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8.2—magnitude earthquakestruck offthe coast of northernChile lateon Tuesday,cutting powerand leadingto smalllandslides anda tsunami.Four menand onewomandied-two whosuffered heartattacks andthree whowere crushed.About300prisonersescaped fromthe northernport city of Iquiquein theimmediate aftershock.The quakestruck atabout846p.m.local time,some60miles northwestof Iquique.lt hadadepth of
12.5miles.Chile9s NationalEmergencyOffice askedcoastal residentsto leavefor safeplaces.The factis,we will(视察)know theextent of the damageas timegoes byand whenwe inspectthe areasin thelightof day,“Chiles PresidentMichelle Bacheletsaid earlyon Wednesday.“The countryhasfaced thesefirst emergencyhours verywell.”Residents inthe portcityofAntofagasta walkedcalmly throughthe streetsto highergroundas trafficbecame heavyin someplaces.Many peopleare fearfulafter experiencingthepowerful earthquakein2010,so theyimmediately rushedto higherground whenthey heardthetsunami warning,“said agovernment official.uThere havebeen lots of aftershocks andcommunications havebeen cut off in many of the affectedareas.So peopleare waitingin thedarkhills,not knowingwhat isto come,and hopingthey willbe ableto returnto theirhomessafely.vThe PacificTsunami WarningCenter sentout severaltsunami warnings,but calledoff allofthem byearly Wednesday.Tsunami wavesof more than sixfeet caused by the earthquakewashed ashore on the coast of Pisagua.Iquique,with apopulation of morethan200,000,saw seven-foot waves.第一步要点提炼要点地震发生的时间、地点;1:要点地震导致的结果电力中断、人员伤亡等;2要点余震导致的结果;3要点地震导致了海啸4第二步要点翻译一场级的地震在当地时间晚上袭击了智利北部海岸
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8.2—magnitude earthquakestruck offthe coastof noithemChile at846p.m.local time.这场地震导致了电力中断、五人死亡
2.The earthquakecaused powercuts andfive deaths.在很多地震灾区通信中断()
3.cutoffCommunications werecut offin manyoftheearthquake-hit areas..地震导致了六英尺多高的海啸波浪()4causeTsunami wavesof morethan sixfeet werncausedby theearthquake.这些海浪席卷了皮萨瓜沿岸
5.These waveswashed ashore on the coastofPisagua.第三步词句升级用分词短语作状语升级要点和要点
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8.2—magnitude earthquakestruck offthe coastof northernChile at846p.m.local time,causing powercuts andfive deaths.用分词短语作定语升级要点和要点
2.45Tsunami wavesof morethan sixfeet causedby theearthquake washedashoreonthe coastofPisagua.第四步连句成篇An
8.2—magnitude earthquakestruck offthecoastof northernChile at846p.m.local time,(要点)causing powercuts andfive deaths.1There werelotsofaftershocksand(要点)communications werecutoffinmanyoftheearthquake-hit areas.2Tsunami waves(要点ofmorethan sixfeet causedbytheearthquake washedashoreonthecoastofPisagua.)3。