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2023高考英语全国卷短文改错讲解（甲卷）
一、真题呈现IusedtoafraidofinsectsbutlastFriday\biologyclassmakeabigchangeinme.InthatclassMissZhaoourbiologyteachershowedweinsectsonstamps.Thebeesbutterflyandmanyotherinsectslookedlovelyandbeautifullyonthestamps.MissZhaotoldusthenamesoftheinsectsordescribedtheirlivinghabits.Sheevenplayedsomerecordingsoftheirsingingwhatwasfun.NowIvecometolovethoseofsmalllivingthings.IntheeveningwhenItakethewalkintheschoolgardenthesingingofinsectsbecomemoremeaningfultome.【参考答案】toafraidf中间加个“be”makefmadewefusbutterflyfbutterfliesbeautifullyfbeautifulorfandwhatfwhich删掉those后的ofthefabecomefbecomes
二、语法讲解
①to后加个“be”IusedtoafraidofinsectsbutlastFrida、beme.InthatclassMissZhaoourbiologyteacbeesbutterflyandmanyotherinsectslookecbeafraidofsth害怕某事，be不能省略usedtodosth过去常常做某事
②makefmadebutlastFridaysbiologyclassmakeabigchangeinmadeurbiologyteachershowedweinsectsonstamps.Theinsectslookedlovelyandbeautifullyonthestampsftheinsectsordescribedtheirlivinghabits.Sheeven“lastFriday，sbiologyclass”昨晚的生物课，因此要用一般过去时，make的一般过去时为made
③wefusMissZhaoourbiologyteachershowedlwe]insectsus1dmanyotherinsectslookedlovelyandbeautifullysthenamesoftheinsectsordescribedtheirlivinghrdingsoftheirsingingwhatwasfun.NowIveconMissZhao（主语），ourbiologyteacher（同位语），showed（谓语）weus（间接宾语）insects（直接宾语）动词后要跟宾语，而we是主格人称代词，只能做主语，其宾格形式为us可以做宾语©butterflyfbutterfliesIusedtoafraidofinsectsbutlastFridaysbiologyclassmakeabigchangeinme.InthatclassMissZhaoourbiologyteachershowedweinsectsonstamps.ThebeesbutterflyandmanyotherinsectslookedlovelyandbeautifullyonthestampsbutterfliesMissZhaotoldusthenamesoftheinsectsordescribedtheirlivinghabits.Sheeven前后的名词bees、insects都用了复数，因此这里的butterfly也要用其复数形式butterflieso©beautifullyfbeautifulitlastFridaysbiologyclassmakeabigchangeinbiologyteachershowedweinsectsonstamps.Thesectslookedlovelyandbeautifully]onthestamps.*beautifulieinsectsordescribedtheirlivinghabits.Sheevenlook在这里为系动词，意思为看起来.・・・，后边加形容词lovely为形容词，意思为可爱的，并且and连接的两个成分必须一致，要么都是动词，要么都是形容词，要么都是名词，所以这里的beautifully要改为形容词beautifulo
⑥orfandme.InthatclassMissZhaoourbiologyteachershowedweinsectsonstsbeesbutterflyandmanyotherinsectslookedlovelyandbeautifullyonthMissZhaotoldusthenamesoftheinsectsfordescribedtheirlivinghabits.j*andplayedsomerecordingsoftheirsingingwhatwasfun.NowIvecometo1or表示选择，要么..要么..，而这里的意思是赵老师告诉我们昆虫的名字，并描述了它们的生活习惯两个动作之间是连贯的关系，不是选择的关系，因此应该用and来连接©whatfwhichbeesbutterflyandmanyotherinsectslookedlovelyandbeautifullyonthestamps.MissZhaotoldusthenamesoftheinsectsordescribedtheirlivinghabits.Sheevenplayedsomerecordingsoftheirsingingwhatwasfun.NowIvecometolovethosewhichofsmalllivingthings.IntheeveningwhenItakethewalkintheschoolgardenthe考察非限制性定语从句，whatwhichwasfun删掉后，不影响整个句子的意思整句的翻译为赵老师甚至给我们播放了她录到的昆虫们的歌声，这很有趣有趣的是这件事，因此用which指代
⑧删掉those后的ofMissZhaotoldusthenamesoftheinsectsordescribedtheirlivinghabits.Sheevenplayedsomerecordingsoftheirsingingwhatwasfiin.NowIvecometolovethoseMsmalllivingthings.IntheeveningwhenItakethewalkintheschoolgardenthesingingofinsectsbecomemoremeaningfultome.thoseof用于指代某特殊群体的事物或人those可以做限定词，也可以做代词，做限定词的意思为那些的，这里我们直接用those加smalllivingthings表达“那些小玩意儿（昆虫）”即可
⑨thefanamesoftheinsectsordescribedtheirlivinghabits资oftheirsingingwhatwasfun.NowTvecometoIntheeveningwhenItake|thejwalkintheschoolmemoremeaninsfultome.atakeawalk散步，固定搭配，没有takethewalk的说法©becomefbecomesplayedsomerecordingsoftheirsingingwhatwasfun.NowIvecometolovethoseofsmalllivingthings.IntheeveningwhenItakethewalkintheschoolgardenthe.・becomessingingofinsectsbecomemoremeaningfultome.上一句已经是作者现在的感悟了，用了现在完成时而最后一句也是作者的感悟，意思为晚上的时候，我走在学校的花园里，昆虫的叫声对我更有意义了而不是作者描述的某一个晚上的具体事件，因此全句应该用一般现在时，thesinging为第三人称单数，因此become应该用具单三形式becomeso2023高考英语全国卷短文改错讲解（乙卷）
一、真题呈现LastFridaymymomdecidedtocolorhishaii\Shestudiedwithallthehairproductsatthednigstore.Thecolorshechoosecameinaboxwhichhadapictureofawomanthathailcolorlookedjustpeiiect.Momwassuresamecolorwouldlookgreatonher.Sheputthenewcoloronherhailorsatstillfor30minutesjustasthediiectionssaying.Howeverinsteadofthebrownishredhairshehadhopedfbi;shefilialgotpuiplehaii\Shewentrightintotheshowertowashingitbutitwasnouse.Atleastonethingprovedtnith:thecolorwouldntwashout.hisfherwith去掉choosefchosethatfwhosesame前力口上theorfandsaying-said
⑧倒数第三行的finalffinally
⑨倒数第二行行的washingwash⑩最后一行的truthftrue
二、语法讲解
①LastFridaymymomdecidedtocolorhishaii;第一处错误应该把his改成hero这句话的主语是mymom为女性，所以应该用her考察的是形容词性物主代词的用法LastFridaymymomdecidedtocolorhishaii\Shestudiedwitiiallthehairproductsatthednigstore.Thecolorshechoosecameillabox第二处错误要把with去掉Study作动词时，可以作及物动词，后边直接加宾语，也可以作不及物动词，不能直接加宾语比如文中的用法，srds是错的及物动词时的意思为学习、研究、调查不及物动词studywith时的意思为和***学习，用***学习原文中的意思是“她研究了药店里所有的秀发产品”，因此只用及物动词即可
③Thecolorshechoosecameinabox第三处应该把choose改为choseo全文为一般过去时，因此这里的动词要用choose的一般过去时choseo复习一下choose的四种形式现在分词choosing过去分词chosen一般过去时chose第三人称单数chooses
④thehairproductsatthednigstore.Thecolorshechoosecameillaboxwhichhadapictureofawomanthathaircolorlookedjustpeiiect.Mom第四处应该把that改为whoseo这里是定语从句关系代词的选择问题，先行词为awoman关系代词后的haircolor是名词且和awoman的关系为从属关系，awoman的haircolor看起来很完美因此要用whose来做关系代词wassuresamecolorwouldlookgreatonher.第五处应该在same前加上定冠词thethesame是一对死搭档，只要看到same前边一定要加上定冠词“the”考察定冠词固定搭配的用法
⑥、
⑦wassuresamecolorwouldlookgreatonher.Sheputthenewcoloronherhailorsatstillfor30minutesjustasthediiectionssaying.However第六处应该把or变and根据意思，“put”和“sat”两个动词是一前一后的关系，因此用and连接表示顺承第七处把saying改为said因为as可以做连词，连接两个句子这道题中，as连接的是方式状语从句，而一个句子中需要拥有主语和谓语，因此要把saying改为谓语形式，又因为全文为一般过去时所以改为said
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⑨、⑩insteadofthebrownishredhairshehadhopedforshefilialgotpuipleaI।1nidi1yhaii\Shewentriglitintotheshowertowashingitbutitwasnouse.Atleastonethingprovedtruth:thecolorwouldn^twashout.true第八处把final改为finallyo修饰动词用副词，因此这句话修饰got要用副词finallyo第九处把washing改为wash这里的to是动词不定式，表示目的状语原句的意思是她径直去了淋浴间就是为了洗掉它（染发的颜色）因此这里的to不是介词，要用todo的形式第十处把truth改为trueprove可以当做系动词，意思为“证明是***还有类似的系动词如sound、tastebacomego、stay、turnout这些词后一般跟形容词、名词或动词不定式prove后一般跟形容词，往往是wrong、truefalse等判断性的形容词。
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