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雅思写作高分句型复杂句型VS考官评分标准中最后一项明确考察的是学生写英语句GRA grammaticalrange andaccuracy,子多样性和准确性的能力,即测试考生简单句和复杂句的综合运用能力而中国考生也知道句式表达要多样性,但很难参透具体如何操作才能让自己的句子丰富多样,结果是普遍句式比较单一,写到复杂结构时往往就是堆斥各种从句,似乎除了从句再无其它复杂结构可写事实上,剑桥考官的范文中,复杂句的数量寥寥可数,很多时候都是把简单句进行了华丽的包装,一起来看看考官喜欢的〃高分句型是什么样的、状语前置1所谓状语前置就是把状语副词,介词短语,分词,不定式放到句首考官会频繁使用这种语法结构,而很多考生却没有意识,这种句式通过一堆长句子中出现一个小短语,可以让句子产生长短结合的紧凑感,实例如下lUnfortunately,professionals fromother fieldswho makea muchgreater contributionstohuman society,are paidso muchless thatit ishard todisagree withthe statement.2Obviously,education systemsare basedon thebelief thatall childrencan effectivelybe taughtto acquire differentskills.3Like self-awareness,this is also verydifficult toachieve,but Ithink theseare thetwo factorsthatmay bemost importantfor achievinghappiness.4As aresult ofmedia attention,sports professionalsin mycountry havebecome starsandcelebrities.5With thepolitical will,such measurescould reallyreduce theamount ofrubbish weproduce.6Struggling inpoverty,people in these countriesbelieve internationalaid isessential andshouldbe continued.7To dothis,we needto improvethe choiceof publictransport servicesavailable toindividuals.8To becomesuccessful,more skillsand dedicationare required.、句中插入短语2和状语前置类似,长句子中间插入一个小短语,可以让句子读起来更轻松灵活考官实例如下:lThis willaffect thejob market,which,after all,isakey targetin anyeconomic plan.2Sports starsand popstars,for example,are soonreplaced bythe neatyounger,more energeticgeneration.3So overall,I believethat,attending schoolsfrom ayoung ageis goodfor mostchildren.4Universities,when it is functioningwell,should offerboth theoreticalknowledge aswell asprofessionaltraining.、倒装句3这种语法现象考生都学过,但往往在作文中忘记或没有意识使用先看两个例子lParents shouldspend timeon theirchildren.They shouldalso communicatewith them.2We cannever lose sight of the significance of education.这两个句子没有任何错误,但都很单调平淡,如果使用倒装,效果就不一样了第一句可以用句型来改写成倒装句not only/but alsoNot onlyshould parentsspent timeontheir children,they arealso advisedto interactwith them.第二句可以否定词提前,强调突出不可忽视On noaccount/by nomeans/in noway/nevercan welosesightof thesignificanceofeducation.考官范文中的倒装例子并不多,主要体现在以下几种情况中:lOnly inthis waycan thisproblem beeffectively solved.2We cansee thatnot onlyare therevery largedifferences betweenthese economies,but thatthesegaps arewidening.3Strange asit mayseem,parents attentionsometimes hindersstudents academicdevelopment.)4Equally importantto successin learninga foreignlanguage isconstant attentionto details.考生在平时的语言积累和写作练习中,可以多模仿这几种固定句式,在文章中穿插句倒1-2装句、强调句4强调句的句式框架结构为(被强调的成分)(句子剩余成分),类似于中文ltis+that/who+的〃正是…导致了…〃的意思例如,考官范文中的例句llt isthe interactionofthetwo thatshapes aperson personalityand dictateshow thatpersonalitydevelops.新通教育Shinyway Education2lt isonly thosewho reachthe verytop oftheir professionwho canget thesehuge salaries.强调句式是考生比较难把握的一种句型,容易和引导的形式主语相混淆,其实我们可以it通过去掉的框架看剩下的是否是一个完整的句子来判断强调句写的是否It is...that…/It is…who…正确考生可以以通过以上几种句式结构的介绍,搭配简单句去使用,让句式灵活多变,例如〃二十世纪末科技的繁荣,人们开始广泛使用电脑〃这句话可以分别用以上介绍的句式结构来变化表达法,使句子做到丰富多变,不再单一重复句型lwitnessThe late20th centurywitnessed the prosperity in science and technology,thus givingrise tothewide applicationof computers.结构状语前置2WithWith theprosperity inscience andtechnology inthe late20th century,computers werewidelyapplied.倒装句3So flourishingwas thescience andtechnology inthe late20th centurythat computerswerewidely appliedin variousfronts.强调句4It wastheprosperityinscienceandtechnologyinthelate20th centurythat gaverise tothe wideapplicationof computers.、平行结构5严格来讲,平行结构并不属于特殊句式,而是英语语法的规范要求,但是由于遵守这个基本语法规则的中国考生太少了,平行结构也升级成了一种〃特殊句式〃这种结构的使用在考官范文里出现较多,最常见的形式是在表示并列关系的连接词,例如等的前后两侧用名and/or词对名词,形容词对形容词,动词不定式对动词不定式,分词短语对分词短语,从句对从句…比如lSatisfaction isalso increasedby asense ofresponsibility forand loyaltoateam.2Even whenchildren usea computerfor otherpurposes,such asgetting informationoremailing friends,itisno substitutefor humaninteraction.3Some essaysare hardto understandnot because they arelong butbecausetheyare obscure.4They willcertainly bethe firstthe helpchildren learnwhat isimportant inlife,how theyareexpected tobehave andwhat rolethey willplay intheir world.剑桥考官在范文中对于平行原则都是严格遵守,考生在这个写作细节句式上希望也可以向官方范文看齐看到这里不难发现,考官范文以及官方剑桥书后的高分范文里,各种复杂句式并不是高分的标准,对文章的整体把握,合理运用各种句型,保证文章的逻辑以及流畅性才是最主要的当然语法结构正确也是必不可少的评分标准之一在备考写作是应当注意这一点,避免重度使用复杂句式而无略了文中提到的其他评分点。