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中考英语作文写好作文五要素要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点
1.要点缺少要点就会扣分所以要点要做到全,围绕中心
2.结构中考最流行的结构就是三段式“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然三段式的第一段简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话 第二段可以分析原因第三段经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华也可以提出希望和建议等
3.逻辑通过使用逻辑词体现文章的思路
4.语法语法是硬性的如单词的使用,时态等要注意
5.亮点高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招所以一般词汇要限量用如何开头
1.“开门见山”式开头一般来说,文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”,即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题,使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容
①对于叙事类的文章,可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚如“ATriptoHuangshan黄山之旅”的开头可以是Lastmonth,myfamilywenttoHuangshanbytrain.Ittookustenhourstogetthere.Whatalongandtiringjourney!Weweretiredbutthebeautifulsceneryexcitedus
②对于论述性的文章,可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点,接着展开进一步的论述如“TheTimeandtheMoney时间和金钱”的开头可以是Mostpeoplesaythatmoneyismoreimportantthantime.ButIdontthinkso.First,whenmoneyisusedup,youcanearnitback,but……
2.回忆性开头在描述事件或游记类的文章中,采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇,如neverforget永远无法忘记、remember记得、unforgettable难以忘怀的、exciting令人激动的、surprising令人惊讶的、sad难过的……如“ATriptoHuangshan黄山之旅”的开头还以这样写IwillneverforgetmyfirsttriptoHuangshan.或ItwasreallyanunforgettableexperienceIhad
3.疑问性开头在叙事类或论述性的文章中,都可采用疑问型开头,这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心如“PlantingTrees种树”的开头可以是HaveyoueverplantedtreesDontyouthinkplantingtreesis……再如“TravelingAbroad出国之旅”的开头可以是IfyouhaveanopportunitytotravelabroadwhynotconsiderSingapore
4.倒叙式开头在有的文章,特别是叙事类的文章中,可以采用倒叙的写作手法,先写出事件的结果,再陈述过程如“CatchingThieves捉贼”的开头可以这样写Ilayinbedinthehospital.Ismiledatmyfriendseventhoughmylegshurt.DoyouwanttoknowwhathappenedtomeLetmetellyou.Itsa……story开头经典句子
1.不用说……Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…=Itisneedlesstosaythat….=Itisobviousthat….例不用说早睡早起是值得的Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitpaystokeepearlyhours.
2.在各种……之中,……Amongvariouskindsof……/=Ofallthe……例︰在各种运动中我尤其喜欢慢跑AmongvariouskindsofsportsIlikejogginginparticular.
3.就我的看法……;我认为……Inmyopinion…=Tomymind….=AsfarasIamconcerned…=Iamoftheopinionthat….例Inmyopinionplayingvideogamesnotonlytakesmuchtimebutisalsoharmfultohealth.就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康
4.随着人口的增加……Withtheincrease/growthofthepopulation…随着科技的进步……Withtheadvanceofscienceandtechnology…例WiththerapiddevelopmentofTaiwan’seconomyalotofsocialproblemshavecometopass.随着台湾经济的快速发展许多社会问题产生了
5.……是必要的Itisnecessaryforsb.todo/that… ……是重要的Itisimportant/essentialforsb.todo/that… ……是适当的Itisproperforsb.todo/that… ……是紧急的Itisurgentforsb.todo/that…例Itisproperforustokeepthepublicplacesclean.Itisproperthatweshouldkeepthepublicplacesclean.我们应当保持公共场所清洁
6.Asweknowwestudentsareverytiredbecauseofstudy.
7.Justasthesayinggoes:“Everycoinhasitstwosides”televisionhasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.正像谚语所说“任何硬币都有两面”,电视即有优点也有缺点
8.Theproblemof...isimportant/serious/...tous.Nowletmetalksomethingaboutit.
9.Itissaidthat+句子 据说…Itisreportedthat+句子 据报道…
10.Wereoftentoldthat......Butisthisreallythecase我们经常被告知......但事实真是这样吗?
11.Peopleusedto......howeverthingsarequitedifferenttoday.过去,人们习惯......但今天的情况有很大的不同
12.Somepeoplethinkthat......Othersbelievethattheoppositeistrue.Thereisprobablysometruthinbothsides.Butwemustrealizethat...一些人认为......另一些人持相反意见也许双方的观点都有一定道理但是我们必须认识到......
13.每当我听到……我就忍不住感到兴奋WheneverIhear…Icannotbutfeelexcited.每当我做……我就忍不住感到悲伤WheneverIdo…Icannotbutfeelsad.每当我想到……我就忍不住感到紧张WheneverIthinkof…Icannotbutfeelnervous.每当我遭遇……我就忍不住感到害怕WheneverImeetwith…Icannotbutfeelfrightened.每当我看到……我就忍不住感到惊讶WheneverIsee…Icannotbutfeelsurprised.例WheneverIthinkofthecleanbrooknearmyhomeIcannotbutfeelsad.=EverytimeIthinkofthecleanbrooknearmyhomeIcannothelpfeelingsad.每当我想到我家附近那一条清澈的小溪我就忍不住感到悲伤
14.……the+~est+名词+(that)+主词+haveever+seenknown/heard/had/readetc/……themost+形容词+名词+(that)+主词+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/readetc)HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen.海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩Mr.ChangisthekindestteacherthatIhaveeverhad.张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师YaoMingisthetallestbasketballplayerthatIhaveeverseen.姚明是我所见过的最高的篮球运动员LiuXiangisthemosthardworkingsportsmanthatIhaveeverseen.刘翔是我所见过的最勤奋的运动员
15.Nothingis+~~~erthanto+V/Nothingis+more+形容词+thanto+VNothingismoreimportantthantoreceiveeducation.没有比接受教育更重要的事Nothingismoreimportantthantoprotectourenvironment.没有什么比环保更重要的事Nothingismoreimportantthantogainknowledge.没有什么比学习知识更重要的事
16.…….cannotemphasizetheimportanceof…….toomuch.(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过)Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyestoomuch.我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofeducation.我们再怎么强调教育的重要性也不为过
17.Thereisnodenyingthat+S+V...(不可否认的……)Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourlivinghavegonefrombadtoworse.不可否认的,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下ThereisnodenyingthatLinZhilingisthemostcharmingactressIhaveeverseen.不可否认,林志玲是我所见过的最有魅力的女演员
18.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat+句子~~(全世界都知道……)Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattreesareindispensabletous.全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的
19.Thereisnodoubtthat+句子~~(毫无疑问的……)Thereisnodoubtthatoureducationalsystemleavessomethingtobedesired.毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意
20.Anadvantageof~~~isthat+句子(……的优点是……)Anadvantageofusingthesolarenergyisthatitwontcreateproduceanypollution.使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染Anadvantageoftakingexercisesisthatitcanmakeuskeephealthy.锻炼身体的优点是它可以让我们保持健康
21.Thereasonwhy+句子~~~isthat+句子(……的原因是……)Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycanprovideuswithfreshair.我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气
22.So+形容词+be+主词+that+句子(如此……以致于……)Sopreciousistimethatwecantaffordtowasteit.时间是如此珍贵,它经不起我们浪费SobeautifulisXiShithatwealllikeher.西施是如此美丽,以致于我们都喜欢她
23.Adj+as+Subject(主词)+beS+V~~~(虽然……)Richasourcountryisthequalitiesofourlivingarebynomeanssatisfactory.{bynomeans=innoway=onnoaccount一点也不}虽然我们的国家富有,我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意结尾五方式
1.自然结尾,点明主题随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾如“HelpingthePoliceman帮助警察”的结尾可以是Thetwochildrenwerepraisedbythepoliceandtheyfelthappy.再如“TheTortoiseandtheHare龟兔赛跑”的结尾可以是Whentheharegottothetreethetortoisehadalreadybeenthere
2.首尾呼应,升华主题在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题,深化主题,起到“画龙点睛”的效果如“ILoveMyHometown我爱家乡”的结尾可以是IlovemyhometownandIamproudofit.
3.反问结尾,引起深思这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句,但意义却是肯定的,而且具有一定的强调作用,可引起他人的深思如“LearningEnglishcangiveusalotofpleasure学英语能为我们带来许多乐趣”的结尾可以是IfwelearnEnglishwellwecan…Don’tyouthinklearningEnglishisgreatfun
4.表达祝愿,阐述愿望这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中,表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等如“ALettertotheFarmers给农民们的一封信”的结尾可以是Ihopethefarmerslifewillbebetterandbetter.
5.另外,书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语Bestwishes;IwishyouamerryChristmasandahappynewyear;Iwishyouhaveagoodtime等结尾常用句型
1、Takingallthesefactorsintoconsiderationwenaturallycometotheconclusionthat…把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…
2、Takingintoaccountallthesefactorswemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthat…考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论…
3、Hence/Thereforewe’dbettercometotheconclusionthat…因此,我们最好得出这样的结论…
4、Thereisnodoubtthatjob-hoppinghasitsdrawbacksaswellasmerits.毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点
5、Allinallwecannotlivewithout…Butatthesametimewemusttrytofindoutnewwaystocopewiththeproblemsthatwouldarise.总之,我们没有…是无法生活的但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题
6、Itishightimethatweputanendtothetrend该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了
7、Itistimetotaketheadviceof…andtoputspecialemphasisontheimprovementof…该是采纳…的建议,并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了
8、Onlyweinthiswaycanweachievethegoal.只有这样我们才能达到我们的目标常用过渡语
1.表起始的过渡语:firstofalltobeginwithinmyopinionaccordingtosofarasfaras等
2.表时间的过渡语:firstatfirstthenlaterintheendfinallyafterwardsafterthatsincethenforthefirsttimeatlastassoonasthenextmomentmeanwhilelateronsoonfinally等
3.表空间的过渡语:ontheright/lefttotheright/leftofononesideof…ontheothersideof…atthefoot/top/endofinthemiddle/centreofnexttofarfrominfrontof等
4.表因果的过渡语:forbecauseofonereasonisthat…anotherreasonisthat…thussoasaresultof等
5.表转折的过渡语:butyethoweverafterallinfactwhileonthecontraryinsteadofunlikealthoughotherwiseneverthelessinspiteofafterall等
6.表列举的过渡语:forexamplesuchasthatislikeasfollowsinotherwordsandsoon等
7.表推进的过渡语:what’smoreononehand…ontheotherhand…inadditiontoaswellstillalsoinotherwordsnotonly…butalso…besidesfurthermoremoreover等
8.表总结的过渡语:inshortinawordingeneralinbriefinallonthewhole等常用的名言警句
1.Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.事实胜于雄辩
2.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难朋友才是真朋友
3.Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的开端是成功的一半
4.Wherethereisawillthereisaway.有志者事竟成
5.AllroadsleadtoRome.条条大道通罗马
6.Easiersaidthandone.说起来容易做起来难
7.Easycomeeasygo.来得快去得快
8.Everymanhashisweakside.人人都有缺点
9.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失败是成功之母
10.Lookbeforeyouleap.三思而后行
11.Nothingintheworldisdifficultifyousetyourmindtoit.世上无难事只怕有心人.
12.Alifewithoutafriendisalifewithoutasun.人若无友就如同生命中没有太阳.
13.Allthingsaredifficultbeforetheyareeasy.万事开头难.
14.Alwaysprepareforarainyday.未雨绸缪.
15.Asyousowsoshallyoureap.种瓜得瓜种豆得豆
16.Imightsaythatsuccessiswonbythreethings:firsteffort;secondmoreeffort;thirdstillmoreeffort.成功要靠三件事才能赢得:努力努力再努力
17.Don’tputofftilltomorrowwhatshouldbedonetoday.有事莫推明天.
18.Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧
19.Badnewshaswings.好事不出门坏事传千里
20.Honestyisthebestpolicy.做人以诚信为本.
21.Youhavetobelieveinyourself.That’sthesecretofsuccess.你必须相信自己这是成功的关键.
22.Don’tjudgeamanbyhislooks.不可以貌取人.
23.Losttimeisneverfoundagain.岁月既往,一去不回。