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On thefirst day,]am visiting the Summer Palace.据说它是中国最大的保存最好的皇家公园
4.be said to be一It issaid to_be the laigest_and bestpreserved royal paikin_China.在第二天,我要参观长城表将来
5.winOn thesecond day,J willvisit theGreat Wall.它作为世界七大奇迹之一为世人所知
6.be known toIt isknown tQthe worldas onethe sevenwondeis ofthe world.第三步词句升级用引导的从句连接要点和要点
1.since12Since theNational Dayis approaching,J anjplanning tospend2days fromOctobei[st toOctober2nd visitingBeijing.用引导的非限制性定语从句连接要点和要点
2.which34On thefirst day,]qm visitingthe SummerPalace,which issaidto be thelaigestand besLpreseivedroyal paikin China.把要点改为含有引导的非限制性定语从句的复合句
3.6as』As isknownto the world,it isone ofthe sevenwonders ofhe world.第四步连句成篇Dear LiHua,Since theNational Dayis approaching,I amplanning tospend2days fromOctober1st toOctober2nd visitingBeijing.On thefirst day,I amvisitingtheSummerPalace,which issaidtobethelargest andbest-preservedroyalpark inChina.On thesecond day,I willvisit theGreat Wall.As isknowntothe world,it isone ofthe sevenwonders oftheworld.A wonderfultrip,do youagreeYouis,Wang Lin。