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(三)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事Chased bya FlashFloodIt waslate afternoon.The weatherhad beennearly perfect.Christina and I decidedtohike toAcomat Falls.It was around4p.m.when wereached the falls一a30-foot barrelof whitewatershootingover thebasin.We doveinto thegreen pooland floatedon ourbacks,looking upat the canyon(峡谷)walls.By4:30,We knewwe neededto headback to the carbefore dark,but Iwas waistdeepin the river tryingto photographthe falls,the hangingvines,and the dreaminess of theplace.Christina wassitting ona stoneabove thebasin.I finallygot agood shot一andthen she screamed.With acrack likethunder,a wallof brownwater rushedover thetop ofthefalls,carryingfragments oftrees andplants withit.Flash flood.I jumpedout oftheriverseconds beforetheflood crashedover thespot whereI djust beenstanding.Christina scrambledbarefootoff theboulder(巨石)toward higherground.Christina ledus throughdense brush,prickly(多刺的)trees,and ankle-deep mud.Whenwe,d climbed200feet,we stoppedto catch our breath.Now wehad adifferent problem:Thetrail andthe roadwere onthe otherside ofthe swollenriver.We werestuck inthe canopy(顶棚).Then thesky openedup.Christina askedif Ihad myphone.It waswet,but stillblinkedon.No service.We decidedto movetoward higherground toget abetter signal.It wasalmostdark.For amoment,the phoneconnected,andI heard thefaint voiceof Mae,our vacationrentalhost.She saidshe dcall forhelp.Then thephone wentsilent.续写要求
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语Paragraph1:We hadno ideawhether rescuerscould reachus.Paragraph2:After anotherhour,we sawlights acrossthecanyon.【思路点拨】
1.文本细解读,确定续写结局本文是一篇记叙文,讲述了一个晴朗的下午,作者与Christina远足去一个瀑布玩傍晚时分,两人准备回去时,作者还在瀑布下的绿池中痴迷地拍照这时,洪水骤然从瀑布上面冲了下来,二人慌忙逃离,穿越丛林,一片泥泞之后,却发现迷路了,手机也没了信号此时,天也黑了,他们正好走到一处开阔的高地,手机终于有了信号,他们给房东打了个电话,说明了情况,之后手机又没了信号续写部分应为故事的结局,即作者和Christina是否获救根据文章内容可知,他们联系到了房东,所以应该是得救了
2.段首句解读,确定续写方向续写第一段首句写道“我们不知道救援者是否能找到我们,第二段首句写道“又过了一个小时,我们看见有灯光穿过峡谷”,由此可知第一段内容可以着重描写黑夜里两人获救前的心理、经历、行动等,可设想两人互相鼓励安慰,作者焦灼之余又设法联系房东,夜宿森林,两人毫无准备,又累又饿又冷,被蚊虫叮咬续写第二段内容应着重描写两人看到救援者的灯光后,如何发出求救信号,从而定位到自己可设想两人大声呼救,并打开手机的手电筒等,从而帮助救援人员定位到他们的具体位置,最终获救,乘坐直升机脱离困境
3.划线词解读,规划续写细节1)分类划线词人物------Christina,Mae环境------canopy,river事物------phone,signal,faint动作------stuck,heard,screamed2)构思具体情节第一段情节我和Christina互相安慰一Christina找到临时庇护所一我又设法联系房东(Mae)一寒冷中二人互相取暖(stuck)一夜晚蚊虫多第二段情节我打开手机(phone)的手电筒作信号(signal)一救援者发现我们一直升飞机救援一由此获救【范文欣赏】Paragraph1:Wehadnoideawhetherrescuerscouldreachus.We toldeach othernot topanic asnightset in.Christina founda treewhich weused asa shelterfrom therain.I triedto sendmoretexts toMae,but mostof thembounced backundeliverable.There wasnothing wecoulddo but wait.We dbeen stuckfor nearlyfour hours.Shivering,we gatheredcloser forwarmth.Gradually,it grewdarkParagraph2:Afteranotherhour,wesawfaintlightsacrossthecanyon.My wetphone hadbegun tolosefunction,but theflashlight stillworked.I turnedit onand shoneit at the canopyaboveasasignal.Shortly after,Iheardthe bladesof ahelicopter.In minutes,the treeswerethrashing inthe windgenerated bythe aircraft.A cableappeared throughthe canopy,and thena rescuer.We weresafe.亮点积累
1.词汇photograph v.摄影;拍照;scramble v.匆促行动;攀爬;stuck adj.被困住的;陷入困境的
2.短语get agood shot拍了一张好照片;catchourbreath喘气
3.提分句式There wasnothing wecould do butwait.[分析]本句是一个固定句式,athere isnothing todobut...”表示“除了之外什么都做不了”[译文]除了等待,我们什么都做不了自主练习阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事Crystal Cuevas and Javier Rodriguez fellin lovewith eachother whenthey werejuniorsin highschool.They hadbeen expectinga romanticwedding foryears.Sadly,Rodriguez wassufferingfrom aserious heartdisease andhad tostay inhospital.With theworsening ofhisillness,Rodriguez decidedthe wedding.On hearingthat,Cuevas criedwith joy.The special day finallycame.With the ceremony approaching,Cuevas beganto pacejusta little,her fingersslowly reachingto asmall bunchof whiteroses.The23-year-old ladyjokedthat itwas the groom whois supposed to bekept waiting,not the bride.In atiny churchin Chicago,Rodriguez wantedeverything to be justso—his socks,hiswhite shirt,his bowtie.About an hour afterthe weddingwas expectedto start,Rodriguezarrived ina wheelchair,followed bya groupof friendsand peoplewith amass ofclear plastictubesswinging from above hishead.Dozens ofpeople squeezedinto thechurch,most withtearfuleyes before theceremony.All butCuevas andRodriguez sbaby daughterunderstoodthat thegroom hasperhaps daysto live.“I loveyou,“Rodriguez whisperedto hisbride as they stoodatthehurriedlydecorated altar(圣坛).She puta tremblinghand overher mouthand wept.Rodriguez,whohas hadtwo hearttransplants resultingfromabirth defect,made thedecision overtheweekend thathedsimply hadenough.And so,as Rodriguezprepared forhis hospicecare(临终关怀)at home,he andthe womanhesloved rushedto preparea wedding.“He sat peacewith thatand that s whatmakes it easier forme,“Cuevas said.When Ithink aboutmy daughter,thatswhen itbreaks medown.Cuevas firsttried onherperfectly fittingwedding dressanhourbeforetheceremony.A hospitalassistant spreadthestrawberry cakefrosting Wednesdaymorning.“JavierRodriguez,I nowpronounce thetwo ofyou husbandand wife,“pastor(牧师)Stephanie Welshsaid.You maykiss...your...bride!”And hedid,for along time.“Get aroom!”someone yelledfrom thegathering.“This isour room!thebrideyelled back.续写要求
1.所续写短文词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语Paragraph1:But onlyfor thatday.Paragraph2:“/just wantmy sontobehappy,“said thegroom smother,Ana Silva.【范文欣赏】Paragraph1:Butonlyforthatday.CuevasandRodriguez wereexpecting nomore tripstothehospital,astheybegan thefirst dayoftherest of their livestogether.The specialwedding wasjustthe beginningoftheirmarriage,which wasthe housethey builttogether fortheir love.Maybe therewas onlya coupleof daysleft forthegroom,but fortunatelyhe couldcall ahappyend.Their dreamwas finallyrealized throughyears.Paragraph2:”[justwantmysontobehappy,“saidRodriguez7smother,AnaSi1va.He ismarryingthe loveof hislife.I knowhe lovesher heartand soul,and theyhave abeautiful babygirl.Since wemust facethe frustratingresult,we aresupposedtolive asatisfactory lifeatpresent,which makesiteasierfor allof us.”Everyone wasimpressed bythe movingwedding.May therest daysin hislife beas fullof happinessand joyas thisspecialday.。