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无老师力荐iBT新托福综合写作满分范文TPO1范文Thelecturerclaimsthatthenewpolicywhichallowspeopletoworkfourdaysaweekinsteadoffivewillh__enegativeeffectsforcompaniesaswellassociety.Thisclaimisnotinagreementwiththatofthereadingpassagewhichsuggeststhatsuchapolicywillbebeneficial.Accordingtothelectureacompanythatallowsemployeestoh__efewerworkinghoursislikelytohiremorepeopletoensurethatitmeetsnor__llevelsofproductivity.Ifthisoccursexpensesfortrainingandmedicalinsuran__willinevitablyrise.Thereadingpassagebycontrastsuggeststhatemployeeswhoenjoymoreleisuretime__kefewermistakesandworkmoreefficientlyleadingtoincreasedprofitsfortheenterprise.Thesecondpointofdifferen__betweenthelectureandthereadingpassagecon__rnstheimpactofthepolicyontheunemploymentrate.Thelecturerassertsthatforthesakeofs__ingmoneyemployersmightraisetheirexpectationsof4-dayemployeesratherthanrecruitmorepeople.Consequentlyemployeeswhowork4dayswillbefor__dtofinishwhattheydidin5dayspreviouslyandnoadditionaljobswillbecreated.Finallythelecturerarguesthatunderthenewpolicyemployeeswillexperien__notonlydecreasedqualityoflifeasshorterworkinghourswilltranslateintolesspaybutalsofewerchan__stobepromotedtosupervisorypositions.Howeverthereadingpassagecontendsthatmoreleisurehourscancreateopportunitiestostrengthenfamilytiesandallowemployeestodevelopprivateinterests__kingthemfeelmoresatisfiedwiththeirlives.TPO2(ETS满分版)Thelecturertalksaboutresearchconductedbyafirmthatusedthegroupsystemtohandletheirwork.Hesaysthatthetheorystatedinthepassagewasverydifferentandsomewhatinaccuratewhencomparedtowhathappenedinreality.Firstsomemembersgotfreerides.Thatissomedidn’tworkhardbutgotrecognitionforthesuc__ssnontheless.Thisalsoindicatesthatpeoplewhoworkedhardwerenotgivenrecognitiontheyshouldh__egotten.Inotherwordstheyweren’tgiventheopportunityto“shine”.Thisdirectlycontradictswhatthepassageindicates.Secondgroupswereslowinprogress.Thepassagesaysthatgroupsaremoreresponsivethanindividualsbecauseofthenumberofpeopleinvolvedandtheiraggregatedresour__s.Howeverthespeakertalksabouthowthefirmfoundoutthatgroupswereslowerthanindividualsindecision__king.Groupsneededmoretimeformeetingswhicharene__ssarypro__duresindecision__king.Thiswasanotherpla__whereexperien__contradictedtheory.Thirdinfluentialpeoplemightemergeandleadthegrouptowardsgloryorfailure.Iftheinfluentpeoplearegoingintherightdirectiontherewouldbenoproblem.Butincaseswheretheygointhewrongdirectionthereisnobodythathasenoughinfluen__tocounterthedecision__de.Inotherwordsthegroupmightturnintoadictatorshipwiththeinfluential_____astheleaderandmightbecomelessflexibleinitsthinking.Theymightbecomeone-sidedandthusfailtosuc__ed.Ratingannotation On__youcanreadpastwhatseemtobetheresultsofpoortypingthisBench__rk5doesanex__llentjobofpresentingthepointsaboutthecontributionandrecognitionofgroupmembersaswellasaboutspeedofgroupdecisions.Thefinalparagraphcontainsonenoti__ableerror“influent”whichisthenusedcorrectlytwosenten__slater“influential”.Overallthisisasuc__ssfulresponseandscoredwithinthoughperhapsnotatthetopofthe5level.TPO3(满分范文)ThelecturerevisestheideapresentedinthetextthatRembrandtwasnottheartistwhopaintedthefamouspaintingPortraitofanElderlyWo__ninaWhiteBonnet”.Theinconsistencybetweenthewhitecapwhichidentifiesthewo__nasaservantandtheexpensivefurcollarshewearsdissolvesastheProfessorexplainsthatthefurcollarwasapparentlypaintedovertheoriginalpaintingtoincreaseitsworthbydisplayinganaristocraticwo__n.Inadditiontheassumptionthatlightandshadowinthepaintingdonotfittogetherisrefutedbythefactthatintheoriginalpaintingthewo__nwearsalightcloththatilluminatedherfa__.ThusthepresentationoflightandshadowwasindeedveryrealisticandaccurateasitischaracteristicofRembrandt’spaintings.Finallythemysteryofthepanelconsistingofpatchesgluedtogetherisalsosolvedinthelecture.Actuallythewoodpanelwaslaterenlargedto__keitmoregrandandvaluablebuttheoriginalpaintingwaspaintedonasinglepanelasRembrandtwouldh__edoneit.FurthermorethewoodisofthesametreeusedinotherRembrandtpaintingsliketheSelf-PortraitwithaHat”.Allthisinfor__tionpointstoRembrandtasthepainterofthecontroversialpainting.TPO4(满分版)Theprofessoractuallycontradictsthestatements__deinthepassage.Sheisoftheviewthatdinosaursarenotendothermsi.e.theywerenotabletokeeptheirbodytemperatureataconstantrate.Theprofessorcontradictstheissueofdinosaursbeingendothermsbasedonthe__ailabilityoffossilsbeing__ailableinthepolarregionsshesaythatthepolarregionsinthosedayswerenotascoldastheyaretodayi.eatleastwarmenoughfordinosaurstolive.Duringharshwintersshesaysthatthereisapossibilityofthedinosaursactuallymigratingtowarmerregions.Theissueoflegpositionandmovementbeingusedasareasontoclassifythedinosaursasendothermsdoesnotpleasetheprofessoreither.Shesaysthatdinosaurshadlegsundertheirbo___stosupporttheirhugebo___si.ethelegsunderthebodyofthedinosaurwereactuallytosupportthehugeweightofthedinosaurandnottoprovideitwithabodystructurelikeendothermswhichisactuallysuitedforrunning.Theprofessoracknowledgesthepresen__ofh__ersianc____sbutalsopointsoutthatthatthefossilsshowthepresen__ofgrowthrings.Theseringsoccurduetothethickeningofthebone.Thethickeningindicatesthatthedinosaursweren’tactuallygrowingcontinuouslybutwereexperiencingperiodsofrapidgrowthandperiodsofnogrowthinsuc__ssion.Thispattern.Shesaysischaracteristicofnonendothermicani__ls.Thusitcanbeinferredthattheprofessorchallengesthepassagebygivingreasonsastowhyshethinksthatthedinosaurisnotanendotherm.TPO5Theauthorofthereadingpassageproposesthreetheoriesaslikelyexplanationsofthepri__ryfunctionofChacoCanyonhousesgrantstructuresbuiltintheI2th__ntury.Thelecturerhoweverpointstotheinaccuraciesineachofthesetheories.Thelecturerarguesthatthemodestnumberoffirepla__sinthesestructuresisincontradictionwiththehugesizeofthesehousesindicatingthatthesestructurescouldnoth__ebeenusedforResidentialpurposes.TheReadinghoweverdrawscomparisonsbetweentheChacohousesandothersimilarlargeResidentialstructuresinsupportoftheResidentialtheory.Thesecondtheorythatthehouseswereusedforfoodstorageisalsorejectedbythelecturer.Heexplainsthatapla__thathadbeenusedforstoring__izewouldh__e__nytra__sofscattered__izewhichisnotthecaseintheareaoftheChacoCanyonhouses.Thisprovesthatthefoodstoragetheoryisunlikely.Finallyregardingthethirdtheorythe__remonytheorythelecturercontendsthatthepresen__ofbrokenpotsclosetothegreathousesdoesnotoffersufficientproofthatthiswasapla__for__remonialactivities.Hearguesthatthereareother__terialssuchaspie__sofconstructiontrashfoundalongwiththebrokenpotswhichsuggestthatthesepotswereprobablynotusedfor__remonialpurposesbutinsteadwerediscardedbyconstructionworkersuponcompletionofthegreathouses.TPO6Thelectureraddresseseachofthethreecritici__sofcommunalonlineencyclopediasmentionedintheReadingpassage.Thelectureradmitsthatcommunalonlineencyclopediaslikeanyreferen__book__ycontainerrorsbutsheclaimsthattheseerrorscanbecorrectedmuchmoreeasilyandquicklythanthoseprintedinapaperencyclopedia.TheReadingpassageincontrastpointstotheinaccuracyofinfor__tioninonlineencyclopediaspresentingtheargumentthaterrorsintheseresour__sareduetolackofprofessionalknowledgeamongcontributors.Thelecturerthengivestwostrategiesthath__ebeenprovenveryeffectiveinprotectingonlineencyclopediasfrom__liciousalteration.Sheexplainsthatcontentsthatconsistofindisputablefactsarestoredandpresentedinaread-onlyfor__tsothatnobodycan__kechangestothem.Inadditionshesaystherearespecialistswhoconstantlymonitorcontentsonlinesothattheycanquicklyremoveasuspiciouschangeon__itisdetected.Thelectureralsochallengesthefinalpointinthereadingregardingthenatureoftopicscoveredinonlineencyclopedias.Shesaysthatbecauseofvirtuallyunlimitedspa__ontheInternet.thereisnoneedtoworryaboutwhatisimportantenoughforinclusioninanonlineencyclopedia.Moreoverthegreatervarietyoftopicsinonlineencyclopediasmoretrulyreflectsthegenuineinterestsofthegeneralpublicevenifsomeofthesetopicsarelessseriousoracademicthanthoseintraditionalencyclopedias.TPO7Thelectureandthereadingpassagegivecontradictoryopinionsonthetopicofeco__rtificationaformofaccreditationconferredbyoninternationalagencyinrecognitionofacompanyseco-friendlypracti__s.Thepassageexplainsthatitisnotne__ssaryforAmericanwoodcompaniestopursueeco__rtificationwhilethelectureprovidesseveralcounterargumentstothisview.FirstthelecturerarguesthatthereadingpassageistoogeneralinitsstatementthatAmericanconsumersrejectadvertisingcompletely.HeassertsthatAmericansdonottrustadvertisingclaimsforaproductonlywhentheseclaimsare__debythecompanythatsellstheproduct.Whenaclaimis__debyanindependentthird_____suchasawood__rtificationcompanyhepositsconsumersrespondverypositivelywithstrongac__ptan__ofthe__rtifiedproduct.Thelectureralsorefutesthesecondpointinthereading-thatpri__-sensitiveAmericanconsumersarelikelytochoosecheapwoodproductswithout__rtification.Theprofessorcontendsthat__rtifiedwoodisonlyslightlylessthan5%moreexpensivethanun__rtifiedwoodandthereforehearguesconsumerswilltendtoignorethepri__differen__andchoosetheeco-friendlyproduct.Finallyre__ivingeco-__rtificationisaccordingtotheprofessoranimportantstrategyusedbyAmericanwoodcompaniestoensurethattheirproductscancompeteagainsteco__rtifiedwoodproductsimportedintothedomestic__rketfromforeigncountries.Accordingtothereadinghoweverthisstrategyisunne__ssarybecauseAmericanconsumersarelikelytobecontentwithdomestically__nufacturedproductseveniftheyarenoteco__rtified.TPO8TheReadingpassageraisesseveraldoubtsabouttheaccuracyofthememoirwrittenbytheChevalierdeSeingaltwhereastheprofessordefendsthememoirinthelecturebyclarifyingtheseemingcontradictionsintheChevaliersaccounts.TheprofessorarguesthatbecausetheChevalierwasrichinassetsbutpoorincashwhilehewaslivinginSwitzerlandheoccasionallyhadtoborrowfundstopayforexpensiverecreationalactivities.Accordingtotheprofessorh__inglowamountsofcashisnotthesameasbeingfinanciallypoor.ThereadinghoweverholdsthatassomeonewhohadtoborrowlargeamountsofmoneyfromotherstheChevaliermusth__efabricatedstoriesofhiswealthylifeinSwitzerland.Moreovertheprofessorchallengestheskeptici__expressedinthereadingregardingthereliabilityoftheconversationswithvotariesthattheChevalierrecordedinhismemoir.SheexplainsthatbecausetheChevalierhadahabitofrecordingeachconversationwithVoltaireimmediatelyaftertheymethewasabletorecallthosediscussionsindetailevenyearslater.FinallytheprofessorrejectstheclaiminthereadingthattheChevalierbribedhiswayoutofaprisoninVeni__.Shesaysthatthepactthatnoneoftheotherprisonerseventhosewithbetterresour__shadbeenabletodososhowsthatbriberywasunlikely.Furthermoreshepointstoagover__entpaperthatrecordedtherepairworkdonetotheChevaliersprison__llcitingthisasstrongeviden__thattheaccountofhisescapefromtheprisonwasindeedaccurate.TPO9Thelecturerpointsoutseveralproblemswiththeuseofhydrogen-basedfuel-__llenginesinsupportofherclaimthatsubstitutingthemforinternal-combustionenginesistechnologicallyunfeasibleenviro__entallyunfriendlyandeconomicallyunviable.Firstthelecturerstatesthatitisimpracticaltorepla__internal-combustionengineswithfuel-__llenginesbecauseusingthelatterrequireshydrogeninapureliquidformwhichistechnologicallychallengingtobothobtainandstore.Howeverthereadingarguesthatbecausehydrogencanbeextractedfrom__nyresour__sincludingwaterfuel__llenginespoweredbythisinfinitesour__ofenergyareanextremelyattractivealternative.Secondthelecturerrefutestheclaiminthereadingthathydrogen__llsareenviro__entallyfriendly.Shearguesthatalthoughenginesthatusehydrogen__llsprodu__lesspollutionthe__nufacturingofhydrogen__llsgenerateslargeamountsofharmfulby-productsduetotheburningoffossilfuelsinthepurificationpro__ss.Thirdalthoughthereadingsuggeststhathydrogen-basedenginesaremorefuel-efficientandthuseconomicallycompetitivethaninternal-combustionenginestheprofessorarguesthatsuchanadvantageisunderminedbythefactthatfuel-__llenginesareextremelyexpensiveto__nufacturebecausetheyrequiretheadditionofplatinumaveryrareandexpensive__terial.TPO10Thelecturerandthereadingpassagesuggesttwocompetingtheoriesthepredationtheoryvs.thepollutiontheorytoexplainwhytheseaotterpopulationisinrapiddecline.Theprofessorreasonsthattheabsen__ofdeadseaotterswashedupthecoastsuggeststhattheirdeclineisnotcausedbyseapollutionbutratherbyseapredatorswhoconsumetheirbo___safterKillingthem.Incontrastthereadingpassageattributesthedeathofseaotterstopollutioncitingeviden__ofincreasedsour__sofo__ancontaminantswhichleadtogreatervulnerabilitytoinfections.Furthermorethelecturerarguesthatorcasarelikelyfactorsinthedisappearan__ofseaottersbecausethescarcityofwhalestheirusualpreyhasleftthemwithnootherchoi__buttostarthunting__aller__m__lsliketheottersforfood.ThereadingpassageontheotherhandRulesoutthistheorybasedontheorcaspreyinghabitandinsteadapprovesofthepollutiontheoryastheonlyexplanationforthedeclineopbothlargeand__allsea__m__lsacrosstheentireecosystem.Finallyaccordingtothelecturertheunevenpatternofseaotterdeclinecorrespondstothedistributionoftheorcas.Shearguesthatthepactthattheirpopulationhasdeclinedmostrapidlywhereorcasaremostprevalentfurthervalidatesthepredationtheory.Howeverthereadingpassagearguesthatchangeableenviro__entalfactorswhichleadtodifferentcon__ntrationsofpollutantsbetterexplainsthevaryingpatternofseaotterdecline.TPO11Thelecturerraisesseveralargumentstocounterthereadingpassagesstrongcritici__ofthepublicsdeclininginterestinreadingliterature.Thelecturerarguesthatliteratureisonlyoneamong__nyformsofreadinggenresfromwhichthepubliccanbenefitin____ectually.Thepublicalsobenefitsfromreadingworksofscien__fictionandhistoricalnovelsamongotherreadinggenres.Thereforethereadingiswrongtoclaimthatthepublicissufferinggreatlossesbynotreadingliterature.Furthermorethelecturerexplainsthatevenifitistruethatthepublicisreadingfewerbooksandwatchingmoretelevisionandfilmsinsteaditdoesnotne__ssarilymeanthatcultureisindecline.Televisionandfilmaresimplymodernformsofculturalexpressionthatarealsoin____ectuallystimulatinganddirectlyrelevanttocontemporarylife.Finallythelectureradmitsadeclineinau___n__andsupportofliteratureintodayssocietybutsheattributesittotheauthorsthemselveswhoh__ealienatedthemselvesfromthereadingpublicbyusingoverlycomplexlanguage.Thereadinghoweverblamestheloweringstandardsofthepublicforthedeclininginterestinreadinggreatworksofliterature.TPO12Thereadingpassagesuggeststhatthreepie__sofeviden__providesupportthataportraitre__ntlycommissionedforsalebyamemberofJaneAustensfamilyisofJaneAustenherselfwhenshewasateenager.Howeverthelecturerrejectssucheviden__andarguesthatthepaintingcouldnotbeaportraitofJaneAusten.FirstthelecturerarguesthattheportraitwasapprovedforpublicationbytheAustenfamily70yearsafterJaneAustensdeathsuggestingthatmembersofherextendedfamilymighth__epublishedtheportraitwithouth__ingactuallyseenherinperson.Therefore.thefactthattheportraithadbeenendorsedbyherfamilymembersdoesnotne__ssarilyprovethatitisaportraitofJaneAusten.Secondthelecturerarguesthattheresemblan__betweentheportraitandanauthenticsketchofthe_____JaneAustencouldbeexplainedbythehypothesisthattheportraitisofarelativeofJaneAustenwhentherelativewasateenager.FinallythelecturerarguesthatdespitethestyleofthepaintingwhichlinksittotheexactperiodwhenJaneAustenwasateenagerthestamponthebackofthecanvassuggeststhattheportraitwaspaintedatleast27yearsafterJaneAustensbirthindicatingthattheportraitwasofsomeoneelsewhowasmucholderthantheteenageJaneAusten.TPO13Thelecturerrejectstheideaspresentedinthereadingpassageabouttheproblemsinvolvedintheboomingbusinessofcommercialfossiltrading.Inheropinionthebenefitsofthisnewdevelopmentoutweighitsnegativeconsequen__s.Thelecturerdoesnotagreewiththefirstpoint__deinthereading—thatprivatecollectorskeeptheirfossilcollectionsawayfromthepublic.Shecontendsthatthecommercialtradingoffossilsactually__kesthem__ailabletoawiderpublicbecauseeveryonewithabudgetsuchasprivateschoolsandlibrariescanpurchasethemforstudyandexhibition.Thelecturergoesontorefutetheclaiminthereadingthatfossiltradingbusinesspreventsscientistsandpublicmuseumfrombenefitingfromfossilfindsasthesepartiescannotcompetewithwealthyprivatebuyerstoacquireimportantfossilsforresearchpurpose.Onthecontraryshearguesscientiststhemselvesarethefirsttoevaluateanyimportantfossilbeforeitcanbesoldinthecommercial__rketatapri__sotheacademiccommunitydoesnotmissanyopportunitytostudyprivatelytradedfossils.Additionallythelecturerchallengesthefinaldownsideoffossiltradingmentionedinthereading.Thelecturerremindsusthattheda__gesifanycausedbyprivatecollectorsintheirfieldoperationsaremorethanoffsetbytheefforttheseindividualsh__e__detoincreasethenumberoffossils__ailabletothepublicthatwouldotherwisere__inundiscovered.TPO14Thelecturerandthereadingpassageholdcompletelydifferentviewstowardthepracti__ofsalvageloggingwhichistheremovalofdeadtreesfromaforestafterafireorastorm.Firstthelecturerstatesthatremovingdeadtreesisnotgoodforthehealthofaforestbecauseitdeprivesitofthenutrientsne__ssaryforfuturetreegrowthwhichdeadtreesreleaseintothesoilastheydecompose.Incontrastthereadingpassagestatesthatremovingoldtreesprovidesmorespa__inwhichnewgenerationsoffreshtreescangrowmorehealthily.Secondthelecturerarguesthatsomeinsectsandbirdsthatinhabitdeadtreesarebeneficialfortreegrowthandafewthatarethoughttobeharmfulh__eshownnoeviden__ofcausingsignificantda__getotheforest.Sobyeliminatingbothharmfulandbeneficialbirdsandinsectssalvagelogging__ycauseunwantedda__getotheforestinthelongrun.Thereadinghowevermentionsonlyharmfulinsectsandthespru__barkbeetleinparticular.Itpointsoutthatbecauseclearingtheforestofdeadtreesalsodestroysthehabitatoftheseharmfulinsectsitensuresthehealthyrecoveryofaforestafterafire.Finallywithregardtoeconomicimpactthelecturerarguesagainstsalvageloggingbecausethedeadtreescanonlybesalvagedataveryhighcostandtheemploymentassociatedwithsalvageloggingisoftentemporaryandtakenbynon-nativeresidents.Ontheotherhandthereadingarguesthatthisprac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