高中英语人教版选择性必修第一Unit2UsinglanguageWriting教案-

Teaching Planfor WritingAn opinionessay aboutchanges causedby technologyUnit2Looking into the FutureLeaminq objectives♦To expressideas ofthe changesthat couldbe causedby advancesin technology;♦To learnto writean essayon yourpoint ofview.Teaching ProceduresStepL What一般来说，观点看法类文章的内在逻辑关系十分清晰，它除了考查学生的英文基础，还考查学生的逻辑能力具体来说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现Step

2.How［基本框架］首段提出观点或有争议的观点一般提出两个相对的观点然后客观地对其进行评析

1.中段展开论述，可用主题句来点明论点，并对论点进行比较和对比、分析和评论

2.尾段对所论述观点进行客观、合理的评论，提出自己的看法、建议；或者也可以将不同

3.观点相互融合，选其可取之处，形成自己独到的观点注意事项观点鲜明

1.层次要分明，过渡要自然

2.通常采用一般现在时

3..语言简洁有力，一般不采用口语4［常用词块］

1.an increasingnumber ofpeople越来越多的人

2.in reactiontothephenomenon针对这——现象

3.begin torealize...开始意识到

4.arouse publicconcern nationwide引起了全国公众的关注

5.along with the developmentof…随着的发展

6.it goeswithout saying不言而口俞

7.as faras Iam concerned就我而言

8.one ofthe importantdisadvantages最重要的缺点之一

9.to makematters worse更糟糕的是

10.last butnot least最后但同样重要的是

11.bee more and moreserious变得越来越严重

12.on theone hand...on theother hand・••一方面另一方面

13.give people more pleasure给人带来更多的快乐

14.the abovementioned reasons上述原因

15.through aboveanalyses通过以上分析［常用语句］★精彩开头

1.There isa widespreadconcern overthe issuethat...But it is wellknown thatthe opinionconcerningthis hottopic variesfrom personto person.有一个广泛引起关注的问题……但众所周知有关这个热点话题的观点因人而异

2.Nowadays manypeople prefer...,because ithas asignificant rolein ourdaily life.现如今很多人更喜欢……，因为它在我们生活中扮演了一个重要的角色

3.Nowadays,there aremore andmore studentsbeing short-sighted.现在，越来越多的学生近视了★正文佳句

1.People,however,differ intheir opinionson thismatter.然而在这个话题上人们的观点各不相同

2.Generally speaking,its advantagescan beseen asfollows.总的来说，优点如下

3.But everycoin hastwo sides.The negativeaspects arealso apparent.但凡事都有利有弊消极的一面也是很明显的

4.We shouldtake aseries ofeffective measuresto copewiththesituation.我们应该采取一系列的措施来解决这个处境★余味结尾

1.Only inthis waycan wesolve thisproblem.只有用这种办法，我们才能解决这个问题

2.Its hightime thatwe didsomething toimprove ourenvironment.该是我们为改善环境做些事情的时候了

3.Consequently,Im confidentthat abright futureis awaitingus.因此，我相信一个崭新的未来正在等待着我们Step

3.Demonstrate假如你是李华，论坛英文版想邀请你写一篇介绍微信WeChat利弊的文章，刊登在论坛上要点如下

1.微信的益处；

2.微信的弊端；

3.你的看法注意:

1.词数80左右

4.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

一、审题定调

1.确定体裁:本次写作是篇短文,内容为微信的利弊

2.确定人称:由于是介绍微信，所以要以第三人称为主

3.确定时态:由于对微信进行客观介绍，所以以一般现在时为主

二、谋篇布局本文分为三个段落第一段:说明微信受欢迎,但要客观看待微信；第二段:益处一一微信拉近了人们之间的距离;可以找到倾诉心事的朋友弊端一一有虚假信息，容易让人上当受骗第三段自己的观点一一合理利用微信

三、常用语块more andmore people越来越多的人become addicted to对上瘾shorten thedistancebetween people缩短了人们之间的距离no matterwhere无论在哪里tell oursecrets告知我们的秘密result in导致在……上花费太多时间spend too much time onas faras Iam concerned就我而言use it properly合理利用

四、遣词造句普通表达高级表达♦We can easily get in touchwith ourfriends.♦No matterwhere weare we caneasily getintouch♦We canfind friends to shareourwith our friends.secrets.♦Wecan find friendsto whom we can tell our♦Some informationwhich offeredsecrets.on WeChat is false and peoplemay be♦Some informationoffered onWeChat isfalse andcheated.it mayresult inpeople beingcheated.♦Some peoplespend toomuch time♦Some peoplespend toomuch timeonon WeChatwhich greatlyinfluencesWeChat,greatly influencingtheir normallife.their normallife.♦As faras Iam concerned,WeChat isconvenient♦In myopinion,WeChat isbut we should use itproperly.convenient butwe shoulduse itproperly.Possible version:More andmore peopleare beginningto useWechat andsome haveeven beeaddictedtoit.However,WeChat isadobule-edged sword,which hasboth advantagesand disadvantages.To befrank,WeChat reallyshortens thedistance betweenpeople.No matterwhere weare,we caneasilygetintouch withourfriends.Besides,we canfindfriendstowhomwecantelloursecrets.However,it alsohas disadvantages.First,some informationoffered onWeChat isfalseandit mayresult inpeople beingcheated.Second,some peoplespendtoomuchtimeonWeChat,greatly influencingtheir normallife.From mypersonal perspective,WeChatisindeed convenientbutwe shoulduseitproperly.Step

4.Drill假如你是李华，你班同学最近参加了某报组织的一场讨论讨论的主题是要不要克隆人类请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社编辑投稿，客观地介绍讨论情况

1.克隆人很有趣，可以使人复生大约35%的同学支持克

2.给人带来更多的快乐隆

3.可以克隆一些著名科学家，为人类做更多的事情

1.克隆人会引发道德问题大约65%的同学不支持

2.每个人是不同的，被克隆的人只不过是复制品克隆

3.克隆人会不时地被坏人所利用现在很难说克隆人类是对还是不对你的观点Recently wehave hada discussionon whetherwe shouldclone humans.Possible version:Recently wehave hada discussionon whetherwe shouldclone humans.35percent ofthe studentsthink cloninghumans isinteresting andcan bringpeople backto life.ltcan makethe worldmore interestingand givepeoplemorepleasure.Besides,wecanclone somefamousscientists sothat theycan domore thingsfor ushumans.65percent ofthe studentshold theview thatitisa moralquestion toclone humans.Each ofusdiffers whilea clonedperson ismerely acopy.From timeto time,cloned peoplemay betaken advantageofby someevil persons.In myopinion,whether cloninghumans isright ornot isdifficult tosay rightnow.Perhaps wewilljust haveto waitand see.Step

5.Assigmneiit现在,网上购物正在被越来越多的消费者所接受但是，由网上购物引发的问题也引起了人们的高度关注请根据以下内容，写一篇英语短文，分析网上购物的利与弊,并简述自己的观点网上购物利弊你的观点•方便快捷•质量无法保证•价格便宜容易上当受骗・•产品种类多Reflection:Possible version:With thespread ofthe Internet,moreandmore peopleprefer goingshopping online.In fact,there arebothadvantages anddisadvantages ofonline shopping.We canbuy thingson theInternet withoutleaving ourhouses.Shopping onlinecan savea lotof timefor us.What smore,there aremany differentkinds of goods forus tochoose from,which maybe cheaperthan thosein realshops.However,shopping onlinealso causesus someproblems.Since wecan seeonly picturesofgoodson theInternet,weare notsure abouttheir quality.Besides,there arelots offake advertisementson theInternet,making customerseasilycheated.In myopinion,weshouldbe carefulwhile enjoyingthe convenienceof shoppingonline.。