage/proportion/numberofis修饰词larger/__allerthanthatof 修饰词 明显:substantiallyobviously 轻微:slightlymoderately
5.A修饰词increase/decreaseoccurred修饰词 大幅:considerablesignificantsubstantial 小幅:moderateslight
6.表示不变的状态主语re__inconstant/unchanged/stable/steadyat 表示趋势的句型
1.thereisadownward/upward/opposite/general/dominanttrend 下降的/上升的/相反的/总体的/主要的趋势
2.···tendtobemore/lesspreferred 倾向越来越受不受欢迎 Ascanbeseenfromthetablewalkand__rtainshort-distan__transportationsuchascycledandlocalbustendtobelesspreferred.
3.Thereisaconsiderableincrease/decreasein··· Thereisaconsiderableincreaseintotalmilesbyallmodesoftransportationcomparedwiththedata4740milesin
1985. 表示比较增长或减少趋势Balsorose/increased/grewduringthisperiodbutlesssharply decreased/declined/droppedThesalesofgamessoftwarealsoroseduringthisperiodbutlesssharply.Salesincreasedfromabout13billiondollarsin2000tojustunder20billiondollarsthreeyearslater. 表示相同相似变化趋势的句式Asimilarsituationwasseeninthe···whereAsimilarsituationwasseeninthewholesaleandretailtradesectorwherethenumberofwomenrosefromabout550000in1975toalmost800000twodecadeslater. TherearesomesimilaritiesbetweenAandBBesimilarto/AhassomethingincommonwithB 表示变化特征的词汇 表示超过的词语Outnumber比···多,在数量上超过 Inthisprofessionwomenoutnumbermenbytwotoone.=therearetwi__as__nywomenasmen在这个行业,女性人数是男性的两倍Thenumberofmenoutnumberedwomenbyfourtoone.我们的人数以4比1超过他们Ex__ed超过···数量 Thepri__willnotex__ed$
100.Overtake在数量或重要性方面大于,超过 Nuclearenergy__yovertakeoilasthe__infuel. 表示连续的时间段
1.overaspanof···years=overtheperiodfrom···to··· =intheyearsbetween···and···
2.duringthesameperiod
3.intheNo.yearsspanningfrom19xxthrough19xx=from···to···withinthe5yearsperiod
4.fromthenon=fromthistimeonwards=inthesubsequentyears. 横向比较
1.···程度副词doubled/trebled三倍/quadruple四倍/halve减半NO.vsNO.while···doubled/trebled/quadrupled/halvedwhichwere数字年份and数字年份respectively.Thefigurebylongdistan__busmorethandoubledduringthesameperiod54milesvs.124mileswhilethemilesbytaxitrebledwhichwere13milesand42milesrespectively.
2.表示“A占总体的多少”或“A为B···倍”或“A为B的···分之···
3.···数字A+BofwhichAwere···andBwere···Italyre__ived20millionvisitorsofwhich
1.2millionwerefromtheUKand
1.8millionwerefromtheUSA.
4.···hadahigher/lowertotalnumberof名词thananyoftheother+名词 Fran__hadahighertotalnumberofvisitorsthananyoftheothercountriesonthelist. 表示比较的句型
1.likewise句子. 同样地,··· Likewisetheuseofotherunspecifiedformsoftransportalsoincreased.
2.Bycontrast/Incomparison句子. 相反地,··· Bycontrastthelongdistan__vehicleenjoyedasignificantincreaseovertheperiodspanningfrom1985to2000althoughthereexistssomedifferen__s. IncomparisonstudentexpenditureincountryCwasconsiderablyloweratonlyUS$1500peryear
3.comparedwiththedata数字in年份句子. 与···相比较,··· Overallthereisaconsiderableincreaseintotalmilesbyallmodesoftransportationcomparedwiththedata4740milesin
1985.
4.···hadhalf/twi__/triple·timesas__ny可数名词as···but/yetthenumberof···and···wasthesame.Australiahadhalfas__nyvisitorsasThailand3millionvs6millionbutthenumberofvisitorstothosecountriesfromtheUKandtheUSAwasthesame
0.3million.
5.句子while句子.12millionAmericansvisitedCanadawhile
5.5millionvisitedMexico.
6.···hadahigher/lowertotalnumberof···thananyoftheother+名词复数 Fran__hadahighertotalnumberofvisitorsthananyoftheothercountriesonthelist. 表示“%”的词语百分比per__ntageproportionshare高Highlarge–highestlargest低low__all—lowest__allest 表示“占%”的词组正向Aconstitute/occupy/accountfor/compose/compriseB A占B的%负向%ofBbecomposedofA 总体有%的某一元素 %of名词becomposedof 总体有%的某一元素Around15%ofour___tiscomposedofprotein. 我们的饮食中大约有15%的蛋白质composes 某一元素构成总体的%Christianscomposearound
2.5%ofthecountry’spopulation___徒占____人口的
2.5%Comprise 构成Olderpeoplecomprisealargeproportionofthoselivinginpoverty.Constitute 构成Constitutearound60%ofthetotal/alargerper__ntagearound20%ofConstitutethe__jorityofthelabourfor__. 占劳动力的大多数Occupy 占据 Drylandsoccupyathirdoftheworld’ssu_____.陆地占了地球表面的三分之一Accountfor 数量上,比例上占 TheJapanese__rketaccountsfor35%ofthecompany’srevenue. __市场占公司收入的35%. 对了,差点忘了,要区分数据是data还是per__ntage.这个决定了相对应的词汇如果大家能够熟练地掌握我上述的总结和归纳的话,相对对于以上四种图表一定能够得心应手了 Part2地图题地图是最近比较流行的题目,本人连续考的4次雅思写作里面,居然有两次都是地图题(12月11日和2月26日)不过对于应付这种题型,大家不用害怕,其实没什么大不了的慎小嶷最近的新书《十天突破写作完整真题库》里面的DAY1Opage297~318,有详细的归纳以下内容均为摘抄该书的章节恳请大家尊重别人的知识产权,在没有得到原__允许的情况下,请勿用于商业用途~~ 表示“A位于” Aislocated/situated/lies···Aisjustofftheroadto··· A就在通向某地的路边上Aisrightatthe__nterof···A就在···的正__表示“A靠近或者紧挨着B”:Aisnextto/near/closeto表示“A在距离B某一面···公里处” Aislocated/situated/lies···kilometers/milestotheeast/west/north/southofB表示“A位于B内的某个部分” Aislocated/situated/liesintheeastern/western/northern/southernpartofB表示“A在B的某个角上” Alies/islocated/issituatedon/attheeast/west/north/south/cornerofB表示“剩下的”部分Therestofthe···表示“道路通向/河流流向某处”:Theroadrunsfrom···to···Theriverruns/flowsfrom···to···表示“沿着河流/道路”:Alongwithriver/road Alongsidetheriver/road表示“A在道路或者河流的某一侧” Aislocated/situated/liesonthenorth/southsideoftheriver/theroade.g.situatedonthesouthsideoftheRiverThamesthishoteloffersitsguestsanideallocationin__ntralLondon表示“A与B仅一河之隔/仅一路之隔”:AisrightacrossfromB表示“A在道路或河流的南北端” Aislocated/situated/liesonthenorth/southendoftheriver/theroad表示“A在B的对面”:AisoppositeB表示“A在B某一侧的边界上” Aislocated/situated/liesontheeastern/western/northern/southernborderofB表示“A在B某侧的边缘上” Aislocated/situated/liesontheeastern/western/northern/southernedgeofB表示“A朝北/朝南/面朝公园等” Afa__snorth/southAfa__stowardsthenorth/thesouthAfa__sapark表示“斜向的方位”:东北north-east 东南south-east西北north-west 西南south-west表示建筑物的布局Layout 指一个建筑物周边的环境Thesurroundingsofabuilding表示“A占据了某个空间”Aoccupies表示A由几个不同的部分组成Aconsistsof/iscomposedof/is__deupofBCandD表示A的长度是ThelengthofAis···=Ais···inlength表示A的宽度是ThewidthofAis···=Ais···inwidth表示A的__是Ais···inareaThefarmis50kilometersinareaThebuildingalmostdoubledinfloorarea.表示大约approxi__telyroughlyaboutaround表示一块地apatchofland/astretchofland表示从A·延伸到·Aextended/stretchedfrom···to··· Theparkextendedfrom__inStreettoKingGeorgeStreet Thisperiodstretchedfromthemid-eighteenth__nturytothelatenineteenth__ntury表示比较,“与···所不同的是” UnlikeABComparedwithABA···while/whereasB···Incomparison/incontrast/bycontrastB表示可以“使用”__ailable表示可以“容纳”canaccommodate表示理论上讲intheorytheoreticallyhypothetically表示但事实上butinreality/howeverrealistically/yetinpracti__/butinfact/asa__tteroffactthough表示在某处建造了A Awasbuiltin=wasconstructedin=wasestablishedin表示在某处又增建了A Awasaddedto=anadditionwas__deto···whichwasA表示改动原建筑或原场地v.change/modify/remodel n.change/modification/remodeling表示A被改造成了B Awasturnedinto/wastransformedinto/wasconvertedintoB表示A被搬走或拆掉Awasremoved/demolished/takendownfrom···表示A被B取代了Awasrepla__dbyB/A__dewayforB表示A的__缩小thesizeofAwasredu__dtoonlyhalfof/onethirdoftheoriginalsize表示A的__扩大:Awasexpandedtotwi__itssize=thesizeofAalmostdoubled表示A向XX方向延伸expand/extendnorthward/southward/eastward/westward表示A经历了Aexperien__d/witnessed/saw起初atfirst=initially=inthebeginning=originally接着then=next=afterthat=inthefollowingstage=inthenext/subsequentperiod=afterward在这个阶段atthispoint=inthisphase=inthisstage最终finally=eventually=intheend Part3流程图对于流程图,本人从来没有准备过我觉得没必要捡了芝麻丢了西瓜毕竟它出现的频率很低,而且几乎很难准备有见及此,对于那些在考试当中遇到流程图的烤鸭们,我只能说“不要慌,不要怕,前面就是天堂,一路走好!!” TASK2大作文Part
1.考官是怎么改卷子的?知己知彼,百战百胜,所以“考官是怎么改卷子的,他以什么为标准的评分”的尤为重要经过朋友的介绍,我认识了Steward,他是一位资深的写作老师和改卷老师,在悉尼大学语言中心工作那些在悉尼的朋友,如果想找他的话,请给我留言,我有他的__方式我上了他两小时的课,他帮我改了12篇大作文和2篇小作文我觉得这短短的两小时,远远比上什么___新航道环球雅思什么保7班精品班重要得多得多afterall,很多中国雅思老师还是处于意淫阶段看着他改了12篇文章,发现他改作文的模式非常非常的mechanical,他说考官一般会在1小时内改六份作文(includingtask1andtask2),那就是说平均5分钟改一篇在这五分钟里,他就死死地盯着评分规则,从taskresponsecoheren__andcohesionlexicalresour__sgram__ticalrangeandaccuracy这四个方面评分而且让我无比深刻的是雅思是一门语言能力考试,它侧重于测试学生的语言表达能力,而不是思维能力记住核心词是语言表达!! Part
2.雅思写作7分是什么样的概念以下是雅思写作的7分标准a.taskresponse:addressesallpartsofthetaskpresentsaclearpositionthroughoutthereponsepresentsextendandsupports__inideasbutthere__ybeatendencytoover-generaliseand/orsupportingideas__ylackfocus. 用中文最简单的理解是首尾都要回答问题,允许泛泛而谈这就是说,我们没必要花太多的精力去考虑观点是否绝对严谨是否意义深刻,关键是要告诉考官你的思考逻辑这就是剑桥雅思的魅力,它要考你的不是你的思维能力,而是你的语言表达能力哪怕在ridiculous的观点,只要你能用最恰当的语言去表达,你也可以同样得7分(当然,如果你的目标是8分,你就当我痴人说话吧)还有就是说,很多题目本身包含很广泛的概念,很多大学教授用十几万字都解释不清的关系,怎么就能让我们这些门外汉用三言两语就解释好呢说了这么多,我想说的是,如果你从一开始就习惯背诵满分作文,习惯__别人的观点,这样的复习方__很吃力(我不敢说是错的,那是确实低效,甚至有赌博成分),事倍功半毕竟我们都是正常人,我们都有自己的思考能力和理解能力,我们说的每一个观点都是__kesense,不__kesense的是我们没把那个观点说清楚b.coheren__andcohesionlogicallyorganisesinfor__tionandideasthereisclearprogressionthroughoutlisesarangeofcohesivedevi__sappropriatelyalthoughthere__ybesomeunder-oroverusepresentsacleartopicwithineachparagragh 用中文最简单的意思是分段分点,每点之前必须有连接词这一点非常非常容易达到(我总结了大量这样的词汇,明天或者后天上传上来)然后那个考官最为推介的范式(以argumentation的题目为例,因为report类的文章更死板了)开头段+主体段(让步一段,支持(__)两段)+结尾段其实说白了,就是我们最熟悉不过的模版也就是说,模版是非常有用的,之所以变成没用(servenohelpfulpurpose)是因为用模范的那个人没有用(想起粤语里面的一句歇后语,叫“太监撒尿”)至于怎么用模版才能变得不落于俗套,下文回答问题7的时候会有详细分析c.lexcialresour__usesasufficientrangeofvocabularytoallowsomeflexibilityandprecisionuseslesscommonlexicalitemswithsomeawarenessofstyleandcollocation__yprodu__occasionalerrosinwordchoi__spellingand/orwordfor__tion 用中文最简单的意思是足够就好,不需要多;一两个大词就够,不需要滥一说到单词,相信我们并不陌生,甚至认为学英语就是背单词,写作就是单词的选美与堆砌尽管我们都知道这是不对的,但是依旧默默地坚持着,比如说背诵一大堆同义词代换,一大堆除了莎士比亚见过之外其他人都没见过的大词这样的复习会很累而且会逐渐把雅思写作从逻辑表述变成词汇大杂烩至于何谓是足够的单词,何谓是lesscommonlexicalitems,这就是问题6的范畴了经过我写了大概30篇雅思作文,我觉得我们需要的词汇其实真的不多(我的词汇表一定会upload上来,估计在明天或者后天)我想说的是,记单词最好的方法是,把单词放到句型或者例句上面来,然后句型或者例句一定要与雅思写作topic相关如果不相关,证明那个词就算记住了,也不会用 d.Gram__ticalrangeandaccuracyusesavarietyofcomplexstructures produ__sfrequenterror-freesenten__shasgoodcontrolofgram__randpunctuationbut__y__keafewmistake 用中文最简单的意思是句子结构多样性和允许语法错误的存在对于句子结构多样性,这一点,我觉得我们中国学生肯定没问题的,什么定语从句,什么名词性从句,什么状语从句,倒装句,虚拟语态,被动语态等,我们只会过犹不及从我的个人经验来看,我有时候会把定语从句和同位语从句__(并不是我们不知道有什么不同,而是一紧张就很容易忽视了)说到语法错误,我可以说,我们中国学生最最最常犯的语法错误都是非常低级(请参考part.4内容) Part
3.雅思写作7分所需要的词汇a.雅思写作必备连词--只要掌握了这些连词,就能符合到coheren__andcohesion7分以上的要求以下为英语写作雅思写作,学术论文等必备的连词汇总以下的内容参考了悉尼大学本科学生orientationhandbook里面关于如何preparingforessays的总结,再加上本人的积累有些连词与下面的句型汇总重合,请以句型汇总为重点对于应该雅思写作和大学学术论文绝对绰绰有余,希望能帮助大家 为了更好地__我的经验,我将以下的词语划分成三组 用下划线highlight的是适用那些总感觉雅思写作写不长、写不满250字、需要灌水的同学 用粗体highlight的是适用于那些每次都写得太长、写爆格,务实的同学 用斜体highlight的是适用于那些有强烈大词欲,渴望用大词整死考官的同学 Tosignalsequen__oradditionAccordinglyactuallyadditionallyafterwardsagainalsoandanotheraswaspreviouslystatedaswellasatthesametimebesidesthisconsistentwiththiscorrespondinglyequallyimportantfinallyfurtherfurthermoreinadditioninalike__nnerinthefirstpla__inthesamewayincludinginitiallylastlikewisemoreimportantlymoreovernextoriginallyoverallpri__rilysimilarlytobeginwithtoowhatismore.TosignaltimeAfterafterwardaslongasatfirstatlastatlengthatthesametimebeforeconcurrentlycurrentlyduringfinallyfollowingimmediatelyinthefutureinthemeantimelastbutnotleastlatermeanwhilenexton__presentlyrarelysimultaneouslysometimessubsequentlythenthistimeuntiluntilthenwheneverwhile. ToshowresultsAccordinglyasaresultconsequentlyforthisreasonhen__inotherwordsinthatcaseitfollowsthatitisevidentthatotherwiseowingtoresultingfromthissoitcanbeseenthatthatbeingthecasethereforethisimpliesthissuggeststhatthusunderthesecircumstan__s. Tointrodu__eviden__/support/reasonsContradictorytothiscontrarilyinsupportofthisitfollowsthisisclearbecausetheeviden__for···isthereasonsfor···arethisissupportedbytoaffirmthistoattesttothistocorroboratetoexplaintofurtherconfirmtofurtherverifytolisttosubstantiatethisinsubstantiation. Tosignalrepetitionsum__ryorconclusionAccordinglyallinallalltogetherasafinalpointasaresultasIh__enotedasindicatedearlierasmentionedaspreviouslystatedasweh__eseenbrieflybyandlargeconsequentlyfinallygiventhesefactshen__inbriefinconclusioninotherwordsinshortinsum__rytosumupinsum__tiononthewholeoverallsin__sosummingupthenthereforethusthuswecanseethattoconcludetorecapitulatetorepeattoreview.Tointrodu__causesoreffectsAccordinglyasaresultbecauseconsequentlyduetoforasmuchasforthatreasonhen__inasmuchasinthatinviewofonaccountofowingsin__thenthereforethustonarrowthefocusafterallfromthisperspectivefromthispointofviewgiventhiscontextinfactinordertoinotherwordsinparticularinthiscaseinthiscontextindeedparticularlyputanotherwayspecificallythatisthisisparticularlytruewhenunder__rtaincircumstan__suptoapointwiththisinmind.TocontrastAfterallalthoughalternatelyandyetatthesametimebethatasit__ybucontrastinglyconverselydespitedissimilarlyeventhoughforallthathoweverincontrastincontrasttothisinoppositiontothisinrealityinspiteofthisinconsistentwiththisisthatinsteadmeanwhileneverthelessnonethelessnotwithstandingonthecontraryontheonehandontheotherhandotherwiseparadoxicallyratherthanregardlessofstillthoughwhereaswheninfactyet. TocompareAlso____ogoustoanothersimilarissueisatthesametimebythesametokenequallyincomparisoninlike__nnerinsimilarfashioninthesamewaylikewisesimilarly. ToclarifyInotherwordsthatisthatistosaythismeansthattoclarifytoelaboratetoexplaintoparaphrasetoputitanotherway. ToshowpurposeInordertointhehopethatforthepurposewiththisendtotheendthatwiththiso__ective Todi__issAllthesameatanyrateeitherwayinanyeventineithercasewhateverhappens. Tosignalcon__ssion让步Admittedlyalbeitalthoughitistruethat__rtainlyevensograntedit__yappearthatknowingthisnaturallyofcoursethisisonlythecasewhenwhilethisistruewhileit__yseemthat. TosignifyaconditionGrantingthatintheeventofontheconditionthatprovidingthatsolongas ToproveexamplesAsanillustrationbywayofexampleforexampleforinstan__inparticularinsupportofthisnotablytodemonstratetoelaboratetoexemplifytohighlighttoillustratespecificallythatis. Toreferen__Con__rningthisconsideringthiswithrespecttowithregardsto ToemphasiseAboveallasa__tteroffact__rtainlychieflyespeciallyimportantlyinanycaseinparticularindeeditmustbeemphasisedthat__inlymostlynotablyobviouslyofcourseparticularlypri__rilyspecificallytrulyundoubtedly. b.雅思写作必备同义词代换--只要掌握了这些连词,就能游刃有余地驾驭我们想要表达的观点,满足lexcialresour__7分要求对于雅思写作,总有那么一个问题绕不开,那就是我们究竟需要积累多少个单词才能写出一篇能够完整表达我们观点的文章有的老师说最起码要有6级的词汇量,有的老师慎小嶷说熟记286个单词就足够~~根据本人的经验,我觉得在一开始备考的时候,完全没有必要去考虑我们究竟需要多少个单词,因为在没有练笔就开始记单词的情况,我们的思路往往受我们所记过的单词的影响在这样的惯性下,我们很可能很生硬地套用单词,而不是自然而然地抒发观点我觉得只有在自己平时充分练笔我自己大概写了30多篇雅思作文的前提下,我们才知道我们自己究竟需要什么样的单词和词组,需要多少的同义词代换~~我的经验是不要让单词成为自己的负担,最好是边写边积累,毕竟我们不是考GRE哪怕是GRE词汇的巨人也可能成为雅思写作的侏儒~~关键是用词准确到位,清晰表达观点以下是经过我30篇雅思写作练笔之后总结出来的75组必备的同义词代换,如果能熟练掌握,必定能让你们在驾驭和阐述观点的时候变得游刃有余~~其实不单单是为了雅思写作,出国留学不能避免的就是每个学期排山倒海的individualassig__ents和groupworks,相信以下的词汇对大家是有帮助的 中性动词
1.导致v.causebringaboutgiverisetoleadtogeneratecreateBeacontributingfactorto
2.认为v.pointoutargueclaimassertthinkconsider
3.强调v.emphasizebring/callattentiontoac__ntuateheightenstrengthen
4.集中v.focusoncon__ntrateon
5.解决v.combataddresstackleresolvesolve
6.从事v.carryoutconductperform
7.承认v.con__deadmitacknowledgeac__ptallowgrant 正向动词
1.支持v.supportadvocateagreewith
2.增加v.increasegrowriseenlarge n.increasegrowthriseenlargement
3.改善v.improveenhan__upgradeboost n.improvementenhan__mentboom
4.扩张v.expandenlargeextendwidenbroaden n.expansionenlargementextension
5.提高v.augmentincreasedevelopintensify n.augmentincreasedevelopment
6.发展v.developadvan__growevolveflourish n.developmentadvan__mentgrowthflourishing
7.产生v.developcomeintobeing/existen__comeabout
8.获得v.acquiregaingetobtainattain
9.执行v.implementexecuteputintoeffectperform n.implementationperfor__n__
10.实现v.achievefulfillgainaccomplishattain n.achievementaccomplishmentattai__ent
11.开始v.commen__beginstart n.commen__mentbeginningstart
12. 促进v.promotefurtheradvan__encouragestimulatefoster n.promotionadvan__ment
13.鼓励v.stimulateencourageactasstimulusmotivate n.encouragementin__ntivemotivation
14.唤起v.arousecauseindu__prompttriggersparkoff
15.需要v.callforde__ndrequire
16. 取代v.repla__takethepla__ofsubstitutefor n.repla__mentsubstitutionforinpla__of
17. 加快v.ac__leratespeedupquicken n.Ac__lerationspeedingup
18. 减轻v.abatelessenredu__alleviatemitigate n.abatementlesseningalleviationmitigation
19. 保护v.protectpreserveconserve n.protectionpreservationconservation
20.保卫v.safeguarddefendshield n.safeguarddefen__shelter
21. 建立v.establishsetupfoundconstruct n.establishmentfoundationconstruction
22. 遵守规则,法律abidebycomplywithfollowrespectactinaccordan__with
23. 允许v.allowpermitgivethemeanstofacilitate 负向动词
1.__v.o__ectraiseo__ectionsoppose
2.减少v.decreaselowerredu__cutdown n.decreasereductiondropdecline
3. 耗尽v.depleteexhaustuseup n.depletionexhaustionusingup
4. 阻碍v.hamperhinderobstructimpedeinhibit n.hindran__obstructionobstacleimpediment
5.限制v.limitcurbrestrictpla__alimiton n.limitrestriction
6. 危及v.endangerimperiljeopardizeputatrisk
7. 衰败v.deterioratedegradedegeneraterot n.deteriorationdegeneration
8. 恶化v.exa__rbateaggr__ateworseninflame n.exa__rbationaggr__ationworsening
9. 加剧v.intensifyescalatesharpenaggr__ate n.escalationintensificationaggr__ation
10.破坏v.da__gedestroyruindevastate n.da__gedestructionruindevastation adj.devastatingdestructive
11. 污染v.pollutecontaminate n.pollutioncontamination
12. 败坏v.pervertcorruptdepr__eleadastraydebase
13.扭曲v.distortpervertmisrepresentfalsifymisstatemisreport
14.削弱v.weakenundermineimpairinvalidate
15. 干涉v.interferein/withinterveneinimpingeon/upon侵犯 n.interferen__/intervention/involvementin/with
16. 侵犯v.encroachon/upontime/rights/personallife n.encroachmenton/upon=impingingon/upon
17. 与···相违背/相矛盾runcounterto=runcontraryto Contradicteachother=conflictwith=beatoddswithsth
18.误解v.misunderstandmisapprehendmisinterpret n.misunderstandingmisapprehensionmisinterpretation
19. 逃避v.escapebreakoutevadeelude
20.遭受v.sufferfrombestrickenwithbeafflictedwith
21.违反v.violatedisobeytransgressinfringe n.violationinfringementcontr__entionbreach
22. 忽视v.losesightofignoreneglect
23.疏远v.alienateisolatebecome/getestrangedfrom n.alienationisolationestrangement 其他重要的同义词代换
1.大量的enormous__ssivetremendousconsiderable
2.重要的significantsubstantialcrucialimportant
3.严重的adj.severeseriousacutedrastic adv.severelyseriouslyacutelydrastically
4. 有害的adj.hazardousdangerousharmful
5. 贫穷的adj.poorpoverty-strickendestituteimpoverished
6. 富有的adj.richwealthyaffluent
7. 差距n.gapdisparitydivergen__
8. 积极的beneficialadvantageous
9.消极的banefuldetrimental
10. 明显的__nifestobviousevidentapparent
11. 影响impactrepercussioneffectramification
12. 人类thehu__nra__hu__nbeinghu__nkindhu__nity
13. 当代incurrentsocietyinthisdayandageinpresent-daysocietyincontemporarysociety
14. 传统的traditionalconventionalold-fashioned
15. 健康的healthyvigorousrobust
16. 有营养的nutritiousnourishingwholesomehealthy 常用的正向形容词Adequate/basic/broad/general/sufficient充分的/基本的/宽泛的/大概的/足够的Penetrating/profound/revealing/re__rkable/proper/thorough入木三分的/深刻的/发人心省的/出色的/正确的/__的Original/unique/fresh/rare/clear/fascinating/interesting独到的/独特的/新鲜的/少有的/清楚的/生动的/有趣的Significant/substantial/considerable 常用的负向形容词Unethical/immoral/unscrupulous/unprincipled不道德的Antisocial/unac__ptable/undesirable___的/不能接受的/令人不快的Aggressive/criminal/disruptive/violent挑衅的/犯罪的/扰乱的/__的Notorious/appalling/vicious/bloody臭名昭著的/令人震惊的/令人发指的/血腥的 c.雅思写作必备写作单词--这一项是最虚最模糊的一项不同的人因为有不同的观点,因而需要不同的独特单词如果时间紧迫的同学,请先参考慎小嶷的《十天突破雅思写作》,如果时间宽裕的朋友,请按照我在复习计划里所说那样自我总结单词串来记忆,按照8大类topics来总结 Part
4.雅思写作常见的语法错误a.雅思写作低级语法错误1冠词aanthe的乱用,少用,多用(对于这个问题,考官说了,thismistakeisinsignificantandittakestimeforpeopleto__oidit)结合自身经验,就算我自己真的看了语法书,我们也同样会继续犯错,但这个错误不影响我们拿7分(当然也不能每句话都错一两次) 2名词单复数这个问题很普遍,特别要搞清楚哪些名词是可数的,哪些名词是不可数的,哪些名词是既可数又不可数(可数与不可数表达不一样的意思),哪些名词是单复数同形,以及哪些词可以修饰可数,哪些只能修饰不可数这就需要积累特别是平时写作的时候,刻意留意这个问题,在有疑问的单词打圈,然后写完之后马上查词典以下是从网络上找来的,很管用的总结单数名词不能单独存在,一般前面应该有限定词修饰不定冠词a/an永远只能修饰单数可数名词every和each永远只能修饰单数可数名词但every+数词+复数名词是正确的,如everytenyears序数词后面一般使用单数可数名词anther永远只修饰单数可数名词但another+数词/few+复数名词是正确的,如anothereightyears;anotherfewbooksother通常修饰复数名词,也可修饰不可数名词,如Henry__ithistallerthananyotherstudentinhisclass.下列词和短语只能修饰复数名词thesethose__nyvariousseveralnumerousdiversefewafewbothagood/large/greatnumberofnumbersofoneof大于1的词数只能修饰复数名词 !!牢记的结构one/two/__ny+of+限定词+复数名词!!只能修饰单数可数名词的词oneanthera/anthisthateacheveryeithersucha__nya!!注意!!__nystudent以及__nyastudent只能修饰复数可数名词的词1的数字twosix.....hundredthousandmillionbothseveral__nyfewafewthesethoseagood/large/greatnumberofnumbersofthenumberofnumbersofnumerousvariousdiverseaseriesofawiderangeofacollevtionof只修饰不可数名词的词muchlittlealitteragreatdealofagreatamountofapie__ofanarticleof既可修饰不可数又能修饰可数的词allof alotof someof lotsof anyofplentyof mostof halfof awealthof apartofenoughoftherestof other onethirdof suchno avarietyof
3.主谓一致这个语法最好上百度百科,那里的分析非常详细我发现经常犯主谓一致的错误是当主语后面有aswellaswithalongwithtogetherwithbutlikeratherthanex__pt等引导的短语时谓语动词要与最前面的主语保持一致.halfoftherestofmostofallof及百分数或分数+of等后接名词作主语时谓语动词形式根据of后的名词而定.
4.动词的时态问题,现在时,过去式,过去分词的问题
5.标点符号的运用千万不要出现满篇作文全是逗号的________现象一个句子当主谓宾完整出现就是一个句子更加不要用叹号
6.不要用缩写例如dontcantwont等一旦出现缩写,证明你太业余太随意了,一点都不学术 b.雅思写作致命语法错误
1.句子成分缺失,通常是缺谓语(由于谓语用了动名词或者过去分词)
2.定语从句和同位语从句的混淆(特别容易在引导同位语从句时,误以为引导定语从句)
3.定语从句与状语从句的混淆(例如wherewhen等引导的从句需要特别注意,要清楚其在句子中的成分)
4.在使用倒装句时,请注意助动词提前如果不熟练,那就请你不要用了 Part
5.雅思写作的误区a.雅思考官是不太在乎你是用一面倒还是”先让步再支持“ 记得在悉尼海外东方学院的J老师说过,现在“一面倒”已经很难甚至不能拿7分了我问了一下考官,他给我的答复非常的straightforward,无论让步还是一面倒,都是可以拿7分,关键是reasonablyexplainandextendyouridea. b.雅思写作中只要是问opinion的题目包括”discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion“和”towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree,开头和结尾都要表明观点记得还是悉尼海外东方学院,还是那个“__”J,他说在写”discussbothviewandgiveyouropinion”和”towhatextentdoyouagreeanddisagree”的开头是不要一样的前者不用一开始就表明你自己的opinion,后者才需要但是雅思考官给我的回答是“youshouldpreviewthequestionandgiveyouopinionimmediatesothattheexaminerscaneasilyunderstandwhatyouaregoingtoargue”.这就是说慎小嶷《十天》里面最喜欢的开头了,“介绍背景+分析双方观点+表明自己态度”;也就是说用模版 Part
6.雅思写作如何展开论证记住三个英文单词“explain”“extend”or“example”你或我总会那么一个时候,想到了一个观点但是不知道怎么论证,或者不知从哪一个点开始论证其实很简单,要么你就说___这个观点会产生,要么你就说这一观点所产生的影响(积极或消极),要么就举例子说明观点的存在性无非就是这么三种思考方向假如一篇文章你有4个观点,只要上述三项各用一两次,文章看起来更加有可信度,句型就自然而然变得有多样性的!!!重点推介···雅思写作必备句型!!!说到这,我就__一下怎么才能让模版看起来不像模版最立竿见影的方法是总结和归类句型经过我三个月的复习和总结,我发现雅思作文无非就是以下几种关系开头句型,插入语和连词,中立关系,积极关系,消极关系,因果关系,建议关系和结尾句型我总结超过160个句型,而且我所有文体(report类,argumentation类,综合类),几乎所有领域(教育类,社会类,发展类,环保类,犯罪类,科技类等)都写过了,而且所写的文章经过考官批改都是至少7分,有几篇8分我这就是归功于我平时积累的这些句型而且在上次2月26日的考试(题目应该算是比较难的,小作文地图题+社会类粮食方面的大作文)中,我用了36分钟去写地图题,只剩下24分钟写大作文,我当时都很害怕,害怕写不完但是我总结的句型帮了我一大忙我用了20分就写完了,最后得了
7.5分并不是我在吹牛,我只是想说,学会用以下句型,既可以保证你有稳定的发挥,又可以有效的避免语法错误,而且还能把大词很自然而然地就写出来了,一点都不造作还有,我想说的是,这里没有所谓的7分句型或者什么6分句型我觉得这样划分只会导致我们盲目地背诵高分句型而忽略它实际的用法和语境什么是高手?高手就是用最简单方式表达最准确的意思你们可以根据自己的喜好和习惯,自己选择还有,再好的句型,如果不能很随心所欲地从自己笔下写出来,那只能证明那个句型还不是属于自己这就需要平时刻意的运用,每写完一篇之后再回过头来看看,有哪些更恰当的句型没有用上经过多次的trialanderror,这些句型就会变成你以后showoff的资本了我怎么变得这么啰嗦啊,说了这么多还没有上货对了,还有一点,对于以下所有句型和单词,我都查过牛津高阶词典和柯林斯大词典,语境和用法基本是正确很多都配上例子,如果发现有错的,希望大家提个醒,我会马上纠正如果觉得要记上这160+的句型很吃力的话,或者觉得下周就要考试了,来不及熟悉用法的话,我用红色highlight了我最最最常用的,最最最喜欢的而且最最最万金油的句型 a.开头句型适合discussion问题的开头Theissue/discussion/topic/problem/su__ectabout/ofwhether从句orhow+不定式isofgreatinterest/con__rn/importan__/significan__to/for··· hastriggered/sparkedoff anintensecontroversyintherealmof··· Theissueof···isofgreatinterestto···e.g.Theissueofwhetherthepracti__ofrequiringstudentstowearschooluniformswillaffecttheirpersonalityandindividualityisofgreatinterestto__nypeople. Thetopicof···isofgreatcon__rnfor···e.g.Thetopicofwhetheritisappropriateandeffectivetousecorporalpunishmentonyoungchildrenisofgreatcon__rnfor__nypeople. Thesu__ectof···isofgreatimportan__to···e.g.Thesu__ectofhowtoresolvetheproblemscausedbytherapiddevelopmentoftechnologynowadaysisofgreatimportan__to__nyscientists. Thediscussionabout···isofgreatsignifican__to···e.g.Thediscussionaboutthemosteffectivewaytoprovidefinancialandtechnologicalsupportstothird-worldcountriesisofgreatsignifican__tobothindustrializedanddevelopingcountries. Thequestionof···isa__tterofmuchcontentionamongTheproblem···hasbeenwidelydebatedintheworldof···Theinquiryinto··hastriggered/sparkedoffanintensecontroversyintherealmof···e.g.Theinquiryintothemoralityofconductingvariousresearchesandexperimentsonhu__ncloninghastriggeredanintensecontroversyintherealmofscien__对于人类克隆研究与实验的道德性所作的研究已经引起了科学界的激烈争议 适合agree/disagree问题的开头Althoughitiscommonlybelievedthat···thisisactuallynotthecasee.g. Althoughitiscommonlybelievedthatconventionalviewsaboutahealthylifestyleandproperconductarenolongerrelevanttoyoungpeople’sneedstodaythisisactuallynotthecase.Althoughitiswidelyac__ptedthat···thisissimplyuntrueinourday-to-dayexperien__s Althoughitisgenerallyacknowledgedthat···thiscanhardlybeheldtruein__nyreal-lifesituations. Althoughconventionalwisdomhasitthat···therealityofthesituationisoftenfarmorecomplicatedthanthat. 虽然传统大众观念认为···,但是现状却远比这种观念要复杂得多Althoughthere__ivedopinionisthat···theharshrealitiesusuallyturnouttobeacompletelydifferentpicture 虽然大众普遍接受的观点是···,但是无情的现实往往显现出不同的图景e.g.Althoughthere__ivedopinionisthatschoolchildrengenerallybenefitfromwatchingtelevisionandusingotherhigh-techmediaintheirlearningpro__sstheharshrealitiesusuallyturnouttobeacompletelydifferentpicture.Although__nypeoplesubscribetothebeliefthat···thisisinfactacommonmiscon__ptionthatweneedtoclearup 虽然许多人认同这样的观点···,但是事实上这却是一种我们需要澄清的普遍错误观念e.g.Although__nypeoplesubscribetothebeliefthatprovidingpubliclibraryfacilitiesandservi__sisawasteroftaxpayer’smoneythisisinfactacommonmiscon__ptionthatweneedtoclearup.Althoughmostindividualsareconvin__dthat···thisisactuallyapopularmyththatmustbeexploded. 虽然大多数人坚信···,但这却是一种我们必须揭穿的普遍错误观点e.g.Althoughmostindividualsareconvin__dthattheirhappinessiscloselylinkedwiththeleveloftheirfinancialsuc__ssthisisactuallyapopularmyththatmustbeexploded. 表示趋势的句型Therehasbeenagrowingtrendthat··· aninterestingtendencythat/of··· acommonpracti__of/that··· awidespreadphenomenonthat···e.g.Therehasbeenawidespreadphenomenonthatstudentsfromruralareasfinditincreasinglydifficulttoh__eac__sstocollegeoruniversityeducation. Re__ntdecadesh__eseenanincreasedawarenessof···Re__ntdecadesh__ewitnesseda__jortransfor__tionin···e.g.Re__ntdecadesh__ewitnesseda__jortransfor__tioninagriculturaldevelopmentwhereindustrialtechnologiesarebeingemployedandnewvarietiesofcropsarebeingcreatedyetopponentsofthisdevelopmenth__eraisedanumberofdifficultquestions.Frommypointofviewthisisareallycomplicated__tterandweneedfurtherinvestigationstounderstandthewholepicture. b.中立关系Itisworthmentioningthat··· 值得一提的是Itisbynomeans__rtainthat··· 完全不能确定的是Itisfartoosoonthat··· 为时过早的是Itisnotuncommonthat··· 不足为奇的是Itisundeniablethat··· 不可否认的是Itisun__oidablethat 不可回避的是Itisobvious/evident/__nifestthat 明显的是Itisgraduallyborneinon__that 逐渐被某人认识到Itisofgreatinterestthat··· 广为兴趣的是Itisofparamountimportan__that··· 首要的是Itisofgreaturgencythat··· ____的是Itis+副词+suggested/argued/advised/believedthat 普遍认为Itiswidelyac__ptedthat Itisgenerally/commonlybelievedthat 普遍相信的是Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat 众所周知的是Itisstrongly/commonlysuggestedrecommended/advisedthat 强烈建议的是Itissometimesarguedthat 有时候争论的是Thereis/waslittle/nosubstan__that···几乎毫无/没有根据Itisnowithoutsubstan__that···并非没有根据 表达观点的句式Advocatesof······的支持者Opponentsof······的__者 Pointout/argue/claim声称/believe/assert断言/declare宣称/con__ive设想that 表示趋势的句型 Therehasbeenagrowingtrendthat··· aninterestingtendencythat/of··· acommonpracti__of/that··· awidespreadphenomenonthat··· Re__ntdecadesh__eseenanincreasedawarenessof witnesseda__jortransfor__tionin 表示“强调某种状态在特定明显或不明显”的句型Thisisespeciallytrueif/whenweconsiderthefactthat/whenitcomesto/intermsof 当我们考虑··的时候,这一点尤为正确Itisnotevenalwaystruethat··· ···并不是总是正确的 Inclineto=tendto 倾向于 Gain/get/h__edirect/free/ready/unlimited/unrestricted/restricted/equal ac__ssto获得/得到直接/自由/容易/方便/不受限制/受限制/平等/接近的机会e.g.Menandwowenshouldh__eequalac__sstoeducationandemployment. Beaccompaniedby B伴随A Beentitledto=beeligibleto=beauthorisedto 使享有权利,使符合资格e.g.theprivatelyinsuredareentitledtospecialbenfitssuchash__ingthechoi__pftheirowndoctorsandbeingableto__oidelongwaitinglistsforhospitalbeds. H__eandwillcontinueto 现在是并且将来也会继续···e.g.Educationhasbeenandwillcontinuetobe__ntraltothecountry’seconomicperfor__n__inthe21st__ntury. Giveriseto=bringabout=create=generate=provoke负面的=evoke 引起,造成e.g.Computersh__ebroughtabout__nychangesintheworkpla__.H__e/exertaninfluen__/impact/effecton__/sth 起···作用Playaroleinsth 扮演···角色正面:Considerable/enormous/dominant/profound/crucial/beneficialf__ourable/stablizing/pervasive/substantial/lasting/for__tive 相当大的/巨大的/起支配作用的/深远的/有利的/稳定的/广泛的/实际的/对成长或发展重大作用负面:adverseunf__ourable/corrupting/destructivedevastating/disruptive 不利的/腐蚀的/破坏的H__einherentadvantages/disadvantages 有内在的优点/缺点e.g.Intermsofenviro__entalprotectionexportingagriculturalproductsbymeansofairtransportationhasitsinherentdisadvantages. Beinapositiontodo 有条件去做e.g. Becauseoftheexisten__ofexpresstransportsuchasairfreightpeopleinfrigidzoneareinapositiontoacquiremorenutritiousfoodandvegetablefromthetropicalzone. Beadouble-edgedsword ···是一把双刃剑 Equip__withsth=furnish__withsth 装备,使有能力,向···提供 Turnon=hingeon 取决于e.gTheenviro__entalprotectionhingesontheactualactionbythecivilians. AisakeydeterminantofB A是B的决定因素e.g. Inanindividual’scareertenacityisakeydeterminantofsuc__ss. Beanunderlyingfactorin··· 是···潜在/隐含力量e.g. Hu__ncuriosityisanunderlyingfactorinthegrowingpopularityofnewspapers Relyalmostexclusivelyon=dependon 几乎全依靠e.g. Childrenshouldnotalwaysrelyonparent’shelp. Beconsideredas=bethinkofas=beacknowledgedas=beregardedas被认为是 Beserved/usedasabrench__rk Itturnedoutthat=turnouttobe 证明是E.g.theadvan__mentoftechnologyturnsoutbeconducivetothe__nkinds. Beconfrontedwith···=Inthefa__of··· 面临着e.g. beconfrontedwith/inthefa__offier__/stiff/intensecompetition Deserve/requirecareful/full/serious/sufficient/specialconsideration需要仔细/全面/认真/足够/特别考虑Takesthintoconsideration/account 考虑到,顾及 AandBarenotmutuallyexclusive 两者并不互相排斥e.g. Thistwooptionsarenotmutuallyexclusive. Benoex__ptionto··· 也不例外e.g.Thereisnoex__ptiontothisruleinmodernorinac__nttimes. Doesnotne__ssarilymean 并不必然意味着 ···benowacommonpla__··· 司空见惯的事 AandBalike 两者都,同样地 Reachsaturationpoint 到达饱和程度 Endup+doing/adj/insth 以···告终 c.插入语和衔接词Inessen__ 本质上 Intermsof 就···而言 Asthecase__ybe句子or主语+谓语asthecase__ybe宾语 根据具体情况而定,视情况而定e.g.Studentsshouldbegivensufficientautonomyindecidingthecoursestheytakeasthecase__ybe. Moreoftenthannot句子. 通常,往往e.g.Moreoftenthannotitisthesemomentsthatseparatethevictorsfromtherest–becausetheyneverdespairandpressonwhenothersfade.往往就是这些时刻将成功者与其他人区分开来——因为成功者从不绝望,会在他人放弃时选择坚持下去 表示“依我而言”的词组FrommypointofviewFrommyperspectiveTomymindInmyopinionTomywayofthinking 关于Bynomeans的应用Bebynomeansanexclusive/auniqueway 绝不是唯一的方法Bebynomeansconfinedto··· 绝不局限于e.g.Povertyanddeprivationarebynomeansconfinedtothenorthofthecountry.Bebynomeansfortuitous/coincidential 绝非偶然e.g.Theoccurren__ofsuchthingsisbynomeansfortuitous/coincidentalBebynomeansisolated 绝非孤立/个别e.g.Suchcasesthoughnotprevalentarebynomeansisolated.Bebynomeansseparatedfrom 绝不应该脱离e.g.Theoryshouldbynomeansbeseparatedfrompracti__.理论绝对不http://___.iciba.com/%E4%B8%8D/\t_blank应该脱离实际Bebynomeans__rtain 仍未确定的e.g.Itisbynomeans__rtainthatgenetricallymodifiedfoodwillbenefithu__nsinthefuture. 转基因食品能否在未来有益于人类仍是不确定的Bebynomeansaperfectway 绝非完善的方法e.g. Thisisbynomeansaperfectwaytosolvetheproblem. 表示例证的句型···isagoodcaseinpoint=oneexamplewillsuffi__toillustratethispoint=a____ing有说服力的/notorious臭名昭著的exampleis···=···isarepresentativeof··· 表示大量的词组A+形容词+numberof+可数名词+谓语动词复数A+形容词+amountof+不可数名词+谓语动词单数time/money/infor__tion/help/data大量的:__ssive/considerable/enormous/tremendous不成比例的:disproportionate小量的:Limited/moderate/__allAwiderangeof=avast/impressivearrayof=awealthof=ahostof=avarietyof 表示“一系列”的词组Aseriesof=achainof=asequen__of 表示“等等”的词组andsoforth=andsoon=andthelike 表示程度的短语infullmeasure 最大程度地,最大限度地inno__all/some/large/equalmeasure 在很大/某种/很大/同样程度上Tosome/a__rtainextent 在某种/一定程度上Toalesserextent 其次 表示“关于,谈及到,就···而言”的词组Whenitcomesto Withrespectto Inregardto Inrelationto 表示某个时间段的词组Inthemidstof 正值···时候Amid+名词词组 在···当中Underthew__eof+名词 在···浪潮中 表示伴随状态的词组Withtherapiddevelopmentof··· 随着···快速发展Withtheadventof··· 随着···时代的来临Withtheproliferationof··· 随着···扩散Withthehugeexpansionof··· 随着···扩张 表示“不管”的词组Regardlessof=irrespectiveof 表示“考虑到,鉴于”的词组Inthelightof=inviewof 表示“更不用说”的词组nottomention+sth=letalone 表示“对社会规则的遵从,遵守”的词组Inconformitywith=incomplian__with=inaccordan__with 表示“除了之外”的词组Apartfrom···=Otherthan··· 表示“连锁反应”的词组Dominoeffect 多米洛骨牌效应Knock-oneffect 连锁反应 d.积极关系Be__dereadily/freely/publicly/generally__ailablefor/to__可以容易/免费/让公众/普遍得到e.g. Freemedicalcaremustbe__de__ailableforthosetoopoortodoso. Provide/give__deep/penetrating/revealing/fascinatinginsightsintosth给予某人深刻的/有启发性的/发人心省的/生动的见识e.g.Theoldbuidlingincitiescangivepeopleespeciallyteenagersfascinatinginsightsintothechangeofhistory.acquire/advan__/broaden/deepenone’sunderstandingofsth 获得/增进···见识=gain/get/obtaininsightsinto H__ebetteracquaintan__with 更了解···e.g.H__ebetteracquaintan__withthelocalneedsthanthoseinothercountriessothatitutilisethesocialresour__smoreefficiently=h__ebetterknowledgewithe.g.Localpeopleorgover__enth__ebetterknowledgewiththeoperationofcharityorganizationintermsoftheoverseeofdonationsthusas__rtainingthetransparencyoffundarrangementand__oidingmisappropriationofthepublicfund. Become/beproficient/skillfulin/atsth/indoing 精通,熟练e.g.studentshouldbecomeproficientinusingseverallanguages. Instillsthin/into__=inculcatesthin/into__ 灌输某人···e.g.instillanidea/confiden__deeplyinto__ inculcateasenseofresponsibilityin__=impartsthto__ 传授···给某人 Becapableofsth/doingsth有能力的,足以胜任的=becompetenttodosth=Bemorethancapableof···完成有能力e.g.Schoolsshouldequipstudentswithpracticialskillssothatthey arecompetenttofindajobundercurrentfier__competition.Bewell/fullyawareof/that=beconsciousof/that 意识到,注意到e.g. Peopleh__ebeenfullyawareoftheurgencyofenviro__entalprotection.Bethe__jorbeneficiariesfrom=largelybenefitfrom··· 成为最主要的受益人e.g. Inrespectiveofindividualstheyarethe__jorbeneficiariesfromdoingtheirtasksathomeinthisageofthecomputertechnologyBeconducive/helpful/beneficial/instrumentalto··· 有利于对···起作用=beadvantageousto=beofadvantgeto=totheadvantageofe.g.beinstrumentalinbringaboutanendtotheconflict. Anenviro__entconducvietolearning Begivensufficient/greaterautonomyindoing··· 给予足够的/更大的自__e.g.studentsshouldbegivensufficientautonomyindecidingthecoursestheytakeasthecase__ybeBeinthebestinterestof··· 符合···利益e.g.Eventhoughmostcitizensareconsciousthatrecyclinggarbagecanfullyutilisenaturalresour__sinthebestinterestofthewholesocietytheyarestillreluctanttodoso Becomeanindispensablepartof··· 成为···不可分割的一部分e.g.carh__ebecomeanindispennsablepartofourlives. __keuseof=turnsthtogoodaccount=takeadvantageofsth 善用/利用机会e.g.Peopleshouldputthemediatogoodaccount. Weshould__kebetteruseofourresour__s. Breakdown/remove/cross/overcomethebarriers打破/消除/跨越/克服障碍e.g.theybelievethatsportcancrossanybarriers. 他们相信体育可以跨越任何障碍 Getridof··· 摆脱消除不好的感觉情况=rid__/sth/yourselfof__/sth 消除解除=extricate__/sth/yourselffromsth 使摆脱脱离解救挣脱e.g.hehad__nagedtoextricatehimselffrommostofthisofficialduties. Alleviatethehe__yburdenof··· 减轻···重负e.g Stayingathomeforworkandstudycanalleviatethehe__yburdenoftransportandenergyconsumption. Serveausefulfunctionof 起到有用的功能=Performthefunctionof 履行···的功能=Fulfilllavaluablefunctionin 实现一种有价值的功能=Servethepurposeof 起到···的目的=Fulfillaneducationalpurpose 实现一种教育目的e.g. Itissometimesclaimedthatzooperformanimprotantfunctionintheprotectionofendangeredorrarespeciese.g Apartfromservingthepracticalfunctionofgivingpeopleacomfortableshelteragoodbuildingshouldalsofulfillanaesthesticpurpsoebyinvitingtheresidentstoappreciateitsbeautybothinsideandoutside. e.g.Visitingmuseumisnotonlyanenjoyableexperien__foryoungchildrenbutitalsofulfillsanimportantedcuationalpurposebyexposingthemtoarichdepositofhistorycultureandtradition. Be/getaccustomedtodoing/sth 习惯于···=be/getusedtodoing/sthe.g.Studentsshouldnotgetaccustomedtorelyingonothers’help. Adaptyourselftosth/doing 适应新环境=adjustoneselftosth/doinge.g.studentsshouldadjustthemselvestocurrentfier__competition Serve/satisfy/catertotheneedsof··· 满足···要求e.g. satisfy/catertotheneedsoftouristsfromabroad servetheneedsoffuturegenerations Caterforsth 迎合e.g.Cateringforinternationaltoursthelocalgover__entcommitsmoremoneytoimprovelocalinfrastructure. Provideasolidfoundationfor··· 提供巩固的基础e.g. respectandfriendshipprovideasolidfoundationfor__rriage.=Laythefoundationon··· 为···提供基础e.g. Basicscien__laysthefoundationonwhichanyothersu__ectsarebuilt.H__enomoreworriesabout··· 不用再担心e.g.Theownersofcompaniesh__enomoreworriesaboutemployeesnotcomingforworkbecauseofthehe__ysnowstorm.Beimmuneto 不···负面的影响e.g.Thecorporatesectorhasre__inedlargelyimmunetothiscrisis.Immerseoneselfin=Commitoneselftosth 潜心于,专心于e.g.StudentshouldimmersethemselvesinstudyingtheoryinuniversitiesinsteadoflearningpracticalskillReachaconsensuson 达成共识e.g.TheECCouncilofFinan__Ministersfailedtoreachaconsensusonthepa__ofintegration Bebroughtuptodo··· 教养,培养e.g.Itisstandardpracti__thatchildrenarebroughtuptorespectthelaw.通常来说,小孩子接受教育要遵守法律 Keepthepa__with 与···俱进e.g.Anumberofadvan__dprofessionalpersonnelareneededtokeepthepa__withtherapideconomicdevelopment. Withless+名词+动名词组合greaterpossibilitiesof动名词组合willbetakingpla__someday.如果少一点的····更有可能在某天发生e.gWithlesspeopledrivingtoworkorschoolgreaterpossibilitiesofreturningusabalan__inecosystemwillbetakingpla__someday. e.否定关系Serious/distinct/relativelack/shortage/absen__/insufficiency/scarcityof =Belackof/beshortof/bedeficientin/beinneedof 严重地/明显地/相对地缺乏··· Beahurdleto/beahindran__to/beabarrierto 阻碍···=confrontedwith/encounter/erect/putupbarriersto Scratchthesu_____oftheproblem 治标不治本e.g.obviouslythissolutionscratchthesu_____oftheproblem.Finditdifficulttobeimmuneto··· 很难不受···的影响e.g.withthedevelopmentofglobalisationandsocialdevelopmentonecountryfindsitdifficulttobeimmunetoglobalaffairs.Beseverely/grievouslystrickenwithsth=beafflictedwith/by=sufferfrom受煎熬,遭难的,受折磨e.g.Thecountryendsupbeingstrickenwiththeepidemic.Abear/takethebruntofBA首当其冲受到B的不利影响e.g.womenbearthebruntofchildcareduties Schoolwillbearthebruntofcutsingove__entspending. __削减开支,学校将首当其冲受到影响 Fallpreytosth 受害,受坏影响e.g.thenewgover__enthasfallenpreytocorruptionandfraud. 新一届__深受__和欺诈行为之苦 Bevulnerableto 容易受···不好的影响e.g.Theentityispotentiallyvulnerabletocompe_____’smoves. Studentsareusuallyvulnerabletosocialevils.易受到社会恶习腐蚀 Bepronetosth 易于遭受,有做坏事的倾向e.g.tired__lnourishedpeoplearepronetoinfection.Comewithunpleasant/undesirableside-effects···伴随着不好的副作用 Fallvictimto=becomeavictimof 成为···的牺牲品e.g.Vitalpublicservi__sh__efallenvictimtobudgetcuts 一些重要的公众服务项目成了削减预算后的牺牲品 Atakeone’stollonB A对B产生严重不良影响造成重大损失e.g.There__ssionistakingitstollonthehousing__rkets. 经济衰退使住房市场遭受重创 Thepressureoftryingtowinacompetitionhastakenitstollontheirhealth. Illnesshadtakenahe__ytollonher.疾病对她的身体造成极大的损害 Shake/rockthefoundationsofsth 从根本上动摇···e.g.thisissuehasshakenthefoundationsofFrenchpolitics. 这个问题从根本上动摇了法国的__ runcounterto=beatoddswithsth=conflictwith 与···不相符/相矛盾e.g.gover__entinterveninginpeoplesprivatelivesruncountertomoderndemocraticspirit. 动词形式interferein/with=intervenein 干涉,介入名词形式interferen__in/with=interventionin/withe.g.gover__entshouldinterfereinthecoverageofmedia. 动词形式impingeon/upon=encroachon/upon侵犯名词形式impringingon/upon=encroachmenton/upone.g.onecountryshouldnotimpringeonothersinternalaffairs. Bepotentially/rather/highlyhazardousto 对···有潜在/相当/很大的危害e.g.chemicalsthatareharzardoustohu__nbeings Defeattheverypurposeof =rendersthuseless/ineffective 使某物无用/无效e.g.Merelyequippingstudentswithemploymentskills__ydefeattheverypurposeofuniversitiesaseducationalinstitutions. Servenousefulpurpose 不起作用e.g.theexperimentsservenousefulpurpose. Beawashwithsth=beinundatedwithsth 充斥着···e.g.TVnowadaysisawashwithviolentand____ographiccontent Createaviciouscircle 产生恶性循环e.g.Itturnsouttobeaviciouscircleofdestruction/poverty 句子+tothedetrimentof+名词 =Bedetrimentalto 有害于,不利于e.g.Heworkslongerandlongerhourstothedetrimentofhis__rriage. Poseagr__ethreatto···对···构成威胁e.g.Inpresent-daysocietytheproliferationofnon-biodegradabletrashposesagr__ethreattohu__nity.句子+attheexpenseof+名词 以(损害)···为代价e.g.Highproductionratesareoftenachievedattheexpenseofqualityofwork. Benotoriousforsth/doingsth 因···而臭名昭著e.g.Theinternationalfastfoodsh__elongbeennotoriousasakindofjunkfood. Beapatheticto/about=beutterlyindifferentto 对···冷漠/漠然Noth__e__’sbestinterestsatheart 不关心···利益e.g.Peopleintendto__ximizetheirowninterestinsteadofh__ingthebestinterestsofthewholesocietyatheart. Get/growwearyofsth/doingsth=loseinterestin 对···不再热心e.g.studentsgrowwearyoflearningaseriesofhistoricalfact. Bereluctantto=beunwillingto 不愿意e.g.Peoplearereluctanttorecyclegarbageforthereasonthattheycannotacquiredirectbenefitfromit. Turnablindeyeto=shutone’seyestosth 对···视而不见e.g.Thosechildrenh__eagoodlifeandtoturnablindeyetopatrioti__ H__easlackattitudeabout对···持有疏忽的态度Belargelyignored/neglectedby···=losesightof 被···忽略e.g.Strangeasit__yseemthesignifican__ofbasicscien__–the__indrivingfor__behindproductivityhasbeenlargelyignoredbythegeneralpublic. Addictoneselftodoing=get/beirreparably不可收复地/seriouslyaddictedto=indulgeoneselfin=indulgen__in 沉迷,放纵e.g. addictoneselftogamblingdrugelectronicgame____ograhydelightsoflesure安逸Toomuchindulgen__intheInternetgamesormovies__yleadtoasuperficial肤浅的idiot傻子shortofabstractthinkingor__yaggr__atetheisolationofthesinglechildren. Givewaytotemptation=notresistthetemptationto 经不住诱惑e.g.theyoungarenot__tureenoughsothatthey__ynotresistthetemptationtoconductsomeunhealthybeh__iours. Beaccusedof=beprosecutefor/as 被指责/被控告=beontrial审理for=Accuse/prosecute__ofdoing/sth=Astandaccusedof=standtrial/goontrialfor A被控告··· lay/puttheblameforsthon__ 把某事归咎某人e.g.somelaytheblameforfallingexportsonfinancialturmoilsweeping__nyAsiancountries有的人干脆认为造成出口下降的原因是横扫亚洲许多国家的____ becriticisedfor··· 因···受到批评becondemnedfor/by··· 因···受到谴责 宽恕condonee.g.theactionhasbeenwidelycondemnedbyhu__nrightsgroups 这一行动受到____的普遍谴责 Deprive__ofsth 剥夺某人···e.g.moderncitiesdeprivedcity-dwellersoffreshairandthecomfortablepa__oflife. Beexposedto/expose__tosth 使暴露于险境e.g.Thereportrevealedthatworkershadbeenexposedtounac__ptablyhighlevelsofradiation 报告披露了工人们收到有害的__度辐射 Sthprompts/impels__todo 促使···去做e.g.Peerpressureoftenimpelsyongsterstospendex__ssivelyonfancyclothesandac__ssories首饰 If···somethingwillensue 如果···,不好的现象接着发生e.g.ifparentsneglecttheiroffspringlackofdisciplineandrespectwillensue. Sthis/seemquite/totally/whollyunwarranted/unjustifiable很不合理e.g.experimentainguponlabani__lswithoutryingtoalleviatetheirpainisunwarranted/unjustifiable. Itisawasteoftime/money/effortdoingsth 浪费时间/金钱去做···=squander=fritterawaytime/energy/money/fortune f.比较关系UnlikeABComparedwithABA···while/whereasB···Incomparison/incontrast/bycontrastB g.因果关系归因类根本原因Rootin=bedeeplyrootedin=betherootcauseof ···是根本原因e.g.Thesetraditionsweredeeplyrootedinlocalcustom.Bethechiefculpritof··· ···是罪魁祸首e.g.themodernfarmingtechniquesseemstobethechiefculpritofthecurrentcrisis.主要原因Bea__jorcontributingfactortoBeadrivingfor__toBelargelyattributedto结果betheresultof原因···的原因是···e.g. Theneedforshort-termprofitsseemstobethedrivingfor__behindthesemergersThesignifican__ofbasicscien__asthe__indrivingfor__behindproductivityhasbeenlargelyignoredbythegeneralpublic可能原因Beattributableto可能由于Belargelydueto 很大可能是由于e.g. Thepublicignoran__ofbasicscien__researchislargelyduetoitsunpredictablevalue. Puttheblameforsthon__把某事归咎于某人Beblamedon··· 把···归咎于,归罪于e.g.somepeopleblametheincreasinggapbetweenthepoorandtherichonunfairsocialsystems.Onaccountof=dueto=owingto=becauseofOnaccountoffier__competitionpeopleh__enochoi__buttoworkovertimeandputmoreeffortintojobsThereasonfor···liesinthenatureof···来源于···的特性Thereasonforthisunfortunatefactliesinthenatureofbasicscien__Accountfor 是···的原因Re__ntpressureatwork__yaccountforhisbeh__iour 目的类Forthesakeof=forthepurposeof +名词Companiesandinstitutesshouldfinanciallysupportscientistswhocommitthemselvestobasicscien__notjustforthesakeofprofitbutforthedevelopmentofscien__aswell.Inexpectationof=inhopeof =inorderto =withaviewtodoing=withtheaimof =inanattemptto= inaneffortto 为了··· h.建议关系Donotslackentheirvigilan__against 不可放松警惕e.g.Donotslackentheirvigilan__againstthepossibleabuseofsuchatremendouspowersExercise/__intainconstant/continued/extravigilan__against实行/保持时刻的/始终的警惕Be/keepalertto 对···保持警惕e.g.Peopleshouldbealerttoconditionsthat__yindicatepossiblemisstatementduetoerrorandfraud. H__enochoi__/alternativebutto··· 别无选择,唯有···e.g.Thegover__enthasnochoi__buttotakefeasibleactiontoprotecttheenviro__ent. Keepawaryeyeon__/sth=Takeaverycautiousapproach= Castadiscriminateeyeon密切注意e.g.Castadiscriminateeyeontheirwayofpresentationcommentsandimplictassumptions Becautiousof=Bewaryof 小心翼翼的,谨慎的e.g.Weshouldbewaryofusingastrongformofoutputcontroltoencourage__rtainscientistwhilediscouragingothers takepriorityover=giveprioritiesto··· 优先,优先权e.g. theimprovementofpovertyshouldtakepriorityoverthespa__exploitation. put···ontopagenda=beatoppriority Beontopoftheagenda=behighontheagenda当务之急e.g.financialsecuritywashighonthelistofpriorities. attachhe__ierweightto=giveserious/fullestconsiderationtoe.g.enviro__entalconsiderationsshouldbeattachedhe__ierweightduringthedecision-__kingpro__ss. holdmoreresponsibilityfor=beheldaccountablefor···为某人应对某事负责e.g.Thegover__entshouldbeheldaccountableforcitizen’shealth takeaccountof=takesthintoaccount/consideration 把某事考虑在内e.g.thesefiguresdonottakeaccountofchangesintherateofinflation. Somestepsmustbetakentoreversethistrend···e.g. Sin__basicscien__isthefoundationofmosttechnologicaldevelopmentssomestepsmustbetakentoreversethistrend. Takealongviewof 长远打算 unless+句子,主句.如果没有,···unlessthereisaneffectivein__ntiveprogramforrecyclingpeoplecouldnoth__eenoughmotivationtoputeffortintoenviro__entalprotection. Bearsthinmind=bearinmindthat+句子 注意,记住 i.结尾句型Giventheaboveargumentitisreasonabletoconcludethat可以合理去推断e.g.Giventheabovearugmentitisreasonabletoconcludethatifeverymemberofthesocietyisawareoftherelationshipbetweenhu__nsandnatureandstopstheirdestructivebeh__iouritisgoingtoalleviatethepressureofecosystem.BasedontheaboveargumentI con__dethat 我承认···e.g.BasedontheabovearugmentIcon__dethatusingairfreightcomeswithsomeunpleasantside-effects.Iamconvin__dthat 我相信···e.g.Iamconvin__dthataslongaspeopleturnthe__ssivemediatogoodaccounttheycanconstantlybenefitfromitsf__ourablefunctions.···outweigh···在···影响或重要性方面超过e.g.Theadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages. Part
7.本人的拙笔--7分作文以下为我写的,经过考官评分的7分作文相信大家看了之后就能体会到熟练掌握上述列举的160+句型所带来的好处和__唯一需要担心的是,怎么控制不要让字数超过300字 本人建议,若想快速提高写作分数,必须是要多练笔多总结多修改千万不要直接抄袭别人的模版,千万不要背别人的观点,更不要迷信所谓的满分作文我最疯狂的时候可以写4篇大作文,2篇小作文重点不是在写,重点是写完之后的反思与总结上述的所有句型,词汇和__都是在我不断的练习当中总结和归纳的我觉得,每个人一旦习惯了不断总结与反思的这样一个做事模式的话,没有什么是攻克不了的紫色字体为最新uploadArgumentation–社会类In__nycountriestraditionalfoodsarebeingrepla__dbyinternationalfastfoods.thisish__inganegativeeffectonbothfamiliesandsocieties.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree Re__ntdecadesh__ewitnessedanobvioustrendthatinternationalfastfoodsh__egraduallytakenthepla__oftraditionalfoodsin__nyregions.Althoughfastfoods__ybringaboutsomedirectbenefitsinpeoplesdailylivesIpersonallybelievethatthesefoodsexertanadverseimpactonbothfamiliesandsocieties.Itisundeniablethatinternationalfastfoodssuchashamburgersandfriedchickensh__ehelpedpeoples__etimeforcookingandextricatedthemfromaseriesofcomplicatedcookingpro__ssesthatareusedincookingtraditionalfoods.Thisisespeciallytruewhenweconsiderthefactthatnowadaysmoreandmorepeopleareparticipatinginthelabour__rketandundertakinganenormousamountofwork.Howeverthenegativeeffectsindu__dbythesefastfoodsshouldnotbeignoredsin__theyareactuallyorpotentiallydetrimentaltoindividualsandsocieties.Forfamiliesoneofthemostdirectinfluen__sindu__d引导byfastfoodsisthattheyworsenthequalityofpeopleshealth.Itiswidelyac__ptedthatinternationalfastfoodsh__elongbeencriticisedasjunkfoodbecausetheycontainaconsiderablenumberofcalorieswithhighlevelofheatandfat.Ifpeoplegetaccustomedtoeatingthesefoodsthey__ybeeasilystrickenwithsomeseverechronicdiseasessuchasheartdiseasehighbloodpressurecan__rsandsoforth.Thereforethesefoodstosomeextentrender使变得peopleweakincombatingdiseases.Forsocietiestheintroductionandthegrowingpopularityofinternationalfastfoodsdirectlyandindirectlytakesitstollontheprotectionoftraditionalculture.Itisgenerallyacknowledgedthatthecultureof___tsandfoodsisanindispensablepartoftraditionalculturewhichreflectstheuniquecharacterofanation.Iflocalpeopleprefertoeatfastfoodsratherthancooktraditionalfoodstherecipes烹饪法oftraditionalfoodswillgraduallydisappear.Consequently localcitizens__yloseasenseofculturalidentityandsocialbelonging.Hen__thisisunf__ourabletothecarryingforwardoftraditionalculture.Toconcludealthoughinternationalfastfoods__yprovidepeoplewithsomedirectbenefitstheyposeaseriousthreattopeople’shealthandthepreservationoftraditionalculture.Thereforepeopleshouldpayattentiontothenegativeeffectsofthesefastfoodsandproperlychangetheir___tstructure.考官评分按照上述4项评分规则7,8,8,8 总分
7.5 Argumentation–__类__nypeopleartsandmusicdonotimprovethequalityoflifethegover__entshouldspendmoneyonotherthingsratherthantheartssuchasmusicandpaintingtowhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree Theissueofwhethergover__entsshouldspendmoneyontheartshassparkedoffanintensedebate.Somepeoplearguethatartandmusicareconducivetotheimprovementofpeople’slives;whileothersclaimsthatitisofgreaturgencyforgover__entstoallocatemoneytotheareasthatareinneed.Tomywayofthinkingthegover__entsshouldgiveprioritytosomebasicsocialsystemssuchaseducationandmedicareprogramsinsteadofsubsidizingthearts.Tobeginwithartandmusicarenotthekeydeterminantofagoodqualityoflife.Itisnotuncommonthattheartssuchasmusicandpaintingareameaninglesssymbolto__nybecausefromtheirperspectivethoseartscannotgeneratedirectbenefitsforthem.Thereforesubsidizingartistcannothelpthepublicgetridofthehe__yburdensoftheirlives.Inadditionitismoreurgentforgover__entstocommitmoneytosomefundamentalsocialsystemslikeeducationandpublichealth.Thisissimplybecauseawell-roundedsocialsystemistheguaranteeoftheenhan__mentofthequalityofpeople’slives.Investingineducationisagoodcaseinpoint.Itisofparamountimportan__toequipthepublicwithabundantknowledgeandimpactaproperoutlookonlifetothem.Consequentlythecitizenscanbecomecompetentenoughto__intaintheirdailylivesbymeansoftheirownefforts.Obviouslyitismoneyandknowledgethatcontributetotheimprovementofpeople’slives.Admittedlyartsandmusictosomeextentserveavaluablefunctioninenrichingpeople’sdailylivesandhelpthemtofosterapositiveattitudetowardslife.Howevertheyarebynomeansauniquetooltoachievethisgoal.Infactartandmusicarenotanactualprescriptiontoextricatepeoplefromanarrayofworriesandburdens.ToconcludeIcon__dethattheartscanplayaf__ourableroleinimprovingthequalityofpeople’slives.NeverthelessIamconvin__dthatgover__entsshouldattachhe__ierweighttoothersectorssuchaseducationandmedicalcarewhichareconsideredasanessentialwaytoenablepeopletoliveade__ntlife. Argumentation–__类__nypeoplearguethatnowadaysconsumersbuylotsofgoodstheydon’tactuallyneedbecausetheyareinfluen__dbyadvertisements.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree Althoughitiswidelyac__ptedthattheprevalen__ofadvertisementsplaysapositiveroleinstimulatingconsumerstogoshoppingitisnottruetoconsideradvertisementasthechiefculpritofthefactthatconsumersbuyahostofthingsthattheydonotneed.Infactsomesocialfactorssuchaspeerinfluen__and__lebrityeffectcontributetothisphenomenon.ThereforeIdisagreewiththisstatement.Itisundeniablethatadvertisementsh__eexertedaconsiderableimpactontriggeringpeopletobuygoods.Someadvertisers__yexaggeratethequalityofproductsinanattempttomisleadcustomerstherebypromotingsalesofproducts.Consequentlycustomersbearthebruntoftheseadvertisementsandpurchaseanarrayofuselessgoods.Howeverwiththeenfor__mentofrelevantlawsintherealmofprotectionofconsumers’rightstheadvertisementsarenolongerthe__incausetoleadconsumerstobuythingsthattheydonotneed.Infactpeerinfluen__isattributedtothissituation.Withtheimprovementoflivingstandardsandtheincreaseofdisposalincomespeopletendtocomparewiththeirpeersandflaunttheirwealthsothattheycanenjoythesenseofaccomplishmentandvanity.Asaresultpeoplearegraduallyaddictedtobuyinggoodsespeciallyluxuriousgoodsforthepurposeofgratifyingtheirvanity.Obviouslythoseproductsservenohelpfulfunctioninsatisfyingtheirrealneeds.Inadditionsomepeopleespeciallyyoungteenagersaresignificantlyinfluen__dbythe__lebritiesthatendorsetheproducts.Theytendtoimitatetheiridolswithaviewtoexpressingtheirloveandspiritualsupportforthosestars.Accordinglythey__ybuytheproductsthattheiridolsareinf__ourof.Hen__suchpurchasingbeh__iourisnotactuatedbytheneedsofthoseproductsToconcludeadvertisementsh__ea__rtaininfluen__oncustomer’spurchasingbeh__iour.Neverthelesspeerinfluen__and__lebrityeffectarethe__jorcauseofpeoplebuyingavastnumberofgoodsthattheydonotactuallyneed. Argumentation–犯罪类Givingdetaileddescriptionsofcrimebynewspaperandtelevisionsomeonesaysitcould__kebadconsequen__;thiskindofmediashouldberestricted.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree. Theissueofwhether__ssmediashouldgivedetaileddescriptionsofcrimeisofgreatcon__rntothepublic.Frommyperspectiveitexertsanadveseimpactonindividualsandsociety.Thereforethemediashouldbeconstrainedintheamountofdetailstheyreport.Admittedlygivingdetaileddescriptionsofcrimecanserveasawarningtopotentialcriminalswhichredu__sthepossibilityoftheoccurren__ofsimilarcrimes.Alsoithelpspeopletostrengthentheawarenessofcrime-preventionbypopularizingtheprotectiveactionsagainstcrime.Howeverthenegativeinfluen__sresultingfromthesedetailedillustrationsofcrimeshouldnotbeignored.Tobeginwithvictimswhosufferfromcrimebearthebruntofit.Givingdetaileddemonstrationsofcrimetosomeextentfor__sthosevictimstoexperien__thenight__reagain.Consequentlyitwillleadthemtobeafflictedwithchronicpsychologicalproblemssuchasnervousnessanxietyfearandsoforth.Alsothoseprograms__ygivethepublicanillusionthattheyaresurroundedbyaconsiderablenumberofwould-becriminals.Obviouslypeople__yloseasenseofsocialsecurityandfinditdifficulttotrustothers.Underthiscircumstan__thealienationofinterpersonalrelationshipswillensue.Inadditionthoseprograms__ygivesomewould-bewrongdoersachan__toimitatetheanti-socialbeh__ioursthatweredescribedintheprograms.Itseemsthatthoseshowsdonothingbutindirectlyencouragesometocommitacrime.Asaresultthewholesocietywillfallpreytoit.ToconcludeIcon__dethatgivingdetaileddescriptionsofcrimecanserveapositivefunctionincombatingthecrime.NeverthelessIamconvin__dthatitcomeswith__rtainunpleasantside-effectswhicharedetrimentaltobothindividualsandsociety.Thereforethiskindofmediashouldberestricted. Argumentation–__类 Somepeoplethinkitistheresponsibilityforgover__enttoensurethatpeopleh__ehealthylifestyles.Othersthinkpeopleshouldh__eafreefortheirownlifestylesdecisions. Theissueofwhethergover__entshouldholdresponsibilityforpeople’shealthylifestylehassparkedoffanintensedebate.Tomymindgover__entsshouldrespectpeople’srightsondecidingtheirlifestyles.Advocatesofgover__ent’sdominantroleinpeople’slifestylesclaimthatthefunctionsofagover__entandthecostsofunhealthylifestylesdeterminethatgover__entsh__eanobligationto__kesurethatpeopleh__ehealthylifestyles.Tobeginwiththepurposeofestablishmentofagover__entistofulfilltheessentialfunctionof__intainingsocialstability.Simultaneouslyhealthylifestylesofcitizenslaythefoundationofsocialorder.Hen__ensuringthatpeopleh__ehealthylifestylesisconducivetosocialharmonyaswellasperformingofgover__ent’sfunctions.Inadditionwithoutproperlifestylesindividualsandsocietiesalikewouldfallvictimtoitsdestructiveinfluen__.Itisnotuncommonthataconsiderableextensionofunhealthylifestyleisassociatedwithsomeundesirableconsequen__s.Drugandalcoholabuseisagoodcaseinpoint.Iflocalgover__entsdonotlimitthemisuseofdrugandalcoholanincreaseincrimerateandwidespreadvandali__willensue.Ontheotherhandopponentsarguethatitispointlessforgover__enttointerfereincivilianprivatelife.Firstofallhealthylifestyleisanabstractcon__ptandbynomeansconfinedtoadefinedaswellasuniqueprescription.Thatmeansitiscostlyandevenimpossibleforgover__enttoensurethatpeopleh__elifestylesinconformitywiththedefinitionsetbythegover__ent.Evenifthegover__entcandosoitinevitablyleadstostifletheexpressionofdiversepersonality.Furthermoregover__ent’sinterventioninpersonallifestyleinno__allmeasuredeprivespeopleof_______ofchoi__s.Thisisespeciallyunac__ptableinmoderndemocraticcountriesbecauseitruncountertothespiritofdemocracythathu__nrightsshoulddeservefullconsiderationandrespect.Anyobstaclestotherealizationofreasonablehu__nrightsareunwarrantedbythepublic.ToconcludeIcon__dethatgover__entcanplayadominantaswellasf__ourableroleinthedailylifeofcitizens.Howeverthisdoesnotne__ssarilymeanthatgover__entcaninterferewithpeopleprivatelife.Ibelievethatciviliansareentitledtoliveinawaythattheywishandh__ea_______ofchoi__intermsoftheirlifestyles.考官评分按照上述4项评分规则7,8,8,8 总分
7.5 Report–社会类 Peoplenowcanperformsomeeverydaytaskssuchasshoppingandbankingaswellasbusinesstransactionswithoutmeetingotherpeoplefa__tofa__.Whataretheeffectsofthisdevelopmentonanindividualsandonsocietyasawhole WiththeadventoftheAgeoftheInternetthepatternofpeople’sinteractionandcommunicationhasbecomediversewhichexertsaprofoundimpactonbothindividualsandsociety.ForindividualsthepervasiveuseoftheInternethelpspeoples__etimeandenhan__theefficiency.Soconvenientistheapplicationoftelecommunicationandonline-shoppingthatpeopleareextricatingthemselvesfromsuchundesirablefactorsastrafficcongestionbadweatherandtightscheduleandsoforth.Howeverover-indulgen__intheInternetpotentiallyrenderspeopleasasl__eofinternetandcomputer.Duetotheabsen__offa__-to-fa__interviewandcommunicationpeoplearegoingtobegeographicallyaswellasemotionallyisolatedfromeachotherwhichfurther__kespeopleloseasenseofidentityandsocialbelonging.Forsocietyindustriessuchaselectroniccommer__andonline-businessh__ebecome__jorbeneficiariesofthistendency.Thisissimplybecausetheinteractionandcommunicationisnolongerconfinedtogeographicalimpediment.Withincreasingpopularityofonlineshoppingandbankingconsumptionandinvestmentundoubtedlyflourishwhichcanservedasadrivingfactortofacilitatethesustainabledevelopmentofsocialeconomy.However__ny__allandmediumsizedenterprises__yfallvictimtothew__eofelectronicbusinessonaccountofinsufficiencyofmoneyandtechnologytodeveloponlinetransactionsystem.Inadditionunemploymentrate__ybedrivenupbecause__nyjobpositionsh__eandwillcontinuetoberepla__dbyonlineauto__tictransactionsystems.ToconcludeIcon__dethatthedevelopmentoftelecommunicationtechnologyandinternetcomeswithsomeunpleasantside-effects.Howeveritspositiveeffectsoutweighitsnegativeones.Aslongaspeopleturntheapplicationofelectronictransactionsystemtogoodaccountbothindividualsandsocietywillprofitfromit.考官评分按照上述4项评分规则7,8,8,8 总分
7.5 Argumentation--教育类Somepeoplethinkthatschoolsshouldselectstudentsaccordingtotheiracademicabilitieswhileothersbelievethatitisbettertoh__estudentswithdifferentabilitiesstudytogether.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion. Theissueofwhetheracademicabilitiesshouldbeservedasanonlyreliablestandardintermsofselectingstudentshassparkedoffanintensedebate.InthisessayIaimatdiscussingbothsidesoftheproblemandputupmyownopinion.Ontheonehandadvocatesoftheofacademicresultsclaimthatitismoreeffectiveaswellasfairerforschoolstoadoptanacademy-orientedapproachtoselectstudents.Tobeginwithschoolsaresetuptofulfilltheeducationalfunctionofimpartingagreatdealamountofknowledgesuchasliberalartsandscien__tostudents;whilestudentsgotoschool__inlyforthepurposeoffosteringacademicability.Accordinglyitisunderstandablethatsometakeitforgrantedthatacademicresultscanserveasaneffectivebench__rkforassessingstudents’capability.Besidesthisitiswidelyac__ptedthatitisarelativelyo__ectiveandfairasses__entsystemtoallstudentsandbetterredu__thedisputeofunfairtreatments.Oneexamplewillsuffi__toillustratethispoint.Otherthanacademic__rkeducatorsfinditdifficulttocomparetheabilityofstudentwhoisproficientatpaintingandwhoisskillfulatsports.Whoeverischosenbyschoolscouldnotensuretheabsolutefairnessando__ectivityoftheselection.Ontheotherhandopponentsofonlycon__ntrationonacademicabilitiesarguethattheacademicresultisbynomeansanexclusivewaytoevaluatestudents’capabilities.Firstandforemostschoolsarenotapla__wherestudentsareturnedintopedants.Insteaditisconsideredasaneducationalplatformforstudentstodeveloptheirversatileskillsandgrowintoapersonwhogetsaccustomedtotheneedsofthesociety.Onlyfocusingonacademicskillsinevitablyleads__nywhoareshortofacademicstudybutgoodatothersu__ectstoloseopportunitiestopromotetheirtalents.Inadditionifstudentswithdifferentabilitiescanstudytogetheritisoutofquestionthatallthestudentswillbenefitfromsuchacombination.Thisissimplybecauseithelpsstudentscomplementeachotherandgivethemmotivationaswellaschan__stolearnmorefromeachother.ToconcludeIcon__dethatjudgingstudentsbyacademicabilityhelpsschoolsselectproperstudents.NeverthelessIamconvin__dthatallowingstudentswith__nytalentstostudytogetheroutweightheformerview.考官评分按照上述4项评分规则7,8,8,8 总分
7.5 Argumentation–环保类 Airtransportisincreasinglyusedtoexportfruitsandvegetablestocountrieswheretheycannotbegrownorareoutofseason.Somepeoplesaythisisagoodthingwhileotherpeoplethinkitcannotbejustified.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion. Theissueofwhetherexportingfruitsandvegetablebymeansofairtransportisconducivetothesocietyisofgreatcon__rntothepublic.Somepeoplearguethatexportingfoodbenefitpeopleinbothexportingandimportingcountrieswhileothersclaimthatairfreightposeaseriousthreattoenviro__ent.Tomymindpeoplewillbecomea__jorbeneficiaryfromsuchtradeiftheycandevelopenviro__ental-friendlyfuelforairtransportItiswidelybelievedthatusingairtransportforthepurposeoftheexportofagriculturalproductstocountrieswheretheycannotbegrownoroutofseasoncanh__eabeneficialinfluen__onbothimportingandexportingcountries.Forimportingcountriesthoseagriculturalproductssubstantiallyenrichthe___toflocalcitizensandimprovethenutritionstructure.AconvincingexampleisthatpeopleinFrigidZonewouldbynomeansh__eac__sstotropicalfoodwithouttheexportoffarmprodu__.Becauseoftheexisten__ofexpresstransportsuchasairfreightthosepeopleareinapositiontoacquireamoreabundantsupplyoffoodandvegetable.Intermsofinternationaltradeexportcountries__ybecomea__jorbeneficiaryfromthissituationbecauseithelpsexpandthe__rketoffarmprodu__ac__leratethesalesofagriculturaloutputandimprovethewell-beingofdomesticfarmers.Howeveritisalso__nifestthatintermsofenviro__entalprotectionexportingagriculturalproductsbymeansofairtransportationhasitsinherentdisadvantages.Tobeginwithitac__leratesthedepletionoffossilfuelthatisnon-renewableresour__s.Sofartherehasnotbeencompletesubstitutionforoil.Weshouldnotpursueshort-termprofitattheexpenseofthesustainabledevelopment.Alsothetoxicfumes–suchassulphurdioxidereleasedfromtheaircraftarethechiefculpritofatmosphericcontamination.Consequentlypeopleareun__oidablyafflictedwithrespiratorydiseases.Otherthantoxicgasesgreenhousegazesi.e.carbondioxideworsentheglobalwarmingandthenpotentiallyindu__thechangeofglobalcli__te.ToconcludeIcon__dethatusingairtransportcomeswithsomeundesirableside-effects.Neverthelessitisratherone-sidedtodenytherationalityofthisphenomenon.Peopleshoulddevelopanewenviro__ental-friendlyenergyforaircraftsothatpeoplecanconstantlybenefitfromtheexportofagriculturalproducts.考官评分按照上述4项评分规则8,8,8,8 总分8。