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高分作文技巧指导----丑小鸭变白天鹅魔法一适当运用高级词汇在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同近义词或反义词等来代替常见词语在造句时“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同
1.我对英语非常感兴趣I’mveryinterestedinEnglish.I’mquite/extremelyinterestedinEnglish
2.我们的校园位于市中心Ourschoolisinthe__nterofthecity.Ourschoolislocatedinthe__nterofthecityOurcampussituatesinthe__nterofthecity
3.放学后,我们有很多作业要做Afterschoolweh__ealotofhomeworktodo.Afterschoolweh__eendlesshomeworktodo.4我们可以得到社会及工作经验Wecangetsomeworkingandsocialexperien__Wecanabtainsomeworkingaswellassocialexperien__5.洗澡间和厨房都很好Thebathroomandthekitchenaregood.Thebathroomandthekitchenarewell-furnished
6.大部分学生认为应当学好英语Mostofthestudentsthinkitisne__ssarytostudyEnglishThe__jorityofthestudentsholdtheviewthatitisne__ssaryto__sterEnglish.高分作文技巧指导----丑小鸭变白天鹅魔法二恰当运用漂亮句型在造句时既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力使用漂亮句型,特别是打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子会成为得分亮点1.Mybrotherisacollegestudentandheisgladtohelpothers.→Mybrotherwhoisacollegestudentisgladtohelpothers.(使用定语从句)→Mybrotherwhoisacollegestudentisgladtohelpothers.→Mybrotheracollegestudentisgladtohelpothers.(使用同位语)
2.我们应当尽力帮助他→Weshouldtryourbesttohelphim→Weshouldsparenoefforttohelphim→Weshouldhelphimasfaraswecan.→Weshoulddowhateverwecantohelphim.实战训练
1.Tohissurprisethelittlegirlknowssomuchaboutit.(使用名词性从句)
2.Thoughheisyoungheknowsalot.
3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthe newspaper.使用强调句型
4.Ipassedtheexambecauseofyourhelp.用虚拟语气)
5.Sheenteredtheroomand__nystudentsfollowedher.使用过去分词
6.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.使用V-ing形式
7.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.(使用状语从句)
8.Ifyoustudyhardyouwill__kerapidprogress.(用并列句)9.Assoonashearrivedhebegantowork.使用倒装句10.Ifyouworkhardyouwill__kegreaterprogress使用themore…themore…的句型参考答案
1.What__keshimsurprisedisthatthelittlegirlknowssomuchaboutit.Itsurpriseshimthatthelittlegirlknowssomuchaboutit.
2.Youngasheisheknowsalot.
3.Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthe newspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened
4.ButforforyourhelpIwouldn’th__epassedtheexam.WithoutyourhelpIwouldn’th__epassedtheexam.IfithadnotbeenforyourhelpIwouldh__efailedintheexam.
5.Sheenteredtheroomfollowedby__nystudents.
6.Theywentbacktoschoolsingingandlaughing.
7.WhateverhesaysIwon’tbelievehim.
8.Studyhardandyouwill__kerapidprogress.
9.NosoonerhadhearrivedthanhebegantoworkHardlyhadhehearrivedwhenhebegantowork..
10.Theharderyouwork.thegreaterprogressyouwill__ke.高分作文技巧指导----丑小鸭变白天鹅魔法三准确运用过渡词、过渡句在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点的运用,过渡词的准确运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的__,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体同时为使主题突出结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用过渡句,使文章全文结构紧凑,表达严谨等1.表递进and;then;besides;what’smore;inaddiction;besidesfurthermore;moreover;2.表转折but;however;though; orelse;otherwise; onthecontrary;while;afterall等3.表总结finally;atlast;inbrief;inaword;inall;generallyspeaking等4.表描述forexample;forinstan__;actually;infact;asa__tteroffact;inotherwords等
5.表推理asaresult;therefore;thus;onaccountof等
6.表强调indeed;__rtainly;surely;aboveall等
7.表对比inthesameway;similarly;justas;ontheonehandinstead等
8.表目的forthisreason;forthepurposeof;soasto;sothat等逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇时间顺序firstsecondthenfinally/atlastsoon,immediatelysuddenly空间顺序herethereononeside…ontheothersideinfrontofatthebackofnextto对称foronethingforanotherthing;ononehandontheotherhand因果becausesin__asthankstoasaresultof条件aslongassolongasonconditionthatifunless让步thoughasevenif/thoughwhetherwho whatwhen whereever递进what’smorebesidesto__ke__ttersworsewhat’sworse过渡性插入语IthinkI’mafraidyouknowAsweallknow实战训练一用适当的过渡词填空,使短文通顺连贯_____目前itisusualforusstudentstofindpart-timejobsintheholidays.LastsummerIworkedasawaiterinarestaurantandIlearnedalot._____首先itwasthefirsttimeformetoearnmoneyonmyownsoIfeltextremelyexcited.NowIcanbuywhatIwantwithoutaskingmyparentsformoneyasbefore.._____7第二duringtheperiodIlearned_____不仅thevalueofmoney_____而且thewaytogetalongwithothers._____第三Igainedsomeworkingexperien__________和socialexperien__whichIfoundagoodpreparationfortheworldoutsideschool.Itwasusefultomyfuturework.______总之Ihadawonderfulvacation.实战训练二用适当的过渡词,过渡句使短文通顺连贯_______引出话题的过渡词moreandmorecollegestudentsinre__ntyearsarefindingitdifficulttofindjobsinbigcities.Whyitisdifficultforcollegestudentstofindjobs_____________过渡句原因有如下几条_________原因一,__nygraduatesarelookingforwardtofindjobsinbigcitiesnotwillingtoworkinthecountryside.___________(原因二)somecollegestudentspursuetoohighgoalsandaretooparticularaboutsuchfactorsasworkingconditionssalaryandsoon.___________(原因三)therearenotenoughopportunitiestosatisfymostofthehuntersinbigcitieswhileinthecountrysidetalentedpeoplearebadlyneededandalotofpostsarewaitingforus.______事实上Ruralareasareavastworldwhereyoucanputyourabilitiestogooduseandyou’llbeableto__kegreatercontributionstothebuildingofnewcountryside._________(总结或表明观点)collegestudentsshouldh__etherightattitudetowardsthemselvesandthejob.Ibelievewecanh__easbrightafutureinthecountryasweh__einthecity.高分作文技巧指导----丑小鸭变白天鹅魔法四灵活扩展句子1.北京很美→Beijingisbeautiful.→Beijingissobeautifulthat__nypeoplecomehere.→Beijingissobeautifulthat__nypeoplecomehereeveryyear.→Beijingissobeautifulthatthousandsofpeoplecomehereeveryyear.→Beijingissobeautifulthatthousandsofpeoplecomehereeveryyearfromallaroundtheworld.→Beijingissobeautifulthatthousandsofpeopleno__tteryoungoroldmenorwomencomehereeveryyearfromallaroundtheworld.”→Beijingissobeautifulthatitattractsvisitorsfrombothhomeandabroadeveryyear.
2.我们该保护环境→Weshouldprotectourenviro__ent.→Weshouldtakeactiontoprotectourenviro__ent.→Weshouldtakeactiontoprotectourenviro__enttos__etheearth.→Weshouldtakeactiontoprotectourenviro__entinsteadofpollutingtheearth.→S__ingtheearthiss__ingourselves.Itistimeforustotakeactiontoprotectourenviro__ent→Asmiddleschoolstudentswhatweshoulddoistosparenoefforttoprotectourenviro__ent.
3.塑料袋引起白色污染→plasticbagswillcauseresultin或leadtowhitepollution→Toomuchuseofplasticbagswillcauseseriouswhitepollution.→Moreandmoreplasticbagsareusedbypeopleeverydaywhichwillcauseseriouswhitepollution.→Withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandardmoreandmoreplasticbagsareusedbypeopleeverydaywhichwillcauseseriouswhitepollution.→Asisknowntousalltoomuchuseofplasticbagswillcauseseriouswhitepollution→Itisreportedthattheproblemof“whitepollution”causedbyusingplasticbagsisbecomingincreasinglyseriousintheworld.4.中国人有必要过洋节日吗?→IsthereanyneedforChinesepeopleto__lebratewesternfestivals→Re__ntlytherehasbeenaheateddiscussionaboutwhetherthereisanyneedforChinesepeopleto__lebratewesternfestivals.→AsforthequestionwhetherthereisanyneedforChinesepeopleto__lebratewesternfestivalsdifferentpeopleh__edifferentopinions.→JustasthesayinggoesSo__nypeopleso__nyminds.AsforthequestionwhetherthereisanyneedforChinesepeopleto__lebratewesternfestivalsdifferentpeopleh__edifferentanswers→Withthedevelopmentofeconomyandtheimprovementofpeople’slivingconditionsmoreandmoreChinesepeopleliketo__lebratewesternfestivals.AsforthequestionwhetherthereisanyneedforChinesepeopleto__lebratewesternfestivalsdifferentpeopleh__edifferentopinions.→Aswecanseewiththedevelopmentofeconomyandtheimprovementofpeople’slivingconditionsmoreandmoreChinesepeopleliketo__lebratewesternfestivals.AsforthequestionwhetherthereisanyneedforChinesepeopleto__lebratewesternfestivalsdifferentpeopleh__edifferentopinions.实战练习
1.__工作会影响学生的学业吗?Willpart-timejobsinfluen__thestu___sofstudents?
①对于__工作是否会影响学生的学业的问题,不同的人有不同的观点______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
②俗话说,“凡事都有两面性”对于__工作是否会影响学生的学业的问题,不同的人有不同的说法(恰当使用谚语)___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间Aproperpart-timejobdoesnotoccupystudentstoomuchtime. 1绝大部分人认为,一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2通过上面的讨论,我们不难得出结论一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3通过上面的讨论,我们不难得出结论一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间,事实上,把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康,正如那句老话只工作,不玩耍,聪明的孩子会变傻______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案
1.
①Infactalotofparentsareworriedthatpart-timejobswillinfluen__thestu___sofstudents.
②Asforthequestionwhetherpart-timejobswillinfluen__thestu___sofstudentsdifferentpeopleh__edifferentopinions.
③JustasthesayinggoesEverycoinhastwosides.Asforthequestionwhetherpart-timejobswillinfluen__thestu___sofstudentsdifferentpeopleh__edifferentopinions.
2.
①The__jorityofpeopleholdtheviewthataproperpart-timejobdoesnotoccupystudentstoomuchtime.
②Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabovewe__ysafelydrawaconclusionthataproperpart-timejobdoesnotoccupystudentstoomuchtime.
③Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabovewe__ysafelydrawaconclusionthataproperpart-timejobdoesnotoccupystudentstoomuchtime.Infactitisunhealthyforthemtospendalloftimeontheirstudy.Asanoldsayinggoes:Allworkandnoplay__kesJackadullboy.。