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必修一.Unit1如何用英语写建议信写作任务假定你是李华,你的美国朋友最近刚升入高中,她给你发来一封邮件说自己因为考试失利而产生了大的挫败Ella感,希望得到你的帮助请给她回一封邮件,内容包括表示理解;
1.提出合理建议;
2.希望所提建议有所帮助
3.注意词数左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
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1202.Dear Ella,Yours,Li Hua写作指导
一、审题定调本写作任务要求写一封建议信,属于应用文建议信的目的是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或看法内容包括写的原因、建议的内容、提出这种建议的理由等建议信要简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力由于本写作是私人信件,故措辞方面不必太过拘礼
二、谋篇布局建议信的格式和普通信件一样,因本写作任务的开头和结尾已给出,所以我们只需写出正文部分即可建议信的正文部分可分为三部分第一部分引出话题,说明写信目的;第二部分提出合理的建议及理由;第三部分希望所提建议有所帮助
三、组织语言第一部分引出话题,说明写信目的Im happyto receiveyour letterasking formy adviceon...Im sorryto hearthat you are havingtrouble in/you findit hardto...Learning that you havetrouble in…,Im writing to provideyou withsome advice.You have asked formy adviceabout...and Iwill tryto makesome usefulsuggestions here.I understandhow youare feelingnow andId like to offeryou someadvice.I amwritingtoexpress myviews concerning...Here aresome tips/advice/suggestions.第二部分提出合理的建议及理由Such problemsare quitenormal.Perhaps the following suggestionsare helpful.If Iwere you,I would...In mypersonal view/In myopinion,it wouldbe wiseto takethefollowingactions.I thinkit wouldbe morebeneficial if you could...It seemsto methat youcould...When itcomes tosuch asituation,I wouldliketosuggest thatyou should...I stronglyrecommend thatyou...It iswise ofyou to...第三部分希望所提建议有所帮助I believeyou willtake myadvice intoaccount/consideration seriously.I hopeyou willfind these suggestions useful/helpful.I hopethese suggestionswill beof useto you.范文佳作Dear Ella,Im sorryto hearthatyoufailed theexam.Dont worrytoo muchabout theresult.Perhaps thefollowing suggestionsmay helpyouget overit andmove forward.Firstly,I thinkit wouldbe beneficialifyoucould reviewyour testpaper.We allmake mistakesbut learninghow tostopmaking thesame mistakescounts.Secondly,it wouldbe wiseto adjustyour learningstrategies.The mostsuitable onesfor youarethe best.More importantly,one failuredoesnt meanyouareout of the picture.So next time youdbetter justgo allout andsee whathappens.If youfail,no problem——nexttimeyou canfail better!I hopethesesuggestionswill beof useto you.And Imlooking forwardto hearingyour goodnews.Yours,拓Li Hua展阅读语篇导读营养午餐吃什么?美国的Students turnthe tableson whatsserved forlunch中学生们有自己的想法After monthsof brainstormingand preparation,Andre LaRue and threeclassmates fromKenmore MiddleSchool thoughttheyhad goteverything readyfor abig mealthat theywere serving.But onthe morningofthemeal,they discoveredthat theapples theyhadprepared hadlost theircolor overnight.The teamrushed tobuy andcut upnew applesfor theirApple ArugulaWalnut Salad,藜麦皮乳蛋饼.which wasa sidedish fortheir maindish-a quinoa-crusted quicheThiswasnt ameal forfamily orfriends,however.LaRueandhis classmateswere tryingto winthe10th AnnualReal FoodforKids Culinary Challenge heldat HayfieldSecondary School.At theMarch5competition,six teamsfrom differentmiddle schoolsandhigh schoolswere invitedto planand cooka healthy,inexpensive mealthat couldbe servedin aschool cafeteria.This years(原料)meal alsohad tobe plant-based withhalf theingredients grownlocally.(膳食指南)According tothe Centersfor DiseaseControl andPrevention,dietary guidelinesfrom thegovernment callfor“a(谷物),(乳制品),variety offruits andvegetables,whole grainsfat-free andlow-fat dairyproducts avariety ofprotein foods,and oils”.But manyteenagers donthave adiet thatfollows thoserecommendations.Dahlia Baht,a studentwho wonlast yearscontest,said kidsat herschool preferto chooseunhealthy foodslike hamburgersat homeand inthe cafeteria.Real Foodfor Kidsorganizershope theirchallenge willencourage kids to think about improving their eating habits and take part in whatsserved intheirschool cafeterias.Coming upwith somethingtasty forless than$
2.70per servingisnt easy.For theKenmore team,which wonthe competition,it tooka lotof experimentation,said MischaBilanchone,the teacherwho wasresponsible forthe team.Bilanchone saidshe wasexcitedabout howcontests likethese encouragedhealthy habitsnot justin competingstudents,but inother kids,too.We hada lot(食谱)of adultsjust comeup toour tableat thecontest and ask forthe recipebecause theirchild wantedthem tomake itfbrdinner.”Notes cafeteria:n.a restaurantwhere peoplecollect foodfrom aserving areaand takeit totheir tablesprotein:n.a naturalthingfound inmeat,eggs,fish,some vegetables,etc.Self-checkRead thetext andcomplete thetable aboutthe10th AnnualReal Foodfor KidsCulinaryChallenge.When didit happen
1.___________________________________________Where didit takeplace
2.___________________________________________Who wasthe winner
3.___________________________________________What dishesdid thewinner make
4.______________________________________________Why wasit held
5.___________________________________________ReflectionDo youhaveahealthy dietWhat couldyou doto improveyour eatinghabits说明黑正体部分为本单元新学词汇;黑斜体为课标重点词汇,学有余力的同学可提前掌握答案Self-check
1.On March
5.
2.At HayfieldSecondary School.
3.Andre LaRueand threeclassmates fromKenmore MiddleSchool/The Kenmoreteam.
4.Apple ArugulaWalnut Saladandaquinoa-crusted quiche.
5.To encouragekidstothinkaboutimprovingtheireatinghabitsandtakepartinwhafs servedin theirschool cafeterias.Reflection略。