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2015届高考英语二轮复习高效书面表达专题卷1(含解析)1.基础写作(满分15分)假如你是李华,2010年亚洲运动会将在广州举办,现在正招募志愿者,你希望成为其中一员请按要求用英语给组委会写一封申请信写作内容个人情况年龄,学历个人条件英语好,爱好体育,善于交往,乐于助人,熟悉广州情况承诺提供最佳服务,展现青年志愿者的风采写作要求
1.只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入考查范围内
2.文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名称DearSirorMadamMynameisLiHua.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________PleaseconsidermyrequestandI’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YoursfaithfullyLiHua(考词汇志愿者volunteer2010年广州亚运会the2010GuangzhouAsianGames.)2.阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文Onedaywhileshewaswalkinginthewoodsagirlfoundtwostarvingsongbirds.Shetookthemhomeandputtheminasmallcage.Shecaredthemwithloveandthebirdsgrewstrong.Everymorningtheygreetedherwithawonderfulsong.Thegirlfeltgreatloveforthebirds.Onedaythegirlleftthedoortothecageopen.Thelargerandstrongerofthetwobirdsflewfromthecage.Thegirlwassofrightenedthathewouldflyaway.Asheflewcloseshegraspedhimwildly.Herheartfeltgladathersuccessincapturinghim.Suddenlyshefeltthebirdgolimp.Sheopenedherhandandstaredinhorroratthedeadbird.Herdesperatelovehadkilledhim. Shenoticedtheotherbirdmovingbackandforthontheedgeofthecage.Shecouldfeelhisgreatneedforfreedom.Heneededtosoarintotheclearbluesky.Sheliftedhimfromthecageandtossedhimsoftlyintotheair.Thebirdcircledoncetwicethreetimes. Thegirlwatcheddelightedlyatthebirdsenjoyment.Herheartwasnolongerconcernedwithherloss.Shewantedthebirdtobehappy.Suddenlythebirdflewcloserandlandedsoftlyonhershoulder.Itsangthesweetestmelodythatshehadeverheard. ShefinallyrealizedthatthefastestwaytoloseloveistoholdonittootightthebestwaytokeeploveistogiveitWINGS![写作内容]
1.以约30个词概括短文的要点;
2.然后以约120个词就“爱就要放手”这一主题发表看法,并包括如下要点a以自己为例,简述生活中你父母对你的过度关注;b你父母的做法对你造成了什么不良的影响;c如果有机会,你会就此问题对父母说些什么[写作要求]
1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称[评分标准]概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯3.假如你是学生会主席请根据下面图表1用英语写一则秋游的通知回来后讨论
2.在山顶野餐要自带午餐和饮料
3.参加者在本周四前到学生会报名注意
1.通知必须包括表内所列内容可以适当调整内容的顺序和增加细节使其连贯完整
2.词数100左右
3.通知时间10月3日
4.生词植物园thebotanicalgarden;报名signupfor;学生会theStudents’Union.参加者高一年级的学生活动内容
1.去博物馆看《人与自然》的展览
2.参观泉山植物园集合地点学校大门口集合时间
1.10月3日上午乘校车前往
2.早上7点集合,720开车注意事项
1.参观展览时保持安静;并认真记笔记,准备回来后讨论
2.在山顶野餐,要自带午餐和饮料
3.参加者在本周四前到学生会报名4.假设高考已经结束,请你根据下列提示给你的美国朋友Tom写一封电子邮件开头已为你写好,不计算在总词数内
1.对高考感觉和考后打算;
2.畅想大学生活和未来理想注意
1.词数120-150;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯5.阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文HerearesomecommentsonLiHuafromhisclassmates.LilysaidLiHuaisthesmarteststudentinourclassandusuallyscoresthehighestmarksintheEnglishandmathematicsexams.Hishomeworkandassignmentsarealwaysdonetoaveryhighstandardsoourteachersaskustofollowhisexample.Wealladmirehisintelligence.KatesaidLiHuaisreallyahard-workingstudent.Hespendsatleastfourhourseverydayreviewinghislessonsandhishomeworkisneverlate.Astheexamsgetcloserhebecomesevenmorediligentandworksintotheearlyhoursofthemorningmakingsurehehasgoneoveralloftheinformationcoveredinourclasses.JohnsaidLiHuaisthekindofpersonwhoiseasytoco-operatewith.Althoughhesverycleverheisstillwillingtolistentoothersopinionsandtaketheirsuggestions.Whenwedogroupworkinclassweallwanttobeinhisgroupbecausehealwaysdoeshisshareoftheworkandiseasytogetalongwith.TimsaidLiHuaistheclassmonitorandthemosthelpfulstudentinourclass.Healwaysmakessuretheclassroomiskeptcleanandassiststheteacherinhandingoutandcollectingthestudentsbooksandhomework.Whenastudentisabsentfromschoolhewillcallandtellthemwhattheyhavemissed.【写作内容】假设你叫李平,你的同学李华拟申请到美国某大学学习申请材料需包括同伴的推荐信李华邀请你为他写一封推荐信上文是其他同学对李华的一些评价,请根据这些材料和你自己对李华的看法,写一封推荐信以下是信的内容(信的开头和结尾已经为你写好)
1.以约30个词概括同学们眼中李华的特点和优点;
2.以约120个词表达你对李华的看法,并包括如下要点⑴你对同学们评价意见的看法;⑵以你和李华之间的经历来说明其中的一点看法【写作要求】
1.作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.信中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名称参考答案1.DearSirorMadamMynameisLiHua.Iwouldliketoserveasavolunteerforthecomingofthe2010GuangzhouAsianGames.Iama17-year-oldSeniorThreestudentatNo.28HighSchoolandIamgoodatEnglishandIenjoytalkingwithforeigners.IbelieveIwoulddoagoodjobattheGames.FirstofallIappreciatesportsandIknowthecityverywell;secondlyIcaneasilygetalongwithotherswhichisimportantforavolunteerandalsoI’mreadytooffermyhelpwheneverneeded.ImakeapromisethatifIweretobechosenasayouthvolunteerIwouldofferthebestservicepossibletothepeopleattheGames.PleaseconsidermyrequestandI’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YoursfaithfullyLiHua【解析】2.Agirlrealizedthebestwaytokeeploveistoletabirdflywhensheaccidentallykilledabirdwhichtriedtoescapeandfreedtheotherwhichflewhappily.Imustadmitthatmyparentslovemeverymuchbuttheirexcessivelovesometimeshasgonetoofar.Forexampletheywon’tallowmetochatwithmyAmericanfriendonlineorallowmetogoshoppingbymyselfforfearImightbecheatedthoughIamalready18yearsold.What’sworsetheyevensecretlyreadmydiary.TobehonestIamnowsufferingalotfromthis.DuetotheirexcessiveloveIdon’thavemanyfriends.Asagirlof18Iamnotabletomakemyowndecisionsaboutmanythings.ThoughIcan’ttolerateallthisIdarenotspeakupforIknowthisisallduetotheirdeeploveforme.IfIhadthechancetotalkwiththemaboutthisIwouldliketotellthemthatIcanmanagewithouttheirhoveringoverme!I’dliketosaytothem“Pleaseletgoofyouranxiety.Givemesomeadvicejustwhennecessaryandformostofthetimeletmethinkformyself.Yourloveshouldneverbeaburdenonme.Lovemeandletmeflywithit.”【解析】试题分析本文属于读写任务写作,动笔前,一定要认真阅读原文,并理解内容认真看清题目要求,这篇书面表达给了一段材料先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容,要求有很高的概括提炼的能力,要抓住文章的主题,再以约120个词写一篇短文,按照要点去表达,不能有遗漏,写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型,同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型,使自己的文章更有文采【亮点说明】文章简洁的总结了所给材料,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯,使用了词组What’sworse更糟糕的是Dueto由于,因为,Tobehonest说实话letgoof放手,句式上也是富有变化Agirlrealizedthebestwaytokeeploveistoletabirdflywhensheaccidentallykilledabirdwhichtriedtoescapeandfreedtheotherwhichflewhappily.这句话用了定语从句和不定式做表语,Forexampletheywon’tallowmetochatwithmyAmericanfriendonlineorallowmetogoshoppingbymyselfforfearImightbecheatedthoughIamalready18yearsold.这句话用了目的状语从句,Givemesomeadvicejustwhennecessaryandformostofthetimeletmethinkformyself.这句话用了省略句,考点考查读写任务类书面表达3.Onepossibleversion:NoticeOctober3ThestudentsofSeniorGradeOnewillgooutforavisitonOctober
3.We’llfirstgotothemuseumtoseeanexhibitionofManandNature.Whenyou’reintheexhibitionhallyoushouldkeepsilentandmakecarefulnotesbecausewe’regoingtohaveadiscussionafterwecomeback.AfterthatweplantovisitthebotanicalgardenontheQuanshanHillandhaveapicniconthetopofit.Sopleasebringlunchandsomedrinkingwaterwithyou.Ourschoolbuswillleaveat7:
20.Pleasegatheratourschoolgateat7:00a.m.ThosewhowanttotakepartintheactivityshouldsignupforitattheStudents’UnionbeforeThursday.【解析】试题分析本文要求写一则秋游的通知,要把时间地点和注意事项写清楚所以要用一般将来时或祈使句或情态动词表达应该怎么做字数要求100词左右注意使用较高级的词汇和句子的衔接,以提高作文的档次【亮点说明】文中使用了祈使句或情态动词表达要求做的事情,用will表示将要做非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如keepsilent,haveadiscussion和takepartin还运用了who引导的定语从句等复合句并注意了句子开头的变化和句子之间的衔接如用Afterthat、So等等考点提纲作文【答案】略【解析】略5.IamwritingthislettertosupportmygoodfriendLiHuasapplicationtostudyatyouruniversity.Inmyclassmateseyeshehasalwaysbeenanintelligentandhard-workingstudentwhoishelpfulandco-operativewithothers.Forthesereasonsheisverypopularwitheveryone.IagreewithmyclassmatesandIhavepersonallybenefitedgreatlyfromhishelp.IstillrememberatthebeginningofthisschoolyearIwasinatrafficaccidentandthatrequiredmetobeinhospitalforovertwomonths.ThissituationcausedmegreatconcernasIfearedIwouldfallfarbehindmyclassmatesinthisveryimportantyearofstudy.ButthankstoLiHuabythetimeIwaswellenoughtoleavehospitalandreturntoworkIwasup-to-dateinallareasofmystudy.NotonlydidhecometovisitmeeverydaybringingwithhimallthelessonsandmaterialsourclasshadgonethrougheachdaybuthepatientlysatwithmeandexplainedtomeallthoseissuesthatIdidntunderstand.Onlyafterstayingwithmeforatleast2hourseverydaywouldhegohomeandbeginhisownstudies.ForthereasonsaboveIurgeyoutoconsiderhisapplicationfavourably.【解析】试题分析考查半开放性作文李华的优点可以用聪明,勤奋,善于合作等等考生可以自行选择一个身边的实例作为蓝本说明你和李华之间的经历,考生可以适当拓展并发挥想象,从而使文章的叙述不单调写作时认真审题,并在脑海中回想自己积累的哪些句式、句型、单词能用进来,这些单词、句型都应是经典的,不会错的写的过程中,多注意灵活使用定语从句,包括非限制性定语从句考点考查半开放性作文点评半开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示给考生自由发挥的余地较大对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besidesfurtherlastbutnotleast等在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。