高考题型攻略篇高考题型之六短文改错专题十三完美制胜短文改错

专题十三　完美制胜短文改错[限时40分钟]A2016·四川ItisMother’sDaytoday.Thoughit’sawesternfestivalit’spopularinChinanow.Momhasafull­timejobsoshehastodomostofthehouseworks.Sheisagreatmother.BothDadorIplannedtodosomethingonMother’sDay.Wegetupearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouseandthenwentonshopping.WhenhecamebackIfoundabunchofflowersinherhand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedinkitchen.ThedisheswhatIcookedwereMom’sfavoritiest.Atdinnerwesaidtoher“HappyMother’sDay！”Momwasgratefulandmoving.答案　ItisMother’sDaytoday.Thoughit’sawesternfestivalit’spopularinChinanow.Momhasafull­timejobshehastodomostofthe.Sheisagreatmother.BothDadIplannedtodosomethingonMother’sDay.Weupearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouseandthenwentonshopping.WhenhecamebackIfoundabunchofflowersinhand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedinkitchen.ThedishesIcookedwereMom’s.Atdinnerwesaidtoher“HappyMother’sDay！”Momwasgratefuland.B2016·浙江WhenIwasaveryyoungchildrenmyfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearslate.Everytimehearrivedhomeatendofthedaywe’dgreetheratthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowewasandpretendnottoknowingus.Thenheandmymotherwouldhavehadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whiletheychatmyfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositinthetopofthefridge.Itwasbothexcitedandfrighteningtobeupthere!答案　WhenIwasaveryyoung，myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyears.Everytimehearrivedhomeatendofthedaywe’dgreetatthedoor.Hewouldaskwhoweandpretendnottous.Thenheandmymotherwouldhavehadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whilethey，myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositthetopofthefridge.Itwasbothandfrighteningtobeupthere!C2015·新课标ⅠWhenIwasachildIhopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacitybutImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunatelyonthedevelopmentofindustrializationtheenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodosowe’lllivetoregretit.答案　WhenIwasachildIhopedtoliveinthecity.IIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacitybutImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunatelythedevelopmentofindustrializationtheenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryproblem.Thewebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.rareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustwaystoprotectenvironment.Ifwefailtodosowe’lllivetoregretit.D2015·四川HiJaniceIt’sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.AsItellyoulasttimeImadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.We’vebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.It’sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.AndIstartedtoseethisasatime­wastingactivity！Infact，Idon’tliketogoanymoresoI’mafraidI’llloseourfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo？Ifyouareme，wouldyoutalktohimPleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.Grace答案　HiJaniceIt’sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.AsIyoulasttimeImadethreenewhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.We’vebeenspendingalotoftimeinkaraokebars.It’sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsme.AndIstartedtoseethisasatime­wastingactivity！InfactIdon’tliketogoanymoreI’mafraidI’llloseourfriendship.doyouthinkIshoulddo？Ifyoumewouldyoutalkto？Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.GraceE2015·陕西Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.MymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworldsoIdecidetoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.Atapartymycoachwithabiscuitinhismouthaskedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked“Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.”Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter!答案　Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodospecialforhimathisretirementparty.MymummakesthebiscuitsintheworldsoItoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasicofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereally.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorIwaspackingthemup.Atpartymycoachwithabiscuitinhismouthaskedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked，“Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.”Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmethebiscuitswithhappylaughter!。