读后续写练习写作指导讲义--2023届高三英语复习写作备考

读后续写练习写作指导讲义读后续写（满分分）25阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文“Number7,Jobie Nymble,takes thelead,cried theannouncer.Just one（跨栏）more hurdleand—Cheers erupted.“Jobie Nymblefrom RiversideMiddle School takesfirst placein the girls100-meter hurdles!”The crowdwent wildas Jobies teammates screamedand yelled.Determined to go all the wayto CountyChampionships,Jobie pattedher（钉鞋）.（接缝worn neon-green trackspikes They were burstingat theseams处）,but shedidn/t care.Theywereher luckyshoes andshe lovedthem.NextSaturday,were takinghome thegold/7Jobie whisperedto her spikes,excitedlyretying them.Dont forget,guys,said one of her teammates cheerfully.My birthdaypartyis nextFriday atHidden Park.”“Beep.Party recordedin calendar/7joked Jobiein herbest robotvoice.Jobie brimmedwith excitementall weeklong.At trackpractice,she leapedoverthose hurdlesfaster thanshed everleaped before.The dayof Marisolsparty,Jobie puton herfavorite outfit:her fancyblueshorts,an oldtrack T-shirt fromher dad,and her lucky spikes.The partywas infull swingwhen Jobiearrived atHidden Park.Music andthesmell ofgrilled foodfilled theair.Two ofJobies teammatesrushed towardher,breathless andbarefoot,asking herto trythe slide.Jobie/s eyesdarted（充气的）toward theparty area.Suddenly,she sawit.The BIGGESTinflatableslide she had everseen wason thefar sideof thepark.Smiling kidszoomed downthe slide atunspeakable speeds.Without thinkingtwice,Jobie tookoff herspikes andrushed towardtheslide.Its ladderstretched to the skylike Jacksmagical beanstalk,but shereachedthe topin notime.She satdown,slipped to the edge,and closedher eyesas sheletgo.Jobie couldntget enough,conquering theslide overand overagain.Whenit wasfinally timeto gohome,she reluctantlymade herway backtothetrackwhere shedleft hershoes.注意续写词数应为左右；

1.150请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答

2.As sheeyed thearea froma distance,panic setin.The nextday,without her lucky spikes,Jobie wasamongthe besttrack teamsgathering forthe championships.试题分析.人物（角色）1

①Jobie Nymble:from RiversideMiddleSchool,a girlathlete inthe girls100-meter hurdles,determined togo allthe wayto CountyChampionships

②Marisol:oneofherteammates,birthday party

③Two ofJobies teammates:rushed towardher,breathless andbarefoot,asking herto trytheslide.主题人与自我2赢得了女子米跨栏的冠军，并准备在下周六举行的县锦标赛Jobie100上拿冠军正好有朋友在下周五有生日聚会就是在这次聚会上，被巨Jobie大的好玩的充气滑滑梯所吸引，等到快回家的时候，发现她心爱的幸运钉鞋不见了…….续写情节安排3V第一段As sheeyed thearea froma distance,panic setin.

①（与开头句衔接）发现那双心爱的不见了，有怎I uckyspi kesJobie样的心理和情绪表现

②与队友一起找遍了整个公园（游乐场）也不见其踪影

③（与下文开头句衔接）只能灰溜溜地回家去但为了第二天的比赛，翻箱倒柜找出了以前只在校运会上穿过一次的钉鞋Jobie▼第二段The nextday,without herlucky spikes,Jobie wasamong the besttrack teamsgathering forthe championships.

①与开头句衔接虽然没了给她带来幸运的钉鞋，但取胜的信念一直在脑中打转

②比赛正式开始，使出浑身解数，最终获得了Jobie CountyChampion

③看着脚上的钉鞋，她悟出了一个道理幸运不是鞋子带来的，而是努力下水作文As sheeyed thearea froma distance,panic setin.Where aremy spikesArethey stolenJobie shoutedas sheran wildlytowards whereherlucky spikesonce lay.When shereached theplace,she feltas ifher hearthad stoppedbeating,out ofbreath.“They areGONE!she screamedmadly.Does anyonesee myluckyspikes Noresponse!Soon overcame herteammates.They helped her searchthe whole HiddenPark,but invain.Jobie hadto acceptthe factthat shemight gowithout herlucky spikes andwent backhome withgreat sorrow.However,thegold alwaysinspired hertogoforward.Eventually,she gotherself anotherpairwhich wasonce puton inthe schoolsports meet.113wordsThe nextday,without herlucky spikes,Jobie wasamong thebest trackteamsgathering forthe championships.A pitywithout theluck spikes,she hadthefirm beliefthat sheshould bethe champion.Warming herselfup,Jobiewaited forher turn.“Next comesthegirls/100-meter hurdles!Jobie lookeddownat hernew spikes.Set,Go!”She dashedforward likean arrow.Herteammates cheeredher up,sparing noefforts.All wentwell.She clearedhurdlesafter hurdles.Heres ourchampion,Number1,Jobie Nymble,from RiversideMiddleSchool.Congratulations!cried theannouncer excitedly.Unable tocontain herself,Jobie thankedallthepeople present,rushed overto herteammates andhuggedthem tightly.Looking atthe newspikes,shehada betterunderstanding ofsports:Great efforts,lucky herself.113words参考范文As sheeyed thearea froma distance,panic setin.Jobie pickedup thepace,her heartpounding louderthe closershe got.When shereached theplace she〃had leftthem,her heartalmost stopped.They regone!,z shescreamed.Mylucky spikesare gone.Fear creptover heras sheanxiously circledthewholeareaand scannedfor anysplash ofneon-green.Jobiesteammateshelpedhersearchthe park,trying tofind anytrace ofthe spikesbut invain.No luckyspikes.Bynightfall,the poorgirl hadno choicebut todrag herbare feethome.So long,gold/7Jobie groaned.95wordsThe nextday,withoutherluckyspikes,Jobie wasamongthebest trackteamsgathering forthe championships.In herbrand-new shoes,she acceptedthereality thatthis wasnot agame ofchance.Teammates pattedher backas sheslowlywalked downtothestarting line,which alsoinstilled greatpower inher.Starting buzzergoing,Jobie wasoff ina flash.She setfocus onthe finishingline,leaving behindany self-doubt orworry untilshe finallybreasted thetape earlierthananyone else.In thecheers andshouts,Jobie squattedto untieherspikesasusual,only torealize thatthere wasno suchthing asluckyspikesand thatsuccesswas nevera strokeof luck.102words。