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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文“Number7,Jobie Nymbletakes thelead/cried theannouncer.“Just one(跨栏)Z/more hurdleand-Cheers erupted.Jobie Nymblefrom RiversideMiddle School takes first place in the girls100-meter hurdles!The crowdwent wildas Jobies teammates screamedand yelled.Determined togo allthe wayto CountyChampionships,Jobie pattedher(车丁鞋)worn neon-green trackspikes.They werebursting at the seams(接缝处),but she didnt care.They wereher luckyshoes andshe lovedthem.Next Saturday,were takinghome thegold,Jobie whisperedto herspikes,excitedly retyingthem.“Dont forget,guys,said oneof herteammates cheerfully.〃My birthdaypartyis nextFriday atHidden Park.”“Beep.Party recordedin calendar,joked Jobiein herbest robotvoice.breasted thetape earlierthan anyoneelse.In thecheers andshouts,Jobiesquatted tountie herspikes asusual onlyto realizethat therewas nosuchthing aslucky spikes and thatsuccess wasnever astroke ofluck.Jobie brimmedwith excitementall weeklong.At trackpractice,she leapedfoverthose hurdlesfaster thanshedever leapedbefore.The dayof MarisoTsparty,Jobie puton herfavorite outfit:her fancyblueshorts,an oldtrack T-shirt fromher dad,and herlucky spikes.The partywas infull swingwhen Jobiearrived atHidden ParkMusic andthesmell ofgrilled foodfilled theair.Two ofJobiesteammatesrushedtoward her,breathless andbarefoot,asking herto trythe slide.Jobies eyesdartedtoward theparty area.Suddenly shesaw it.The BIGGESTinflatable(充气的)slide she had everseen wason thefar sideof thepark.Smilingkid zoomeddown the slide atunspeakable speeds.Without thinkingtwice,Jobie tookoff herspikesandrushed towardtheslide.Its ladderstretched to the skylike Jacksmagical beanstalk,but shereached the topin notime.She satdown,slipped to the edge,and closedher eyes as she letgo.Jobie couldntget enough,conquering theslideover andover again.When itwas finallytime togo home,she reluctantlymade her wayback tothe trackwhere shedleft hershoes.注意:续写词数应为左右;
1.150请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答
2.Paragraph1:As sheeyed thearea froma distance,panic setin.Paragraph2:The nextday,without herlucky spikes,Jobie wasamong thebest trackteamsgathering forthe championships.故事大意即将参加全国跨栏比赛,她非常喜欢她的钉鞋,认为是她的幸运鞋Jobie参加聚会时也带上了它,却不小心弄丢了情节安排第一段写的情节比较简单明了,丢了不过多进行心理描Jobie Lucyshoes,述,而是通过动作和语言描写,动态呈现内心的不安和恐惧Jobie第二段同学的鼓励接受了现实在赛场摒弃一切杂念,勇往直前,获Jobie得了冠军从而感悟成功过不是靠幸运原文语言积累1也可以说.Cheers erupted,Cheers exploded.形容喝彩声的热烈,采用无灵主语下一句也表达同样的意思,却是用The crowdwent wild.人做主语
2.Next weekedcouldnt cometoo soon.这句话采用或者…句式,表示〃无论…者cant…enough cant..too不为过〃之意,如B Ireally cantthank youenough forwhat youhavedone forus.2洋溢着兴奋.brim with excitement
3.And itwas notlong beforeeverything in her pathwas ahurdle.没过多久,她路上的所有东西都变成她的栏主要表达的意思是Shepracticed harder,better andwithexcitement.4(选举、社交聚会、工作等)进入高潮,如火如荼.be infull swing
5.rush towardsher,zoom downtheslide,bolt downthe等几个词都可以表达“快速跑”的意思slide,力口快步伐,相当于Pick upher pacegain speed,accelerate.
6.As sheeyed thearea from the distance,panic setin.She gasped,eyeing theshoes danglingfrom thebleachers edge.这里是及物动词,表示”“细看”eye恐慌开始渗透进来panic setin7Jobies feetdanced ajittery two-step in her brand-new spikes.这句话描写穿上新鞋,走路不自然的状态以及紧张的心情,Jobie双脚“紧张地跳着两步舞”
7.She rushedover toher roaringteammates.注意下面几句话里的不同意思roarAnd downby thesea,the roarof theocean wavesand criesof the(风、海)呼啸声seabirds makeup themusic ofthe coast..放声大The crowdroared withlaughter athis funnyperformance笑.呼啸而行,开得飞快The carroared away惊呆,被吓住
9.Jobie frozeat first.写作需要积累的语料体育比赛场面描写人群爆发出欢呼声
1.Cheers erupted.
2.“Jobie Nymblefrom Riverside MiddleSchooltakesfirstplacein thegirls100-meter hurdles!^The crowdwent wildas Jobiesteammates whooped.Way togo,Sweet Spikes/they yelled.来自湖畔中学的获得女子米跨栏冠军!“当的队友们Jobie100Jobie欢呼时,人群变得疯狂起来”好样的,他们欢呼着Sweet Spikes.”
3.Squeak-squeak,squeak-squeak.Jobies feetdanced ajittery two-step in1her brand-new spikes.Next upis thegirls100-meter hurdles/said theannouncer.吱吱,吱吱穿着崭新的鞋钉,紧张不安地跳了两步“接下来是Jobie女子米栏「播音员宣布
100.比赛开始
4.Buhhhhh wentthe startingbuzzer.In aflash,Jobie was off的蜂鸣声响起,一眨眼的功夫就冲出去了,Jobie动作链l.She ploppeddown,scooted tothe edge,and closedher eyesas sheletgo-她扑通一声坐下来,冲到到边缘,闭上眼睛,放手滑下去
2.1n aflash,Jobie wasoff.She setfiery focuson herlucky spikesas sheclearedhurdle afterhurdle.Closer andcloser she got.She wasnearly there.Just onemore hurdleand---Number52,Jobie Nymble,takes thegold for转眼间,乔比就冲出去RiversideMiddleSchool/bellowed theannouncer.了当她跨越一个又一个障碍时,她把注意力集中在她的幸运钉鞋上她越来越近她快到那儿了再过一栏号,为湖畔——“52Jobie Nymble,中学夺得金牌”播音员兴奋地宣布情绪描写
1.Next Saturdaywere takinghome thegold/Jobie whisperedto herspikes,excitedly retyingthem.Pop!She sighedas shestared at thebroken-off pieceof shoestringdangling betweenher fingers.”下周六我们就要把金牌带回家了”乔比对着她的钉鞋低声说,兴奋地把它们放回去砰!她看着手指间晃来晃去的断了的鞋带,叹了口气2・Beep.Party recordedin calendar/1joked Jobieinherbest robotvoice.“哗哗派对记录在我的日历上了,”乔比用机器人一般的声音开玩笑说n
3.Perfect.She smiledat herselfinthemirroro“太棒了!“她对着镜子里的自己微笑着
4.When itwas finallytime togo home,she reluctantlymadeherway backtothe trackwhere shedleft hershoes.As sheeyed thearea fromadistance,panic setin.终于到了回家的时候,她不情愿地回到了她放鞋的跑道上当她从远处看着那片区域时,恐慌开始袭来
5.Jobie pickedup thepace,her heartpounding louderthe closershe got.She wasfull-on sprintingnow.When shereached theplace shedleft them,!her heartstopped.They regone!”she screeched.My lucky spikes aregone.”加快了脚步,越靠近她的心跳越快她现在全速冲刺当她走到她Jobie放下鞋子的地方时,她的心脏停止了跳动“他们不见了!她尖叫道“我的幸运钉鞋不见了”
6.Jobie gulped.Go,Sweet Spikes!”Teammates pattedher back as sheslowlywalked downtothestarting line,her feetsquishy withsweat.大口呼吸“加油,甜刺!”当她慢慢走到起跑线时,队友们拍着她Jobie的背,她的脚被汗水弄得黏糊糊的
7.Runners wereready now.Jobie hadjust sneakeda peekatthepackedbleachers whena familiargreen glowattheend caughthereye.Mynspikes!She gasped,eyeing theshoes danglingfromthebleachers edge.Someone musthave foundthem andset themthere.选手们已经准备好了刚偷偷瞥了一眼挤满人的看台,突然一个熟Jobie悉的放着绿色光芒的东西吸引了她的目光“我的钉鞋!”她倒抽了一口凉气,盯着看台边上晃来晃去的鞋子一定是有人看到了它们,并把它们放在那里
8.“Lucky me”Jobie frozeat first.Then,after aminute,she lookeddown atherfeet andsmiled.No luckyspikes.Beaming withjoy,Jobie whispered,Lucky me.”“幸运的家伙,我”起初愣住了过了一会儿,她低头看着自己的Jobie脚,笑了没有幸运钉鞋开心地笑了,低声说:“是的,我真幸Jobie运官方范文As sheeyed thearea froma distance,panic setin.Jobie pickedup thepace,her heartpounding louderthe closershegot.When shereachedtheplace11shehadleft them,her heartalmost stopped.“Theyre gone!shez/11screamed.My luckyspikes aregone.Fear creptover herassheanxiously!circled thewhole areaand scannedfor anysplash ofneon-green.Jobie steammateshelped hersearch thepark,trying tofind anytrace ofthespikes butin vain.No luckyspikes.By nightfall,the poorgirl hadno choice11but todrag herbare feethome.So long,gold.Jobie groaned.The nextday,without herluckyspikes,Jobie wasamong thebest trackteamsgathering forthe championships.In herbrand-new shoes,sheaccepted thereality thatthis wasnot agame ofchance.Teammates pattedherbackasshe slowlywalked downtothestarting line,which alsoinstilledgreat powerinher.Starting buzzergoing Jobiewasoffin aflash.She setfocuson thefinishing line,leaving behindany self-doubt orworry untilshefinally。