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2020托福口语结构分析在托福准备的过程中,想要让自己的托福口语备考过程更加流利完美,考生需要注意哪些事情呢下面小编就和大家分享用5层汉堡包结构完美演绎托福口语,希望能够帮助到大家,来欣赏一下吧用5层汉堡包结构完美演绎托福口语SI Whichof thefollowing creativeactivities do you feellike to getinvolved in
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3.Art creation5层汉堡包结构考生在面对此类问题,首先要采用经典的汉堡包式作为大体结构,第一步陈述观点,第二步提供支持信息,第三步排除其他选项,第四步同为排除其他选项,第五步总结括号内为篇幅大致占比Say youlike A.5%Explain whyA isgood.50%Say whyyou don,t likeB.20%Say whyyou dontlike C.20%Wrap itup.5%范文Id liketo joina writingacitivity.Writing hasbeen ahuge problemfor me.It happensvery oftenin writingclassesthat Idont evenunderstand the question.Even ifI getthe meaningofthe prompt,it isalways difficultto comeup withideas anddevelop thoseideasinto acomplete five-paragraph essay.So ifa writingactivity reallyhelps,its definitely worth trying.I knowpottery makingis fun,but itfeels badtoget my handsdirty andgetmy t-shirts stained.As forart creation,it simplysounds toocomplicated.So again,a writingactivity willbe agood choicefor me.范文分析通常第二部分对于考生是难点,这篇范文结构上使用了“描述问题一一提出解决方案”的结构,通过If条件句来佐证自己的观点,充实内容well-developedo Comeup with,definitelyworthtrying,getmyhandsdirty等搭配用法,不仅在句型上多样化,而且使表达更加地道Id like,I know,it sounds,soagain等词组能让整个片段听上去更加合理通顺,文脉清晰,让考官觉得有理有据,即使不用那些难憧的词汇所有内容搭建在5层汉堡包的框架上,组织得当口语用词不需要很难,尽量多用phrasalverbso内容联系自身实际,言之有物结构可以照搬汉堡包,反复练习达到自然表达托福口语评分标准解析|从零开始相信学习过托福的同学都知道托福口语部分总共有6个任务,单项总分为30分那么这30分是怎么评出来的呢rater会根据考生的回答打出0-4分的原始分数,注意rater打出的分数均为整数,不存在
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2.6等小数,六道题目的分数加总后求出平均分,再根据以下分数换算表进行一定的转换得到最终的分数在讲解具体每一个分数的具体要求前我们先来回顾一下托福口语评分标准三大维度,它们分别是delivery^language use以及topicdevelopmento我们来看一下官方指南上对于这三点的解释01Delivery Delivery:How clearyour speechis.Good responsesare thosein whichthespeech isfluid andclear,with goodpronunciation,natural pacing,andnatural-sounding intonationpatterns语言表达考生是否能做到清晰的表达,好的表达应该流畅清晰、发音正确、语速适中、语音语调自然02Language useLanguage useHow effectivelyyou usegrammar andvocabulary toconvey yourideas.Raters willbe listeningfor howwell youcan controlboth basicand morecomplexlanguage structuresand useappropriate vocabulary.语言运用考生是否能有效使用英文语法和词汇来表达自己的观点评分人会考察考生能否熟练运用简单和复杂的语言结构和恰当的词汇03Topic developmentTopic developmentHow fullyyou answer thequestionand howcoherently youpresentyour ideas.Good responsesgenerally useall ormost ofthe timeallotted,and therelationship betweenideas andthe progressionfrom oneideato thenext isclear andeasy tofollow.话题发展考生是否能完成命题所要求的所有任务,表达是否连冠一致好的表达应该在规定时间内完成,并且能够让评分人很容易听出各个观点之间的关系和思路之间的衔接搞清楚三大评分维度之后,我们快来看一下ets给出的托福独立口语四分评分标准的相关内容回答概述回答满足了任务的要求允许考生在答题过程中出现一些小错误回答清晰明了并且连贯流畅这一分数的回答具有以下列出的所有特点语言表达总体上语速适中,语言清晰流畅存在一些小的失误或发音和语调上的小问题但是并不影响整体的可理解性语言使用回答显示考生能够有效地运用语法和词汇,回答存在较高程度的自主性并且能够很好地掌握基本和复杂的句式结构回答允许出现一些明显的小错误,但不会混淆意思话题发展回答一直在持续并且充分满足了题目要求总体上话题展开比较充分而且具有连贯性论点之间的关系清楚明了我们将以上内容做一总结由此可见四分回答也并不是完美无暇的,高分回答也可能会犯一些小错误,只要不影响整体回答的完整性和可理解性即可下面我们来看一道例题帮助大家更好的理解评分标准Some universitiesrequire first year students to live in dormitoriesoncampus.Others allowstudents to live off campus.Which policydo youthink isbetterand whyInclude detailsand examplesin yourexplanation.Sample1I thinkthe betterpolicy isto makestudent live in the dorm,because thefirstyear student livein the dorm...because I think they can besafer first,because theyare from...most arecome fromother town,so theydont reallyknowthe environment,so...I think it safer,huh...Moreover I think they can makefriendsin the dorm so theycanhave good relationship to know on the...on theuniversitys...is...l mean...they knowbetter the environment.Especially theydon;t havecars...Sample2Um...I thinkits betterfor the first-year students to live on campusratherthan offcampus.Main reasonbecause theyare newto thecity anditssafer for them tolive oncampus wheretheres moresecurity.Because theydontknow muchabout thecity in the firstplace.Uh...Second ofall,it helps themto becomemore familiarwith thesurroundings wherethey haveto study.It alsohelpsthem to meet new people.Living inthe dormencourages friendshipswithpeople whoyou mightnot...um...seem very comfortable with first time.And ithelps tomeetnewpeople,it helpsto doingwith theseniors ifany livein thedorm.托福口语评分标准解析I实例详解题目Some universitiesrequire firstyear studentstolivein dormitoriesoncampus.Others allowstudentstolive offcampus.Which policydoyouthink isbetterand whyInclude detailsand examplesin yourexplanation.sample1Ithinkthe betterpolicy isto makestudentliveinthedorm,because thefirstyear studentliveinthedorm,because Ithink theycan besafer first,because theyare frommost ofthem arecome fromother town,sotheydontreally knowtheenvironment,so Ithinkit safer,huh,moreover Ithink theycanmake friendsinthedorm sotheycanhave agoodrelationshiptoknowonthe,onthe universitysis,the goalI mean,they knowbetter theenvironment.Especially theydont havecars.sample2Ithinkits betterforthefirstyearstudentstolive oncampus ratherthanoffcampus.Main reasonbecause theyare newto thecity anditsaferforthem toliveoncampus wheretheres moresecurity.Because theydont knowmuchabout thecity inthefirstplace.Second ofall,it helpsthem tobecome morefamiliarwith thesurroundings wherethey haveto study.It alsohelpsthemtomeet newpeople.Living inthedormencourages friendshipswith peoplewho youmightnot seemverycomfortablewithfirsttime.And it helpstomeet newpeople,ithelpsto interactwith theseniors ifany livein yourdorm.现在来公布正确答案,sample是满分回答,不知道大家有没有回答正确呢?我们来分析一下为什么能够拿到4分01Delivery虽然有一些口音,但是整体清晰流畅,连贯性好,发音不错,很容易让人听懂speaker表达的内容02Language use词汇使用恰当,语法能够准确表达观点,句子结构完整并旦具有一定的多样性03Topic development答案结构完整,考生能够恰当地回答了问题,并且有一定的细节来支撑自己的观点以上三点均能满足,所以sample2为满分回答那么大家可以猜测一下sample responsel是多少分呢?Sample1在实际考试中拿到了3分,在讲解为什么这个回答是三分之前,我们还是先来学习一下ets给出的3分评分标准的具体内容,判断一下sample1是否满足我们3分评分细则回答概述回答能够恰当地完成题目,但是缺乏充分的细节展开回答大体上清晰明了、逻辑连贯,但是在表达论点上有一些明显的失误这一分数的回答至少包括右边所列的两个特点语言表达回答总体清晰流畅,但是发音、语调或语速上存在一些小错误,听者需要时不时地努力去听才能理解(尽管并没有严重地影响回答的清晰度)语言运用回答显示考生基本能够有效自主地使用语法和词汇,并连贯地表达相关论点回答存在一些不准确的用词或错误的语法结构,并且句式多样性也很有限这或许影响总体的流利性,但是并不会严重地影响信息的表达话题发展回答总体上持续连贯,并表达了相关论点和信息但是论点展开受限,通常缺乏对论点的充分展开和具体的细节,论点之间的关系有时不清楚Sample101Delivery有一些发音上的小错误,回答停顿处稍多,但基本不影响整体理解02Language use有一定的语法错误,词汇和句式稍受限,但基本不影响理解03Topic development答案结构较为完整,回答了问题,并给出了一定的理由,但是缺乏细节支撑由此可见sample response1是满足3分评分标准的虽然不是满分也有一定的缺陷,但也是一个不错的成绩,因为如果我们在speakingsection+的6道题都能拿到3分,最后的口语总分也有23分希望今天讲解完这两个口语回答后,大家能对3分和4分评分标准有更深入的了解,并且对我们独立口语也要充满信心,因为满分回答也不是完美无暇的,拿到3分也是比较容易的只要我们answerthequestion给出你的答案,keep talking说满45秒,基本就有三分,如果想拿4分的话give realateddetailso2020托福口语结构分析。